Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HCFZSQG8E63GVS81032Q5M

Run Details

Duration:
6m 16s
Cost:
$0.093508
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory found the gap in the iron fence where a hawthorn had forced the bars apart. The note in her fist had gone soft with damp. Above her, Richmond Park spread under a moon the colour of milk skin. She slipped through the opening and listened. No traffic. No wind. No distant bark from the houses along the edge of the common. The city stopped at the tree line. She touched the collar of her jacket. The Heartstone rested against her collarbone, thumbnail-sized, deep crimson, hung on the silver chain the unknown sender had left with it. The pendant had stayed cold all day. Twenty minutes from the bar it began to warm. Now it pulsed against her skin in time with her pulse. “The oak stones.” The words dropped into the dark without echo. The note had given her a time and no name. Midnight. The old boundary oaks. Bring the stone. Come alone. She had spent an hour telling herself it was a trick, then another hour remembering how the paper had smelled of the wet earth under Silas’ bar. Evan would have laughed at her for coming. Eva would have demanded she call the police. Rory had done neither. She had locked the flat above the bar, taken her delivery torch, and walked until the streetlights thinned. A path of crushed chalk led uphill between bracken. She followed it until the trees opened around a clearing. The standing stones waited there. Nine grey shapes rose from the grass, each no taller than her shoulder, each worn into a curve that put her in mind of a bent spine. Oak trees ringed them, their branches knit so thick that the moonlight reached the ground in thin threads. Wildflowers crowded the roots of the stones: bluebells, campion, foxglove. Their petals looked wet and new, and they bloomed in every season at once. Rory stopped at the edge of the clearing. “Midnight.” She lifted her phone. “It’s twenty-three fifty-six.” The screen showed no service. The battery symbol had dropped to a sliver. She had charged it before leaving. She stepped into the grove. The grass made no sound under her shoes. Not the muted press of turf, not the brush of stems. Nothing. She looked down. The wildflowers had bent away from her feet, leaving a bare ring around each step. When she lifted her shoe, the flowers leaned back into the print and filled it. A sound came from the trees to her left. A bicycle bell. One bright ding. Rory turned the torch toward the trunks. The beam caught bark, roots, a tangle of bramble. No path. No bike. “If you wrote the note, I’m here.” The bell repeated, deeper, the note swollen with metal. Then came the clatter of the Golden Empress ticket machine. The little printer spat its rhythm from somewhere beyond the stones. Tick. Tick. Pause. Tick. Her throat tightened. She knew that rhythm. She heard it every shift when the kitchen backed up and Yu-Fei shouted orders over the fryers. The grove held no socket. No machine. No paper. “Very funny.” The printer stopped. Rory moved along the outside of the stone circle. She counted the stones as she passed. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Seven. Eight. Nine. She reached the far side and looked back. The stones stood in their places. The ninth stone had moved closer to the centre. She blinked. The torch beam shook over the grass. The stone sat where a stone should sit, patient and blunt. “Nine stones.” She counted again. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Seven. Eight. Ten. The tenth stone had no moss on it. Its surface held a pale shine, like skin kept too long underwater. It leaned toward her. Rory backed away. Her heel caught a root, and she grabbed one of the oaks to keep her balance. The bark was warm. She snatched her hand away. The pendant grew hot. She pulled the chain over her head and held the stone in her palm. Its crimson heart had begun to glow. The light did not spread like torchlight. It gathered inside the gem and pressed outward, making the silver chain shine. The warmth travelled up her wrist and stopped at the small crescent scar there. The scar throbbed. A woman laughed among the trees. Rory spun. “Who’s there?” The laugh answered from the trees. It had her own pitch. Her own catch at the end. It matched the laugh she heard in recordings, the one that sounded foreign in her skull. The flowers around the stones turned their faces toward her. Every bloom lifted. No wind touched them. Rory forced her breath to settle. She lifted the pendant. The crimson glow reached the nearest stone. Carvings filled its surface. Not weather marks. Lines arranged into mouths. Dozens of small mouths, each open a grain’s width. She stepped closer before she decided to. The mouths had teeth made from the grain of the stone. Each tooth leaned in a different direction. “I brought the stone.” Her voice came out steadier than she felt. “Show me why.” The clearing answered with the sound of her own flat door closing. The click of the latch. The creak of the third stair above the bar. Then the soft thud of her delivery bag hitting the kitchen tile. Each sound belonged to a place she had left. Each sound came from the dark between the stones. Her phone vibrated and jerked in her hand. The screen had woken. No signal. The clock read 00:00. Then it read 23:56. Then 04:17. She pressed the side button. The screen held the last time, 04:17, though the night around her had not changed. The moon hung in the same branch. The shadows lay in the same thin threads. “Time’s wrong here.” She aimed the words at the stones. “I know that. I’m not stupid.” A footstep sounded behind her. She whirled. Nothing. Another footstep came when she moved. It fell half a beat after her shoe left the ground. She took three steps toward the edge of the clearing. Three answers followed. She stopped. The last answer came one step late. Rory held still. The pendant pulsed. The glow brightened, and the shadows around the stones stretched in the wrong direction. They reached