| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 98.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 29581 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 91.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 29581 | | totalAiIsms | 48 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "porcelain" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "aligned" | | 4 | "chaotic" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "predictable" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "pristine" | | 10 | "mechanical" | | 11 | "complex" | | 12 | "synchronized" | | 13 | "tension" | | 14 | "structure" | | 15 | "parameters" | | 16 | "scanned" | | 17 | "resolve" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "determined" | | 20 | "encounter" | | 21 | "enigma" | | 22 | "navigating" | | 23 | "anticipating" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 14226 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 14226 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 14236 | | gibberishSentences | 2 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 2 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 1 | | wordSaladCount | 2 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 266 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | | 0 | "“Simultaneous deployment requires coordination. Coordination implies prior arrangement. Arrangement demands communication. Communication establishes hierarchy. Hierarchy dictates c…" | | 1 | "“Central positioning maximizes visibility. Minimizes peripheral exposure. Maximizes control radius. Controls flow dynamics. Directs participant movement. Directs resource allocatio…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 29581 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13689 | | wordCount | 29078 | | uniqueNames | 158 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Moving" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | Morris | 1 | | Ink | 1 | | Weight | 2 | | Straps | 1 | | Canvas | 1 | | Vertebrae | 1 | | Marker | 1 | | Meeting | 93 | | Moving | 185 | | Closing | 93 | | Finishing | 93 | | Ending | 93 | | Holding | 92 | | Keeping | 92 | | Preserving | 92 | | Maintaining | 92 | | Sustaining | 92 | | Supporting | 92 | | Upholding | 92 | | Revealing | 92 | | Discovering | 92 | | Finding | 92 | | Locating | 92 | | Preparing | 92 | | Equipping | 92 | | Securing | 184 | | Protecting | 92 | | Defending | 92 | | Guarding | 92 | | Shielding | 92 | | Covering | 92 | | Hiding | 92 | | Concealing | 92 | | Masking | 92 | | Disguising | 92 | | Camouflaging | 92 | | Blending | 92 | | Merging | 92 | | Uniting | 92 | | Joining | 92 | | Connecting | 92 | | Linking | 92 | | Attaching | 92 | | Fastening | 92 | | Locking | 92 | | Sealing | 92 | | Shutting | 92 | | Terminating | 92 | | Completing | 92 | | Fulfilling | 184 | | Realizing | 92 | | Achieving | 92 | | Accomplishing | 92 | | Succeeding | 92 | | Thriving | 92 | | Prospering | 92 | | Flourishing | 92 | | Growing | 92 | | Developing | 92 | | Evolving | 92 | | Advancing | 92 | | Progressing | 92 | | Changing | 184 | | Transforming | 92 | | Altering | 92 | | Modifying | 92 | | Adjusting | 92 | | Adapting | 92 | | Accommodating | 92 | | Satisfying | 184 | | Pleasing | 92 | | Delighting | 92 | | Thrilling | 92 | | Exciting | 92 | | Stimulating | 92 | | Provoking | 92 | | Inciting | 92 | | Arousing | 92 | | Awakening | 92 | | Rousing | 92 | | Stirring | 92 | | Affecting | 92 | | Influencing | 92 | | Impacting | 92 | | Shaping | 92 | | Molding | 92 | | Forming | 92 | | Creating | 92 | | Making | 92 | | Building | 92 | | Constructing | 92 | | Assembling | 92 | | Putting | 91 | | Placing | 91 | | Positioning | 91 | | Situating | 91 | | Showing | 91 | | Displaying | 91 | | Exhibiting | 91 | | Presenting | 91 | | Offering | 91 | | Giving | 91 | | Providing | 91 | | Supplying | 91 | | Furnishing | 91 | | Outfitting | 91 | | Readying | 91 | | Organizing | 91 | | Arranging | 91 | | Sorting | 91 | | Classifying | 91 | | Categorizing | 91 | | Grouping | 91 | | Clustering | 91 | | Bunching | 91 | | Packing | 91 | | Loading | 91 | | Charging | 91 | | Filling | 91 | | Overflowing | 91 | | Spilling | 91 | | Leaking | 91 | | Dripping | 91 | | Falling | 91 | | Descending | 91 | | Lowering | 91 | | Dropping | 91 | | Sinking | 91 | | Plunging | 91 | | Diving | 91 | | Submerging | 91 | | Drowning | 91 | | Suffocating | 91 | | Strangling | 91 | | Choking | 91 | | Gasping | 91 | | Panting | 91 | | Breathing | 91 | | Living | 91 | | Existing | 91 | | Being | 91 | | Surviving | 91 | | Persisting | 91 | | Continuing | 91 | | Enduring | 91 | | Lasting | 91 | | Remaining | 91 | | Staying | 91 | | Reinforcing | 91 | | Strengthen | 91 | | Fortifying | 91 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Police" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Ink" | | 7 | "Weight" | | 8 | "Straps" | | 9 | "Vertebrae" | | 10 | "Marker" | | 11 | "Ending" | | 12 | "Holding" | | 13 | "Maintaining" | | 14 | "Finding" | | 15 | "Covering" | | 16 | "Developing" | | 17 | "Constructing" | | 18 | "Positioning" | | 19 | "Displaying" | | 20 | "Offering" | | 21 | "Organizing" | | 22 | "Diving" | | 23 | "Surviving" | | 24 | "Strengthen" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 29581 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 14236 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 1740.06 | | std | 6673.05 | | cv | 3.835 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 116 | | 1 | 137 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 86 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 104 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 77 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 282 | | 16 | 28431 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 14226 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 11453 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 14236 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 29083 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.0014785269745211979 | | lyAdverbCount | 31 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0010659147955850497 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 14236 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 14236 | | mean | 2.08 | | std | 2.36 | | cv | 1.134 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 49.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.047625737566732225 | | totalSentences | 14236 | | uniqueOpeners | 678 | |
| 40.98% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 244 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a dark, iridescent smear" | | 1 | "Instead, the grit adhered to" | | 2 | "Further reached distance." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 244 | | matches | | 0 | "Her worn leather watch ticked" | | 1 | "She walked straight to the" | | 2 | "He’d dropped vertically." | | 3 | "She memorized the pattern." | | 4 | "She chased patterns." | | 5 | "She counted strides." | | 6 | "She stepped back from the" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 80.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 185 | | totalSentences | 244 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 1 | "Her worn leather watch ticked" | | 2 | "The vaulted ceiling swallowed sound." | | 3 | "Work lamps cast harsh, rectangular" | | 4 | "Quinn ignored them." | | 5 | "She walked straight to the" | | 6 | "A man in a charcoal" | | 7 | "Skin held a waxy translucence." | | 8 | "The residue gleamed with faint" | | 9 | "Dust particles clustered at the" | | 10 | "Air currents should have scattered" | | 11 | "Quinn traced the boundary line." | | 12 | "The man hadn’t fallen backward." | | 13 | "He’d dropped vertically." | | 14 | "Torso aligned perfectly over the" | | 15 | "Spine remained straight." | | 16 | "Shoulders rolled inward." | | 17 | "Head rested forward." | | 18 | "Rigor hadn’t seized the joints." | | 19 | "Death occurred recently." |
| | ratio | 0.758 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 244 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 15 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "Quinn stated (state)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.15 | | leniency | 0.3 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |