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Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAY7B8E4SV2098AH6HR6Q2
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.8 Max (Reasoning, XHigh)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
6m 33s
Cost:
$0.092784
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
97.34%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
76.05%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
94.62%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
41.57%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
51.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
30.85%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
6.51%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
38.76%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.9128%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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Lucien Moreau stood in Eva's
doorway, bleeding on the threadbare welcome mat.
Aurora's hand tightened on the
door. The chain held. His composure did not. "Rory."
The sound of her name
in his mouth made her ribs contract. She hated that.
She hated him more for
looking ruined while he said it. "Who let you up?" "The curry house owner." "With what?" "A warning about my suit." "You're ruining it now." "It needed a reason."
Blood darkened the left side
of his charcoal jacket.
His platinum hair remained slicked
back, but one strand had escaped above his brow.
His mismatched eyes, amber and
black, fixed on the chain as if it offended him. "You have five seconds." "Make it ten. I climbed three flights." "You have four." "I brought information." "You brought a corpse to my friend's flat." "Pre-corpse." He swayed.
The ivory handle of his
cane clicked against the frame. "And you still lock doors as if the world respects them." "The world respects a closed door more than it respects you." "Then open this one and be dangerous." She did not move.
The hallway smelled of fried
cumin from the restaurant below and old paper from Eva's stacks.
Ptolemy appeared at the edge
of the sitting room, tabby fur bristling.
The cat stared at Lucien
with the contempt only animals and landlords perfected. "Go away, Lucien." "Evan has the name Laila."
The chain bit into her
palm.
She had not heard that
alias in eight months. It belonged to delivery bags, late shifts, and an invented life with clean corners. No one in London knew it except Eva. No one should have known it in Marseille. "How?" "He bought it from a man who buys names." "Whose man?" "My father's." The word landed between them. No one needed to speak Avaros for the room to grow colder. Aurora looked at the cane, then at his hand. The fingers around the handle had gone white. "Let me in," he said. "No." "Aurora." "No." "I will bleed on the stairs and make this look worse than it is." "It already looks like a murder." "Then let it be a private one." Ptolemy hissed. Aurora unhooked the chain.
She did it because Evan
knew her stolen name.
She did it because Lucien
stood one breath from collapse and still kept his
weight
balanced between fight and retreat.
She did it because the
scar on her left wrist
began to
itch beneath her sleeve, and she wanted to know why. He crossed the threshold.
She caught the sharp scent
of bergamot, hot wool, and copper.
He paused close enough for
her to see the fine sheen of sweat along his jaw. "Thank you." "You have five minutes." "Generous." "Four now."
She shut the door and
turned the three deadbolts. The locks engaged with heavy, satisfying thunks. Eva insisted on them. Aurora had once called her paranoid.
Now she checked each one
twice. Lucien stood in the centre of the cramped flat. Books rose in unsteady towers beside the sofa. Scrolls spilled from a fruit crate near the window. Research notes pinned to the corkboard made a paper
mosaic
above Eva's desk. The narrow kitchen lay through an archway no wider than a shoulder, its counter crowded with jars, cold tea rings, and a salt circle someone had forgotten to refresh. "You chose a library for a fortress," Lucien said. "Eva chose it. I borrow it." "She has knowledge. Wards would help." "You can leave before you criticise the décor." "I can leave after I stop bleeding."
He moved toward the kitchen
without waiting for permission.
His cane tapped softly against
the warped floorboards. Aurora followed, keeping the small table between them. "Sit." "You give orders like a barrister." "My father was one." "Then I shall plead guilty."
He lowered onto a hard
wooden chair.
He controlled the movement until
the last half second. His shoulders stiffened. His free hand pressed against his ribs. "Shirt." His brows lifted. "To see the wound," she said. "Of course. My mind had gone somewhere more flattering." "Your mind always goes somewhere expensive." He undid the buttons with one hand. She snatched a clean tea towel from the counter and tossed it at him. He caught it against his chest and winced. "Let me." "You said five minutes." "I am spending them wisely." She reached for his collar before she could choose not to. His skin radiated heat through the fine cotton. Up close, the blood had soaked through his shirt in a wide dark bloom. Her fingers brushed his throat as she worked the last button. His
pulse
beat fast beneath her knuckles. He did not lean into her touch. He did not pull away. That restraint irritated her more than flirtation would have. The shirt parted. A gunshot would have been cleaner. A knife would have made more sense.
