Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAETXDCQW0XAJW04BV7SXB

Run Details

Duration:
6m 10s
Cost:
$0.089948
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the tape and let the old station take her. The stairs down from Camden High Street ended in a mouth of black brick. Electric work lamps threw white pools across disused platform tiles. Bass from the street above thumped through the soles of her boots and died in the tunnel. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Five-seventeen. Uniforms had held the scene for forty minutes, and the air smelled of cold iron, wet chalk, and burnt honey. Lamp light caught the salt-and-pepper crop at her temples. Her jaw tightened. A uniformed constable stood beside a camera tripod. He lifted the tape for a crime scene examiner carrying a kit bag and pointed Quinn toward the centre of the platform. There, under a collapsed canvas stall, lay a man. His arms were spread wide. A dark coat pooled around him. One hand clutched a bone token, yellowed and carved with a thin eye. The other rested palm up, empty. A line of black salt ran from his heel to the mouth of a drainage channel. Beyond him, the Veil Market had emptied itself in haste. Stall frames leaned against tiled walls. Crates lay overturned. Glass vials rolled in the gutter between tracks, catching lamp light like green teeth. Detective Sergeant Hale waited at the edge of the body. He had a notebook in one hand and a pen clicking against his thumb. "Male, thirties, no ID. Looks like a vendor." Hale nodded at the stall. "Uniform found the cash box pried open behind the counter. Empty. Couple of alchemical bottles smashed. Deal curdled." Quinn moved around the body in a slow half circle, hands at her sides, eyes low. The man's hair was dark and matted at the temples. His lips had the blue-grey tint of cold. A wound sat high on his chest, below the collarbone. The fabric around it was scorched, not soaked. "Robbery?" "Fits. The Veil Market crowd doesn't ring nine-nine-nine. They clear off and count losses." Quinn crouched. The pool of blood beneath the dead man was small and thick, gathered under his right shoulder. It stopped short of the wound by a clean strip of coat. She leaned closer. The skin around the stab was drawn tight and pale, like wax set near a flame. "Where's the weapon?" Hale scanned the platform. "Tracks. Bag. Take your pick." Quinn lifted her gaze to the stall counter. Dust lay thick across its surface except where a cash box had been dragged. The drag marks cut clean lines through the dust, but the dust around the body remained smooth. No scuffs. No boot prints. The man had not fallen where he lay. Someone had laid him down. A curl of red hair caught her eye from beyond the cordon. Eva Kowalski stood with a worn leather satchel pressed against her hip, round glasses sliding down her freckled nose. She had tucked a strand of curly hair behind her left ear and let it spring free. Three books bulged from the satchel, their spines cracked. She watched the body with the stillness of someone who had seen old things wake. Quinn stood. "You called her?" Hale grimaced. "Museum got a call from one of the market stewards. Something about protected stock. She was in the building." Eva stepped past the constable when Quinn waved her forward. Her shoes crunched on broken glass and stopped at the salt line. "Don't smudge that." Hale raised his brows. "It's salt." "It's a boundary." Eva pointed with a pencil, not touching the white grains. "Someone drew it after he fell." Quinn looked from the salt to the dead man's boots. The soles were clean. Not swept, not washed, clean. The platform wore a skin of soot and tile dust. Every constable and examiner had left prints. The market sellers had left prints. The victim had none. "He didn't walk in here." Hale flipped a page. "Carried in, then. Two lads with a grudge." "Or one." Quinn took an evidence bag from the examiner's kit and held it open. "Show me the token." Hale used a pen to lift the bone disc from the dead man's fingers. The carved eye narrowed in the lamplight. He dropped it into the bag. Quinn turned it over through the plastic. The underside was polished smooth, darkened with oil from repeated handling. "Entry token," Eva said. "The Veil Market uses them. No token, no way through the door." Hale snorted. "Doors. This place has six exits." "Not the kind you mean." Quinn moved to the victim's coat. The examiner had slit the sleeve to check for wounds. In the inner pocket, her gloved fingers met cold metal. She drew out a small brass compass. Verdigris bloomed across its casing in green veins. The face bore markings that were not north, south, east, or west. Sigils cut into the metal ringed the dial, each one fine as needlework. The needle shivered, swung away from the tracks, and locked on the station wall. Hale leaned in. "Broken." Eva's breath caught. "That's a Veil Compass. Shade work." Quinn kept the compass level. The needle pulled hard, as if the wall had become magnetic. "What does it point to?" Eva tucked the curl behind her ear. Her fingers stayed a beat past need. "Rifts. Portals. Places where the skin's thin." Hale made a sound in his throat. "Right. Magic door." Quinn watched the needle. It did not waver. "This thing has a target. He was looking for one." "Or selling it," Hale said. "That market trades in banned rubbish. Compass like that brings a stack." "Then why leave it on the body?" Hale's pen stopped clicking. Quinn turned the compass in her palm. The sigils caught the lamp light. Around the face, one mark had a scratch deeper than the rest, fresh silver under green patina. She had seen tool marks like that before. Fresh scratches on locks. Fresh scratches on windows. Marks made in haste. "Eva." Quinn held the compass out, not too close. "Is this one of your museum pieces?" "It shouldn't be here. The restricted archives logged a Shade compass three years ago. We should have kept it sealed." "Three years." Quinn looked at her. "You know this model?" "I know the etchings. I've read the artisan accounts." Eva's gaze dropped to the body. "Someone stole that compass, and someone would kill to keep it quiet." Hale spread his hands. "There we go. Robbery with a fancy twist." Quinn shook her head. "Robbery doesn't leave the token. Robbery doesn't lay a man down like an exhibit and draw a line of salt around him." She walked the length of the salt line. It ended at the drainage channel. Someone had lifted the channel grate and set it back with one corner over the rail. Dust lay disturbed in a narrow path leading from the body to the wall behind the collapsed stall. Not footprints. A drag line. Thin. Straight. Like a cord pulled through the dirt. She followed it. The wall behind the stall wore old advertisements for cigarettes and tooth powder, their paper curling. Beneath the paper, tiles formed a broad arch. The compass needle jerked in her hand. Quinn stopped. A