Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAY5P51PB0C1S7MNW8WW8T

Run Details

Duration:
7m 28s
Cost:
$0.107160
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I opened the door and found Lucien Moreau bleeding on Eva's welcome mat. His blood made a thin black line from the stair edge to the toe of his polished shoe. He leaned on the ivory head of his cane. The landing light caught one amber eye. The other stayed black. "You look well, Rory." I pushed the door toward the frame. His cane moved faster. The ivory handle hooked the wood. "Three seconds." "Two are gone." "You always did count loud." "Leave." "Aurora." No one used my full name without paying for it. I looked at the blood spreading through his tailored charcoal suit. The cut sat low on his ribs. The jacket failed to hide it. "Eva's flat. Not mine. Bleed somewhere else." "You have the keys. You have the wards. You have the cat." Ptolemy chose that moment to appear from behind a tower of books. The tabby planted himself between my feet and hissed. "See. He remembers me." "He remembers liars." "Then I have improved." The stairwell creaked behind him. Nothing visible moved. The curry house below sent up the smell of cumin and hot oil, mixed with the sharp copper scent of blood. I stepped back. "Get in. Quietly." He crossed the threshold with careful grace. The injury made each step a lie. I shut the door and worked the three deadbolts home. Click, click, click. The last one always stuck. I forced it with my palm. Lucien watched. "Eva likes privacy." "Eva likes traps." "You walked into one." "No, ma petite. I walked into yours." The flat felt smaller with him inside it. Eva had lent me her spare key and her couch for the night. Books, scrolls, and research notes covered every surface. A mug of cold tea sat on a stack of law reports. Eva had left for the library with a kiss on my cheek and a warning to feed Ptolemy. She had not warned me about Lucien. I pointed at the nearest chair. "Sit." "I prefer to stand." "Sit before I make you." His mouth twitched. He sat. The cane rested against his knee. His fingers were long, pale, and steady until he pressed them to his side. Blood shone between them. I fetched the first aid box from beneath a pile of demonology journals. Eva kept gauze, antiseptic, and a bottle of cheap whisky beside a silver knife. The whisky was for wounds. The knife was for worse. "Jacket off." Lucien peeled it from his shoulders with one slow movement. His shirt clung to the wound. He looked at me. "Would you like to help, or shall I undress for an audience?" I caught the fabric and lifted. He hissed through his teeth. The cut ran from his ribs to his hip, shallow but angry. The edges looked burnt. "Demon blade?" "One of my father's men." "Your father has many men." "He has fewer now." I soaked the gauze in antiseptic. His stomach tightened when I touched the skin. Heat sat under my fingers. Half-demon blood did not heal like human blood. It remembered every debt. "You have five minutes." "To explain?" "To stop bleeding on Eva's floor." "She will forgive the rug. She values research." "She values me." "Yes. That is why I came." My hand pressed harder than necessary. He took the pain without moving. That made it worse. My knuckles whitened around the gauze. Blood soaked through it and warmed my palm. "You left me there." "I put you on a train." "You gave Evan my route." "I gave Evan a lie. It kept him chasing a ghost while you crossed the Channel." The antiseptic bottle slipped in my grip. I set it down before he saw my face. "You never told me that." "You never asked." "I asked why you sold me." "You assumed. I allowed it. It was easier than explaining what my father would do if he learned I cared." The word cared hung between us. I pulled the gauze tighter. "Don't." "Don't what?" "Don't dress your cowardice in romance." His hand shot up and caught my wrist. His thumb stopped over the small crescent scar on my left wrist. I did not pull away. My free hand curled into a fist. "Cowardice would have left you in London with Evan. I came back." "Late." "Alive." Ptolemy leapt onto the table and knocked a scroll to the floor. It rolled open. Eva had drawn a map of Brick Lane in red ink. Three black crosses marked the alley behind the curry house. Lucien stared at the map. "Show me." "No." "Rory." "Do not use that name." "Laila, then." I snatched my wrist free. The name Laila still tasted of smoke and forged papers. I had used it for three months of deliveries, three months of keeping my head down and my hands clean. Only one person had heard me answer to it in London. "You have no right to that name." "I have every right. I carved it into the customs papers myself." "For a price." "For you." The room went still. Even Ptolemy stopped washing his paw. The curry scent faded. Copper filled the flat. Lucien's blood. My pulse. Both too close. He rose. Pain tightened his jaw for a second. His face showed nothing else. Books leaned in. The lamp threw his shadow across Eva's notes until it covered the three black crosses. "The Golden Empress box you delivered tonight." "Noodles." "Sealed with bone wax." "Yu-Fei uses whatever is cheap." "Yu-Fei would sooner serve glass than bone wax. What did you see inside?" My mind gave me the flash I had locked away. The restaurant back door. The heavy black box. The wax cracking under my thumb. White petals. A silver chain. A ring with a black stone. I had shut the lid before Yu-Fei caught me. "I saw dinner for a funeral." Lucien went still. "The ring." "I did not touch it." "You touched the box. That is