Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HADE3MP0M1TT2PZCBJZKSB

Run Details

Duration:
5m 53s
Cost:
$0.086128
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park closed around Aurora Carter with the patience of a mouth deciding whether to swallow. The last iron gate shut behind her without a click, though she remembered lifting the latch. Her bicycle lay abandoned by Queen's Road, chain undone, basket holding a Golden Empress bag that smelled of ginger and cold oil. She had not meant to leave it. The text from Eva had turned her hands stupid. The Grove. Now. Bring the red stone. Don't let it go cold. Rory touched the lump beneath her jumper. The Heartstone pendant hung against her sternum, deep crimson and no bigger than her thumbnail, silver chain damp from the walk. It lay cool in the flat above Silas' bar each morning. It warmed when she passed Richmond station. Now it pulsed. One beat. Another. The rhythm lagged her pulse. The ancient oaks marked the boundary like teeth sunk into the dark. Their trunks had taken the shape of standing stones, bark ridged and pale where moonlight found it. No sign named the place. No path led to it. Wildflowers crowded the ground inside the ring: yarrow, bluebell, foxglove, thrift. All bloomed with wet summer brightness, though frost silvered the railings outside. Rory stepped between two trunks. The city dropped. Not faded. Dropped. No traffic from the road. No airplane stitch overhead. No wind in the upper branches. Her own breath made too much noise. She drew out her phone. The screen showed 23:47. No signal. The message from Eva remained open, its timestamp missing. "Eva." Her voice fell into the flowers and did not carry. Rory moved deeper because the pendant pulled heat toward her ribs. The stems brushed her ankles without bending under her weight. Each step left a print in dark soil. The print filled with water before she lifted her foot. A voice note bloomed on the screen. No download arrow. No network. It had not existed a second before. She pressed play. Eva's whisper scraped from the speaker. "Rory, if this reaches you, don't cross the oak stones after dark. I thought I could close the seam. The pendant burns when the mouth opens. If it burns, run." The recording skipped. "It counts breath. Don't answer if it uses me." The phone went black. Rory lowered the device. The flowers around her ankles leaned inward. "Eva, if you stand in here, make a sound I can place." A bicycle bell rang beyond the trees. Rory turned. The sound belonged to her bike, the cheap brass bell she had tapped with her thumb outside Queen's Road. The grove held no bicycle. The grove held no road. The bell rang a second time. "Very funny." Her voice came back from the left. Not an echo. The pitch sat too flat. The words carried a smile she had not made. Rory thumbed the pendant through her jumper. Heat bit her fingertips. "Who's there?" Silence gathered. A soft knock struck wood, low and deliberate. One knock. Another. The noise came from one of the oak stones, from the height of a forehead. She backed toward the gap she had used to enter. The gap had narrowed. The two trunks stood closer than a shoulder's width. Their bark faced smooth and unmarked, no split, no passage. Beyond them, more oaks waited in a second ring she had not seen. Rory counted the stones. Eight. She counted a second time. Nine. The ninth trunk stood where no trunk had stood, its surface wet, its roots sunk through a bed of bluebells without crushing them. Her phone lit. 23:47. The screen flickered. 04:13. The digits snapped back to 23:47. Rory rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist. The skin there had gone cold. She opened her call list. Eva's name sat at the top. She pressed it. The phone produced no dial tone. It produced breathing through the speaker. The breath matched her own until she held it. The breath kept going. A tongue clicked against teeth. Rory ended the call. The call timer read 00:00. The timer changed to 00:01. It returned to 00:00. The wildflowers turned their heads. One bluebell lifted. A yarrow stalk followed. The foxglove bells tilted toward her, each blossom opening a dark throat. No breeze touched them. Rory's throat tightened. She had carried lilies to a funeral parlour above a Cardiff betting shop. The air there had held the same sweetness: wet, green, and crowded. She looked for the gate. Moonlight fell in a straight lane through the trees, but the lane ended at a standing stone carved with a mark like a thumbnail pressed into clay. The mark glowed with the same crimson as the pendant. Rory lifted her chin. "I came for Eva." The grove answered with the sound of a restaurant kitchen. A wok hissed. A ticket machine chattered. The noise rose from the ground at her feet and died before it became words. Golden Empress closed at eleven. The kitchen should have sat dark over cold tiles. The pendant