Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HC5RHCJ5SH71DWCVKXBTS6

Run Details

Duration:
7m 38s
Cost:
$0.108750
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door dropped its colour onto the wet street and carried it into the Raven's Nest when Aurora Carter pushed inside. Rain ran from her straight black hair to the collar of her delivery jacket. The Golden Empress bag knocked against her hip, grease darkening the paper. She wanted the back stairs, a dry shirt, ten minutes before the next order. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar with a towel over his shoulder. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low bulbs, and the silver signet ring on his right hand made a small hard sound against the glass he polished. He lifted his chin toward the far end of the bar. A woman sat there with her back to the maps on the wall. Charcoal coat. Hands folded around a tumbler of gin. A leather briefcase upright beside her stool. Aurora’s grip tightened on the bag. The woman turned. Her face kept the sharp line of the girl who used to lean out of a Cardiff window and shout at buses, but she had cut her hair close to her jaw and let the brown return. No purple streaks. No bitten nails. A thin gold band sat on her left hand. "Eva?" The glass lowered in Eva’s hand. "Rory." Silas set the polished glass down. His hazel eyes moved from one woman to the other. "You two know the way to my back room better than the menu." Eva’s mouth formed a smile that stopped at her lips. "I came in for the rain." "The rain in Soho has a way of lasting." Silas wiped a circle on the bar. "The shelf’s unlocked." Aurora looked at the bookshelf beside the old photographs of bombed-out streets. Its edge held the faint scuff of shoes where it swung inward. She had delivered food through the front door more times than she cared to count and used that passage to carry a frightened man out through the alley. She had never brought the past into it. "You don’t have to." Eva’s voice had lowered into a register Aurora did not remember. Controlled. Measured. The voice of someone who charged by the hour. "I’m on a break." Aurora set the delivery bag on the service shelf. "Five minutes." Eva picked up her briefcase. Silas moved his weight off his bad leg and opened the bookshelf with one hand. The hinges gave no sound. Inside, the hidden room held a round table, three chairs, a wall map with pins removed, and a single lamp under a green shade. He left them and let the shelf close. The air smelled of paper dust and cold stone. Eva placed the briefcase on the floor. She remained standing until Aurora took the chair nearest the door. "You work here." "I deliver for Golden Empress. I live upstairs." "Upstairs." "Over the bar." Eva’s gaze moved over the room, the map, the water-stained ceiling. "You hated stairs." "I don’t mind them now." The lamp threw a circle of light between them. "You look—" Eva began. "Don’t." Eva closed her mouth. Her fingers touched the edge of the briefcase handle, then drew back. Aurora sat with her hands in her lap. The crescent scar on her left wrist showed when her sleeve rode up. She left it bare. "You’re a long way from Cardiff." "I’m in court here. Family division. I came down last night." "Family division. You became a solicitor." "Barrister." A short laugh escaped Aurora before she caught it. "Of course." Eva’s cheeks coloured. "You don’t have to make it into something." Aurora kept her voice flat. "Of course. You argued with every lecturer, every barman, every bus driver. You would have made a living out of arguing." "I wanted to be useful." "You were useful." The word landed between them. Eva looked at the lamp. "I wasn’t." Aurora leaned back. The chair creaked. "What do you want, Eva?" "I saw the sign from the street. I didn’t know this was your place." "You came to London and happened into Silas’ bar." "I didn’t know Silas." "Everyone knows Silas." Eva’s mouth tightened. "I saw the green neon. I needed five minutes out of the rain. Then I saw the delivery bag." Aurora studied her. The coat was expensive. The nails were clean and short. A faint line crossed her brow where none had existed when they split chips on the steps of the law library. Time had not passed over Eva. It had rebuilt her. "You married." Eva’s hand moved to the ring. "Yes." "To whom?" "His name is Daniel. He teaches history." "You married a teacher." "He’s kind." The word kind filled the room with old smoke. Aurora remembered Eva mocking kind men in pubs, calling kindness sugar on a hook. Eva looked down at her hands. "Do you have children?" Eva’s throat moved. "A daughter. She’s two." Aurora felt the shape of the room change. The girl who set fire to a stolen shopping bag in a Tesco car park now had a daughter and a husband named Daniel and a briefcase with two silver clasps. "What’s her name?" "Mae." "Mae. Your mam’s name." "Yes." Eva pressed her thumb against the side of her palm. Aurora remembered the gesture from exam weeks, from nights when Eva’s mother called from the hospital. The same pressure. The same effort to stay seated. "You didn’t answer the phone." The room narrowed. Aurora heard the murmur of the bar beyond the shelf, the scrape of a stool, the low clink of bottles. "I called you. The night you left." Aurora’s hand tightened in her lap. "You know I did." "I called from the petrol station on Newport Road. I had ten pounds and one shoe with a broken strap. I called you six times." Eva’s face lost colour under the lamp. "I know." "You know." "I saw the calls after. I was at the hospital with Mam. She’d taken a turn. I left my phone in the corridor to charge, and when I came back—" Eva stopped. Her hands flattened on the table. "I called you back. You didn’t answer." "I was on the bus." "Then I called the next day." "You called the next day." "And the day after." Aurora’s jaw tightened. "I threw the SIM out at Victoria. I didn’t know who had your number. I didn’t know who had his." Eva flinched. "Evan never had my number." "He had mine." Silence filled the hidden room. The map on the wall held empty pinholes. Eva opened the briefcase. Her movements stayed measured. She drew out a phone, stopped, and put it back. Instead she took a small envelope, creased at the corners, and set it on the table. "I kept these." Aurora did not touch it. "What are they?" "The messages you sent me before you changed your number. I printed them when my phone broke. I don’t know why." "You printed them." "I needed them to be real." Aurora’s fingers curled around her own wrist. The scar stood pale against her skin. She remembered the messages. Sent from a cracked