| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 80.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1501 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1501 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "stark" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "simmering" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "marble" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "glistening" | | 15 | "resolve" | | 16 | "fractured" | | 17 | "footsteps" | | 18 | "echoes" | | 19 | "whisper" | | 20 | "crystalline" | | 21 | "vibrated" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "clenched fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 229 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 229 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1501 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The roots drink deeply here, Isolde murmured." | | 1 | "They only notice movement when you run, Nyx whispered." | | 2 | "Visitors tread loudly in Dymas, he announced." |
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| 96.70% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1501 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 14 | | Nyx | 10 | | Dymas | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Carter | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Lavender | 3 | | Heat | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Veil" | | 6 | "Heat" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.967 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1501 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 28.32 | | std | 17.14 | | cv | 0.605 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 37 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 65 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 38 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 229 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 309 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 229 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1504 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.02925531914893617 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011968085106382979 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 229 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 229 | | mean | 6.55 | | std | 4.18 | | cv | 0.637 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 72.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4585152838427948 | | totalSentences | 229 | | uniqueOpeners | 105 | |
| 49.26% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "Then walk hungry." | | 1 | "Then she followed." | | 2 | "Somewhere deep in the cavern," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her thumb against" | | 1 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 2 | "She paused beneath a branch" | | 3 | "She kept her right hand" | | 4 | "His voice carried on the" | | 5 | "He collects desire." | | 6 | "She moved without sound." | | 7 | "She brushed them off." | | 8 | "Her fingers closed around the" | | 9 | "They only notice movement when" | | 10 | "I’m not running anywhere." | | 11 | "They chopped vegetables that wept" | | 12 | "They kneaded dough that stretched" | | 13 | "They taste what they cook." | | 14 | "Her silver hair lifted." | | 15 | "She raised both hands, palms" | | 16 | "His face carried the smooth," | | 17 | "You bring cool air to" | | 18 | "She kept her stance relaxed," | | 19 | "Her left wrist scar caught" |
| | ratio | 0.187 | |
| 68.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 159 | | totalSentences | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "The threshold dissolved beneath their" | | 1 | "Warmth hit first, thick and" | | 2 | "Amber light filtered through a" | | 3 | "Rory stepped forward, the cobblestones" | | 4 | "She pressed her thumb against" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed against" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted beside her, solid" | | 7 | "The Shade’s violet eyes scanned" | | 8 | "Leaves trembled though no wind" | | 9 | "Isolde walked ahead." | | 10 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 11 | "She paused beneath a branch" | | 12 | "The roots drink deeply here," | | 13 | "Lavender eyes reflected the weeping" | | 14 | "Everything grows toward hunger." | | 15 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 16 | "The leather creaked." | | 17 | "She kept her right hand" | | 18 | "The metal stayed unnaturally cold," | | 19 | "Hunger feeds armies." |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 49.26% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "To the left, terraced gardens" | | 1 | "To the right, a winding" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 86.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped forward, the cobblestones giving way to loamy soil that yielded under her weight." | | 1 | "One split open, releasing a plume of steam that smelled of black pepper and roasting garlic." | | 2 | "Mortarless stone walls rose thirty feet high, wrapped in ivy that bore tiny, translucent berries." | | 3 | "Arranged across its surface: a loaf of bread crackling with salt crystals, a bowl of stew thick with glistening fat, a goblet filled with a liquid that shifted …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |