Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAR4JMW3ZY5RRTP848X5B2

Run Details

Duration:
40.7s
Cost:
$0.000822
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass bolt scraped back with a metallic groan. Cold November air rushed into the narrow hallway, carrying the damp chill of East London and the faint, greasy aroma of spiced lamb drifting up from the curry house downstairs. Aurora stood in the threshold, knuckles pressed hard against the peeling paint of her door. Straight black hair fell just past her shoulders, framing a face pale from hours hunched over pre-law textbooks and delivery manifests. Bright blue eyes narrowed as they settled on the figure blocking the stairwell lamp. Lucien Moreau did not blink. He filled the cramped frame with effortless gravity, charcoal wool draping over broad shoulders, platinum hair swept back without a single wayward strand. The weak fluorescent tube caught the sharp line of his jaw and the uncanny contrast of his irises, one molten amber, the other void-black. Ivory cane planted firmly on the warped floorboards. He carried the scent of aged cedar, dry parchment, and something sharply metallic that had nothing to do with London rain. You locked three deadbolts, he murmured, voice rolling through the syllables with a Marseille cadence that always made the corners of her mouth tighten despite herself. For me. Aurora shifted her weight, the crescent scar on her left wrist pressing against her sleeve. I lock them every night. Since Tuesday. Since Evan walked away with your registration papers and three months of cash. He stepped forward. She planted her feet, spine going rigid. His shadow swallowed the dim landing. Still waking up clutching your ribs? Go away, Luc. I cannot. The admission hung between them, heavy and unpolished. Eight months had bled since the warehouse fire, since the blood on his cuff and hers, since they had drawn a line in the soot-stained alley and swore never to cross it again. She remembered the taste of ash and cheap whiskey, the way his amber eye had tracked her pulse before he turned his back. She remembered telling him he was too much trouble, that chaos followed him like a second skin. He had not argued. He had simply adjusted his lapels and vanished into the fog. Ptolemy slipped around her ankles, tail lifting in cautious assessment. The tabby mewed once, a raspy warning, then trotted toward the kitchenette. Books and scrolls spilled from every available surface inside, paper towers threatening to topple in the draft from the open door. Aurora finally swung the entrance shut, twisting the first deadbolt home. The metal clicked loud in the quiet. You are tracking mud on my floor. Your floor has been stained for years. He set the ivory cane against the wall near a stack of annotated civil procedure manuals. The tip tapped twice. A thin silver blade whispered free of its casing, caught the lamplight, then slid back with a soft click. She watched the motion, trained muscles remembering how easily that steel could move. How close he had come to using it last time. Why are you here? She crossed her arms, elbows pressing into her ribs. The scar on her wrist throbbed faintly, a phantom echo of older cuts. Information travels fast in this city. Especially when it involves half-breeds and hollowed-out shipping containers. His gaze dropped to her hands, then climbed back to her eyes. You signed up for Yu-Fei Cheung courier routes. Thought the mundane grime would wash off the other stains. It does. Does it? She turned away, pacing toward the mismatched sofa buried under research binders. Her boots squeaked on linoleum. Eva teaches comparative constitutional law tomorrow. I am covering a double shift at the Empress. If you are here to collect a debt, leave it with Silas. If you are here to apologize, save your breath. We finished talking the night everything burned. Lucien followed, his stride unhurried but deliberate. The room seemed smaller with him in it, the air thicker. He stopped beside a desk where parchment maps overlapped with takeout menus and legal pads scrawled with case law. One hand rested on the edge, fingers tapping a silent rhythm against the wood. I never apologized because I knew you would not accept it, he said. You mistake pride for closure, Aur. It took you long enough to realize that. Do not call me that. Laila? He tilted his head. The black eye darkened; the amber one caught the overhead bulb. Then I will use the name you gave yourself when you left Wales. You picked it carefully. Stripped the bones down to something survivable. Survival does not require philosophy. Neither does running. She spun around, chair scraping backward. I am not running. You are hiding. Behind statutes, behind delivery schedules, behind walls you paint over with orange juice and highlighters. He leaned forward, bracing both hands on the backrest. The scent of cedar wrapped around her. Heat radiated through his jacket. Look at me. She refused until the silence stretched thin, then yielded. His face sat closer than memory allowed, shadows carving deep lines beneath those impossible eyes. Something flickered