Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAZZ16PVWNBQ84Q803CYMB

Run Details

Duration:
40.0s
Cost:
$0.000657
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Night air clung to the standing stones like wet silk. Oak rings worn smooth by centuries cracked under Rory’s boots. The entrance to the grove sat hidden between two monoliths draped in ivy that refused to brown despite the frost biting the rest of Richmond Park. She stepped through. Temperature dropped ten degrees in a single stride. Her breath plumed white. The Heartstone pendant swung against her sternum, heavy against her ribs. It had gone cold since she left Cardiff. Now it thrummed. A low, steady heat pressed into her palm where she tucked the silver chain. Wrongness arrived before she cleared the tree line. Not a sound. An absence. The park’s usual chorus of distant traffic and rustling badgers vanished. Silence hung thick enough to choke on. She adjusted her canvas tote bag, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her left wrist. Habit. Grounding. The wildflowers surrounding the path defied season. Crimson petals and silver-blue blooms twisted around each other, roots tangled in soil that smelled of copper and damp earth. No insects. No moths. Just the flowers pressing closer to the trail as she walked. She forced her shoulders down. In through the nose. Out through the mouth. Pre-law brain working overtime, cataloguing variables. Wind direction none. Air still. Yet the lowest branches whispered. Dry wood scraping dry wood. A rhythm. Deliberate. She stopped. The whispering continued. Three beats longer than her own footfalls. Then matched them. The stone warmed sharper. She tugged the chain free, letting the crimson gem catch what little moonlight filtered through the canopy. Inner light pulsed beneath the glass, syncing with her heartbeat. South. Toward the deepest part of the clearing. She moved. Boots sank into loam that felt spongy, wrong. Roots shifted underfoot without breaking bark. She glanced down. A knuckle-like protrusion dragged itself half an inch sideways. She looked away. Heart rate climbed. Fifty meters in, the trees thinned. A circular space opened. Stones stood in a crooked ring, larger than the ones outside. Moss carpeted their bases. Something glinted near the center. Not metal. Glass. Or ice. Too large to be natural. She approached. The ground sloped downward. She caught her reflection in a dark puddle. Face pale. Eyes wide. Blue catching the pendant’s glow. When she blinked, the reflection blinked late. Alright, she muttered. Voice cracked. Dry throat. Just a geological anomaly. Maybe some mineral deposit reflecting light. She stepped around a fallen branch. Crunched. The echo split. Two sounds overlapped. One hers. One heavier. Closer. She froze. Breath held. Only the hum of the stone answered. She exhaled. Stop it. Footsteps echoed again. Backward this time. Following her pause. She spun. Nothing but trunks and shadow. The woods breathed in, then out. Leaves shivered without wind. A twig snapped. Directly behind her left shoulder. She didn’t turn. Didn’t need to. Heat radiated off the grass where nothing stood. She backed up one step. Cold metal touched the small of her back. She shoved backward. Fingers met air. The pressure vanished. Laugh bubbled up, sharp and jagged. She swallowed it down. Rationality fraying at the edges. Pre-law training screamed for evidence. Physical proof. Chain of custody. Reality operating outside those parameters. The pendant burned now. Almost painful. She clutched it through her coat. Gem pointing straight ahead. The puddle at the clearing’s center rippled. Concentric waves spread outward from nowhere. Surface tension broke. Bubbles rose and burst. Sounded like speech. Muffled. Syllables sliding together. Waterlogged and flat. She leaned in. Lips parted. Tried to catch consonants. Stay close. Watch the ground. Trust the stone. Wind finally moved. Cold air swept down from the north. Carried scent of ozone and rotting lilies. Flowers turned their faces toward the clearing. All of them. Pollen dust lifted in the draft. Swirled around her boots. Settled on her sleeves. She wiped her forearm. Skin prickled. Like crawling insects. No insects. Just static. Building in her teeth. She took another step forward. Root caught her toe. She stumbled. Hand shot out, palm slapping wet earth. Dirt packed under nails. Cold seeped through skin. Up the wrist. Past the scar. Into the bone. She pushed up. Knees scraped. Looked past the puddle. The glass-like structure resolved. Tall. Veined with white lightning patterns. Fractured at the top. Inside the cracks, something shifted. Long shadows stretching across the surface. Unspooling. Retreating. Watching. She tracked it with her eyes. It tracked back. Peripheral vision blurred. Shapes detached from trunks. Elongated silhouettes bending at impossible angles. Not walking. Drifting. Closing the distance. Slow. Deliberate. Patient. Who’s there? she called out. Voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. Show yourself. This is private property. Lies tasted bitter. Nobody claimed the old growth. Nobody mapped it. The stones answered first. Low resonance vibrating through the soles of her boots. Rising up her legs. Chest tightened. Ribs compressed. Air grew thin. She coughed. Lungs burned. Pendant flared crimson. Light washed over the clearing. Shadows recoiled. Then surged forward. Faster now. Branches cracked overhead. Debris rained down. Leaves spun in a vortex around the central stone. The whirlwind pulled debris inward. Dust stung her eyes. She shielded her face. Gritted teeth. Squinted through tears. The silhouette at the water’s edge solidified. Shoulders broad. Head tilted too far back. Jaw unhinged slightly. Mouth open. Empty throat pulsing in time with the pendant. She couldn’t look away. Muscles locked. Fear wired hot through her spine. Every instinct