Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAZ0X4ZVNRCX60F1KCRSTG

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.000638
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak stones rose from the earth like splintered ribs, their gray bark mapped with deep vertical fissures. Aurora Carter stepped between them and felt the atmosphere tighten. The London chill vanished. The air grew thick and humid, carrying the scent of damp soil and crushed pine needles. Her boots sank into turf that should have been hard frost. Instead, the ground yielded like packed wool. The Heartstone pendant against her sternum kicked awake. A single throb traveled down the silver chain. Then another. Faster. Steady. Burning through her sweater fabric. She hooked two fingers under the metal and pulled the crimson gem free. The stone held a captive flame inside it, swirling slowly like embers in a dying fire. She had tracked this frequency across six miles of Richmond Park. Cut through deer trails. Squeezed through hawthorn thickets. Followed the magnetic pull of a dead zone until the streetlights surrendered to pitch darkness. The reason waited somewhere deeper. A portal leak. A neighbor’s missing dog. A tear in the veil that required closing before daylight bleached the evidence clean. She shoved the chain back against her skin. Adjusted her jacket. Pressed her thumb into the crescent scar on her left wrist. The skin there always tightened when the air changed pressure. It tightened now. She walked forward. The clearing opened without gradient. One step she faced tangled bracken and skeletal birches. The next, she stood beneath a vaulted ceiling of flowering branches. White blossoms hung in heavy clusters. Pink ones spilled over gnarled roots. The season should have stripped every leaf from the park. Winter lay flat outside these trees. Inside, spring refused to yield. Petals detached and drifted down. They paused halfway. Suspended. Then reversed course, climbing back to the twigs. Aurora blinked. Her stomach dropped. She forced her shoulders back. Delivery routes trained her to read environments quickly. Spot tripping hazards. Identify exit points. Calculate load distribution. This demanded different mathematics. She counted the lack of insects. Absent cicadas. Silent moths. The quiet carried mass. It pressed against her eardrums. Then the sounds began. Low friction. Wood grinding against bone. Coming from the rear flank. She pivoted. Trunks lined the perimeter. Bark peeled in long ribbons that curled upward. The grinding repeated. Closer. She tapped the pendant. Heat spiked. Sharp. She flinched. Stepped sideways. The terrain dipped. Should have remained level. Loose gravel arranged itself into geometric rings around her feet. She kept to the spaces between. Avoided stepping inside the circles. A chime rang out. Glassy. Hollow. Echoed from the left. Then the right. Then above. Aurora tracked the source. Branches twitched. Not from breeze. None existed. The blossom clusters shuddered together. Petals shed faster now. Disappeared before touching soil. She raised her hand. The pendant seared her palm. She let it drop. The silver link snapped around her wrist like a living thing. Coil tight. Gem flat against her pulse point. Warmth spread up her forearm. She braced her back against a trunk. The bark yielded. Soft. Damp. Beneath her palm, something pushed outward. Slow. Rhythmic. She jerked her hand away. A single vein of sap retracted into the wood. Gray veins thinned. Blackened. Her breathing sharpened. She spoke into the stagnant air. Show yourself. Her voice cracked. Died instantly. The grove swallowed it whole. No rebound. No echo. Another noise followed. Heavy footfalls. Wet. Measured. Paced the outer ring. She tracked them by the depression of frost-crusted grass and the sharp crack of dead twigs. Four shapes detached from the shadows. Tall. Elongated. Joints bent backward. They did not touch the ground. Hovered inches above the floral mat. Their surfaces reflected the pendant’s crimson glare. Polished. Smooth. Featureless. Aurora backed away. One pace. Two. The formation narrowed. The flowers fell quicker. Carpeting the earth in layers of white and blush. She squeezed the gem. It hammered against her ribs. Like a drum counting down. The nearest figure tilted forward. A sound escaped it. Paper sliding against stone. Breath fogging cold metal. The cadence shifted. Shadows on the ground stretched. Pulled toward her ankles. She lifted her boot. The creature mirrored the motion. Head cocked further. Surface rippled. Light refracted across the gloss. Her face swam in the polished plane. Eyes blown wide. Mouth drawn back in a silent line. She broke gaze. Looked up. The canopy split. Wooden beams materialized overhead. Interlocked. Rot-darkened. Turning in slow counter-clockwise rotation. Each pass dragged the air thinner. The pendant flared white. Pain raced up her spine. She clenched her jaw. Clear minds map solutions. She cataloged the room. Creatures anchored. Waiting. Beams synced with the oak markers outside. The grove functioned as machinery. She stood inside the clockwork. A whisper grazed her left ear. Moist. Close. You brought it. The tone carried deliberate syllables. Deliberate pauses. She did not startle. Turned slowly. The entity beside her leaned in. Features smoothed into a horizontal slit. Curved upward. Uneven. Other shapes advanced. Grass crushed flat beneath their hovering forms. Air grew metallic. Mint undertones clung to her tongue. The pendant cooled. Settled against her chest. Steady. Alert. She met the reflection. Blue eyes locked onto the glassy dark. The grove stilled.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:14:24.811Z" 9/2/2026, 3:14:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
82.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount863
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount863
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"magnetic"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"calculate"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"measured"
count1
11
word"blown wide"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"cataloged"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"throb"
2"magnetic"
3"stomach"
4"calculate"
5"echoed"
6"pulse"
7"warmth"
8"rhythmic"
9"echo"
10"measured"
11"blown wide"
12"raced"
13"cataloged"
14"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences192
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences192
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences192
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords863
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount863
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
London1
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount863
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences192
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs4
mean0
std0
cv0
sampleLengths
0219
1197
2235
3212
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences192
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs168
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences192
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slow counter-clockwise rotation."
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.026558891454965358
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004618937644341801
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences192
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences192
mean4.49
std3.24
cv0.721
sampleLengths
019
110
24
316
411
57
68
78
82
91
101
115
1213
1316
1411
154
164
1715
185
193
204
2114
228
233
2411
2510
263
273
285
299
3011
316
326
3310
346
355
365
373
381
398
402
413
425
438
443
453
463
474
486
492
96.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5989583333333334
totalSentences192
uniqueOpeners115
95.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences139
matches
0"Instead, the ground yielded like"
1"Then reversed course, climbing back"
2"Then the sounds began."
3"Then the right."
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences139
matches
0"Her boots sank into turf"
1"She hooked two fingers under"
2"She had tracked this frequency"
3"She shoved the chain back"
4"It tightened now."
5"She walked forward."
6"They paused halfway."
7"Her stomach dropped."
8"She forced her shoulders back."
9"She counted the lack of"
10"It pressed against her eardrums."
11"She tapped the pendant."
12"She kept to the spaces"
13"She raised her hand."
14"She let it drop."
15"She braced her back against"
16"She jerked her hand away."
17"Her breathing sharpened."
18"She spoke into the stagnant"
19"Her voice cracked."
ratio0.245
96.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences139
matches
0"The ancient oak stones rose"
1"Aurora Carter stepped between them"
2"The London chill vanished."
3"The air grew thick and"
4"Her boots sank into turf"
5"The Heartstone pendant against her"
6"A single throb traveled down"
7"She hooked two fingers under"
8"The stone held a captive"
9"She had tracked this frequency"
10"The reason waited somewhere deeper."
11"A portal leak."
12"A neighbor’s missing dog."
13"A tear in the veil"
14"She shoved the chain back"
15"The skin there always tightened"
16"It tightened now."
17"She walked forward."
18"The clearing opened without gradient."
19"The next, she stood beneath"
ratio0.727
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.5232%