Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAZJ1HX18RNN421NAYCP7D

Run Details

Duration:
6m 29s
Cost:
$0.091082
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The entrance to the old station crouched between a kebab shop and a shuttered laundrette. A steel door stood ajar behind a stack of wet cardboard boxes, and the bone token in Constable Preet's palm looked clean against the grime around it. Detective Harlow Quinn stopped at the threshold. She wore her coat buttoned to the throat, and her brown eyes moved from the token to the black gap beyond. The leather watch on her left wrist ticked once, then the second hand halted. The watch had belonged to DS Morris. It had stopped three years before, on the night he vanished from a case that left no blood and no note. Preet held the token forward. "That door opened with the token. Maintenance crew found the door. The body's down there." Harlow took the token. It carried the weight of a coin and the cold of deep earth. One side bore a shallow cut shaped like a closed eyelid. She handed it back to Preet. "Stay on the entrance. No one comes through unless they wear a badge or carry a body bag." The stairs descended in a tight spiral, past tiles glazed in soot and advertisements for cigarettes no one smoked anymore. At the bottom, the abandoned platform opened into a market that had no right to exist beneath Camden. Stalls lined the old track bed under tarps the colour of bruised plums. Glass jars held coils of hair, teeth set in silver wire, and liquids that shifted without light. A table near the platform edge displayed knife handles wrapped in black thread, though no blades rested beside them. The police lamps threw hard white circles over the goods and carved the shadows into deeper holes. A body lay beside the nearest archway. Detective Sergeant Calloway waited with his notebook open. His face had the grey shine of a man who wanted the shift over. "Male, forties, no ID. Maintenance bloke reported him around noon. Looks like he climbed the service ladder to the old signal box, slipped, and cracked his skull. There's a bottle of laudanum in his coat, or something that smells like it." Harlow stepped around the body without touching the blood. The dead man wore a long charcoal coat with brass buttons. His dark hair lay plastered to his forehead, and one hand rested on his chest with the fingers curled. "Name?" "None so far. No phone, no wallet." "Cause?" Calloway nodded toward the head wound. "That. The ladder's rusted. Half the rungs are loose." Harlow crouched. The pool under the man's temple had dried at the edges into a crust the colour of old rust. She leaned closer. The skin around the wound showed no spray, no bright smear. The eyelids had not fluttered against blood. "Where's the ladder?" Calloway pointed. A metal ladder climbed the wall to a boarded doorway. Three rungs hung loose, and a scrape marked the floor beneath it. Harlow crossed to it. Dust coated the lower rungs in a soft grey skin. The scrape on the floor cut through it in a straight line, clean for a falling body. She looked up. The loose rungs had no hand marks. No scuff. No torn thread from clothing. "He didn't fall." Calloway's pen stopped. "Could have slid." "A falling man grabs. His boots kick. His palms collect dirt." Harlow returned to the body. "Look at his hands." The dead man's palms faced upward. They held no grit, no splinters, no blood. The nails were clean. His left shoe had a smear of blue chalk on the sole. The right shoe remained spotless. Calloway exhaled through his nose. "You want to treat every Tube trespass as murder?" "I want the evidence to match the story." Harlow lifted the dead man's sleeve. Someone had rolled the cuff twice. Beneath it, a small brass compass rested against the wrist, its chain looped once around the forearm. The casing wore a patina of verdigris, and sigils covered the face, fine as scratches made by insect legs. "Don't touch that yet." "I'm not moving it." Footsteps crunched behind the stalls. "It's not a watch." Eva Kowalski emerged from the shadows with a worn leather satchel banging against her hip. Her curly red hair escaped from a loose knot, and round glasses fogged in the damp air. She tucked a strand behind her left ear and stopped at the edge of the police tape. Harlow rose. "Who let you past the entrance?" "Preet knows me. I helped catalogue the artifacts from the Clerkenwell dig." Eva's green eyes fixed on the compass. "That's a Veil Compass. Shade work. The sigils bind the needle to rift energy." Calloway stepped between her and the body. "This is an active scene, Miss Kowalski." "Then you need someone who can read it." Eva lifted the satchel higher on her shoulder. "That station isn't on any map. It moves with the market every full moon. No one enters without a bone token." Harlow held up the token in an evidence bag. "This came from the door." Eva's gaze sharpened. "Then he had permission, or someone took it from him." Calloway's jaw tightened. "Or he stole it." "From whom? The Veil Market doesn't leave receipts." Harlow turned back to the body. Someone had buttoned the man's coat unevenly, forcing the third loop into the fourth hole. The left pocket hung inside out. The right pocket remained plump. She eased the fabric open with two gloved fingers. A silver coin-sized disk sat inside, stamped with the same closed-eye mark as the token. "Calloway." He leaned down. "What is that?" "An invitation or a receipt. He wasn't robbed. Someone wanted the left pocket looked at and the right ignored." Eva knelt at the edge of the dried blood. Her fingers hovered over the tiles. Someone had scored faint lines into the dust around the body. They curved away in three arcs, each ending in a small heap of ash. "These aren't scuffle marks. They're containment lines. Someone laid them after the body fell." "Or before." Eva looked up. "You think someone killed him elsewhere and brought him here." "The blood told me he stopped breathing before his head hit this floor." Calloway's radio crackled. He answered it and moved toward the platform edge, his voice dropping under the drip of water from the ceiling. Harlow studied the Veil Compass. The needle did not point north. It pointed toward the archway behind the body, then swung a fraction toward the wall to the left. The face sigils caught the lamp light and tightened. "Does it work?" Eva nodded. "It points to the nearest rift or portal. The casing opens for someone with the token or blood from the maker. If it's open, it's reading the space." "It's open." "Then there's a rift near." Harlow followed the needle. It led past the body, past a stall draped in black netting, to a stretch of tiled wall where the glaze had blistered. The tiles formed a square no larger