Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HCEFMVMQKHF62FRHTB1ZJX

Run Details

Duration:
5m 8s
Cost:
$0.068890
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last bus rolled away from Richmond Park without Rory on it. She waited until its red tail lamps vanished around the bend and lifted her bicycle over the low chain between two gate posts. The frame knocked her shin. She bit down on the sting and pushed into the dark. The note in her jacket pocket had gone soft with damp. Its ink bled where her thumb had worried the edge. Bring the Heartstone to the oak ring. Come before the second chime. Come alone. No name. No signature. Only the scent of char and sugar that had clung to the paper and followed her from the flat above Silas’ bar to the park gates. Against her chest, the pendant warmed through her shirt. The deep crimson stone, no bigger than her thumbnail, sat on its silver chain and tapped her sternum with a pulse that did not match her heart. She had laughed at the first beat. By the third, she had put on shoes. By the tenth, she had left a half-eaten bowl of rice on the counter and a delivery bag still smelling of soy and steam. The path narrowed. Richmond Park spread around her in black shapes, and the city lights pooled low behind the trees. Rory walked with one hand on the handlebar and the other holding the note. The grass did not bend under the tyres. She stopped. The grass stood straight, each blade separate, each tip wet with no dew. A gate she did not remember closed behind her. The air changed. It carried the smell of wildflowers, thick and green, though January should have kept the ground bare. Ahead, the trees drew together into a ring. Oak trunks rose like pillars, their bark ridged and pale where moonlight found them. Between them stood older shapes, stones worn smooth, or roots grown hard as stone. Boundary markers. The Fae Grove. Rory set the bicycle down. It fell without a sound. She kept her hands open at her sides and stepped between the oaks. Wildflowers covered the clearing. Daisies, poppies, bluebells, and thin violet things with petals like paper shavings grew in one bright carpet. They faced her. Not toward the moon. Toward her. Their stems held no tremble. The clearing held no wind. “Right.” Her voice landed flat against the trees. “I’m here.” The words did not echo. They dropped into the flowers and stayed there. She pulled out her phone. The screen lit her fingers in cold blue. 23:58. The signal bars sat empty. No messages. No missed calls. The note had promised a second chime, and she had no idea where a chime might come from in a place that had swallowed the hum of London. She put the phone back. The pendant pulsed, hotter this time, a coin pressed under skin. A footstep sounded behind her. Rory turned. The bicycle lay where she had left it. The grass around it stood straight. No one stood beyond the ring. The oaks kept their places. “Hello?” The grove gave back nothing. She faced the centre of the clearing. The flowers had made a path she had not noticed before. It led to a split oak at the far side, its trunk opened into a black seam tall enough for a person. The Heartstone beat against her chest in two quick strokes. Rory did not move. A kettle began to boil somewhere under the ground. The sound came from the roots near her left foot, high and thin, the whistle of a kitchen kettle in the flat above Silas’ bar. She stepped away from it. The whistle stopped. In its place came the clatter of a wok, the shout of a cook calling an order, the sharp slap of a delivery bag being set on a counter. The Golden Empress at full rush. Every sound sat in the wrong direction. The wok hissed above her head. The cook called from below the split oak. “Funny.” Her hand closed around the pendant. The chain bit her neck. “I brought it.” The flowers turned their heads an inch. The phone in her pocket rang. Rory flinched. She stared at the pocket, then drew the phone out. The screen showed no caller. Only 23:58. It rang a second time, a long bright tone that belonged to a landline, not a mobile. She answered. “Rory.” The voice held her name with a weight that did not belong to speech. It had her mother’s cadence and Eva’s breath and none of their faces. “Who sent the note?” “You did.” The line held a wet quiet. “I didn’t send any note.” “You sent it.” The voice softened, and the softness wore her own accent. “You sent it.” She ended the call. The screen stayed dark. Her thumb pressed the side button. Nothing happened. The phone had become a cold rectangle of glass. The pendant burned. Rory lifted the chain over her head. The Heartstone hung in front of her, its crimson depth lit from inside by a glow that moved like something breathing underwater. The warmth spread down the silver links and into her fingers. The stone pulled toward the split oak. It did not sway. It leaned, attached to a wire she could not see. A shape passed between two oaks on her right. Tall. Straight black hair. Delivery jacket. Rory’s head snapped that way. The space held no one. One of the oak trunks wore a long scrape of white bark, fresh and damp. Another shape passed on her left. She turned. The clearing stayed empty. The flowers stayed turned toward her. The split oak waited at the end of the path. “Come out.” Her voice cracked on the second word. She cleared her throat. “Come out and show yourself.” “Come out.” The answer came from the split oak. It used her cracked voice, note for note. “Show yourself.” The ground under her shoes gave a small knock, someone tapped from below. Rory backed a step. Her heel touched something solid. She looked down. Her bicycle lay behind her, still on the grass. She had watched it lie at the edge of the grove. She had not moved it. The second bicycle had her saddle. Her lock. The scratch across the frame where she had hit a kerb in Cardiff at nineteen. Its front wheel turned, no wind touched it. “Two chimes.” The words came from the first bicycle’s bell. The bell had not rung. “Two chimes.” Rory looked at her phone. 