Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAE15N1Q5D04XAH2CNQ549

Run Details

Duration:
5m 53s
Cost:
$0.083768
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had ceased, yet water slid down the mouth of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape and set her shoe on the first step. The stairwell carried the smell of wet tile, cold iron, and burnt sugar. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair collected a fine mist from the tunnel air. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist and kept her hand away from the rail. Rust dust coated it. A uniformed constable waited at the bottom. "The market crew cleared out before the first ambulance." Quinn scanned the platform. Stalls of black timber and oiled canvas lined the old track bed. Glass jars, bundles of dried herbs, brass instruments, and sealed slips of traded information sat beneath forensic lamps. Charms stitched into canvas flaps clicked against each other without wind. The Veil Market moved with every full moon, but this one had frozen in place with a corpse at its center. "Nobody moved the body?" "Nobody. The gate tokens hang in the box." Quinn followed the constable's gaze to the far stall. A man sat behind a table crowded with stoppered vials. His head leaned against the tiled wall. A black mark spread across his shirtfront. The air above him carried a faint green shimmer, like oil on water. Eva Kowalski crouched beside the table, her worn leather satchel open at her knee. Curly red hair escaped from a clip, and round glasses fogged in the damp. Freckles stood out on her cheeks. She tucked a strand behind her left ear and looked up at Quinn. "You wanted the archive eyes." Quinn nodded. "Tell me what I'm seeing." Eva pointed with a pencil at chalk lines drawn around the stall. The marks formed circles within circles, each edge broken by small sigils. "Protective script. Shade style. The compass on the counter matches the pattern." On the table, a small brass compass lay open. Verdigris bloomed across its casing. Its face bore etched sigils, and the needle swung in short arcs and locked toward a boarded service door behind the stall. Detective Sergeant Miles Brody stepped from the shadows at the stall's edge. He held a notebook against his chest. "I've got a simpler read. Dealer sampled his own alchemical stock. Heart cooked, he dropped. Market folk hate paperwork, so they left him for us." Quinn circled the table. The dead man wore a heavy coat, boots, and no gloves. His hands rested in his lap, palms down. A bone token lay on the floor beside his right heel, snapped into two pieces. "Entry tokens don't break in a pocket." Brody shrugged. "He fell on it." "Bone token gates don't admit broken tokens. The gate box counts them." "The box can be wrong." Quinn stopped beside the boot prints. A trail crossed the chalk dust from the eastern arch and ended at the stool. The prints were deep at the heel and faint at the toe. The dead man's boots sat within the final marks. Their soles were clean. No chalk clung to the leather. No grit sat in the tread. She crouched. "Evie." Eva moved closer, satchel bumping against her hip. "Look at the stride." Eva studied the prints. Her fingers hovered over the chalk. "Long steps. Even." "A living man walking to his own stall would vary pace. These have the same depth from start to finish." Brody flipped his notebook open. "Someone carried him?" "Someone set him here." Quinn rose and examined the black mark on the corpse's chest. The edges formed a neat oval. The fabric around it remained unburned. No ash dusted the collar. No blister curled the wool. She leaned closer. The smell came off the mark in a cold thread: river mud, beeswax, and copper. Not char. Not alchemical smoke. "The burn didn't come from outside." Eva's pencil stopped over her notes. "The sigils say the opposite. A ward-breaker draws energy inward. If he forced a sealed rift, the return strike marks him like this." "Where's the rift?" Eva glanced at the compass. "The compass shows the nearest one." Quinn picked up an evidence bag from the table and slid the compass into it. The brass casing felt cold through the plastic. The needle swung away from the corpse, away from the chalk circles, and pointed at the boarded service door. "Then the rift isn't under this stall." Brody frowned. "Those boards have held nails for years. Ask the market crew. They use that wall for storage." Quinn approached the service door. The boards bore old nails and a layer of brick dust. At the lower edge, a narrow scrape cut through the dust. The scrape ended in a smear of wet clay. She touched it with a gloved fingertip. The clay held the shape of a boot heel, smaller than the dead man's. "Nobody used this door in years?" Brody's mouth tightened. "Nobody mentioned it." Quinn turned back to the stall. The green shimmer over the corpse had thinned. The compass needle inside the bag pointed toward the door. She held the bag at waist height. The needle stayed fixed. "Evie, does a Shade compass point to a person?" Eva shook her head. "It points to a rift or portal. It follows fresh residue, but it won't chase a body." "It isn't chasing the body." She returned to the table and set the bag beside the dead man's hands. The needle did not move. It kept its line toward the door. Quinn looked at the snapped token by the heel. The break was clean, the inner marrow white. No grime filled the crack. "This token broke tonight." Brody tapped his pen against the notebook. "So he dropped it." "Market tokens stay at the gate unless a trader signs one out. Did the gatekeeper sign this one out?" "I haven't asked." "Ask." A constable crossed the platform and spoke to an officer by the