Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HBCH47KKY8EJZ4YG7EVJKG

Run Details

Duration:
3m 3s
Cost:
$0.042916
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last bus had gone. Aurora Carter stood at the edge of Richmond Park with her bicycle under one hand and her phone pressed to her ear. Wind moved through the iron rails and carried the smell of wet leaves, river mud, and something sweeter, like flowers left too long in a vase. “You’re not serious.” Eva’s voice rasped through the speaker. “Richmond Park. At night.” Rory shifted the phone to her shoulder. The strap of her delivery bag bit into her coat. “The pendant woke me.” “It woke you.” “It was warm. Then it pulsed.” “So unplug it. Put it in a drawer. Call me in the morning.” “It’s not electric.” The line hissed. A distant siren rose and vanished. Eva drew breath. “The grove is a story, Rory.” “The stones are real.” “Old stones. Rich people’s park. Rats.” “The pendant only reacts near a Hel portal.” “A Hel portal.” “Yes.” “In Richmond.” “Yes.” Eva laughed once, no humour in it. “If you vanish, I’m telling Silas you stole his best bottle.” Rory smiled, but her mouth tightened. She looked past the gate. Beyond the lamplight, oaks stood in black clumps, their branches locked together. No deer moved. No night birds called. The city hum that should have filled the park had thinned to a single thread, then snapped. “I’ll text when I’m out.” “You won’t. You never do.” “Then come get me.” “I’ll bring whisky.” The call broke. Rory lowered the phone. The screen showed no signal. The clock read 23:41. She had checked it two minutes earlier. She put the device in her coat pocket and lifted the bicycle over the fallen branch blocking the path. The Heartstone pendant lay beneath her jumper, a thumbnail of deep crimson on a silver chain. It had come to her in a brown envelope with no note, no sender, just a smear of ash on the flap. Since Tuesday it had stayed cold against her skin. Tonight it warmed. Each beat sent a small pressure into her breastbone, not pain, more like a finger testing a bruise. She followed the path until the lampposts stopped. The ground changed first. Gravel gave way to moss. Moss pressed around the soles of her trainers and drank the sound of her steps. Then the wildflowers came. Bluebells, poppies, harebells, and white blossoms with no name grew in thick knots across the grass. Frost edged the leaves, yet the petals held open. Rory stopped. Her breath made no cloud. The air was not cold. It was not warm. It had no temperature at all. She pulled the pendant from beneath her jumper. The crimson stone shed a faint glow onto her fingers. The silver chain had grown hot. “Right.” The word fell flat. No echo returned. “One look.” The ancient oak standing stones waited at the top of the slope. They rose from the earth in a broken ring, each trunk black and twisted, bark folded like burnt skin. Some leaned inward. Some had split down the centre and kept standing. Their roots made arches over holes too dark for moonlight. Rory counted seven. The ring should have had five. She counted again. Seven. She stepped between two stones. The flowers turned. Not all at once. Not with sound. Their heads lifted from the ground and faced her as she passed. A poppy brushed her ankle. Its petals left a streak of red pollen on her skin. Rory did not wipe it off. She kept her eyes on the centre of the clearing, where a shallow hollow held a pool of black water. No leaves floated on it. No reflection showed in it. The pendant pulsed. Heat spread over her ribs. Rory pressed her palm to the stone. The crescent scar on her left wrist whitened under the pressure. “Show me.” Her voice came out steadier than her pulse. “Or stop pretending.” The grove answered with a footstep behind her. Rory spun. The ring of stones stood empty. The path she had used lay sealed by new wildflowers, stems crossed over the moss like stitches. “Hello?” No voice answered. Another step sounded, not behind her now, but to her right, where the oaks crowded close. A branch moved without wind. Its twigs tapped together in a pattern, three short strikes, one long. Rory knew knocks. Restaurant doors, bar stools, impatient customers. This had the rhythm of someone asking to be let in. She backed toward the hollow. The pendant grew warmer with each step. The water stayed still, but the darkness inside it shifted. Shapes pressed upward from below, flat and broad, like leaves trapped under ice. Rory crouched. The glow from the Heartstone touched the surface. For one breath, the pool showed a corridor of grey stone, a low arch, and a door bound with white roots. The door had no handle. It had teeth. Rory stood. Her knee brushed the bicycle wheel. The bike lay on its side. She had not dropped it. The front tyre turned, slow, then stopped. “Not funny.” She looked at the stones. “I’m leaving.” The grove made a sound like mouths closing. Rory turned toward the place where she had entered. The standing stones had closed the gap. Two oaks now stood shoulder to shoulder, bark pressed into bark, their split trunks forming a single mass. She moved to the next pair. The gap narrowed as she watched, roots crawling through the soil with the wet noise of fingers working into tight gloves. She struck the nearest trunk with her palm. The bark gave, warm and damp, then sprang back. Her phone lit in her pocket. She snatched it out. The screen showed the clock: 01:14. No calls. No messages. The light died. When she pressed the button, the screen stayed black. The Heartstone pulsed again, harder. Rory shoved the phone away and forced her breathing into counts. Four in. Four hold. Four out. Eva used to mock it during exams. Rory had laughed then. She did not laugh now. “Think.” She rubbed the scar on her wrist. “Boundary. Stones. Time. If the ring moved, the centre stays.” She looked at the pool. The water had begun to ripple, though nothing touched it. The ripples moved outward from the centre, then reversed, drawing back into a point. The pendant wanted the pool. Rory took one step. A shape moved in the corner of her