Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAYBAFRPJK7ZEYK4VGGFY6

Run Details

Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.000697
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the final briar patch and found the clearing. The air tasted stale, thick with damp earth and crushed lavender. Ancient oaks stood in a perfect ring, their bark gnarled into shapes that resembled twisted faces. Shadows pooled beneath them, heavy and unmoving. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag on her shoulder and checked the silver chain resting against her collarbone. The heartstone pendant sat warm against her skin. Its crimson stone glowed faintly, casting thin ribbons of light across the moss. She stepped between two standing stones. The transition felt instant. City noise vanished. Streetlamps disappeared. Only darkness and the pale bioluminescence of wildflowers remained. White and violet blooms carpeted the ground, open despite the hour. They should have been closed tight. Rory knelt and brushed a thumb over a petal. The fibers felt dry. She checked her watch. The second hand jerked backward, then spun forward twice in a single tick. She slipped it into her pocket. Time moved differently here. The ledger from the unknown benefactor had warned her about that. “Alright,” she murmured to the empty air. “Find the threshold. Step inside. Get out.” The words echoed poorly. The grove swallowed sound before it could travel more than three paces. She pulled her phone from her coat. The screen lit up but returned no signal. She powered it off and tucked it away. Navigation relied on instinct and the stone’s pull. The metal grew hotter against her sternum. Heat radiated outward in steady waves. She followed the direction of the warmth and walked deeper into the tree line. Twigs snapped under her boots. The sound rang sharp and metallic. She froze. Nothing moved ahead. The wildflowers stayed still. The air held its breath. She counted to five in her head and resumed walking. Her left wrist throbbed where the crescent scar rested against her sleeve. The memory of Evan’s grip flashed behind her eyes. She forced the image aside and kept her shoulders square. Quick thinking meant assessing threats before naming them. A branch cracked to her right. Not a fall. Deliberate weight shifting. Rory turned slowly. Her eyes scanned the gap between two trunks. Something dark detached itself from the bark. It retreated before she could focus. Just a trick of the shadows. She narrowed her eyes. The temperature dropped. Her breath plumed white in front of her face. The wildflowers near the base of the nearest oak rotated clockwise, petals turning inward like closing lids. “You don’t belong here,” a voice called from the trees. Rough. Dry as dead leaves. It came from everywhere and nowhere. Rory did not answer immediately. She weighed the tone. Curiosity masked as warning. She matched her breathing to a steady rhythm and spoke clearly. “Neither do you. You’re hiding behind wood and dirt. Step out.” Laughter scraped through the undergrowth. Short. Bitter. Roots shifted beneath the soil. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. The sensation traveled up her calves and settled in her chest. The heartstone pulsed once, hard enough to bruise. She pressed two fingers against the silver chain to keep it from slipping. The glow intensified, painting the surrounding leaves in sickly amber light. She took a step forward. Then another. The space between the oaks stretched longer than sight allowed. Distances warped. Thirty feet looked like ten. Twenty looked like fifty. She remembered the ledger’s warning about spatial drift. Focus on fixed points. Pick a stone. Walk straight. She locked her gaze onto the northernmost oak and advanced. Vines slithered across the path. Thin and black. They moved against gravity, coiling around her ankles before dissolving into ash. Footsteps echoed behind her. Slow. Measured. Each footfall landed exactly where hers had landed seconds ago. Rory stopped. The sounds stopped. She waited. Ten seconds. Twenty. The presence mirrored her hesitation perfectly. She whipped around, coat flaring. The grove stood empty. Dew clung to spiderwebs strung between branches. No tracks marred the damp earth. Only her boot prints remained, sinking slightly into the loam. “Show yourself,” she said, voice flat. “Or I leave.” The wildflowers shivered. No wind touched the canopy. The stems bent forward in unison. Petals parted to reveal deep centers that reflected nothing. They stared back. Rory recognized the pattern from folklore texts she skimmed during library shifts. Fae courts