Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HC3WZFZ0K6PQKF1ZHMQGWD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.000929
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Brass turned. Deadbolts slid back with three heavy clicks. The door pushed outward and caught on a charcoal shoulder. I stopped breathing for a fraction of a second before recognition dragged me back to the present. Lucien stood in the threshold, water dripping from his jacket onto the rotting mat. Brick Lane streetlight bled through the narrow window above the peephole, catching the platinum sweep of his slicked-back hair and the impossible contrast of his eyes. Amber on the left. Black on the right. Years hadn’t blurred the angles of his face. They had carved them deeper. He stepped inside without asking. Boots scuffed linoleum that smelled of cumin and damp plaster. The flat shrank around us. Shelves bowed under stacked law casebooks, annotated political treatises, and rolled parchment tied with fraying twine. Ptolemy vaulted from the windowsill and melted under a mountain of discarded manuscripts near the radiator. You picked the locks. His voice carried the low friction of Marseille wind over stone. You taught me how. I closed the door behind him. The deadbolts fell back into place with final thuds. I leaned against the wood, crossing my arms. The crescent scar on my wrist pricked warm against the seam of my sleeve. I rubbed it once. Twice. Keeping my posture loose, keeping my voice level. What are you doing here, Lucien? Marseille demanded answers. He ran a leather-gloved hand along a crowded shelf, displacing a stack of dog-eared municipal records. Dust coated his fingertips. I delivered them. Then I followed the trail. To me. I pushed off the doorframe and walked toward the kitchen counter. Dropped a canvas tote beside a chipped kettle. Canned tomatoes. Cheap red wine. A bruised pear. You track people for a living. Why risk exposure by walking into a flat on Brick Lane? Because the algorithm failed. He set his ivory cane against the wall. The handle gleamed under the flickering fluorescent strip. Because data doesn’t account for habit. He turned slowly, charcoal trousers swallowing the dim light. You never throw things away until you’ve read them twice. You keep receipts in shoeboxes. You alphabetize takeout menus. You build fortresses out of routine so you don’t have to feel the ground shifting underneath you. I opened a drawer and pulled out a knife. Slid it across the counter. Didn’t look at him. Cut the pear in half. The blade caught the light. Eat or leave. Choose. He didn’t move toward the fruit. He moved toward me. Three steps. Stopped close enough that I felt the heat radiating through his jacket. Close enough to see the faint silver line splitting his left eyebrow. Close enough to catch the sharp blend of old paper, citrus oil, and something darker simmering beneath. You always threatened violence when you lost control. He tilted his head. Amber eye locked onto mine. Black eye tracked the knife edge. Did you think I wouldn’t notice? I didn’t lose control. I exercised jurisdiction. I sliced the pear. Pushed half toward him. Half toward the chipped plate. This flat belongs to me now. I work shifts. I pay rent. I don’t entertain ghosts wearing Italian wool. I stopped being a ghost the day you deleted my number. His voice dropped. Roughened. Stepped into my personal space. Until his chest nearly brushed mine. Until the air turned thick with tur smoke and suppressed years. You told me architecture required load-bearing walls. Blueprints. Stress tests. Then you tore out the foundation before I poured the concrete. I saw the invoices. I found the shipping manifests hidden in your briefcase. Student visas routed through Heathrow. Cargo containers marked educational supplies carrying minors bound for ports outside UK jurisdiction. I watched you pack your coat while pretending to check email. I watched you calculate exit velocity. You counted seconds instead of listening. He reached out. Didn’t touch my face. Hovered his palm near my collarbone. Heat bloomed through the cotton of my shirt. I handed you a choice. An honest conversation about bloodlines, debts, and territories that demand fealty. You walked away because silence terrified you more than absence. Silence was the answer you gave when I asked if you planned to stay. I lowered the knife. Set it on the cutting board. Metal rang against wood. I spent ten months sleeping with one eye open because you treated my life like a temporary waypoint. You speak four languages to negotiate borders. You couldn’t construct a single sentence to explain why you were leaving before you arrived. Fear makes architects of cowards. He closed the remaining distance. Fingers threaded through the straight black hair at my nape. Grip firm. Anchoring. I knew you’d demand permanence. I knew you’d want daylight. I operate in basements and back alleys where sunlight ruins ledgers. I gave you dignity. You mistook it for desertion. Dignity doesn’t leave your sister’s friend on a dock in Calais. I pulled away. Just enough to break the contact. Turned toward the sink. Ran tap water. Washed my hands. Cold stream biting through skin. I checked her social feeds before she vanished. Last post showed her holding a clipboard outside terminal six. Security badge reflecting