Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAVCA0F7NSZCAVB1EH2W88

Run Details

Duration:
4m 19s
Cost:
$0.052458
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last crate of empties bit into Rory’s palm as she took the narrow stairs down from the flat. The Raven’s Nest sat below her in its usual half-dark, smelling of malt, lemon polish, and wet wool. The green neon sign above the entrance threw its colour across the floorboards and made the old maps on the walls look damp. Black-and-white photographs of cities that no longer existed hung between the maps, their edges silvered with age. Silas stood behind the bar with a cloth in one hand and a tumbler in the other. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light, and his beard sat trimmed close to his jaw. The silver signet ring on his right hand tapped once against the glass as he turned it. “You’re late with the bottles.” “I carried them through rain.” “Heroic.” Rory set the crate by the footrail. A woman stood near the bookshelf at the far side of the bar, one hand resting on the shelf’s edge. The shelf had swung inward, revealing the dark mouth of the back room. Rory had lived above the bar for months and had seen that shelf stay shut through noise, drunken arguments, and one minor fire. Now it stood open, and the woman inside its shadow had her back half-turned. Silas did not look at the woman. He looked at Rory. “You know her.” Rory’s throat closed around the answer. The woman stepped out. The shelf followed her with a soft wooden groan and settled into the wall as if it had never moved. Eva. Seven years stripped away in the space of one breath. Rory’s hands remembered the old version before her eyes could accept the new one: Eva with a ribbon in her hair, Eva singing on the train to Barry Island, Eva pushing a suitcase into Rory’s hands and telling her to get on the coach to London. This woman wore her dark hair cut to the jaw, no ribbon, no colour at all. Her coat was grey and expensive. Her shoulders sat squared, not relaxed. The old Eva used to occupy space like music. This one held still like a person waiting for a blow. “Rory.” Eva’s voice had lost its lilt. It came flat and controlled, each consonant placed with care. “You came through the wall.” “I came through the door Silas let me use.” “You know about the door.” “I know several.” Silas set two glasses on the bar. He poured amber liquid into both without asking anyone what they wanted. His limp showed in the way he shifted his weight before he reached the far end of the counter. “You two need more than dust.” Eva looked at the whisky. “I don’t drink.” “You used to steal cider from your mother’s pantry.” “I used to do a lot of things.” Rory took the glass Silas offered. Her fingers brushed the small crescent scar on her left wrist as she lifted it. Eva’s gaze dropped there, then rose again. “Seven years.” “Seven and a half.” “You count half-years now.” “I count what gets left.” The bar held its silence around them. Rain tapped the windows. A pipe in the cellar gave one metallic knock and stopped. Rory took a sip of whisky. It burned through her chest and settled low. “You told me to come to London.” “You took the advice.” “I thought you’d come with me.” “I had things to finish.” “You had a degree to finish. You had a band. You had that awful green coat with the missing buttons.” “I had other things too.” Rory set the glass down. “Evan.” Eva did not flinch at the name. That alone marked the distance between them. The old Eva had once thrown a mug at a wall when Rory first said it. This Eva only folded her hands in front of her coat. “Evan is why I told you to leave Cardiff.” “You told me to leave him.” “I told you to leave before he made you disappear.” “He didn’t make me disappear. I took a coach.” “And then what?” The question landed harder than Rory expected. She looked at the photographs on the wall, at strangers standing before bombed-out buildings and new borders and bridges rebuilt under different names. “I worked. I delivered food. I slept above this bar. I learned not to wake up when the pipes hammered.” “You stopped writing.” “I wrote.” “Postcards with no names on them.” “They had my address.” “They had weather.” Rory’s hand curled around the glass. The whisky trembled. “You never answered.” “I answered the first three.” “I never got them.” “Of course you didn’t.” Silas moved away from the bar. His limp made his footsteps uneven, one beat heavier than the last. He wiped down the small table nearest the window, though no one had spilled anything there. The cloth squeaked once against the wood. He left the table and went to the other end of the room. Eva watched him go. “He still does that.” “Does what?” “Pretends he has chores when people need privacy.” “You know his habits.” “I know rooms like this.” Rory looked at the shelf that hid the back room. A thin line of dust marked its edge. “What kind of rooms?” “The kind that keep voices low.” “You used to sing on every platform in Cardiff.” “I was young.” “You’re not old.” “I’m old enough to know which songs draw attention.” Rory laughed once, but the sound had no air in it. “Don’t do that.” “Do what?” “Turn everything into a lesson.” Eva’s mouth tightened. “You turn everything into a door you can walk through.” The words stayed between them. Rory looked down at Eva’s hands. No rings. No nail polish. The knuckles rougher than they had been. A pale mark sat on the side of one thumb, like