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Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HBBTF6WCZTP4G195XJNF2T
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.8 Max (Reasoning, XHigh)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
6m 43s
Cost:
$0.091068
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
91.32%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
76.85%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
45.19%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
35.76%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
32.73%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
30.30%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
90.4051%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The door opened two inches.
The chain snapped taut and
stopped Lucien Moreau on the threshold.
His charcoal suit sleeve hung
split from shoulder to cuff.
Blood ran between his fingers
where he pressed it against the wound.
His platinum blond hair had
slipped loose from its usual severe sweep. One eye burned amber.
The other looked black as
the stairwell behind him. "Aurora."
My hand tightened on the
door edge.
The wood bit into my
palm. "You have five seconds to turn around." "I need five minutes." "You need a
grave
and a shovel." His mouth curved. It held no humour. "May I come in?" "No." Behind me, Ptolemy gave a low hiss from atop a stack of Eva's monographs.
The tabby had no patience
for strangers.
He had less for bleeding
ones. Lucien glanced past my shoulder. "Eva's wards are thin." "Eva isn't here." "I know. That is why I came to you." Copper scented the landing. Fresh blood cut through the curry house oil on the walls.
My stomach turned, but my
face stayed still.
I had learned that trick
in Cardiff court corridors, in Evan's kitchen, in every room where fear collected debts. "Who followed you?" "No one living." "That is not an answer." "It is the only one you will get before I fall down." I looked at his boots. Good leather. Scuffed at the toe.
The left one left a
darker print than the right.
He favoured the injury, but
he had climbed three flights.
He had checked the stairwell
windows. Old habits. His, and now mine. A sound rolled up from below. A shoulder hit the curry house's back door. Then another. Ptolemy's ears flattened. Lucien kept his gaze on mine. "Rory."
Only he used that name
like a key. Everyone else used it like a nickname.
He made it sound like
something stolen and kept under his tongue. I undid the chain.
He stepped over the threshold
as if he owned the floorboards. Eva's flat closed around him. Books and scrolls covered every surface. The one-bedroom above the curry house had always
felt like a paper cave
. Every chair held a stack. Every mug held three pens and a cold tea bag.
I had slept on the
sofa for four nights because my own place above Silas' bar no longer felt safe. Eva had pressed the keys into my palm and called it mine until further notice. Lucien made the cramped room smaller.
He stopped by the desk
and set his ivory-handled cane against it. The handle gleamed like polished bone. "Sit."
I pointed at the armchair
. "Don't bleed on the manuscripts." "You still give orders well." "I still have a mop."
He sat on the edge
of the armchair. The springs complained.
I fetched the first aid
box from beneath a pile of folklore journals and knelt. My knees sank into the thin rug. His blood touched the wool and darkened it. "Coat off." He obeyed
slowly
. The ruined fabric peeled from his shoulder with a wet sound. Three furrows clawed through the muscle. Too deep for glass. Too neat for a knife. Claw marks. My throat closed, but I opened the antiseptic and poured. He inhaled
sharply
. "Sorry." "No, you are not." "No. I'm not." He laughed once. The sound scraped something raw inside me. I pressed gauze to the wound. His hand shot up and closed around my wrist. Not hard. Enough. His thumb rested over the small crescent scar there. "Let go, Lucien." "You changed your hair." "You lost the right to notice." "Along with several other privileges." His grip loosened but did not fall away. "You look well." "I look armed." His amber eye
flicked
to the shelf. Eva kept a heavy brass paperweight there, shaped like a sleeping fox. "Improvised." "Effective." "As ever." I bandaged him tight. He watched me work. His attention sat on the back of my neck like a hand. Six months ago he had stood in a Dover car park with the engine running and a promise in his mouth. I had waited until the petrol light came on. Until my phone died. Until two men in a grey saloon rolled past slow enough for me to memorise their faces. He had not come. I had driven away with my hands shaking so badly I missed the gear change twice. "You left me." "I drew them off." "You could have called." "They would have
traced
the call." "I could have helped." "You could have died." I pulled the bandage tighter than necessary. He let me. "That was not your choice." "It was the only choice I could make
quickly
." My fingers froze. His skin burned under the gauze. Half-demon blood ran hotter than human. Eva had written that in one of her notebooks. I had laughed at the time.