overhead fluorescents. I traced the badge number through customs logs. Found a signature stamped in red ink matching your father’s corporate crest. Avaros court seals documents before execution. He set the cane upright. Ivory handle clicking against tile. Blood owes blood. Contracts bind descendants whether they sign or bleed. Your sister’s friend accessed restricted cargo because someone in Whitechapel owed money to a syndicate laundering shipments through educational charities. I intercepted the routing. Moved the files. Pulled strings in Interpol and underground networks alike. She boarded a private charter to Lisbon three weeks after you left Cardiff. Alive. Working freelance translation contracts. Breathing because I rerouted the manifest. I stopped rinsing. Turned off the tap. Water dripped onto porcelain. You never told me. I dried my hands on a faded dish towel. Tucked wet ends under my waistband. Looked at him. Really looked. Traced the sharp line of his jaw. The platinum fall of his hair. The way his heterochromia shifted when he angled his head toward the streetlamp. You handled it alone. Like always. Because consulting me would mean dragging a pre-law student into infernal arbitration. Because trusting me meant admitting I belonged in your future. He stepped forward. Pressed both palms flat against the counter on either side of my hips. Caging me in without touching. Forcing my spine flush against the backsplash. Glass mugs rattled in the rack above us. Ptolemy yowled from beneath the refrigerator and bolted. Stay out of Marseille. Stay off Avaros soil. Keep your head down while I clean the board. I didn’t ask permission. I enforced protection. You violated my autonomy. I lifted my chin. Let my bright blue eyes lock onto his mismatched gaze. I have three deadbolts. A cat that bites throats. A mind trained to dismantle contracts clause by clause. I don’t need a half-demon fixer playing shepherd. Autonomy looks fragile when bloodhounds circle your neighborhood. His breath warmed my mouth. Inches apart. Heartbeats syncing against ribcages. The flat pressed inward. Books leaning. Scrolls unspooling. Paper dust settling on his shoulders like snow. You think I care about propriety? You think I waited eleven months to watch you sleep through train schedules and steam rising from takeaway containers just to hand you a warning? I came back because the ledger flagged Brick Lane. Because your name surfaced next to missing persons. Because I couldn’t breathe when the database showed your flat mapped as a potential extraction point. I didn’t panic. I documented. I filed reports. I prepared contingencies. I kept functioning. I kept moving forward while you played guardian angel in the dark. I turned off the faucet. Let water pool in the sink. Reached back. Caught his wrist. Felt the rapid pulse beneath synthetic fabric. Felt the callouses. Felt the exact same electric current that had ruined me months ago. Stop performing martyrdom. It’s exhausting. Performance implies theater. His thumb brushed my inner wrist. Traced the crescent scar. Light touch. Deliberate. I play chess while you memorize statutes. I intercept threats before they breach perimeter. I burn bridges to keep fire from reaching your bedroom floor. You call it performance. I call it survival calculus. He dropped his forehead to mine. Bones pressing. Eyelashes brushing. Eyes sealing shut. Amber absorbing black. Black mirroring amber. Tell me you didn’t miss the quiet. Tell me you didn’t feel the floor drop when I stopped answering calls. I missed the coffee. I missed the terrible croissants. I missed the way you argued philosophy in French while stirring sugar into porcelain cups. I didn’t miss the suffocation. I didn’t miss the certainty that I ranked behind duty. I opened my eyes. Let them drift shut. Nudged his hand away from my wrist. Stepped back. Put solid space between us. Again. Pack your bags. Leave before sunrise. I handle the syndicate. I handle the court. I handle whatever ledger you forgot to mention. You handle nothing if Avaros moves you first. He straightened. Adjusted cuffs. Straightened lapels. Reclaimed his height. Reclaimed his composure. Reclaimed the room. The courier system operates on recursive verification. They’ll test the perimeter. They’ll send runners. They’ll burn flats to map blind spots. You need allies with clearance. Clearances I possess. Clearances I traded for a decade of favors. Clearances that keep humans alive in territories designed to digest them. He reached into his coat. Pulled out a slim envelope. Dropped it on the counter. Paper sliding past the knife block. Past the half-cut pear. Past my trembling fingers. Sign the authorization. Register as my liaison. Let me embed you inside the rotation. Watch the syndicate rotate goods through Canary Wharf storage units. Track the Avaros couriers. Map the hierarchy. Do it with me. Or die protecting a flat surrounded by strangers. I stared at the envelope. Cream stock. Wax seal pressed in crimson. My name typed in crisp Helvetica. Beneath it sat a blank signature line. A deadline circled in red ink. Seventy-two hours. I didn’t reach for a pen. Didn’t pick up the seal. Didn’t break the silence. The kettle began to whistle. High. Shrilling. Piercing through cramped walls. I ignored it. Let steam escape through the spout. Let condensation fog the windows overlooking Brick Lane. Let rain begin falling in heavy sheets against the glass. Choose. His voice cracked the final barrier. Together or apart. In daylight or shadow. Forever or fractured. Pick a lane, Rory. Before the runners arrive. Before the ledger flips. Before I stop knocking and start burning doors off their hinges.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:34:33.207Z" 9/2/2026, 3:34:33 PM
