Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAMC887F2PVH38K73V2TSV

Run Details

Duration:
8m 32s
Cost:
$0.126642
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain combed the neon into green threads across the pavement outside The Raven's Nest. Aurora Carter pushed through the door with a stack of empty curry boxes and the smell of ginger clinging to her jacket. The sign above the entrance ticked against the glass. Inside, the bar held its low murmur, maps curling on the walls, black-and-white photographs watching from their frames. Silas Blackwood lifted his head from the ledger. His silver signet ring tapped the wood. "You're late, Rory." She set the boxes by the stairs. "The Golden Empress sent three orders to Whitechapel. One lift went to Limehouse." "Your choice of route." "Your choice of courier." He pushed a clean glass toward her. "Your choice of refuge." Aurora took the glass and wiped a circle into the bar. Upstairs, the floorboards creaked with the last of the afternoon deliveries. She knew every sound in the building, the pipe that knocked, the step that groaned under a left foot. The Raven's Nest had become a clock she could set herself by. The door opened. Cold air swept the mats. A woman stood in the threshold, rain sliding from a charcoal coat. Her hair sat close to her skull. She wore no colour beneath the coat except the white line at her throat. Aurora's hand stopped on the glass. "Are you open?" The voice had lost its Cardiff bounce, but the vowels pulled at the centre of Rory's chest. Silas lifted his chin. "We are. What can I pour?" The woman stepped inside. Her gaze moved over the maps, the photographs, the green light pooling on the floor. It reached Aurora and stayed there. "Whisky. Neat." Aurora placed the glass down hard. The sound cracked through the bar. "Eva." The woman's mouth tightened. "You remember." "I remember." Eva looked at the empty stool beside her. "May I?" Silas set a bottle and two glasses on the bar. His knee made a small drag against the floor when he stepped back. "Use the corner if you want the wall at your back." Eva gave him a nod that held more familiarity than Aurora expected. She chose the corner table under a map of the Thames. Aurora followed because her feet moved before her mind gave permission. At the table, Eva peeled off her gloves finger by finger. Her nails were short. A pale band of skin marked where a ring had been. Eva studied her. "Your hair got longer." Aurora touched the black ends at her shoulders. "It grew." "Your eyes did not change." "Neither did your habit of noticing the wrong things." The neon put a blue edge on Aurora's gaze. Eva looked at the scar on her wrist, then away. "You look different." "You cut your hair." "I lost the rest." Eva touched the back of her neck. "London does that." Aurora sat. "You're in London." "Three days. Chambers near Holborn. I came for an interview, then a hearing, then another thing that pretends not to be an interview." "You became a barrister." "I became someone who bills by six minutes." Eva's smile had no heat. "You?" Aurora gestured at the bar, the stairs, the delivery jacket. "I run food through traffic. I live above the pub." Eva's fingers closed around the glass Silas placed between them. "You used to say you would not stand behind a bar." "I used to say I would not stand behind a lectern either." "I remember the lectern. You stood on it during the first-year moot." "And you pulled me off it." "You were going to object to your own side." The whisky trembled in Eva's glass. She did not drink. Aurora leaned forward. "How long has it been?" "Since the station?" "Since I called you from Paddington." Eva looked at the map. "You called." "Two calls. Then from the phone box on Greek Street. Then from a hostel where the sheets smelled of bleach." "I know." "You know." "I had the messages." Aurora's chair legs bit into the floor. "You had the messages." "I was in court. My supervisor had me bound to the filing cabinet. I thought you were safe. I thought you had the number I gave you." "I did not have you. I had a number." Eva's jaw worked. "I told you to call if you needed a place. I did not say I could come." "You said come to London." "I said get out." Silas brought a jug of water and three glasses. His grey-streaked beard caught the lamplight, and his hazel eyes took in the table without touching either woman. He set the tray down with the care of a man laying cards face up. "The back room has a door that does not announce itself." Eva glanced at the bookshelf. "I'm fine here." "Fine is a word people use when they are not." He straightened. "Rory, the ledger needs the delivery figures." Aurora kept her eyes on Eva. "They can wait." Silas's ring made a small circle on the wood. "They cannot." Aurora stood. Eva's hand pressed the table. "I'm not leaving." Aurora fetched the ledger from the bar and returned with it under her arm. She