enough. The Court of Avaros marks curiosity as theft." "I deliver food. I do not steal." "You opened a sealed box. They have marked you." I laughed once. It sounded thin. "Then I will send them the bill." "This is not one of your jokes." "You came bleeding into my night, Lucien. Forgive me if I refuse to curtsy." "I came to keep you breathing." "I managed before you." "Barely." The word scraped. He stepped closer. The flat shrank. The lamp threw his shadow across the table. "Your bright blue eyes still favour violence." "You still look at me like you are deciding whether to kiss me or open my throat." "Efficiency." "I taught you that." "You taught me betrayal. The rest was self-defence." His gaze dropped to my mouth. Just once. My pulse jumped. I set my jaw. "Strike. Kiss me. Either will bring them faster." I slapped him before thought could intervene. The sound cracked through the flat. My straight black hair fell into my eyes. I did not brush it away. Ptolemy yowled. Lucien's head turned with the force. When he faced me again, blood stained his lower lip. He smiled. It was not kind. It was the smile of a man who recognised a sentence. "Good." "You enjoyed that." "I enjoyed that you chose." "Chose what?" "Contact." The word sat hot against my skin. My palm still stung. His mouth remained split. He lifted his thumb and wiped the blood away, then looked at the red smear with the calm of an appraiser. "You are insane." "Frequently." "Get out." "No." "This is Eva's flat." "And now it is a target." He took the cane from the chair and tapped the ivory handle against the floor. A thin seam appeared along its length. The blade inside whispered as it loosened. "They followed my blood. They will smell yours next." "Then we leave." "We?" "I am not staying here to be collected because of your family feud." "No. You are not." Something in his voice made me look at the door. The first deadbolt turned by itself. Slow. Certain. Metal slid against metal with no hand on the other side. Ptolemy arched his back. Every book on the nearest shelf lifted an inch, then fell. The lamp flickered. The red ink on Eva's map darkened with fresh wetness. Lucien drew the blade from the cane. The steel was thin, pale, and hungry. "Rory." "What?" "Stay behind me." The second deadbolt turned. The third stuck. Then Evan's voice came through the door, sweet and wrong. "Let me in, love. I brought your father."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulse"
2"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences137
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences234
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1432
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount944
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien9
Moreau1
Eva7
Ptolemy6
Brick1
Lane1
Laila1
London1
Yu-Fei1
Evan1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Laila"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1432
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences234
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs137
mean10.45
std12.03
cv1.151
sampleLengths
013
138
24
37
410
52
63
75
81
91
1034
117
1212
1321
144
153
164
1732
183
1938
202
213
223
234
247
2566
266
271
284
295
3029
3137
322
3320
3412
3527
362
375
385
394
4031
414
422
436
448
453
466
4730
484
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences234
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount946
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.021141649048625793
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010570824524312897
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences234
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences234
mean6.12
std4.14
cv0.677
sampleLengths
013
118
29
37
44
54
67
74
86
92
103
115
121
131
1410
1511
167
176
187
1912
2012
219
224
233
244
255
263
2721
283
293
307
317
3210
333
345
356
362
373
383
394
407
418
4213
438
4412
4518
467
476
481
494
42.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.3162393162393162
totalSentences234
uniqueOpeners74
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"Only one person had heard"
1"Then Evan's voice came through"
ratio0.016
54.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences126
matches
0"I opened the door and"
1"His blood made a thin"
2"He leaned on the ivory"
3"I pushed the door toward"
4"His cane moved faster."
5"I looked at the blood"
6"I stepped back."
7"He crossed the threshold with"
8"I shut the door and"
9"I forced it with my"
10"She had not warned me"
11"I pointed at the nearest"
12"His mouth twitched."
13"His fingers were long, pale,"
14"I fetched the first aid"
15"His shirt clung to the"
16"He looked at me."
17"I caught the fabric and"
18"He hissed through his teeth."
19"I soaked the gauze in"
ratio0.413
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences126
matches
0"I opened the door and"
1"His blood made a thin"
2"He leaned on the ivory"
3"The landing light caught one"
4"The other stayed black."
5"I pushed the door toward"
6"His cane moved faster."
7"The ivory handle hooked the"
8"I looked at the blood"
9"The cut sat low on"
10"The jacket failed to hide"
11"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
12"The tabby planted himself between"
13"The stairwell creaked behind him."
14"Nothing visible moved."
15"The curry house below sent"
16"I stepped back."
17"He crossed the threshold with"
18"The injury made each step"
19"I shut the door and"
ratio0.929
39.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"Even Ptolemy stopped washing his"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.2141%