used flora to gauge intent. Submission or aggression. She kept her hands visible and raised her chin. Indifference worked better than fear. Fear fed them. A shape coalesced near the eastern ring of stones. Tall. Gaunt. Limbs elongated like stretched taffy. Eyes caught the pendant’s light and fractured into scattered points. The figure did not blink. It tilted its head. A mouth formed along its jawline. Teeth aligned too neatly. Too many rows. “You carry the keeper’s blood,” the thing rasped. The vocal cords strained against human anatomy. Sound warped, pitching higher then lower within the same syllable. “The stone burns your skin.” “It’s jewelry,” Rory replied. She tapped the chain with her middle finger. The click rang clear. “Not a leash. Move aside.” The creature stepped forward. Moss crunched under bare, jointed feet. Dirt smeared its shins like dried blood. It halted three paces away. Close enough to smell ozone and rotting peat. Close enough for Rory to see the flecks of gold suspended in the dark irises. She noted the asymmetry of its shoulders. The way its left hand twitched, fingers curling inward. Weak point. Or nervous tic. Either way, predictable. “The threshold opens at midnight,” it whispered. Saliva stringed from its lips and fell to the ground. Steam rose where it hit the grass. “Your heart beats out of sync. The grove tastes your fear.” “My heart beats fine.” Rory checked her pulse at her neck. Steady. Eighty beats per minute. She adjusted her posture, squaring her spine. “You want me to cross. I want you gone. We have nothing in common.” The creature’s mouth widened. Not a smile. A split. Tendons pulled back. Light bled from the wound. Rory did not flinch. She measured the distance to her exit route. Left flank. Clear. If it lunged, she dropped low, used the nearest oak as cover, and ran. Simple geometry. Linear escape vector. A chime sounded in the distance. High and pure. Like glass striking crystal. The wildflowers bloomed wider. Petals unfolded completely. The scent of crushed mint flooded the clearing. Rory’s stomach tightened. Chimes marked transitions. Crossings. She glanced at her watch again. The digital display read 11:47. Three minutes earlier. Then four. Then seven. Seconds compressed. Hours dissolved. “Time runs thin here,” the creature intoned. Its voice dropped to a vibration that rattled her teeth. “Cross before the hour breaks. Stay after and you become part of the roots.” Rory ignored the threat. Threats without follow-through meant posturing. She reached into her coat pocket and withdrew a folded receipt from the Golden Empress. Paper. Ink. Tangible reality. She held it up. The edges curled as moisture soaked through. She folded it neatly and slid it back. Grounding techniques. Control what you can control. “I didn’t come to stay,” she said. “I came to ask a question. Answer it. Then I walk out.” The creature inclined its head. A slow, deliberate motion. Joint by joint. Bones popped like firing rifles. It raised one hand. Palm faced upward. Veins traced paths of dark stone beneath translucent skin. “Ask.” Rory opened her mouth. The words formed on her tongue. She swallowed them. The pendant burned hot enough to blister. The heat spread down her collarbone. She bit down on the inside of her cheek. Pain anchored her. The chime sounded again. Closer. Stronger. The air pressure shifted. Ears popped. Wildflowers wilted instantly, dropping to the soil in silent heaps. The creature leaned closer. Breath fogged her coat. “Well?” Rory stepped back. Boots scraped stone. She kept her eyes locked on the thing’s face. Every muscle coiled. Ready to move. Ready to run. The pendant pulsed again. Rhythm matching her own now. In sync. The grove held still. Waiting. “You know exactly why I’m here,” she said. Voice steady. Unbroken. “But knowledge means nothing if you refuse to speak.” The creature’s fingers twitched. Darkness gathered at its fingertips. Swirled. Formed a thin thread. It extended the strand toward her. Stopped an inch from her chest. The tip vibrated. Hummed. The pendant flared brighter. Light seared the air. Heat rolled off it in visible waves. Rory did not look away. She watched the thread fray at the edges. Watched the darkness crackle. Watched the thing lean forward until its breath warmed her lips. “Say it,” the creature whispered. “Name the door. Name the hunger. Name what waits on the other side.” Rory’s fingers brushed the pendant. Cold metal met feverish stone. The hum deepened. Shook the ground. Shadows stretched long and thin across the moss. Roots shifted beneath her feet. The clearing exhaled.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:14:02.71Z" 9/2/2026, 3:14:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1487