toward her, not away from the light. “Stay where you are.” She aimed the torch at the farthest gap between the oaks. “I see you.” The gap held nothing. The nothing had shape. It stood taller than a person and bent where a person should stand straight. Rory could not find edges. Her torchlight slid around it and caught bark behind. The flowers rustled. They rubbed together without wind, producing a dry whisper that formed syllables. Come alone. Rory’s fingers closed around the Heartstone. “I did.” The whisper changed. It used her voice. Not yet. The ticket machine began its rhythm anew. Faster now. Tick tick tick tick. The bicycle bell rang under it, one ding after another, until the sound became a single sustained note. The oaks overhead creaked, though no branch moved. The tenth stone shifted. It did not scrape over grass. It appeared closer. Then closer. The pale surface opened along a seam no one had cut. Inside, something silver caught the pendant’s glow. Rory should leave. Her legs refused. The pendant pulled forward. The warmth in her hand became a tug, solid as a chain around her ribs. “Right.” She swallowed. “You want me to look.” She moved toward the open stone. The clearing widened around her. The trees drew back without walking. The stones leaned in. The silver thing inside the tenth stone was a chain. It hung from nothing, looped once, and held a pendant the size of a thumbnail. Deep crimson. The same chain. The same stone. The glow inside it answered the one in her hand. Her own reflection stared at her from the surface of the second stone. Not the stone. The surface had become dark glass. In it, she stood with her torch raised and her black hair loose around her face. Behind her reflection stood the clearing, empty. No bent shape. No moving stones. In the reflection, the tenth stone stood closed. Rory lifted her free hand to touch the glass. The reflection did the same. Their fingers met on opposite sides of the cold surface. The pendant in her palm grew so warm her fingers loosened. The reflection smiled. Rory had not moved her mouth. The flowers whispered, many voices this time, all wearing hers. Bring it in. The thin threads of moonlight snapped.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:41:09.321Z" 9/2/2026, 3:41:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1439
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1439
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"pulse"
2"echo"
3"charged"
4"warmth"
5"throbbed"
6"vibrated"
7"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences211
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences227
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1439
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1386
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Evan1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Rory14
One3
Tick4
Three3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Evan"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Rory"
4"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.995
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1439
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences227
matches
0"knew that rhythm"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean16.54
std17.67
cv1.068
sampleLengths
046
123
255
33
48
585
619
75
869
98
101
114
123
1319
145
1553
169
176
1820
197
2034
2133
222
233
2448
2520
262
273
289
2924
3028
314
3258
336
342
352
3633
3717
3817
3920
4025
414
428
433
4438
4518
4612
472
484
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs226
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences227
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount200
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.01
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences227
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences227
mean6.34
std4.74
cv0.749
sampleLengths
016
110
213
37
42
52
612
77
87
921
107
119
1211
133
148
1510
161
174
183
192
2027
218
228
234
2418
259
2610
275
2827
2918
3010
3114
328
331
344
353
365
378
386
395
408
4111
421
433
4415
4515
469
473
483
497
35.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.24669603524229075
totalSentences227
uniqueOpeners56
59.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences167
matches
0"Then came the clatter of"
1"Then the soft thud of"
2"Then it read 23:56."
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences167
matches
0"She slipped through the opening"
1"She touched the collar of"
2"She had spent an hour"
3"She had locked the flat"
4"She followed it until the"
5"Their petals looked wet and"
6"She lifted her phone."
7"She had charged it before"
8"She stepped into the grove."
9"She looked down."
10"Her throat tightened."
11"She knew that rhythm."
12"She heard it every shift"
13"She counted the stones as"
14"She reached the far side"
15"She counted again."
16"Its surface held a pale"
17"It leaned toward her."
18"Her heel caught a root,"
19"She snatched her hand away."
ratio0.281
28.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount144
totalSentences167
matches
0"Rory found the gap in"
1"The note in her fist"
2"She slipped through the opening"
3"The city stopped at the"
4"She touched the collar of"
5"The Heartstone rested against her"
6"The pendant had stayed cold"
7"The words dropped into the"
8"The note had given her"
9"The old boundary oaks."
10"She had spent an hour"
11"Evan would have laughed at"
12"Eva would have demanded she"
13"Rory had done neither."
14"She had locked the flat"
15"A path of crushed chalk"
16"She followed it until the"
17"The standing stones waited there."
18"Oak trees ringed them, their"
19"Wildflowers crowded the roots of"
ratio0.862
29.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences167
matches
0"Now it pulsed against her"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"They rubbed together without wind, producing a dry whisper that formed syllables."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She had (have)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.125
89.9668%