entrance. The answer came back across the station. "Sixty tokens on sixty nails." Brody stared at the broken pieces. "Then that one doesn't belong." Quinn lifted the evidence bag containing the broken token. The bone felt lighter than it should. Its surface carried the same cold smell as the chest mark: river mud and beeswax. "It belongs where he died." Eva looked from the body to the door. "You think he came through there." "The clay under the door matches the smell on him. His boots did not touch the market floor. Someone laid the chalk prints after the stool took his weight." Brody rubbed his jaw. "And the compass?" Quinn held the bag. The needle strained toward the door. "The compass points to the door, not the stall. Someone wanted us to think the rift opened here. They drew the sigils, set the prints, and left the compass where a good researcher would find it." Eva's cheeks flushed. "I read the script right. The script is protective." "It is protective. It protects the market from whatever came through that door." Quinn moved to the counter and lifted the dead man's right hand. Ink stained the first two fingers. A pen rested in the left-hand corner of the table, cap off, nib dry. The ledger beneath it bore a half-finished line. The stroke started heavy and ended thin, dragging toward the right. She compared the angle to the dead man's fingers. "Whoever finished this line didn't know he wrote with his left hand." Eva leaned over the ledger. "The entry is a sale record. Veil Compass, one Shade artisan casing, buyer unnamed." Quinn looked at the compass in the bag. "He sold it." "Or someone wanted us to think he did." Brody stepped closer to the service door. The needle in the bag jerked. A low hum passed through the station, felt in the teeth. Dust slid from the boarded edge. Quinn set the compass bag on the counter and pulled out her torch. The beam crossed the boards and caught the wet clay. Behind the wood, air moved. It carried a second smell: salt, old stone, and metal. "Evie." "Yes." "Can a sealed rift leave a body in one place and burn him in another?" Eva's hand went to her hair. She tucked the same curl behind her left ear. "A threshold discharges through a carrier. The burn follows the link, not the location." Quinn pointed at the black oval. "That makes him a package." Brody's notebook lowered. "Who sent him?" Quinn studied the service door, the clean boot prints, the broken token, and the compass needle pulling against plastic. "The person who knew the market would close its gates and call the police instead of touching a dead man with a strange mark." Quinn kept her torch on the clay smear, where a thin line cut through the dust and stopped at the edge of the boards.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:05:08.029Z" 9/2/2026, 3:05:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1480
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1480
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"etched"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences114
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1480
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1005
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn20
Veil1
Market1
Kowalski1
Sergeant1
Miles1
Brody10
Eva11
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Kowalski"
4"Sergeant"
5"Brody"
6"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.505
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1480
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs97
mean15.26
std16.94
cv1.11
sampleLengths
080
17
29
366
44
58
646
747
85
92
105
1124
1212
1336
1419
1525
1638
177
182
194
2012
215
2258
232
241
258
264
2710
283
2920
305
313
324
3356
346
356
3623
373
385
396
4042
417
422
4317
4457
456
463
473
4835
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences167
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1009
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.005946481665014866
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019821605550049554
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean8.86
std5.81
cv0.656
sampleLengths
016
116
213
313
418
54
67
79
84
912
1018
1111
1221
134
148
159
1610
177
187
1913
2014
2114
226
2313
245
252
265
2712
2812
2912
309
315
3222
3312
347
3525
364
3711
388
3915
407
412
424
4312
445
456
4615
4712
489
494
46.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.32335329341317365
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"His head leaned against the"
3"She tucked a strand behind"
4"Its face bore etched sigils,"
5"He held a notebook against"
6"His hands rested in his"
7"Their soles were clean."
8"Her fingers hovered over the"
9"She leaned closer."
10"She touched it with a"
11"She held the bag at"
12"She returned to the table"
13"It kept its line toward"
14"Its surface carried the same"
15"She compared the angle to"
16"It carried a second smell:"
17"She tucked the same curl"
ratio0.165
10.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences109
matches
0"Rain had ceased, yet water"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The stairwell carried the smell"
3"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
4"She checked the worn leather"
5"Rust dust coated it."
6"A uniformed constable waited at"
7"Quinn scanned the platform."
8"Stalls of black timber and"
9"Glass jars, bundles of dried"
10"Charms stitched into canvas flaps"
11"The Veil Market moved with"
12"Quinn followed the constable's gaze"
13"A man sat behind a"
14"His head leaned against the"
15"A black mark spread across"
16"The air above him carried"
17"Eva Kowalski crouched beside the"
18"Freckles stood out on her"
19"She tucked a strand behind"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5677%