Instead, a black mark spread
over his left side just below the ribs. It had the shape of a handprint, fingers stretched wide, palm pressed into flesh. Dark veins branched from it like cracks in ice. Aurora's
stomach
tightened. "Who did this?" "My father's collector." "For what?" "For coming here." She fetched the first aid tin from beneath the sink. Eva kept it beside tins of loose leaf tea and stacks of unlabeled spice jars. Aurora ignored the useful items and pulled out a bottle of iodine, gauze, and a pair of blunt scissors. "Sit still." "I am sitting still." "You are thinking still. Stop that too." He gave a faint laugh. It turned into a hiss when she lifted the edge of the mark with the gauze. "This is not a wound," she said. "It is a breach of contract." "Whose contract?" "Mine." "With Avaros?" "With the part of Avaros that lives in my blood." She stopped. "You said your father wanted Evan to find me." "My father wanted you found. I wanted you missed." "That is not comfort." "It is the truth. I gave Evan a name broker. The broker gave him the wrong trail. When my father learned I had interfered, he sent a collector to collect what remained." "Which is?" "Me." Ptolemy jumped onto the counter. The cat sat beside the salt circle and blinked slow, unimpressed eyes at the black handprint. Aurora dabbed iodine around the mark. Lucien's abdominal muscles clenched. He made no other sound. She liked him better when he stayed quiet. It left fewer places for her to fall. "Why come here?" she asked. "Because the collector follows a trail of lies. I told no one where I went. Except you." "I didn't know you were coming." "No. But you know what I am." Her gaze
flicked
to his mismatched eyes. One held the warm dull shine of old honey. The other swallowed the kitchen light. "Half demon," she said. "A poor one. My human side keeps making inconvenient choices." "Like climbing stairs?" "Like choosing you over my father's ledger." The scissors paused. She had spent months arranging the story of Lucien Moreau into a neat, poisonous shape. He had found her in Marseille when she needed a new route out of Europe. He had smiled in four languages, lied in five, and kissed her in the alley behind a ferry office while rain washed the blood from his knuckles.
Then Evan appeared two nights
later, and Lucien disappeared with the tide. She had built her escape around that absence. "Do not say that," she said. "Why?" "Because if you say it, I have to decide whether I believe you." "Do you?" "I believe you are bleeding in Eva's kitchen." "Then start there." She pressed the gauze to the mark. Black fluid soaked through it at once. Lucien caught her wrist. Not hard. Never hard. His thumb rested over the crescent scar beneath her sleeve, and the touch sent a bright
pulse
up her arm. He looked down at it. "Your wrist." "Let go." "It is reacting." The scar burned. Not painful, not yet. It
felt like a coin left too long against
skin. Aurora pulled, but Lucien did not tighten his grip. He simply held her there, waiting. "May I?" he asked. "No." He released her. The absence of his hand felt worse. Aurora stepped back, breathed through the tightness in her chest, and looked at the black mark spreading across his ribs. The veins had crept farther toward his heart. "You can die," she said. "Yes." "You should have mentioned that before I touched you." "You would have touched me anyway." "Do not flatter yourself." "I never do. It makes the disappointment duller." She threw the soaked gauze into the bin. "What do you need?" "Three drops of blood from the scar." "That is not medicine." "It is a key." "To what?" "To the ward my father sealed into my blood at birth. It binds me to Avaros. Your scar carries the counter-mark." "My scar is from a fall." "Your scar is from a blade shaped like a crescent. You fell because it cut." Aurora's throat closed. The kitchen narrowed. She heard Jennifer Carter's voice, gentle and firm, telling her the blade had slipped, telling her not to look at the mark too long. She heard Brendan Carter saying lawyers did not believe in curses, only evidence. She heard Evan laughing in the dark, saying everyone had a price, and Rory looked so pretty when she bled. She gripped the counter. "No," she said. "Aurora." "I said no." "He will send more collectors." "Then we run." "I cannot run with this mark in my chest." "Then we cut it out." "You cannot cut out a promise." "Watch me." Lucien rose. The chair scraped behind him. He moved into her space before she could decide whether to slap him or kiss him. His heat surrounded her. His hand lifted, then stopped beside her cheek. "I am not asking for your trust," he said. "Good." "I am asking for your blood." "That is worse." "Only because it is honest." She looked up at him. The black eye of his held a tiny reflection of her face. The amber one held fear. She had never seen fear in Lucien Moreau. It
unsettled
her more than the demon mark, more than Evan's name, more than the way her body still leaned toward him after everything. "If I do this," she said, "you tell me every lie." "All of them?" "Every one that involved me." His gaze dropped to her mouth. Then back. "Yes." "Even Marseille?" "Especially Marseille." Ptolemy yowled. The salt circle on the counter turned red. Aurora spun. The white grains darkened as if blood soaked them from inside. The notes on Eva's corkboard lifted, though no window stood open. The three deadbolts on the front door gave a metallic shriek. Lucien's cane slid from his hand into his grip. The ivory handle parted with a soft click. The thin blade beneath caught the kitchen light. "He found me," Lucien said. "Evan?" "Worse." The hallway floorboards groaned under
footsteps
too heavy for one man. A voice came through Eva's door, smooth and cruel and
familiar
from every nightmare Aurora had taught herself to outrun. "Rory, love. Open up. We have a contract to finish." The first deadbolt snapped.