than a door. At the centre, one tile bore a shallow groove shaped like a closed eyelid. She walked toward it. The air over the wall carried a smell of burnt sugar and iron. The dust on the floor before the tiles showed a thin line where a heel had dragged. Not a body. Someone had stood there and pivoted. "Calloway." He returned from the radio call with his notebook tucked under his arm. "Uniform says no one's come in or out since the maintenance crew found the door." "Then the killer didn't leave through the entrance." Calloway stared at the wall. "You're not serious." Harlow pointed to the floor. "Blue chalk on the victim's left sole. Same chalk in that groove. The compass points there. The door token matches the mark. This wall opened." Eva joined them, her breath shallow. "The market vendors would have seen it." "Where are the vendors?" No one answered. The stalls stood with goods laid out, coins resting in bowls, lamps burning low, but no trader watched from behind the tables. Quinn had spent months chasing the clique behind them. Their names surfaced in stolen artifact reports, poison seizures, and witness statements that collapsed before court. Every stall needed a keeper. Harlow crouched by the dragged heel mark. A few grains of silver powder clung to the tile. She lifted one on the tip of a pen and held it to the light. It reflected in tiny facets, like crushed mirror. "He walked here. He opened the wall. Someone met him. The meeting turned violent. They injured him beyond the wall, then dressed the scene as a fall." Calloway rubbed his mouth. "That requires someone who can pass through a hidden door, carry a body, and stage a market full of witnesses who vanished." "Yes." Eva's hand went to her hair. "A Shade artisan made the compass. A token holder commands the gate. If the needle found a portal, the killer stands on the other side." Harlow looked back at the dead man. His curled fingers had not formed by chance. She returned to him and examined the hand on his chest. The fingers gripped a fold of coat lining. Beneath it, a scrap of paper protruded. Calloway reached for evidence tweezers from his kit. "We should bag that." "We should." Harlow eased the paper free. It carried a single line of ink in a language that twisted back on itself. Eva bent close. Her freckles stood out under the lamp. "It's a receipt. For information. The Market sells it. This mark means the buyer paid with a memory." Calloway made a sound in his throat. "Right. Memory money." Harlow folded the paper into a clean evidence bag. "Then we need to know what he bought." Eva looked at the compass. "The needle remains fixed on the wall. If the portal closed, it should drift." "It hasn't." Harlow stood. She crossed to the tiled square and held the bone token up to the eyelid groove. The brass compass on the dead man's wrist gave a single click. The needle swung hard and held. The token grew warm against her glove. Calloway shifted his weight. "Detective." Harlow pressed the token into the groove.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:14:42.362Z" 9/2/2026, 3:14:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.053
leniency0.105
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1709
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1709
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"carried the weight"
count1
1
word"fluttered"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"carried the weight"
1"fluttered"
2"footsteps"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences180
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1709
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1179
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Constable1
Preet3
Harlow19
Quinn2
Morris1
Camden1
Sergeant1
Calloway13
Kowalski1
Veil1
Compass1
Eva11
persons
0"Preet"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Morris"
4"Sergeant"
5"Calloway"
6"Kowalski"
7"Eva"
places
0"Constable"
globalScore0.694
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1709
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences180
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean20.84
std17.27
cv0.828
sampleLengths
042
170
220
328
424
538
666
77
822
941
1039
111
127
131
1415
1542
163
1724
1848
193
203
213
2220
2335
2414
258
2648
274
284
299
3049
318
3233
3314
3437
3514
3613
377
388
3956
401
416
4219
4340
4414
452
4613
4713
4823
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences180
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1181
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.016088060965283656
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001693480101608806
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences180
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences180
mean9.49
std6.74
cv0.71
sampleLengths
015
127
27
321
414
57
621
75
815
94
1013
1111
126
1318
1420
1518
1613
1717
1819
1917
207
218
2214
2341
249
2511
2619
271
287
291
306
319
322
3319
343
3511
367
373
382
3910
4012
414
4210
4317
443
457
462
475
483
493
45.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.29444444444444445
totalSentences180
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences120
matches
0"She wore her coat buttoned"
1"It had stopped three years"
2"It carried the weight of"
3"She handed it back to"
4"His face had the grey"
5"His dark hair lay plastered"
6"She leaned closer."
7"She looked up."
8"They held no grit, no"
9"His left shoe had a"
10"Her curly red hair escaped"
11"She tucked a strand behind"
12"She eased the fabric open"
13"He leaned down."
14"Her fingers hovered over the"
15"They curved away in three"
16"He answered it and moved"
17"It pointed toward the archway"
18"It led past the body,"
19"She walked toward it."
ratio0.242
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences120
matches
0"The entrance to the old"
1"A steel door stood ajar"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stopped at"
3"She wore her coat buttoned"
4"The leather watch on her"
5"The watch had belonged to"
6"It had stopped three years"
7"Preet held the token forward."
8"Harlow took the token."
9"It carried the weight of"
10"She handed it back to"
11"The stairs descended in a"
12"Stalls lined the old track"
13"Glass jars held coils of"
14"A table near the platform"
15"The police lamps threw hard"
16"A body lay beside the"
17"Detective Sergeant Calloway waited with"
18"His face had the grey"
19"Harlow stepped around the body"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Glass jars held coils of hair, teeth set in silver wire, and liquids that shifted without light."
1"Their names surfaced in stolen artifact reports, poison seizures, and witness statements that collapsed before court."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.7210%