an old burn. “What happened to you?” “I grew up.” “That’s not what I asked.” “I know.” “Did you go back to school?” “No.” “Do you still sing?” “No.” “Why?” “Because silence is useful.” Rory’s chest ached. She drank again to cover it. The whisky had gone warm in her mouth. “You missed Mam’s funeral.” The glass almost slipped from Rory’s fingers. She set it on the bar too fast, and liquid jumped over the rim. “No one told me.” “I sent a letter.” “I never got it.” “You never got anything unless it suited you.” “That isn’t fair.” “Fair.” Eva said the word like she had found it in a drawer of broken tools. “You left Evan because you wanted a life. I helped you pack. I stole money from my purse to put in your bag. I stood at the coach station and watched you go, and I told myself you would call when you were safe.” “I called.” “Three times.” “I called more than that.” “Three times, Rory. I counted because I waited by the phone in the hallway where everyone could hear me. I counted because Mam asked why my friend from Cardiff never rang anymore.” Rory’s eyes stung. She pressed her thumb against the bar edge until the wood hurt. “I was working.” “You were hiding.” “I survived.” “I know.” Eva’s voice changed. The control slipped, and something older moved under it. “I know you survived. That was the point.” Rory looked at her. Eva’s eyes had not lost their colour, but they had lost the shine Rory remembered. They held a steady, tired clarity. “Why are you here?” “I needed to see if you were still you.” “Silas let you into his back room for that?” “Silas let me into his back room because I asked.” “You don’t ask. You never ask. You arrange.” Eva’s chin lifted. “I arrange now.” “What do you arrange?” “Passages. Papers. Places for people to sleep when the streets turn mean.” Rory stared at her. The old Eva had cried over a pigeon with a broken wing on the steps of the library. This Eva spoke of papers and passages as if she measured them in ledgers. “You help people.” “I move them.” “Why?” “Because someone moved me once.” Rory’s breath caught. “Who?” Eva did not answer. She looked toward the shelf, then toward Silas, who had stopped wiping the table and stood with the cloth hanging from his hand. His hazel eyes held no curiosity, only patience. “You should ask him,” Eva said. “I asked you.” “You always ask the person closest to the wound.” “You taught me that.” “No. You taught me that when you told me Evan had bruised your ribs and I made you lift your shirt to prove it.” Rory’s hand went to her side before she could stop it. The old shame rose, thin and familiar. Eva saw the movement. “I’m sorry.” The apology came low. Rory did not move. “You never said that before.” “I never had the right words before.” “You had words. You had thousands.” “I had anger. It looked like words.” Silas came back to the bar. He refilled Rory’s glass without speaking, then filled Eva’s. Eva did not protest this time. She lifted the glass, looked at the whisky as if it belonged to another decade, and drank. Her face changed at the burn. For one second, the old Eva surfaced: lips parted, breath caught, a flash of outrage. Then the mask returned. “You still hate it,” Rory said. “I hate a great many things.” “You used to love terrible things.” “I still do.” “Name one.” Eva’s gaze moved over the bar, over the maps, the photographs, the green light pooling near the door. “I love that you’re alive.” Rory’s throat tightened. She looked down at her reflection in the whisky. Her straight black hair fell around her face, and the blue of her eyes looked washed out in the dim light. “I thought you’d be angry I didn’t come back.” “I was angry.” “And now?” “Now I know what Cardiff did to both of us.” Rory traced the rim of her glass. “I sent flowers for your mother.” “I know. Lilies.” “You hated lilies.” “Mam hated them.” “I didn’t know.” “You knew everything once.” The sentence sat between them, sharp as broken glass. Rory wanted to answer, but the truth crowded her mouth and refused to shape itself. Eva looked at the shelf again. “I have to go soon.” “You just got here.” “I came to see you. That took longer than the rest.” “The rest?” “People are waiting.” Rory’s hand shot out and closed around Eva’s wrist. The movement surprised them both. Eva’s pulse beat under Rory’s fingers, fast and steady. “Don’t vanish again.” Eva looked down at Rory’s hand. Her eyes stayed on the small scar at the wrist. “You’re the one who vanished.” “I’m here now.” “That doesn’t erase the years.” “I know.” “Say it.” “I can’t erase the years.” “Say you won’t disappear.” Rory’s fingers tightened. “I won’t disappear.” Eva’s breath left her in one slow measure. She did not pull away. “You live upstairs?” “Over the bar.” “Good.” “Good?” “If I come back, I’ll know where to find you.” The rain moved against the windows in a sudden gust. The green sign buzzed. Silas picked up their empty glasses and carried them to the sink, giving them the small grace of his turned back. Eva slid her hand from under Rory’s fingers. Her skin left a cool line where it had been. “Tell me one true thing about now,” Eva said. Rory looked around the bar, at the maps, the photographs, the shelf, the signet ring flashing as Silas worked. “I deliver food for a woman who calls every customer ‘dragon’ and tips me in soup.” Eva’s mouth moved. It was not a smile, but it wanted to be one. “You always did like soup.” “I like being fed.” “That’s true.” Eva buttoned her grey coat to the