Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAN5R0GJ2AK9KF9N6TZQYN

Run Details

Duration:
6m 33s
Cost:
$0.088614
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost rimed the ancient oak standing stones in Richmond Park, but inside their ring bluebells stood thick and unbruised. Aurora Carter stopped where the grass turned from frozen brown to living violet. Between the two tallest trunks the air wrinkled like water over hot stone. The winter solstice had worn the Veil to a thread. The Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket beat once against her collarbone. Rory cupped the crimson gem through her shirt. "It knows the door." Nyx stood at the edge of the bluebells. Their silhouette sharpened until the flowers bent away from the shape of shoulders, spine, and long fingers. Violet light gathered in their eyes. "Or it remembers it." Isolde passed between them and left no print in the frost that still clung to the stones. Her silver hair lay over one shoulder like poured metal. Pale lavender eyes fixed on the wrinkle in the air. "The table is set. The guests have waited long." Rory drew the Fae-forged blade. Cold ran up her wrist and settled beneath the crescent scar there. The leaf-shaped moonsilver took no reflection from the winter light. It held a pale line of its own. "If we cross, no one eats anything." Nyx's mouth did not move. Their voice came from the shadow behind her. "Hands are not the only mouths." The pendant pulsed again, warm against Rory's sternum. She stepped over the boundary of bluebells and frost. The air split without sound. Heat washed her face, carrying roasted sugar, hot fat, and the green smell of crushed grape leaves. Rory crossed into Dymas for the first time. The sky hung low and amber, lit from inside itself. No sun marked it, yet every leaf and stone carried a glaze of warm light. The ground under Rory's boots gave like packed cake crumbs, and black vines climbed a nearby slope with fruit swollen to the size of plums. Each grape held a red pulse. She lifted the dagger. The cold in her hand sharpened. Nyx flowed through the rift after her. In that amber glow their shadow gained edges: collar, knuckles, the hem of something long. Where they stepped, the soil darkened and steamed. Isolde came last. Behind her the seam in the air closed with the sound of a plate set down. Rory turned. The rift remained, a wavering line between two standing stones that had not existed in Richmond Park a heartbeat before. "The way back can forget us." Isolde touched the nearest stone. Moss curled around her fingers. "Stone forgets nothing. It waits." Nyx looked up the slope. "Then we give it a reason to remember our path." Rory checked her phone. The screen showed 21:04, though the amber light had no dusk in it. As she watched, the numbers shifted to 03:17, then vanished into a black mirror. She put the device away. The vineyard rows led downward in terraces, each vine tied to stakes of pale bone or polished wood. The leaves had edges dark enough to stain. When the breeze moved through them, the grapes clicked against one another like glass beads. Rory kept the blade low. The air pressed against her mouth with sweetness so heavy it sat on her tongue. A path of crushed shells cut between the vines. It glowed pale underfoot and smelled of salt. Rory followed it because the pendant pulled in that direction, each beat stronger than the last. The warmth spread down the silver chain and into her chest. Halfway down the terrace, she stopped. Among the vines stood a tree no taller than a child. Its bark was translucent, and inside the trunk moved a slow procession of shapes: plates, knives, cups, and hands reaching for them. The hands had no bodies. They grasped, vanished, and returned. Rory leaned closer. Nyx's shadow fell across the tree. "Do not give it your name." Isolde bent, though her feet did not bend the grass. "A name feeds longer than flesh." Rory drew back. The tree shivered. One of the hands pressed against the bark from within, fingers spread. Further down, the vineyard gave way to orchards. The trees there bore fruit made of thin amber shells. Inside each fruit, a small light turned. Rory heard laughter from one, the clink of glasses from another. A pear-shaped fruit held a miniature kitchen where figures moved around a stove. The fruit turned in the air and showed her a table with three empty chairs. Her stomach clenched. She had not eaten since morning. The hunger came with teeth now, not a simple emptiness but a demand that tightened around her ribs. She pressed the flat of the blade to her palm. The cold bit through the impulse. "This place wants us to forget why we came." Isolde lifted a hand to the nearest fruit. The light