Now the heat pressed against
my palms and
felt like proof
. "Why are you here?" He reached into his waistcoat with his good arm and withdrew a small black envelope. Someone had broken the wax seal. Scorch marks blackened the edges. "This arrived at my rooms an hour ago." I did not take it. "Read it yourself." "I did." "And?" "It bears your name." My
pulse
jumped. I kept my voice level. "Which one?" "Laila." The name landed between us like a dropped glass. Eva had made it for me when I fled law school and Evan. I used it for delivery slips and late shifts, for cash jobs and cheap SIM cards. No underworld fixer should have matched it to Aurora Carter. "That's impossible." "Nothing is impossible when Avaros is involved." The room tightened. Ptolemy leapt from the books to the windowsill and stared at the glass. "My father's realm." Lucien answered the question before I asked it. "Someone has opened a ledger there. Someone sealed a contract in your alias." "I don't make deals with demons." "You make deliveries for Golden Empress, live above a bar, and sleep in your best friend's paper fortress. You make deals with survival every day." "Don't turn me into a case file." "I came to Eva because she has mapped Avarian inheritance sigils." "Eva isn't here." "You are." "I deliver noodles." "You think faster than half the lawyers in the Old Bailey and twice the demons in Southwark." I looked at him then. His face held no flattery.
Only the flat, dangerous certainty
that had once made me trust him in alleys he had no business walking through. "Open the envelope." "You should." "Why?" "Because it will not open for me." I took it. The paper felt dry and cold, though the wax stayed warm. Inside sat a single card, thin as onion skin. A sigil marked it. The lines twisted when I looked at them. They breathed under the lamp. My fingers tingled. Lucien's voice dropped. "Read the name." I did not need to. It sat at the bottom in elegant script. Laila Carter. My throat closed. "That's not my signature." "No. But it is your blood." The card flared red. I dropped it on Eva's desk. Where it landed, the paper beneath blackened in a
perfect
circle. Ptolemy spat. The curtains stirred, though the window was shut. Lucien rose too smooth for a wounded man. "Give me the cane." "It is not a cane." "I know what it is." He lifted it. The ivory handle parted with a soft click. The blade inside emerged thin and silver. Etched words ran down the metal. I refused to read them. He had shown it to me once before, at a warehouse near Limehouse, when a debt collector with too many teeth had backed me against a forklift. I had called it melodramatic. He had said elegance cost less than bullets. Another blow hit the building below. The floorboards shivered. "They are inside the curry house." "They want the card." "Then we destroy it." "You cannot destroy an Avarian contract by fire. You must break the name." "How?" "Eva's notes." I turned to the desk. Eva's research sprawled there in neat chaos. Index cards. Translations. Rubbings of tomb sigils. A battered little old black French leather notebook lay under a stack of printed maps. Eva had written Avaros in red ink on the first page and underlined it three times. A thud came from the front door. Not below. On the landing. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. Lucien moved between me and the door. The blade caught the lamplight. I grabbed the poker from the fireplace. My palm slicked against the iron. "Stay behind me." "Your shoulder will open." "Let it." "You always did favour bad timing." "And you always mistook stupidity for bravery." His mouth softened for half a second. "I came back." "You don't get to say that now." "When do I get to say it?" "After we live long enough to mean it." He took one step closer. The heat of him pressed through his ruined shirt. My grip tightened on the poker. He raised his free hand and stopped just short of my jaw. "I thought about you every night." "Liar." "Ask me again when the room stops shaking." I kissed him because the words made my hands itch. It was not gentle. It tasted of copper, cold tea, and six months of locked doors. He kissed back. His good arm slid around my waist and pulled me against him. For one hot second I wanted to bite his mouth. For the next I wanted to hide my face in his neck.