sight. She turned her head. Nothing stood there. The shape moved again, farther left, tall and thin, folded between two roots. When she looked straight at the spot, it became shadow. When her gaze slid away, it rose. “I see you.” She did not know if that was true. “Stay where you are.” A laugh answered from the trees. It used her own voice. Not a recording. It had the scratch in it from the night she had shouted over rain on the M4. It laughed once, stopped, then said her name. “Rory.” She gripped the pendant. The silver chain cut into her neck. “Who are you?” The pool rippled. The shape near the roots shifted. Another shape answered from the far side of the ring, wearing the same voice. “Rory.” A third voice came from the hollow itself, lower, wetter, but still hers. “Rory.” She stepped away from the pool. The flowers bent toward her ankles. Their stems brushed her shoes, testing the laces. Rory lifted the bicycle by the handlebar and shoved it toward the nearest gap. The front wheel struck a root. The bike folded sideways. She dropped it. The wildflowers swarmed over the frame, not growing, but arranging, as if they had waited for metal and rubber and cloth. The pendant burned. Rory yanked the chain over her head. The stone sat in her palm, small and bright. Its glow turned from crimson to the colour of a wound under skin. The warmth became a pull, dragging her hand toward the black water. She set her jaw and closed her fingers. The silver chain coiled around her wrist and tightened until the crescent scar stood white against red. “I came for a door.” She held the stone above the pool. “Not a trap.” The water stilled. The grove went silent. The flowers stopped moving. The standing stones drew close. A bubble rose in the pool. Then another. The surface stretched upward, forming a dome no larger than a fist. Inside it, the corridor of grey stone returned. The toothed door stood open. Beyond it, a pale stair descended. Rory heard Eva’s voice from that depth, clear and small. “Rory, answer.” The phone in her pocket stayed dead. The voice in the pool used Eva’s laugh. Rory looked at the black water, at the open door, at the pale stair. Her thumb moved over the Heartstone. The stone pulsed once against her skin. The flowers around the bicycle opened their petals. The standing stones leaned inward. Rory lowered her hand, and the glow of the pendant fell across the water.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:21:47.41Z" 9/2/2026, 3:21:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.184
leniency0.368
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1500
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1500
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulsed"
count4
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"electric"
2"echo"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences177
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences177
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences208
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1500
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1358
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond1
Park1
Rory20
Heartstone4
Tuesday1
Eva6
Four3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.764
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.333
wordCount1500
matches
0"not behind her now, but to her right"
1"not growing, but arranging, as if they had waited for metal"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean21.74
std23.68
cv1.089
sampleLengths
053
113
221
33
46
513
63
712
86
94
106
118
123
131
142
151
1618
1747
185
195
204
213
2242
2368
248
2575
2624
2710
2866
295
3074
313
3223
3313
348
3525
361
3756
3874
3926
409
418
4278
436
4464
4518
4629
475
4850
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences177
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences208
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1358
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.022827687776141383
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences208
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences208
mean7.21
std4.9
cv0.68
sampleLengths
05
122
226
39
44
57
610
74
83
96
1013
113
123
136
143
156
164
176
188
193
201
212
221
237
2411
256
265
2712
283
294
3017
315
325
334
343
353
364
375
384
397
4019
4116
4222
439
443
4518
468
474
485
4915
35.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.2548076923076923
totalSentences208
uniqueOpeners53
20.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences166
matches
0"Then the wildflowers came."
ratio0.006
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences166
matches
0"She looked past the gate."
1"She had checked it two"
2"She put the device in"
3"It had come to her"
4"She followed the path until"
5"Her breath made no cloud."
6"It was not warm."
7"It had no temperature at"
8"She pulled the pendant from"
9"They rose from the earth"
10"Their roots made arches over"
11"She counted again."
12"She stepped between two stones."
13"Their heads lifted from the"
14"Its petals left a streak"
15"She kept her eyes on"
16"Her voice came out steadier"
17"Its twigs tapped together in"
18"She backed toward the hollow."
19"It had teeth."
ratio0.259
17.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount147
totalSentences166
matches
0"The last bus had gone."
1"Aurora Carter stood at the"
2"Wind moved through the iron"
3"Eva’s voice rasped through the"
4"Rory shifted the phone to"
5"The strap of her delivery"
6"The line hissed."
7"A distant siren rose and"
8"Eva drew breath."
9"Eva laughed once, no humour"
10"Rory smiled, but her mouth"
11"She looked past the gate."
12"The city hum that should"
13"The call broke."
14"Rory lowered the phone."
15"The screen showed no signal."
16"The clock read 23:41."
17"She had checked it two"
18"She put the device in"
19"The Heartstone pendant lay beneath"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The wildflowers swarmed over the frame, not growing, but arranging, as if they had waited for metal and rubber and cloth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3083%