there, regret, maybe, or exhaustion, or the same stubborn pull that had kept them tangled in rooftops and safe houses while the city's underbelly chewed on itself. She kept her chin high. Kept her breathing even. Let the scar on her wrist bleed cold instead of tears. You walked out, she said quietly. No note. No explanation. Just an empty coat rack and a voicemail that lasted four seconds. Four seconds was all I needed. His thumb brushed the arm of the chair, missing her knuckles by a fraction. They were not after me anymore. They were circling you. I drew them off toward Docklands. Should have stayed clear. Should have called. Could not trust my own voice to speak without slipping. Slipping into what? Into saying you matter more than the ledger. He exhaled, slow and measured. The cane lay forgotten against the books. Every deal I cut, every favor I trade, buys you another day of pretending you are just another face in traffic. Another nameless delivery girl dodging red lights and impatient drivers. And yet you are still here. Still costing favors. Expensive ones. A ghost of a smile touched his mouth, gone too quickly. Worth it. Ptolemy leapt onto the windowsill, watching them with slit green eyes. Rain began to tap against the glass, blurring the brick wall opposite into watercolor streaks. Aurora dragged a hand through her hair, strands falling across her forehead. She studied the line of his throat, the way his collarbone moved beneath wool when he shifted. Years of discipline warred with the sudden, violent awareness of how close they sat. How easy it would be to bridge the gap. How dangerous. You look different, she murmured. So do you. His voice dropped, rough at the edges. Thinner. Harder around the eyes. Still reading until your fingers cramp. Occupational hazard. Tell me something else. He reached out, palm hovering near her cheek, then curled it into a fist against his thigh. Did you ever eat properly? Or did you live on convenience store sandwiches and spite? Yu-Fei leaves congee in the kitchen. She looked away. I ration it. Rationing is not living. Says the man who sleeps in borrowed beds and trades secrets like currency. She pushed off the chair, backing toward the small sink. Water dripped from the tap. She turned it on, letting it run over her wrists, feeling the heat bleed into old scars. We do not get to rewrite what happened, Luc. Not with grand declarations and walking into flats we have no business crossing. I am not rewriting anything. He stepped into her peripheral vision, water mist catching the light on his cheeks. I am standing in the wreckage and asking if you want help picking up the pieces. Or if you would rather let them rot. You do not get to decide what counts as wreckage. I watch you carry it alone. Night after night. Shoulder checking when strangers linger too long. Jumps at phone rings. Pretends the quiet does not scream. His hand lifted again, slower this time, fingers brushing the back of her neck. She froze. The touch burned through wet sleeves, steady and undeniable. You built walls to keep the world out. Forgot to leave a door for anyone who actually cares. She turned slowly, water dripping from her fingertips onto the worn tiles. His thumb traced the ridge of her collarbone, careful as glass. Her breath hitched. The past eight months crashed over her, the nights spent staring at plaster ceilings, the letters she wrote and shredded, the way his name still lodged in her throat when dreams bled too real. Attraction coiled tight in her gut, fierce and unapologetic, tangled with grief for what they had fractured. For what she had not trusted enough to ask him to stay. I care, she whispered. The words escaped before she could cage them. That is the problem. His grip tightened, just barely. Amber and black fixed on hers, unblinking. The rain thickened outside, drumming against the single pane. Somewhere below, a siren wailed, fading into traffic noise. The flat held its breath. Then say it again, he said. Low. Certain. No distance left between them. Without the armor.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:10:39.196Z" 9/2/2026, 3:10:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1542
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"carefully"
2"quickly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1542
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"uncanny"
count1
3
word"firmly"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"measured"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"effortless"
2"uncanny"
3"firmly"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"throbbed"
7"echo"
8"silence"
9"flickered"
10"measured"
11"traced"
12"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences172
matches
0"d with grief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences172
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1542
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions6
matches
0"You locked three deadbolts, he murmured, voice rolling through the syllables with a Marseille cadence that always made t…"
1"I never apologized because I knew you would not accept it, he said."