Then Ptolemy knocked a stack
of books off the chair, and the spell snapped. I shoved Lucien back. "That was for Dover." "I deserve more." "You'll get it when I decide what for." The card on the desk flared again. Red light crawled across Eva's notes and stopped at the notebook. The pages flew open without a breeze. The red ink of Avaros spread like fresh blood across the paper. Lucien swore in French. The handle of the front door turned. The first deadbolt snapped back without a key. A voice called through the wood. Soft. Familiar. Wrong. "Rory, love. Open up." My lungs stopped. Evan had always said my name like he
was tasting
it. Lucien went still. The second deadbolt cracked. He lifted the cane blade. The third bolt slid free. The door
began to
open.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
91
tagDensity
0.044
leniency
0.088
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
91.32%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1728
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
2
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"sharply"
2
"quickly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
76.85%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1728
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"grave"
count
1
1
word
"stomach"
count
1
2
word
"flicked"
count
1
3
word
"traced"
count
1
4
word
"pulse"
count
1
5
word
"perfect"
count
1
6
word
"etched"
count
1
7
word
"familiar"
count
1
highlights
0
"grave"
1
"stomach"
2
"flicked"
3
"traced"
4
"pulse"
5
"perfect"
6
"etched"
7
"familiar"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
179
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
179
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
267
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1728
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
5
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
41
wordCount
1290
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
0.85
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
11
Moreau
1
Ptolemy
6
Eva
10
Cardiff
1
Evan
3
Dover
1
Aurora
1
Carter
2
Limehouse
1
French
2
Avaros
2
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Ptolemy"
3
"Eva"
4
"Evan"
5
"Aurora"
6
"Carter"
places
0
"Cardiff"
1
"Dover"
2
"Limehouse"
3
"French"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
104
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"felt like a paper cave"
1
"felt like proof"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1728
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
267
matches
0
"learned that trick"
1
"used that name"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
147
mean
11.76
std
16.26
cv
1.383
sampleLengths
0
16
1
47
2
1
3
13
4
7
5
4
6
7
7
7
8
4
9
1
10
27
11
5
12
4
13
3
14
9
15
42
16
3
17
3
18
5
19
12
20
43
21
16
22
3
23
6
24
1
25
27
26
4
27
91
28
18
29
11
30
5
31
5
32
41
33
2
34
41
35
3
36
1
37
4
38
3
39
10
40
27
41
3
42
4
43
6
44
16
45
3
46
19
47
1
48
1
49
2
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
179
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
219
matches
0
"was tasting"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
267
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
544
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
14
adverbRatio
0.025735294117647058
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.003676470588235294
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
267
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
267
mean
6.47
std
4.33
cv
0.67
sampleLengths
0
5
1
11
2
10
3
12
4
12
5
4
6
9
7
1
8
7
9
6
10
7
11
4
12
7
13
3
14
4
15
4
16
1
17
14
18
7
19
6
20
5
21
4
22
3
23
9
24
4
25
11
26
8
27
19
28
3
29
3
30
5
31
12
32
5
33
2
34
4
35
10
36
10
37
6
38
2
39
4
40
6
41
8
42
2
43
3
44
6
45
1
46
8
47
7
48
12
49
4
45.19%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.30711610486891383
totalSentences
267
uniqueOpeners
82
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
5
totalSentences
165
matches
0
"Only he used that name"
1
"Too deep for glass."
2
"Too neat for a knife."
3
"Only the flat, dangerous certainty"
4
"Then Ptolemy knocked a stack"
ratio
0.03
35.76%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
76
totalSentences
165
matches
0
"His charcoal suit sleeve hung"
1
"His platinum blond hair had"
2
"My hand tightened on the"
3
"His mouth curved."
4
"It held no humour."
5
"He had less for bleeding"
6
"My stomach turned, but my"
7
"I had learned that trick"
8
"I looked at his boots."
9
"He favoured the injury, but"
10
"He had checked the stairwell"
11
"His, and now mine."
12
"He made it sound like"
13
"I undid the chain."
14
"He stepped over the threshold"
15
"I had slept on the"
16
"He stopped by the desk"
17
"I pointed at the armchair"
18
"He sat on the edge"
19
"I fetched the first aid"
ratio
0.461
32.73%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
141
totalSentences
165
matches
0
"The door opened two inches."
1
"The chain snapped taut and"
2
"His charcoal suit sleeve hung"
3
"Blood ran between his fingers"
4
"His platinum blond hair had"
5
"The other looked black as"
6
"My hand tightened on the"
7
"The wood bit into my"
8
"His mouth curved."
9
"It held no humour."
10
"The tabby had no patience"
11
"He had less for bleeding"
12
"Lucien glanced past my shoulder."
13
"Copper scented the landing."
14
"My stomach turned, but my"
15
"I had learned that trick"
16
"I looked at his boots."
17
"The left one left a"
18
"He favoured the injury, but"
19
"He had checked the stairwell"
ratio
0.855
30.30%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
165
matches
0
"Now the heat pressed against"
ratio
0.006
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
45
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"Only the flat, dangerous certainty that had once made me trust him in alleys he had no business walking through."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
4
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
91
tagDensity
0.011
leniency
0.022
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
90.4051%