screamed to run. Legs refused. Root system gripped her ankles. Underground movement. Thick cords weaving through fabric and flesh. Digging in. Anchoring. She yanked. Fabric tore. Skin ripped. Pain sharp and clean. Adrenaline flooded veins. She broke free, scrambling backward. Heels found purchase. Pushed hard. Left boot came loose. She didn’t care. Gritted teeth. Spat blood. Turned to bolt. Path gone. Trees interlocked. Bark fused. No gap. No exit. Just wall after wall of ancient timber. Trunk surfaces shifted. Knots rearranged. Eyes formed in the grain. Blinking slow. Waking. The pendant cooled suddenly. Dead weight against her chest. Silence returned. Heavy. Final. Then a single drop landed on her collarbone. Warm. Viscous. Smelled of iron. Another followed. Then a third. Rain started falling upward. Droplets climbing the trunks. Sliding along the moss. Converging on the space beside her neck. She held her breath. Felt warmth brush her jawline. A finger traced her cheekbone. Rough bark texture. Calloused pads. Dragging down to her chin. Lifting her head. Forcing eye contact. The thing beside her smiled. Teeth aligned like splintered stone. Voice rasped through dry leaves and cracking ice. Found you.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:14:55.669Z" 9/2/2026, 3:14:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1092
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1092
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"variables"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"parameters"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"structure"
count1
10
word"resolved"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"traced"
count1
16
word"aligned"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"silence"
2"variables"
3"pulsed"
4"echo"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
7"parameters"
8"tension"
9"structure"
10"resolved"
11"fractured"
12"resonance"
13"weight"
14"warmth"
15"traced"
16"aligned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences266
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences266
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences266
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1092
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Alright, she muttered."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount1092
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.27
worstName"Voice"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Cold"
discoveredNames
Rory1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Cardiff1
Voice3
Cold3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Voice"
2"Cold"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1092
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences266
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean109.2
std82.09
cv0.752
sampleLengths
0128
1111
2143
317
433
5100
6121
7103
819
9317
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences266
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs243
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences266
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1095
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03561643835616438
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005479452054794521
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences266
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences266
mean4.11
std3.01
cv0.733
sampleLengths
010
110
226
33
48
54
611
78
83
914
108
113
122
1311
147
1515
161
171
187
1920
202
212
2211
235
244
254
266
273
282
295
305
312
321
332
343
357
363
374
3817
3910
401
417
422
438
446
453
469
473
483
496
98.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6842105263157895
totalSentences266
uniqueOpeners182
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount13
totalSentences181
matches
0"Just the flowers pressing closer"
1"Then matched them."
2"Too large to be natural."
3"Just a geological anomaly."
4"Maybe some mineral deposit reflecting"
5"Only the hum of the"
6"Backward this time."
7"Directly behind her left shoulder."
8"Light washed over the clearing."
9"Then surged forward."
10"Just wall after wall of"
11"Then a single drop landed"
12"Then a third."
ratio0.072
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences181
matches
0"She stepped through."
1"Her breath plumed white."
2"It had gone cold since"
3"She adjusted her canvas tote"
4"She forced her shoulders down."
5"She tugged the chain free,"
6"She glanced down."
7"She looked away."
8"She caught her reflection in"
9"She stepped around a fallen"
10"She didn’t turn."
11"She backed up one step."
12"She shoved backward."
13"She swallowed it down."
14"She clutched it through her"
15"She leaned in."
16"She wiped her forearm."
17"She took another step forward."
18"She pushed up."
19"She tracked it with her"
ratio0.149
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences181
matches
0"Night air clung to the"
1"Oak rings worn smooth by"
2"The entrance to the grove"
3"She stepped through."
4"Temperature dropped ten degrees in"
5"Her breath plumed white."
6"The Heartstone pendant swung against"
7"It had gone cold since"
8"A low, steady heat pressed"
9"Wrongness arrived before she cleared"
10"The park’s usual chorus of"
11"Silence hung thick enough to"
12"She adjusted her canvas tote"
13"The wildflowers surrounding the path"
14"Crimson petals and silver-blue blooms"
15"She forced her shoulders down."
16"Pre-law brain working overtime, cataloguing"
17"Wind direction none."
18"The whispering continued."
19"The stone warmed sharper."
ratio0.591
27.62% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences181
matches
0"Now it thrummed."
ratio0.006
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Crimson petals and silver-blue blooms twisted around each other, roots tangled in soil that smelled of copper and damp earth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
93.9293%