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1487
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"measured"
count2
10
word"footfall"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"aligned"
count1
13
word"predictable"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"crystal"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"tangible"
count1
18
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"echoed"
2"warmth"
3"throbbed"
4"weight"
5"scanned"
6"vibrated"
7"pulsed"
8"footsteps"
9"measured"
10"footfall"
11"fractured"
12"aligned"
13"predictable"
14"pulse"
15"crystal"
16"stomach"
17"tangible"
18"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences247
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences247
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences260
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1487
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1341
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Evan1
Rough1
Rory16
Saliva1
Steady1
Golden1
Empress1
Voice1
persons
0"Evan"
1"Rory"
2"Saliva"
3"Voice"
places
0"Steady"
1"Golden"
globalScore0.903
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1487
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences260
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean46.47
std23.75
cv0.511
sampleLengths
086
192
214
374
474
575
621
735
865
975
1064
119
1265
1348
1430
1521
1669
1735
1837
1951
2057
2131
2254
2319
2434
2560
269
2740
2820
2973
3018
3132
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences247
matches
0"been closed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs269
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences260
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1342
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.038748137108792845
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.011922503725782414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences260
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences260
mean5.72
std3.54
cv0.619
sampleLengths
011
111
216
37
420
58
613
76
84
93
102
119
1211
136
149
154
164
1713
186
194
2011
217
227
234
2412
257
268
278
288
297
306
3114
325
336
342
353
364
375
3810
3912
409
4110
428
436
443
453
463
478
487
496
79.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.49615384615384617
totalSentences260
uniqueOpeners129
65.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences203
matches
0"Only darkness and the pale"
1"Just a trick of the"
2"Only her boot prints remained,"
3"Too many rows."
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences203
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Its crimson stone glowed faintly,"
2"She stepped between two standing"
3"They should have been closed"
4"She checked her watch."
5"She slipped it into her"
6"she murmured to the empty"
7"She pulled her phone from"
8"She powered it off and"
9"She followed the direction of"
10"She counted to five in"
11"Her left wrist throbbed where"
12"She forced the image aside"
13"Her eyes scanned the gap"
14"It retreated before she could"
15"She narrowed her eyes."
16"Her breath plumed white in"
17"It came from everywhere and"
18"She weighed the tone."
19"She matched her breathing to"
ratio0.227
51.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount166
totalSentences203
matches
0"Rory pushed through the final"
1"The air tasted stale, thick"
2"Shadows pooled beneath them, heavy"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"The heartstone pendant sat warm"
5"Its crimson stone glowed faintly,"
6"She stepped between two standing"
7"The transition felt instant."
8"City noise vanished."
9"They should have been closed"
10"Rory knelt and brushed a"
11"The fibers felt dry."
12"She checked her watch."
13"The second hand jerked backward,"
14"She slipped it into her"
15"Time moved differently here."
16"The ledger from the unknown"
17"she murmured to the empty"
18"The words echoed poorly."
19"The grove swallowed sound before"
ratio0.818
49.26% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences203
matches
0"Either way, predictable."
1"If it lunged, she dropped"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Ancient oaks stood in a perfect ring, their bark gnarled into shapes that resembled twisted faces."
1"Its voice dropped to a vibration that rattled her teeth."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice flat"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"it whispered (whisper)"
2"the creature whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.25
88.0799%