Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HBNJ8ZSYX1YPQ0HG43JGJG

Run Details

Duration:
49.2s
Cost:
$0.000840
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed against the soot-stained plate glass, blurring the streetlamps into smeared halos of yellow. Inside, the green neon sign buzzed with a steady, insectile thrum, washing the room in a bruised, aquatic light. Scuffed oak tables absorbed the shadows. Brass footrails gleamed where decades of boots had ground dirt into the metal. Silas worked a linen towel across a lowball glass, his movements practiced and economical. The cloth snagged on the silver signet ring knotted to his right hand. He did not lift his head when the iron bell above the door fractured the quiet. Footsteps struck the warped floorboards. Deliberate. Wet-soled. Familiar in the way only certain rhythms ever are. He eased the towel loose. The fibers trembled. “You missed the eight o’clock slot.” She peeled a soaked wool coat from her shoulders, letting it drop to the counter with a heavy thud. Shoulder-length black hair stuck to her temples. Her eyes, bright as shattered slate, scanned the wall-mounted charts before finding his. A thin line formed at the corner of her mouth. “Yu-Fei added express runs. I had to reroute through the canal district.” Silas laid the towel on the rack. The copper pipes clanked behind the taps. He stepped away from the service well, weighting his left leg as the joints complained. The limp had settled into his gait, permanent and unforgiving. He navigated toward the back booth, vinyl seats creaking under his descent. The leather sighed. He tucked his hands into the open front of his sweater. “Eat yet?” “Toast from a bodega near Westminster.” She slid onto the bench opposite him, crossing her legs. Water dripped from her cuffs onto the toe of her boots. “How long has this place operated without changing hands?” “Long enough to watch the pavement contractors resurface the same curb twice.” He rested his forearms on the table, knuckles resting near a constellation of faded ink. Gray threads burned through his auburn hair, mirroring the beard he kept meticulously trimmed. Deep fissures bracketed his eyes. Fine lines etched his forehead. He tapped the silver ring against the wood. Click. Click. “Eleven years. Time dissolves when you stop tracking calendar pages.” She rubbed her left wrist. The crescent scar stood pale against damp skin, raised and smooth. “You used to log everything. Departure windows. Train schedules. Weather fronts. You’d recite them until my teeth ache.” “I confused logistics with armor.” He lifted his gaze, hazel irises catching the neon bleed. “Prague taught me that precision shatters on impact. You bend or you break. I broke.” She drew the chipped mug he had already poured toward her center. Whiskey caught the light, thick and amber. Steam rose in lazy ribbons. She breathed it in. “I’m managing. The apartment drafts, but I stack rugs along the skirting boards. Mother sends those suffocating law journals disguised as birthday cards. Father asks about my coursework every third week. Eva checks in when headlines turn violent. It’s predictable.” “Predictability masks panic.” He leaned forward, elbows digging into the scarred surface. “You stopped answering the flat phone. Canceled the grocery deliveries. Vanished from the stairwell entirely. Ninety days passed before I confirmed you weren’t murdered, just finished pretending.” “The receiver vibrated against my ribs for a year.” Her voice flattened, consonants sharpening. “I couldn’t endure hearing my own voice bouncing off plaster. Not after Evan.” She kept her eyes locked on the liquid surface. “He claimed ownership like it was a birthright. Left marks that mapped continents across my collarbone. I exchanged one locked door for another upstairs. Silas, I navigate blind half the time.” He extended his hand across the table. His palm hovered near her wrist before settling flat against the scarred ridge. Calloused skin dragged lightly over hers. “You delivered four hundred packages today. You memorized sewer grates and alley widths from Bloomsbury to Bermondsey. You feed a furnace meant to stay cold. That isn’t blindness. That’s recalibration.” She withdrew her arm, the movement abrupt. “Recalibration leaves fractures.” She braced her hands on the tabletop, nails pressing pale ridges into the varnish. “Do you remember Bute Park? We sat on that rusted railing overlooking the river. You swore we’d outrun every shadow chasing us. I swallowed it whole.” “We sprinted too far ahead.” His tone lost its former edge, fraying at the seams. He dragged a thumb across his own knuckles, wearing down invisible ridges. “Speed masquerades as escape. It merely truncates the horizon.” Rain escalated, hammering the corrugated tin roof like scattered shot. Headlights swept through the fogged window, carving temporary slashes across the pinned photographs and annotated street grids. Faded latitude lines. Smudged checkpoint markers. Silas tracked the illumination washing over his face. “An archive request arrived last autumn. Cross-referenced aliases. Former directors hunting stray assets. I fed them a sanitized ledger.” “They bought it?” “Compliance costs nothing. Verification does.” He rotated the whiskey glass, watching viscosity cling to the crystal. “Incinerate the files before dawn. Collect the residue in a mason jar. Bury it under the floorboards. Tell yourself the papers never existed.” She released a slow, controlled exhale. Frost crystallized on the rim of her mug. “You should have knocked. When the boots pounded up the stairs last December. When I lugged cardboard cases through the lobby instead of waiting for morning.” Her fingers gripped the table edge, tendons standing taut. “I whispered your name. Once. Into the corridor.” He shut his eyes. Masseter muscles pulsed beneath his jawline. “Footsteps crossed the landing. Seven paces. Paused at your threshold. Static followed.” He reopened his eyes, hazel darkening to wet stone. “I anchored myself to the service staircase. Ignited a single match in the taproom. Constructed rationales like brickwork. Convincing everyone except myself.” “Why hesitate at the top of the stairs?” Her voice thinned, wire-tight. “You held master keys. You mapped every contingency.” “Contingencies fracture families cleaner than chaos does.” He reclined, vinyl protesting the shift. Neon reflected in his pupils, electrocuting the irises. “You requested a full inventory of my deceptions. I compiled them. Eight. Thirteen. Twenty-two. Numbers piled like cordwood in a trench. I refused to read you the final