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tokens_completion7764
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1780
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1780
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"simmering"
count1
2
word"calculate"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"traced"
count3
5
word"porcelain"
count2
6
word"database"
count1
7
word"potential"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"synthetic"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"simmering"
2"calculate"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"porcelain"
6"database"
7"potential"
8"pulse"
9"synthetic"
10"electric"
11"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences292
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences292
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences292
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1780
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1780
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Lane4
Marseille3
Lucien2
Brick4
Italian1
Heathrow1
Calais1
Whitechapel1
Interpol1
Lisbon1
Cardiff1
Avaros4
French1
Canary1
Wharf1
Helvetica1
Rory1
Amber3
Black3
You22
Didn4
Let7
Felt3
Reclaimed3
Clearances3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Avaros"
2"Rory"
3"Amber"
4"You"
places
0"Lane"
1"Marseille"
2"Brick"
3"Heathrow"
4"Calais"
5"Interpol"
6"Lisbon"
7"Cardiff"
8"French"
9"Canary"
globalScore0.882
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1780
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences292
matches(empty)
77.04% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean61.38
std25.76
cv0.42
sampleLengths
036
161
252
315
460
531
646
771
832
953
1029
1139
1258
1348
1453
1568
1653
1778
1886
1979
2078
2144
2299
2369
2489
2584
26143
2786
2840
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences292
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs387
matches
0"were leaving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences292
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1787
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.019026301063234472
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0016787912702853946
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences292
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences292
mean6.1
std3.98
cv0.653
sampleLengths
02
17
210
317
414
526
64
74
88
95
105
1110
125
1316
1416
154
1611
174
186
199
208
2114
224
231
248
256
263
2716
284
293
305
312
3211
338
342
353
363
376
3811
394
408
418
426
439
4410
455
464
4717
489
495
60.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats54
diversityRatio0.476027397260274
totalSentences292
uniqueOpeners139
51.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences258
matches
0"Then I followed the trail."
1"Then you tore out the"
2"Just enough to break the"
3"Forever or fractured."
ratio0.016
55.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount106
totalSentences258
matches
0"I stopped breathing for a"
1"They had carved them deeper."
2"He stepped inside without asking."
3"You picked the locks."
4"His voice carried the low"
5"You taught me how."
6"I closed the door behind"
7"I leaned against the wood,"
8"I rubbed it once."
9"He ran a leather-gloved hand"
10"I delivered them."
11"I pushed off the doorframe"
12"You track people for a"
13"He set his ivory cane"
14"He turned slowly, charcoal trousers"
15"You never throw things away"
16"You keep receipts in shoeboxes."
17"You alphabetize takeout menus."
18"You build fortresses out of"
19"I opened a drawer and"
ratio0.411
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount161
totalSentences258
matches
0"Deadbolts slid back with three"
1"The door pushed outward and"
2"I stopped breathing for a"
3"Lucien stood in the threshold,"
4"Brick Lane streetlight bled through"
5"Amber on the left."
6"Years hadn’t blurred the angles"
7"They had carved them deeper."
8"He stepped inside without asking."
9"Boots scuffed linoleum that smelled"
10"The flat shrank around us."
11"Shelves bowed under stacked law"
12"Ptolemy vaulted from the windowsill"
13"You picked the locks."
14"His voice carried the low"
15"You taught me how."
16"I closed the door behind"
17"The deadbolts fell back into"
18"I leaned against the wood,"
19"The crescent scar on my"
ratio0.624
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount9
totalSentences258
matches
0"Because the algorithm failed."
1"Because data doesn’t account for"
2"Because consulting me would mean"
3"Because trusting me meant admitting"
4"Because your name surfaced next"
5"Because I couldn’t breathe when"
6"Before the runners arrive."
7"Before the ledger flips."
8"Before I stop knocking and"
ratio0.035
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"An honest conversation about bloodlines, debts, and territories that demand fealty."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.9506%