pulsed. It pulsed with the kitchen sound. It pulsed with the bell. It pulsed with the knock. "I know the rules. I don't answer." A breath touched the back of her neck. Warm. Close. She spun. No shape occupied the space behind her. The flowers there had pressed flat into a path. The path pointed toward the ninth oak. At the edge of her sight, black hair slid around the trunk. Straight. Shoulder-length. Rory blinked. Her bright blue eyes stung from the cold, but the hair remained. Rory's own hair hung against her shoulders. "Don't use me." The voice note had said that. Eva had said that. The thing behind the oak spoke with Rory's throat. "I'm not using you." The words came from the trunk, from the wet bark, from the roots in the bluebells. Rory took one step toward it because the pendant burned through her jumper and because her feet obeyed the burn before her mind gave permission. The Golden Empress bag lay at the base of the ninth oak. Its paper had darkened with grease. Its knot sat tied the way Yu-Fei tied orders for delivery riders. A receipt peeked from the fold. Rory crouched. The receipt bore her name. Aurora Carter. No address followed. No phone number. No order. Only a line of ink that had not dried. The Grove. Now. Bring the red stone. She touched the paper. The paper touched her back. Fingers, cold and thin as root hairs, closed around the silver chain at her neck.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:04:48.518Z" 9/2/2026, 3:04:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1091
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1091
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count5
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"whisper"
4"echo"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences153
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1091
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1013
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Aurora2
Carter2
Queen2
Road2
Golden3
Empress3
Eva5
Grove2
Heartstone1
Richmond2
Cardiff1
Rory16
Yu-Fei1
One3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Queen"
3"Road"
4"Empress"
5"Eva"
6"Grove"
7"Rory"
8"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Park"
1"Richmond"
2"Cardiff"
3"One"
globalScore0.71
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1091
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean13.3
std15.86
cv1.192
sampleLengths
070
112
257
362
45
53
62
71
822
920
101
1110
1239
1319
143
156
1630
173
189
194
204
217
2212
237
242
2529
266
272
287
2917
3011
312
3228
3310
344
3532
364
371
385
391
4023
413
421
433
441
456
4615
4762
4856
4942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount172
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.011627906976744186
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean6.69
std5.25
cv0.784
sampleLengths
016
116
222
37
49
52
61
74
85
97
1021
1111
127
133
142
151
165
1712
1817
195
205
2111
2212
235
243
252
261
275
284
296
307
315
324
332
349
351
3610
3711
3810
398
4010
417
423
432
447
453
466
4730
483
499
35.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.2422360248447205
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners39
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"All bloomed with wet summer"
1"Only a line of ink"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences126
matches
0"Her bicycle lay abandoned by"
1"She had not meant to"
2"It lay cool in the"
3"It warmed when she passed"
4"Their trunks had taken the"
5"Her own breath made too"
6"She drew out her phone."
7"Her voice fell into the"
8"It had not existed a"
9"She pressed play."
10"Her voice came back from"
11"She backed toward the gap"
12"Their bark faced smooth and"
13"She counted a second time."
14"Her phone lit."
15"She opened her call list."
16"She pressed it."
17"It produced breathing through the"
18"It returned to 00:00."
19"She had carried lilies to"
ratio0.222
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences126
matches
0"Richmond Park closed around Aurora"
1"The last iron gate shut"
2"Her bicycle lay abandoned by"
3"She had not meant to"
4"The text from Eva had"
5"Rory touched the lump beneath"
6"The Heartstone pendant hung against"
7"It lay cool in the"
8"It warmed when she passed"
9"The rhythm lagged her pulse."
10"The ancient oaks marked the"
11"Their trunks had taken the"
12"Wildflowers crowded the ground inside"
13"Rory stepped between two trunks."
14"The city dropped."
15"Her own breath made too"
16"She drew out her phone."
17"The screen showed 23:47."
18"The message from Eva remained"
19"Her voice fell into the"
ratio0.833
39.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"Now it pulsed."
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her bicycle lay abandoned by Queen's Road, chain undone, basket holding a Golden Empress bag that smelled of ginger and cold oil."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.5890%