set it on the table and began to write numbers beside the whisky rings. Eva watched the pen. "You used to do two things with the same hand." "You used to read statutes in the bath." "I read them in the bath now. It's the only way to keep the words from crawling." Aurora's pen paused. "You hated law." "I hated the idea of losing. I thought if I learned the rules, no one could trap me with them." "Did it work?" Eva lifted the whisky. The glass touched her lip, but she set it down without drinking. "I defended a landlord last month. He wanted a family out before winter. I found the clause. I made it clean." Aurora looked at her. "You?" "The firm likes clean." "You used to volunteer at the tenants' advice desk." "I used to believe advice was enough." Eva's fingers found the pale band on her hand. "My mother's house went into arrears. I took the job because they offered enough to stop the letters." The rain ticked against the window. Aurora watched the neon throw green along Eva's cuff. "You could have told me." "You had your own escape." "It was not an escape if you remained in Cardiff." Eva's eyes brightened. "I remained where?" "In that flat with the broken boiler. In the courtroom where they hand you files like stones." "I stayed because you left." The words sat between them. Aurora's pen stilled. "You stayed because I left?" Eva's laugh had no air in it. "You think the world split when you got on that train. You think I was the one who pushed you toward the door because I wanted to be brave for you. I did it because if you stayed, I would have had to look at what I was doing." Aurora pressed her wrist against her thigh. "You told me Evan would stop." "Evan stopped." "How?" Eva looked toward the bar. Silas stood with his back to them, polishing a glass. The signet ring flashed when his hand moved. Eva's hands flattened on the table. "He came to my office. Three weeks after you disappeared. He wanted to know where you were. I told him I did not know." "He hurt you." "He threatened. I learned the difference between the two in chambers." Aurora reached across the table, then drew her hand back. "Why did you not tell me?" "Because you needed London to be yours. Because if I said his name, I would drag him into your new air." "You kept him out by yourself." "I kept him out by becoming someone he could not shake. I wore the right coat. I learned the right forms. I stopped sleeping with the lights off." Eva's thumb moved over the empty ring mark. "It worked. It also cost." Aurora looked at the ledger, at the numbers she had written in a neat column. They belonged to Silas, to deliveries, to a life built from small counted things. She had believed her survival was a clean line drawn between Cardiff and London. Eva's face showed the smudge on the other side. Aurora's thumb pressed the scar. "You should have let me owe you." "You owed me nothing." "I called you because I did." Eva drank. The glass came down empty, and her throat worked as if the whisky owed her something. Eva traced the rim. "I listened to the messages every week. At first. Then every month. Then I kept them in a drawer and could not open it." "You kept them." "I kept everything. Your postcards. The photo from the pier. The note you left in my pocket when I lent you my coat." Aurora remembered the coat. It had smelled of rain and tobacco and the cheap lemon soap Eva used in the shared bathroom. She had left the note on a train, or in a hostel, or folded into the lining and forgotten. Aurora touched her wrist. "The note said thank you." "It said go." "Go where?" "Anywhere he couldn't find you." Silas returned with a plate of olives and bread. He set it beside the ledger. "Eat. Whisky on an empty stomach makes honesty reckless." Eva tore a piece of bread. Her hands had stopped shaking. That bothered Aurora more than the shaking. Aurora watched the pale band on Eva's finger. "You changed your name." "Evelyn, at work. Eva to my mother. To you, I don't know." "Rory is what you called me when I was waiting for someone to save me." Eva's gaze dropped to the scar. "I did not save you." "You gave me the number. You paid for the ticket." "I gave you the number because I could not give you the rest." Aurora picked up the whisky bottle. She filled Eva's glass to the line, then her own. The liquid held the green light from the sign. Aurora's hand stayed on the bottle. "What do you want from me now?" "Nothing." "That is a lie. You did not come into this bar for the whisky." Eva looked at the bookshelf, at the hidden seam Aurora knew by heart. She looked at Silas, who had resumed his place behind the bar with the ledger closed before him. Eva faced her. "I came because I had a hearing near Soho. I saw a delivery bag with the Golden Empress logo and a woman on a bike who held her shoulders like you. I followed the name on the app until it led here." "You followed me." "I followed a guess." "You became someone