2"You walked out, she said quietly."
3"You look different, she murmured."
4"I care, she whispered."
5"Then say it again, he said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1542
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
November1
East1
London2
Moreau1
Marseille1
Tuesday1
Evan1
Luc2
Yu-Fei2
Cheung1
Empress1
Silas1
Aur1
Wales1
Docklands1
Aurora4
You10
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Evan"
2"Luc"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Silas"
6"Aurora"
7"You"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"Empress"
4"Wales"
5"Docklands"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed smaller with him in it, the air thicker"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1542
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean33.52
std28.33
cv0.845
sampleLengths
089
181
228
322
435
53
62
796
861
97
1069
1126
1245
132
142
1560
1651
1727
185
1940
205
213
2210
2342
2473
2522
2653
273
2851
299
3015
3180
325
3321
342
3536
3612
374
3867
3943
4010
4169
4289
4316
4435
4516
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences172
matches
0"been stained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs296
matches
0"were circling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences172
ratio0.006
matches
0"The black eye darkened; the amber one caught the overhead bulb."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1548
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount60
adverbRatio0.03875968992248062
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.009689922480620155
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean8.97
std6.32
cv0.704
sampleLengths
09
130
215
321
414
55
623
724
88
921
1026
112
1215
135
142
1513
163
177
186
196
203
212
228
2333
2423
2517
264
2711
2810
2912
3021
3111
327
337
347
3516
364
3719
3813
3910
404
419
4213
436
449
4512
468
4710
482
492
76.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4883720930232558
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners84
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences156
matches
0"Bright blue eyes narrowed as"
1"Still waking up clutching your"
2"Especially when it involves half-breeds"
3"Then I will use the"
4"Just an empty coat rack"
5"Still costing favors."
6"Somewhere below, a siren wailed,"
7"Then say it again, he"
ratio0.051
61.03% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences156
matches
0"He filled the cramped frame"
1"He carried the scent of"
2"You locked three deadbolts, he"
3"I lock them every night."
4"He stepped forward."
5"She planted her feet, spine"
6"His shadow swallowed the dim"
7"She remembered the taste of"
8"She remembered telling him he"
9"He had not argued."
10"He had simply adjusted his"
11"You are tracking mud on"
12"Your floor has been stained"
13"He set the ivory cane"
14"She watched the motion, trained"
15"She crossed her arms, elbows"
16"His gaze dropped to her"
17"You signed up for Yu-Fei"
18"She turned away, pacing toward"
19"Her boots squeaked on linoleum."
ratio0.397
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences156
matches
0"The brass bolt scraped back"
1"Aurora stood in the threshold,"
2"Lucien Moreau did not blink."
3"He filled the cramped frame"
4"The weak fluorescent tube caught"
5"Ivory cane planted firmly on"
6"He carried the scent of"
7"You locked three deadbolts, he"
8"Aurora shifted her weight, the"
9"I lock them every night."
10"He stepped forward."
11"She planted her feet, spine"
12"His shadow swallowed the dim"
13"The admission hung between them,"
14"She remembered the taste of"
15"She remembered telling him he"
16"He had not argued."
17"He had simply adjusted his"
18"Ptolemy slipped around her ankles,"
19"The tabby mewed once, a"
ratio0.699
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences156
matches
0"If you are here to"
1"If you are here to"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Something flickered there, regret, maybe, or exhaustion, or the same stubborn pull that had kept them tangled in rooftops and safe houses while the city's under…"
1"She turned it on, letting it run over her wrists, feeling the heat bleed into old scars."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.5583%