Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAV3ZYRQFSN4XQVZYQHVDG

Run Details

Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.000762
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clacked back, metal grinding against worn wood. Aurora pulled the door wide and stopped breathing. Lucien stood in the stairwell hallway. Rain darkened his charcoal suit, turning the wool near the shoulders to ink. Water droplets tracked the line of his jaw. He held himself upright despite the damp air, posture rigid, an ivory cane resting against his thigh. His heterochromatic eyes caught the dim corridor light, one amber, one pitch black, and locked onto her face. She should have closed the door. Her hand stayed wrapped around the brass knob, knuckles bleached white. The smell of cumin and frying garlic drifted up from the curry shop below. Ptolemy yowled from somewhere inside the flat, sounding deeply offended. You look like you swallowed a hornet, he said. His voice carried that Marseille cadence, frayed at the edges by whatever storm had chased him to East London. I saw you coming, Aurora replied. She kept her stance planted, feet shoulder-width apart. I just haven't decided whether to slam the door or call the police. His lips quirked. Not a smile. Something sharper. The police would arrest me before they understood the paperwork. May I come in? The floorboards groaned under unfamiliar boots. He stepped forward anyway, forcing her to tilt her head back. Five foot eleven of tailored trouble. He smelled of wet wool, bergamot, and something sharp underneath, like struck flint. The scent dragged up a decade of shared glances across crowded rooms, whispered conversations over cheap wine, and the hollow ache of leaving without looking back. She stepped aside. He crossed the threshold. Ptolemy hopped onto the kitchen counter and stared at Lucien's ankles. The tabby flicked his tail, unimpressed. Don't let him bite your calves, Aurora muttered. She shut the door. The second deadbolt clicked home. Then the third. Lucien set his cane against the wall beside a tower of encyclopedias. The movement revealed the thin silver blade hidden in the handle, but he pressed it flush with the ivory grip before Aurora could focus on it. He turned. The flat swallowed them both, cramped bookshelves bowing under paperbacks, maps pinned to peeling wallpaper, a single armchair buried under leather-bound journals. Every surface begged for order. None received it. Brick Lane suits you, he observed. His gaze swept the room, lingering on the stacks of research notes tied with twine. You still live among debris. You prefer marble floors and empty halls. Aurora moved toward the kitchenette. She filled the kettle, watching the water level rise instead of his face. Silas pays well for a place above his bar. Better security than a furnished box in Soho. Besides, Eva keeps me fed. Eva. The name rolled off his tongue like a test. Your anchor. Your excuse. My friend. She flipped the switch. The element began to hum. What do you want, Lucien? He walked closer. Boots silent on the linoleum. He stopped a foot away. The space between them tightened, pulling air from the room. He reached out, fingers hovering near her left wrist. She flinched. The small crescent scar surfaced beneath her skin, pale against dark hair on her forearm. You always brace for impact, he murmured. Even when nothing touches you. Some habits stick. She stepped back. The kettle whistled. She killed the flame. Steam curled into the damp air. You aren't here for old scars. You're dripping on my rug. Three months, he said. Two weeks after Marseille. Six hours after you vanished from that warehouse in Deptford. Do you know how difficult it is to track a woman who burns every bridge behind her? I told you I wanted out. You told me you needed space. He adjusted his cufflinks, silver hooks catching the light. There is a difference. One requires distance. The other demands a destination. She grabbed two chipped mugs from the cupboard. Porcelain clinked against porcelain. She poured boiling water over tea bags, watched the liquid darken, and handed one to him. Their fingers brushed. Neither pulled away immediately. The case is closed, she said. I left the ledger. I left the keys. I left Cardiff, England, and any association with your little network. I deliver noodles for Yu-Fei now. I count change. I sleep. You pretend very convincingly. He took a sip. Amber eye narrow, black eye steady. But your hands shake when you think no one watches. And you still read criminal law briefs under streetlights because you refuse to throw away what might save you. Heat climbed her neck. She set the mug down hard enough to rattle the saucer. You've been following me. I monitor threats. He leaned against the counter, crossing his ankles. The charcoal fabric stretched tight over his thighs. And you became one. The same syndicate that bought Evan's debts resurfaced in Southwark. They aren't chasing money anymore. They're hunting witnesses. Aurora's breath caught. Evan's name sat heavy in the room, a ghost she'd spent years burying. That's impossible. Evan's in Birmingham. Locked away. His cousins run the collection agencies now. Lucien tapped his cane twice on the floor. A sharp crack echoed. They found you. Which means I have to keep you alive long enough to finish what you started walking away from. I'm not going back. You weren't asking. He pushed off the counter. The movement sent the cane rolling. He didn't chase it. Pack a bag. Leave by morning. I'll arrange transport. Train station. Airport. Doesn't matter. You don't get to dictate my life. Her voice rose, echoing off the bookshelves. Ptolemy leapt onto the fridge and narrowed his eyes. You disappeared. No warning. No note. Just silence. I had to learn how to stand alone again. I don't need your protection. I don't need your games. Protection was never the point. He stepped into her space again. Close enough to see the pulse jumping in her throat. Close enough to catch the vanilla and sweat clinging to her skin. I left because I couldn't watch you break. Because every time you smiled, I felt like I was stealing sunlight I didn't deserve. And when you looked at me with those bright blue eyes and told me I was too dangerous to keep, I believed you. The confession hung between them, stripped bare. Aurora's chest tightened. She