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response_cache_source_id
(null)
data_region
"global"
workspace_id
"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
15
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
125
tagDensity
0.12
leniency
0.24
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
97.34%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1879
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
76.05%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1879
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"weight"
count
1
1
word
"mosaic"
count
1
2
word
"pulse"
count
2
3
word
"stomach"
count
1
4
word
"flicked"
count
1
5
word
"unsettled"
count
1
6
word
"footsteps"
count
1
7
word
"familiar"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"mosaic"
2
"pulse"
3
"stomach"
4
"flicked"
5
"unsettled"
6
"footsteps"
7
"familiar"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
151
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
151
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
261
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
32
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1879
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
26
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
94.62%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
56
wordCount
1264
uniqueNames
14
maxNameDensity
1.11
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau
3
Eva
8
Lucien
14
London
1
Marseille
2
Avaros
1
Ptolemy
4
Evan
4
Europe
1
Jennifer
1
Carter
2
Brendan
1
Rory
1
Aurora
13
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Eva"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Ptolemy"
4
"Evan"
5
"Jennifer"
6
"Carter"
7
"Brendan"
8
"Rory"
9
"Aurora"
places
0
"London"
1
"Marseille"
2
"Europe"
globalScore
0.946
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
98
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like a coin left too long against"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1879
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
261
matches
0
"heard that alias"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
169
mean
11.12
std
14.64
cv
1.316
sampleLengths
0
12
1
13
2
1
3
26
4
4
5
4
6
2
7
5
8
4
9
4
10
38
11
4
12
7
13
3
14
3
15
8
16
24
17
11
18
7
19
45
20
3
21
5
22
6
23
39
24
1
25
9
26
2
27
2
28
34
29
5
30
1
31
1
32
1
33
14
34
6
35
7
36
2
37
4
38
51
39
31
40
2
41
4
42
1
43
2
44
32
45
68
46
9
47
6
48
6
49
8
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
151
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
221
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
261
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1264
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
31
adverbRatio
0.0245253164556962
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.0031645569620253164
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
261
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
261
mean
7.2
std
5.31
cv
0.738
sampleLengths
0
12
1
6
2
3
3
4
4
1
5
12
6
3
7
11
8
4
9
4
10
2
11
5
12
4
13
4
14
9
15
14
16
15
17
4
18
7
19
3
20
3
21
8
22
3
23
10
24
11
25
11
26
7
27
4
28
16
29
12
30
13
31
3
32
5
33
6
34
9
35
14
36
8
37
8
38
1
39
9
40
2
41
2
42
5
43
12
44
9
45
8
46
5
47
1
48
1
49
1
41.57%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
22
diversityRatio
0.2720306513409962
totalSentences
261
uniqueOpeners
71
51.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
129
matches
0
"Instead, a black mark spread"
1
"Then Evan appeared two nights"
ratio
0.016
30.85%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
61
totalSentences
129
matches
0
"His composure did not."
1
"She hated that."
2
"She hated him more for"
3
"His platinum hair remained slicked"
4
"His mismatched eyes, amber and"
5
"She did not move."
6
"She had not heard that"
7
"It belonged to delivery bags,"
8
"She did it because Evan"
9
"She did it because Lucien"
10
"She did it because the"
11
"He crossed the threshold."
12
"She caught the sharp scent"
13
"He paused close enough for"
14
"She shut the door and"
15
"He moved toward the kitchen"
16
"His cane tapped softly against"
17
"He lowered onto a hard"
18
"He controlled the movement until"
19
"His shoulders stiffened."
ratio
0.473
6.51%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
117
totalSentences
129
matches
0
"Lucien Moreau stood in Eva's"
1
"Aurora's hand tightened on the"
2
"The chain held."
3
"His composure did not."
4
"The sound of her name"
5
"She hated that."
6
"She hated him more for"
7
"Blood darkened the left side"
8
"His platinum hair remained slicked"
9
"His mismatched eyes, amber and"
10
"The ivory handle of his"
11
"She did not move."
12
"The hallway smelled of fried"
13
"Ptolemy appeared at the edge"
14
"The cat stared at Lucien"
15
"The chain bit into her"
16
"She had not heard that"
17
"It belonged to delivery bags,"
18
"The word landed between them."
19
"Aurora looked at the cane,"
ratio
0.907
38.76%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
129
matches
0
"Now she checked each one"
ratio
0.008
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
46
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
15
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
125
tagDensity
0.104
leniency
0.208
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
87.9128%