throat. “Your turn. One true thing.” Eva glanced at the shelf, then back at Rory. “I still hum when I’m afraid.” Rory’s eyes burned again. “What tune?” “The one your father used to sing when he picked us up from school.” Rory pressed her lips together. The bar filled with the sound of rain and glasses and the old pipes waking in the walls. “Stay,” she said. Eva looked at the door, then at Rory. “I can’t.” “Five minutes.” “Five minutes cost more than you know.” “Then tell me what they cost.” Eva’s hand rested on the bar. The burn mark on her thumb caught the green light. “Tell me about the flat upstairs.” Rory let out a breath she had held since the shelf opened. “It’s small. The radiator knocks twice before it starts. There’s a window over the alley and a landlady who leaves notes about damp.” “Do you keep it clean?” “I keep it alive.” Eva’s fingers tapped once against the wood. “That sounds like you.” “It sounds like a place.” “It’s both.” Silas set a fresh glass of water between them. He looked at Eva, then at the clock behind the bar. “Your car will pass the corner in ten minutes.” Eva nodded. “Thank you, Silas.” He took his place at the far end of the bar and gave them the room without leaving it. Eva turned back to Rory. “Start with the radiator.” Rory drew a breath. “It knocks twice because the pipe under the floor bends where it shouldn’t.” “Of course it does.” “The first knock sounds like a knuckle. The second like an apology.” Eva leaned one shoulder against the bar. “Go on.”
created_at"2026-09-02T15:12:25.418Z" 9/2/2026, 3:12:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences167
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2263
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2263
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"trembled"
4"footsteps"
5"measured"
6"familiar"
7"traced"
8"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences142
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences305
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2263
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions33
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions102
wordCount1342
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.28
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory43
Raven1
Nest1
Eva44
Barry1
Island1
London1
Silas10
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Barry"
1"Island"
2"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.442
wordCount2263
matches
0"not a smile, but it wanted to be one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences305
matches
0"seen that shelf"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs229
mean9.88
std13.15
cv1.33
sampleLengths
077
151
25
35
41
577
611
73
830
91
10104
111
1216
135
149
155
163
1738
186
195
203
219
228
2328
242
254
264
275
2836
297
304
316
325
3320
345
355
361
3741
389
396
4010
419
423
4330
4420
453
462
476
484
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs219
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences305
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1348
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02373887240356083
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001483679525222552
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences305
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences305
mean7.42
std6.1
cv0.822
sampleLengths
019
118
223
317
417
517
617
75
85
91
107
1120
1213
1323
1414
157
164
173
186
194
2020
211
2210
2346
2416
256
266
279
2811
291
306
3110
325
339
345
353
367
3712
3819
396
405
413
429
438
446
4515
467
472
484
494
43.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.17704918032786884
totalSentences305
uniqueOpeners54
24.69% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Then the mask returned."
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences135
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
1"He looked at Rory."
2"Her coat was grey and"
3"Her shoulders sat squared, not"
4"It came flat and controlled,"
5"He poured amber liquid into"
6"His limp showed in the"
7"Her fingers brushed the small"
8"It burned through her chest"
9"She looked at the photographs"
10"His limp made his footsteps"
11"He wiped down the small"
12"He left the table and"
13"She drank again to cover"
14"She set it on the"
15"She pressed her thumb against"
16"They held a steady, tired"
17"She looked toward the shelf,"
18"His hazel eyes held no"
19"He refilled Rory’s glass without"
ratio0.222
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount129
totalSentences135
matches
0"The last crate of empties"
1"The Raven’s Nest sat below"
2"The green neon sign above"
3"Silas stood behind the bar"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"Rory set the crate by"
7"A woman stood near the"
8"The shelf had swung inward,"
9"Rory had lived above the"
10"Silas did not look at"
11"He looked at Rory."
12"Rory’s throat closed around the"
13"The woman stepped out."
14"The shelf followed her with"
15"Rory’s hands remembered the old"
16"This woman wore her dark"
17"Her coat was grey and"
18"Her shoulders sat squared, not"
19"The old Eva used to"
ratio0.956
37.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Now it stood open, and"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"This Eva spoke of papers and passages as if she measured them in ledgers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences167
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.1025%