23:58. She looked at the sky above the oaks. The moon hung in the same place it had occupied when she entered. The same thin branch crossed its face. The same cloud held still beside it. The pendant jerked in her hand. The split oak widened by a finger’s breadth. The black inside had no grain, no splinter, no depth. It took the moonlight and gave nothing back. A smell drifted from it, not rot, not earth. Clean laundry. Dish soap. The shampoo she kept in the flat above Silas’ bar. Her own scent, carried out of a place that had no door. “Bring the Heartstone.” The voice came from the trees and from her own throat half a beat after the trees spoke it. “Come before the second chime. Come alone.” “I am alone.” The grove answered with her laugh. It was the laugh she used when Eva teased her about taking the wrong turn near Camden. It came from under the wildflowers. It came from the split oak. It came from the white scrape on the oak trunk where the passing shape had gone. Rory took one step backward. The flowers closed around her shoe. She looked down. The daisies and bluebells had leaned over her trainer, their stems looped around the laces. The violet petals touched her ankle with no weight. They did not crush. They held. The pendant grew so hot that her hand jerked. The crimson glow spilled between her knuckles and lit the grass in red threads. Where the light touched the flowers, they pulled away. The path to the split oak opened. Beyond the black seam, a hand appeared. It was pale. Small. The sleeve belonged to her delivery jacket. The wrist bore a crescent-shaped scar. Rory’s lungs locked. The hand rested on the edge of the seam. The fingers tapped. The tap came from under her own feet. “Rory.” The voice in the oak used the exact shape of her name as she thought it inside her own skull. “Second chime.” From every oak in the ring, a bell of ice-thin sound rang. The hand reached toward her.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:40:20.004Z" 9/2/2026, 3:40:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her hand closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.091
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"echo"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences173
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1442
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1375
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory12
Heartstone3
January1
Fae1
Grove1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva2
Cardiff1
Camden1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"January"
3"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
6"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1442
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences187
matches
0"snapped that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean22.18
std21.84
cv0.984
sampleLengths
051
165
275
357
470
510
613
740
810
913
1068
115
122
1325
141
155
1650
174
1898
1915
207
216
2236
232
241
2527
264
272
286
295
3016
3125
323
3361
3415
355
3620
376
382
3920
4018
4119
4213
4312
4425
4531
4617
4741
486
4949
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs209
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences187
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount128
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.03125
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0078125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean7.71
std5.73
cv0.743
sampleLengths
012
123
25
311
411
510
67
75
82
92
102
1126
129
1327
147
158
1624
173
1817
1914
208
212
2213
239
243
2517
268
2714
2814
292
303
315
325
3313
344
3517
363
374
382
395
405
418
422
435
448
455
468
471
485
492
33.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats31
diversityRatio0.25405405405405407
totalSentences185
uniqueOpeners47
22.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"Only the scent of char"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences151
matches
0"She waited until its red"
1"She bit down on the"
2"Its ink bled where her"
3"She had laughed at the"
4"It carried the smell of"
5"It fell without a sound."
6"She kept her hands open"
7"They faced her."
8"Their stems held no tremble."
9"Her voice landed flat against"
10"They dropped into the flowers"
11"She pulled out her phone."
12"She put the phone back."
13"She faced the centre of"
14"It led to a split"
15"She stepped away from it."
16"Her hand closed around the"
17"She stared at the pocket,"
18"It rang a second time,"
19"It had her mother’s cadence"
ratio0.285
16.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount134
totalSentences151
matches
0"The last bus rolled away"
1"She waited until its red"
2"The frame knocked her shin."
3"She bit down on the"
4"The note in her jacket"
5"Its ink bled where her"
6"The deep crimson stone, no"
7"She had laughed at the"
8"The path narrowed."
9"Richmond Park spread around her"
10"Rory walked with one hand"
11"The grass did not bend"
12"The grass stood straight, each"
13"A gate she did not"
14"The air changed."
15"It carried the smell of"
16"Oak trunks rose like pillars,"
17"The Fae Grove."
18"Rory set the bicycle down."
19"It fell without a sound."
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The deep crimson stone, no bigger than her thumbnail, sat on its silver chain and tapped her sternum with a pulse that did not match her heart."
1"The Heartstone hung in front of her, its crimson depth lit from inside by a glow that moved like something breathing underwater."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The voice softened, and the softness wore her own accent"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.5268%