screen in a bathroom with the lock broken. Some had begged. Some had apologised. One had read, If I get to London, I’ll be someone else. Eva’s voice dropped. "I should have come to the petrol station." "You were with your mother." "I should have called Silas. I should have called your father. I should have gotten in a cab and dragged you off that bus." "You didn’t know." "I knew enough." The words sat stripped of performance. Aurora looked at the envelope. The paper had softened from years in a bag or pocket. It had travelled with Eva through courtrooms and trains and rain. That thought carried more weight than apology. Silas tapped the outside of the bookshelf two times. Aurora felt the sound in her spine before the shelf opened. He stood in the gap with a tray holding two glasses of water and a plate of peanuts. His left leg took less weight than his right. He set the tray down. "The delivery app won’t wait forever." Aurora looked at the phone in her pocket. It had buzzed two times while the shelf closed. Eva did not move. "You still do law work?" "No." "You passed your exams." "I deliver food." "That isn’t the same." "It pays." Eva’s eyes flashed. "You don’t have to settle for paying." "I do what I can." "You can do more." Aurora let her gaze move to the briefcase, the ring, the envelope. "You don’t get to walk in here and hand me my old life." "I’m not handing you anything. I’m saying you survived." The word landed hard. Aurora’s breath caught, but her face stayed still. Survived was not a ribbon. It was a receipt. Eva leaned forward. "I work with women who leave. I see them every day. I know what it costs. I know what happens when someone stands at a petrol station with one broken shoe and no one comes." Aurora’s hand went still on her wrist. "You came after the bus left." "I know." "You were supposed to be the one." "I know." The room held them in its close green light. Aurora looked at the envelope. Outside, the bar noise rose and fell. Silas had gone back to his glasses and his signet ring and his watch over the door. Eva reached into her coat and produced a card. White, plain, with a phone number printed in dark ink. She laid it beside the envelope. "I’m in London until Friday. If you want to talk, call. If you want to throw it away, throw it away." Aurora did not take the card. Eva stood. She fastened her coat. At the door of the hidden room, she stopped. "I named her Mae because Mam told me you helped her with the benefits forms when I was angry and not listening." Aurora’s throat closed. "I didn’t remember that until after she died. I should have." The shelf opened again. Eva stepped into the bar. The green light from the front window washed over her shoulder and vanished as the bookshelf closed. Aurora sat alone with the envelope, the card, and two glasses of water. The delivery phone buzzed against her thigh. She did not answer it. Her thumb moved across the crescent scar in two small passes until the paper edge of the envelope touched her knuckles.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:35:34.196Z" 9/2/2026, 3:35:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1746
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1746
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"measured"
count2
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"charged"
2"weight"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences135
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences220
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1746
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions76
wordCount1145
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.62
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora29
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Eva30
Controlled1
Tesco1
Daniel1
London1
Silas6
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Eva"
4"Daniel"
5"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"Tesco"
3"London"
globalScore0.19
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1746
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences220
matches
0"used that passage"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs143
mean12.21
std14.03
cv1.149
sampleLengths
066
150
229
36
455
51
66
71
816
913
1010
116
1219
1360
1426
1515
165
1752
189
1918
203
218
221
233
2411
253
265
279
284
291
3016
3125
326
3311
346
351
369
372
383
398
405
4121
425
433
4410
452
466
475
4814
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1148
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.008710801393728223
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences220
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences220
mean7.94
std6.61
cv0.832
sampleLengths
026
114
212
314
412
527
611
713
82
97
107
116
123
1337
143
153
169
171
186
191
206
2110
2213
2310
246
2516
263
2712
2812
2928
308
3115
321
331
349
3513
362
375
3815
395
4024
418
429
437
4411
453
468
471
483
4911
46.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.21818181818181817
totalSentences220
uniqueOpeners48
26.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"Instead she took a small"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences128
matches
0"She wanted the back stairs,"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"He lifted his chin toward"
3"Her face kept the sharp"
4"His hazel eyes moved from"
5"Its edge held the faint"
6"She had delivered food through"
7"She had never brought the"
8"He left them and let"
9"She remained standing until Aurora"
10"Her fingers touched the edge"
11"She left it bare."
12"It had rebuilt her."
13"Her hands flattened on the"
14"Her movements stayed measured."
15"She drew out a phone,"
16"She remembered the messages."
17"It had travelled with Eva"
18"He stood in the gap"
19"His left leg took less"
ratio0.211
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences128
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rain ran from her straight"
2"The Golden Empress bag knocked"
3"She wanted the back stairs,"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
6"He lifted his chin toward"
7"A woman sat there with"
8"Hands folded around a tumbler"
9"A leather briefcase upright beside"
10"Aurora’s grip tightened on the"
11"The woman turned."
12"Her face kept the sharp"
13"A thin gold band sat"
14"The glass lowered in Eva’s"
15"Silas set the polished glass"
16"His hazel eyes moved from"
17"Eva’s mouth formed a smile"
18"Silas wiped a circle on"
19"Aurora looked at the bookshelf"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Eva’s mouth formed a smile that stopped at her lips."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0786%