who follows guesses." "I became someone who checks." Aurora drank. The whisky burned clean. Outside, the rain eased, and the neon sign buzzed against the wet glass. Aurora set the glass down. "Check what?" Eva turned the glass in her palm. "Whether you are alive in the way you wanted." "I'm alive." "That is not the same thing." "Then ask the question." Eva's gaze held. In her eyes, Aurora saw the old girl from the library steps, the one who had stolen two umbrellas and given one away because a stranger looked soaked. The woman in the charcoal coat sat inside that memory like a tenant who had stopped paying rent. "Are you free of him?" "I haven't seen Evan in five years." "Do you check the locks?" "Every night." Eva nodded. "So no." "So yes. I choose the locks." Silas placed a key on the bar. The metal rang. "Rory. The upstairs window is open." Aurora did not look away from Eva. "Let it rain in." "It will spoil the books." "Then we move the books." Eva set her glass down. "You live here." "I live above." "With him?" "With the bar. Silas keeps the lease and the secrets." Eva's mouth curved. "You had a habit of finding strange shelters." "This one has walls that listen." "Does it have room for a question?" Aurora looked at the ledger, at the delivery numbers, at Eva's empty ring mark. She picked up her glass. "Start with the night you stopped answering." Eva lifted her whisky. "I stopped answering because I was afraid you would ask me to come." "And if I had?" Eva drank, set the glass down, and placed both palms flat on the table. "I was in hospital." Aurora's pen rested on the ledger. Eva's hands opened on the table, and the green sign buzzed above the door while rain returned to the window.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:08:35.984Z" 9/2/2026, 3:08:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences135
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2107
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2107
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"traced"
2"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences256
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions102
wordCount1066
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity4.03
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Blackwood1
Cardiff2
Rory1
Aurora37
Thames1
Eva43
Silas11
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Rory"
5"Aurora"
6"Eva"
7"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Thames"
2"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2107
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences256
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs157
mean13.42
std12.54
cv0.934
sampleLengths
063
115
23
320
44
54
611
753
847
93
1017
1110
1225
132
1412
151
166
172
1810
1934
2034
2126
227
2310
245
259
2619
273
284
2914
305
3123
324
3314
3420
3521
3612
3712
386
399
4010
418
423
436
447
4520
462
472
484
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences256
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1069
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.01028999064546305
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences256
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences256
mean8.23
std6.6
cv0.802
sampleLengths
014
122
29
318
48
57
63
77
813
94
104
117
124
1311
1411
1519
1612
173
185
1912
207
2114
226
233
2417
254
266
274
2815
296
302
316
326
331
344
352
362
378
382
3910
4013
4111
4212
4311
4411
4511
464
4711
483
494
44.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2265625
totalSentences256
uniqueOpeners58
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences120
matches
0"His silver signet ring tapped"
1"She set the boxes by"
2"He pushed a clean glass"
3"She knew every sound in"
4"Her hair sat close to"
5"She wore no colour beneath"
6"Her gaze moved over the"
7"It reached Aurora and stayed"
8"His knee made a small"
9"She chose the corner table"
10"Her nails were short."
11"She did not drink."
12"His grey-streaked beard caught the"
13"He set the tray down"
14"She set it on the"
15"They belonged to Silas, to"
16"She had believed her survival"
17"It had smelled of rain"
18"She had left the note"
19"He set it beside the"
ratio0.2
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences120
matches
0"Rain combed the neon into"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"The sign above the entrance"
3"Silas Blackwood lifted his head"
4"His silver signet ring tapped"
5"She set the boxes by"
6"He pushed a clean glass"
7"Aurora took the glass and"
8"She knew every sound in"
9"The Raven's Nest had become"
10"The door opened."
11"A woman stood in the"
12"Her hair sat close to"
13"She wore no colour beneath"
14"Aurora's hand stopped on the"
15"The voice had lost its"
16"Silas lifted his chin."
17"The woman stepped inside."
18"Her gaze moved over the"
19"It reached Aurora and stayed"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5934%