tally.” She stared across the narrow gap, temporal layers collapsing into the cramped booth. Ice clattered inside a distant mixing tin. Sound mimicked a reversed metronome. She dragged a damp palm across her thighs, fabric darkening in uneven patches. “I miss the version of you who didn’t pocket spent casings as paperweights.” “That iteration dissolved in European drift.” He struck the silver ring against the wood, tempo decelerating. “Remaining infrastructure features discounted spirits and vigilance over refuse collectors hauling debris into drains. You demanded transparency. I supplied it. Cracked. Splintered. Exposed.” A siren pitched upward three blocks away, frequency stretching until it surrendered to ambient noise. Rory retrieved a crumpled slip from her coat interior, flattened it against the table. Thermal print held cooling digits and a stamped hour. “Golden Empress locks doors at midnight. Thirty-eight minutes remain before I ascend the rear staircase.” He examined the paper, then her face. Jawline angles had hardened. Posture maintained a rigid alignment, the kind quenched in restricted environments. He observed the adolescent sharing filtered tobacco behind the athletics pitch, the adult hauling luggage through pre-dawn corridors, the woman occupying the booth now. All iterations superimposed, merging into the low luminance. “Ascend gradually.” “Clarify.” “The wooden steps decay from the foundation. Distribute pressure evenly. Allow the timber to register weight before committing to the next tread.” He slid the whiskey pitcher toward her border, glass grinding against oak grain. “Consume the remainder.” She tilted the vessel, drawing whiskey through her lips in a continuous stream. Heat registered along her esophagus. She lowered the ceramic to the table with a muted strike. Fingers lingered on the chipped edge near her thumbnail. Beyond the glass, precipitation softened, leaving asphalt glossy and ventilated. Neon stuttered across exposed joists, projecting elongated silhouettes that collected around their footwear. He extracted a tarnished skeleton key from his breast pocket. Worn fabric identified the unit. Flat 3B. He positioned the metal beside the receipt. Surface tension fractured the overhead illumination, projecting a slender reflection across the wood grain. “Retain possession. Mitigate administrative escalation.” Her fingers suspended above the metal. Atmospheric density increased, saturated with deferred acknowledgments and postponed reckonings. She monitored his phalanges tighten against the tabletop, ligaments revealing structural geometry beneath pallid dermis. The refrigeration unit engaged, transmitting vibrations through the subfloor. Distant plumbing contracted. Neither participant altered position.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:26:43.5Z" 9/2/2026, 3:26:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"fractured"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"predictable"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"navigate"
count1
11
word"crystal"
count1
12
word"crystallized"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"constructed"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"footsteps"
2"familiar"
3"trembled"
4"shattered"
5"scanned"
6"navigated"
7"etched"
8"predictable"
9"vibrated"
10"navigate"
11"crystal"
12"crystallized"
13"pulsed"
14"constructed"
15"weight"
16"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1412
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount861
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Water1
Gray1
Neon2
Silas3
persons
0"Water"
1"Gray"
2"Neon"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1412
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
95.24% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean47.07
std22.75
cv0.483
sampleLengths
0120
16
261
367
436
571
634
730
868
939
1067
1156
1250
1336
1460
153
1639
1757
1853
1920
2050
2151
2239
2353
2456
251
2638
2761
2843
2947
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences123
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.017321016166281754
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003464203233256351
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean11.48
std7.73
cv0.674
sampleLengths
015
119
26
313
414
513
616
75
81
91
109
115
123
136
1419
157
1613
1710
1812
197
207
2115
2210
2312
243
2511
262
2716
2811
299
3027
3114
325
335
348
351
361
3710
385
3911
4018
4115
4215
4312
447
455
464
4740
4812
4927
97.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5934959349593496
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners73
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences91
matches
0"He did not lift his"
1"He eased the towel loose."
2"She peeled a soaked wool"
3"Her eyes, bright as shattered"
4"He stepped away from the"
5"He navigated toward the back"
6"He tucked his hands into"
7"She slid onto the bench"
8"He rested his forearms on"
9"He tapped the silver ring"
10"She rubbed her left wrist."
11"He lifted his gaze, hazel"
12"She drew the chipped mug"
13"She breathed it in."
14"He leaned forward, elbows digging"
15"Her voice flattened, consonants sharpening"
16"She kept her eyes locked"
17"He extended his hand across"
18"His palm hovered near her"
19"She withdrew her arm, the"
ratio0.462
47.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences91
matches
0"Rain drummed against the soot-stained"
1"Brass footrails gleamed where decades"
2"Silas worked a linen towel"
3"The cloth snagged on the"
4"He did not lift his"
5"Footsteps struck the warped floorboards."
6"He eased the towel loose."
7"The fibers trembled."
8"She peeled a soaked wool"
9"Shoulder-length black hair stuck to"
10"Her eyes, bright as shattered"
11"A thin line formed at"
12"Silas laid the towel on"
13"The copper pipes clanked behind"
14"He stepped away from the"
15"The limp had settled into"
16"He navigated toward the back"
17"The leather sighed."
18"He tucked his hands into"
19"She slid onto the bench"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Neon stuttered across exposed joists, projecting elongated silhouettes that collected around their footwear."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"He rested, knuckles resting near a constellation of faded ink"
1"He leaned, elbows digging into the scarred surface"
2"Her voice flattened, consonants sharpening"
3"Her fingers gripped, tendons standing taut"
4"He reopened, hazel darkening to wet stone"
5"He reclined, vinyl protesting the shift"
6"He struck, tempo decelerating"
7"He slid, glass grinding against oak grain"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.5002%