seam ran through the tiled arch, too straight for cracked grout. The dust on the ledge before it gathered in tiny ridges, pulled toward the crack. Hale came up behind her. "Service door. Blocked decades ago." Quinn held the compass closer. The needle pointed at the seam and trembled with the effort of staying still. "Then why's the dust moving toward it?" He looked. His mouth thinned. "Draft." "Drafts blow out or in. This is pulling." Eva joined them. She did not touch the wall. Her eyes tracked the sigils on the compass, then the arch. "The Veil Market moves every full moon. Tonight's not full." "You think the market moved because of this?" "I think someone opened a path and took the stalls with them." Hale gave a hard laugh. "Take the whole market? What, in their pockets?" Quinn lifted the evidence bag with the bone token. The carved eye stared up through the plastic. "A token gets you in. A compass finds the door. If the victim had both, he wasn't a seller." She turned back to the body. The empty hand bothered her. The left one. It lay palm up, fingers curved, as if waiting for something to be placed into it. She crouched and examined the thumb. A shallow groove marked the pad, the sort left by a disc or coin pressed there for a long time. The man had held the token in his right hand. Something else had occupied his left. "Examiner." Quinn kept her voice low. "Lift the salt. Bag the grate. I want the dust from that arch, and I want every print in this station matched against market stewards." Hale closed his notebook. "You think he was killed somewhere else and dumped." "I think someone brought him here after the place emptied." Quinn stood. "And I think the killer didn't climb out through Camden." Eva's satchel shifted as she bent to look at the body's left hand. A scrap of paper stuck to the dead man's cuff, no larger than a ticket stub. She glanced at Quinn and used the pencil tip to lift it. The paper bore half a sigil, inked in green-black. The same symbol sat on the back of the bone token. Quinn took the compass from her pocket and laid it flat on her palm. The needle swung from the wall to the scrap of paper and back to the wall. It did not settle. Hale stared at it. "Faulty." "Or forced." Quinn watched the needle pull toward the arch. "It's found two things that belong together." She stepped back to the cordon and looked over the scene. The overturned crates. The empty cash box. The salt line. The clean boots. The token left in the hand of a man who had carried a key to a hidden market and a guide to doors that should not exist. The robbery story sat on the surface, neat and easy, meant for the first officer with a torch and a busy shift. Quinn's gaze returned to the arch. The dust along its seam lifted in thin veins and settled, pulled inward. "Eva," she said. "Tell me what a Shade artisan would build into a compass besides direction." Eva's hand went to her satchel strap. "Protection. A warning. A lock." Quinn looked at the fresh scratch on the compass face. "Then someone forced it." The needle held against the wall, and the station's cold air moved past Quinn toward the seam without touching her skin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.407
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1797
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1797
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"magnetic"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"scanned"
2"magnetic"
3"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences161
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences208
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1797
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1363
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Hale"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn28
Camden1
High1
Street1
Veil1
Market1
Sergeant1
Hale17
Kowalski1
Eva10
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Sergeant"
4"Hale"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0.473
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if waiting for something to be placed into it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1797
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean23.04
std19.08
cv0.828
sampleLengths
055
131
242
39
479
524
631
752
81
914
1050
113
129
1357
1472
152
163
1721
1822
193
206
2119
2246
235
2412
2519
2645
2716
288
295
3026
3154
324
339
3416
355
3621
3710
3818
3917
407
414
4250
4316
4420
4510
4627
4712
4826
4962
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences161
matches
0"was drawn"
1"been dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs226
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences208
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1368
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.00804093567251462
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0007309941520467836
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences208
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences208
mean8.64
std5.35
cv0.62
sampleLengths
014
114
210
317
410
51
620
79
83
98
1022
119
125
136
1413
156
1616
1710
186
193
2014
2110
2214
2313
2418
2516
2610
278
2810
298
301
3114
322
3317
3412
353
3616
373
384
395
408
4114
4217
432
443
458
465
4712
4819
4917
52.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences208
uniqueOpeners72
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences146
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"Her jaw tightened."
2"He lifted the tape for"
3"His arms were spread wide."
4"He had a notebook in"
5"His lips had the blue-grey"
6"It stopped short of the"
7"She leaned closer."
8"She had tucked a strand"
9"She watched the body with"
10"Her shoes crunched on broken"
11"He dropped it into the"
12"She drew out a small"
13"Her fingers stayed a beat"
14"It did not waver."
15"She had seen tool marks"
16"She walked the length of"
17"It ended at the drainage"
18"She followed it."
19"His mouth thinned."
ratio0.192
11.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences146
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"The stairs down from Camden"
2"Bass from the street above"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"Uniforms had held the scene"
5"Lamp light caught the salt-and-pepper"
6"Her jaw tightened."
7"A uniformed constable stood beside"
8"He lifted the tape for"
9"There, under a collapsed canvas"
10"His arms were spread wide."
11"A dark coat pooled around"
12"The other rested palm up,"
13"A line of black salt"
14"Glass vials rolled in the"
15"Detective Sergeant Hale waited at"
16"He had a notebook in"
17"Hale nodded at the stall"
18"Quinn moved around the body"
19"The man's hair was dark"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva pointed, not touching the white grains"
1"Quinn held, not too close"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.102
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.7199%