remembered the rain on that rooftop. The way his hand had trembled before letting go. The lie she'd told herself to make the loss manageable. You were right, she whispered. I am tired of dangerous. Then be tired of safe. He reached out, thumb brushing the edge of her chin. The gesture was gentle, deliberate. Safe doesn't keep you awake at night staring at the ceiling. Safe doesn't make your pulse race when you hear footsteps in the hall. Safe doesn't remind you why we work so well together. She leaned into the touch despite herself. The warmth spread through her collarbone. Years of friction melted into something heavier, something unavoidable. If I come with you, she said quietly, the deal stays off the table. No ledgers. No favors. Just you and me and a roof that doesn't leak. Lucien's mouth curved. Real this time. Deal. She exhaled. The tension drained from her shoulders. She turned back to the kettle, pretending to check the water level again. Ptolemy jumped down and rubbed against Lucien's shoe. The demon smirked. Fetch your coat, he said. We leave before the rain stops. Aurora nodded. She reached for her jacket hanging on the hook. Her fingers brushed the brass button. Thunder rolled across Brick Lane. Somewhere downstairs, a customer slammed a takeaway container shut. The city shifted. Lucien picked up his cane. The blade remained hidden. He fell into step beside her as she moved toward the hallway.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:12:18.921Z" 9/2/2026, 3:12:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1292
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1292
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"marble"
count1
2
word"porcelain"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"race"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"marble"
2"porcelain"
3"echoed"
4"echoing"
5"silence"
6"pulse"
7"trembled"
8"race"
9"footsteps"
10"warmth"
11"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences187
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
3"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1292
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions8
matches
0"You look like you swallowed a hornet, he said."
1"I saw you coming, Aurora replied."
2"You always brace for impact, he murmured."
3"Three months, he said."
4"The case is closed, she said."
5"You were right, she whispered."
6"If I come with you, she said quietly, the deal stays off the table."
7"Fetch your coat, he said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1292
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Marseille2
East1
London1
Aurora8
Lucien8
Lane2
Soho1
Eva2
Deptford1
Cardiff1
England1
Yu-Fei1
Evan3
Southwark1
Birmingham1
Brick2
Ptolemy4
You13
Safe3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
5"You"
6"Safe"
places
0"Marseille"
1"East"
2"London"
3"Lane"
4"Soho"
5"Deptford"
6"Cardiff"
7"England"
8"Southwark"
9"Birmingham"
10"Brick"
globalScore0.997
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like I was stealing sunlight I did"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1292
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences187
matches
0"carried that Marseille"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean30.76
std17.6
cv0.572
sampleLengths
017
162
241
328
427
522
662
77
817
920
1070
1126
1247
1314
1416
1549
1612
1730
1835
196
2027
2135
2236
2343
2419
2541
2623
2740
284
2932
3050
3179
3236
3310
3454
3522
3628
377
3832
3911
4034
4121
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs274
matches
0"weren't asking"
1"was stealing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences187
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1295
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"under leather-bound journals."
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.033204633204633204
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003088803088803089
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean6.91
std4.73
cv0.685
sampleLengths
09
18
26
313
48
517
618
76
811
914
1010
119
1219
136
148
1513
163
173
182
1910
204
216
2211
236
2413
2526
263
274
2811
296
308
314
325
333
3412
3526
362
3722
385
393
406
4115
425
437
445
4513
469
478
485
491
53.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.37433155080213903
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners70
80.81% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences165
matches
0"Then the third."
1"Then be tired of safe."
2"Just you and me and"
3"Somewhere downstairs, a customer slammed"
ratio0.024
47.88% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences165
matches
0"He held himself upright despite"
1"His heterochromatic eyes caught the"
2"She should have closed the"
3"Her hand stayed wrapped around"
4"You look like you swallowed"
5"His voice carried that Marseille"
6"I saw you coming, Aurora"
7"She kept her stance planted,"
8"I just haven't decided whether"
9"His lips quirked."
10"He stepped forward anyway, forcing"
11"He smelled of wet wool,"
12"She stepped aside."
13"He crossed the threshold."
14"She shut the door."
15"His gaze swept the room,"
16"You still live among debris."
17"You prefer marble floors and"
18"She filled the kettle, watching"
19"She flipped the switch."
ratio0.43
63.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences165
matches
0"The deadbolts clacked back, metal"
1"Aurora pulled the door wide"
2"Lucien stood in the stairwell"
3"Rain darkened his charcoal suit,"
4"Water droplets tracked the line"
5"He held himself upright despite"
6"His heterochromatic eyes caught the"
7"She should have closed the"
8"Her hand stayed wrapped around"
9"The smell of cumin and"
10"Ptolemy yowled from somewhere inside"
11"You look like you swallowed"
12"His voice carried that Marseille"
13"I saw you coming, Aurora"
14"She kept her stance planted,"
15"I just haven't decided whether"
16"His lips quirked."
17"The police would arrest me"
18"The floorboards groaned under unfamiliar"
19"He stepped forward anyway, forcing"
ratio0.794
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences165
matches
0"Even when nothing touches you."
1"Because every time you smiled,"
2"If I come with you,"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The same syndicate that bought Evan's debts resurfaced in Southwark."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.5069%