inside it flared, then dimmed. "Hunger knows the shape of every heart." Nyx extended one finger. A shadow tendril touched the fruit. The amber shell cracked, and the tiny kitchen vanished. The fruit fell, hollow, and burst into seeds that crawled away like beetles. The shade's voice thinned. "It was not food." Rory moved on. The orchard ended at a courtyard paved with dark stone veined in red. At its center stood a fountain. The liquid that rose in the basin was not water but wine, deep and glossy, and it fell back without splash. Around the rim, names appeared and faded in the surface. Each time one vanished, the fountain gave off a smell: bread, rosewater, burnt honey, iron. Rory approached. The Heartstone pulsed so hard her ribs ached. The crimson glow of the gem shone through her jacket and matched the fountain's depth. Nyx circled the basin. Their reflection did not appear in the wine. Instead, the surface showed a tall human figure with tired eyes and ink-blackened hands. The image lasted one breath, then dissolved. Isolde spoke behind them. "The cup gives only what it takes." Rory looked at the names again. One surfaced near the edge: A. Carter. The letters held for a heartbeat, then melted. Her fingers tightened on the dagger. "That is not mine." Nyx stood at her shoulder. "Nothing here is." A sound rose from beyond the courtyard: knives on boards, pans ringing, and voices braided into laughter. The courtyard's far wall opened into a hall without doors. Arch after arch stood there, carved with mouths. The stone lips glistened. Rory walked toward them because the pendant dragged her forward and because standing by the fountain made her want to drink. The Fae blade hummed against her palm. At the first arch, a curtain of spun sugar hung from the lintel, white and fine as cobweb. The air beyond it shimmered. She raised the dagger. Nyx's shadow stretched across the stone. "A ward." Isolde's eyes shone pale in the amber light. "Cut what binds. Leave what invites." Rory drew the blade through the sugar curtain. The moonsilver parted it without snagging. Sparks fell like salt, and the curtain dissolved into steam. The pressure in her ears eased. Beyond the arch, the hall opened into rows of tables that had no ends. They ran beneath vaults, through alcoves, and out of sight. Every surface bore dishes: towers of glazed birds with feathers made of gold leaf, wheels of cheese sweating amber drops, bowls of fruit that opened and closed like gills. Candles burned without melting. Their flames bent toward each newcomer as if curious. Figures moved among the tables. Some carried trays. Some ate. Some sat with their hands folded and their mouths open. The servers wore aprons stained with wine and ash, and each bore a brand on the inner wrist: a fork with three prongs crossed by a crown. Their eyes held the flat shine of polished stone. Near the middle, two cooks carved at a boar with jeweled knives. Each slice leaped back into place before the next cut, and the boar's skin crackled with fresh heat every time the blades crossed. One server approached Rory. He was human, or had been. His smile carried genuine warmth, and his hands shook. "First taste is a gift." He held out a silver tray of candied violets. Each flower trembled as if alive. Rory kept the blade at her side. "We are not guests." The server's smile widened. The corners reached his ears, then stopped there. "Prince Belphegor welcomes the lean." Nyx moved between them. The candle flames bowed away. The server's gaze dropped to the shade's face, and his tray dipped. "Then welcome our lack of appetite." The server stepped back. His brand glowed red for a breath. He turned and vanished into the crowd without sounding a footfall. Isolde passed Rory's shoulder and continued into the hall. The diners leaned away from her, though she did not touch them. Where she walked, the food on nearby plates aged: fruit wrinkled, bread cracked, wine dried into dark rings. Rory followed. The pendant beat against her chest, pulling her past the first tables, past a fountain of honey where coins spun beneath the surface, past a roast that turned itself on a spit and whispered in three languages. The heat grew stronger. The smell of sugar and meat grew so thick her throat closed around it. At the hall's heart stood a low dais. No throne crowned it. Instead, a table of black stone waited, set for three. Three plates of white bone. Three cups of dark glass. Three knives with handles shaped like vines. Rory stopped at the foot of the dais. Nyx's silhouette widened until it brushed the vaulted ceiling. "Someone prepared this." Isolde looked at the three place settings. Her lips moved, counting. "Three chairs. Three hungers. One meal." Rory placed her hand on the Heartstone. The gem had grown hot, and its glow spilled through her fingers in red threads. The Fae blade lay cold against her other palm. Around them, the hall fell silent. Every server, every diner, every carved mouth in the arches turned toward the dais. Rory did not sit. "We take nothing." Isolde extended her hand over the black table. Green leaves sprouted from the stone plates. "Eat nothing. Carry all." Rory set her boot on the first step of the dais, the pendant burning red through her fingers, and the Fae blade cold against her palm.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:09:02.089Z" 9/2/2026, 3:09:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1727
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1727
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"wavering"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"footfall"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"pulse"
2"wavering"
3"warmth"
4"stomach"
5"shimmered"
6"trembled"
7"footfall"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences169
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences195
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1727
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1586
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Carter2
Veil1
Heartstone3
Fae-forged1
Rory25
Dymas1
Fae4
Nyx11
Isolde10
One3
Three3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Dymas"
3"Three"
globalScore0.712
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences124
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
84.19% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.158
wordCount1727
matches
0"not a simple emptiness but a demand"
1"not water but wine, deep"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences195
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean19.4
std18.34
cv0.945
sampleLengths
066
18
24
331
44
537
69
735
87
913
106
1139
128
1356
1410
1530
1619
1722
186
1910
205
215
2210
2336
2461
2544
266
2743
283
296
306
3110
326
3318
3464
3527
3616
379
3815
397
4032
414
424
433
4465
4525
4633
474
487
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs261
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences195
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1590
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay cold against her"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.021383647798742137
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean8.86
std5.57
cv0.628
sampleLengths
019
113
213
310
411
58
64
78
817
96
104
1117
1210
1310
149
155
1612
1710
188
197
205
218
226
238
249
255
2617
278
2810
2915
3025
316
324
336
347
3515
368
373
3816
392
4020
416
425
435
445
455
4610
474
4813
4914
46.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3230769230769231
totalSentences195
uniqueOpeners63
60.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences164
matches
0"Further down, the vineyard gave"
1"Instead, the surface showed a"
2"Instead, a table of black"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences164
matches
0"Their silhouette sharpened until the"
1"Her silver hair lay over"
2"It held a pale line"
3"Their voice came from the"
4"She stepped over the boundary"
5"She lifted the dagger."
6"She put the device away."
7"It glowed pale underfoot and"
8"Its bark was translucent, and"
9"They grasped, vanished, and returned."
10"Her stomach clenched."
11"She had not eaten since"
12"She pressed the flat of"
13"Their reflection did not appear"
14"Her fingers tightened on the"
15"She raised the dagger."
16"They ran beneath vaults, through"
17"Their flames bent toward each"
18"Their eyes held the flat"
19"He was human, or had"
ratio0.152
57.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount132
totalSentences164
matches
0"Frost rimed the ancient oak"
1"Aurora Carter stopped where the"
2"The winter solstice had worn"
3"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
4"Rory cupped the crimson gem"
5"Nyx stood at the edge"
6"Their silhouette sharpened until the"
7"Violet light gathered in their"
8"Isolde passed between them and"
9"Her silver hair lay over"
10"Rory drew the Fae-forged blade."
11"The leaf-shaped moonsilver took no"
12"It held a pale line"
13"Nyx's mouth did not move."
14"Their voice came from the"
15"The pendant pulsed again, warm"
16"She stepped over the boundary"
17"The air split without sound."
18"Rory crossed into Dymas for"
19"The sky hung low and"
ratio0.805
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Every surface bore dishes: towers of glazed birds with feathers made of gold leaf, wheels of cheese sweating amber drops, bowls of fruit that opened and closed …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.5039%