Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HCKQD8V53APVX7D4VZQW6X

Run Details

Duration:
5m 17s
Cost:
$0.072458
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The old station swallowed the city’s noise and gave back water dripping from brick. Detective Harlow Quinn took the last step down into the abandoned Tube tunnel beneath Camden and set her boot on mosaic tile worn smooth by feet that had no business being there. Police lamps carved white holes through the dark. Between them, the Veil Market had folded itself into a carcass of shuttered stalls, iron cages, and hanging charms that clicked when the draft passed. Harlow stopped at the edge of the platform. Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught the lamp light. She pressed two fingers against the worn leather watch on her left wrist and let the familiar bite steady her. Brown eyes moved from the tape line to the rail pit, from the stalls to the huddled uniforms. "Body's here." Detective Sergeant Baines stood beside an alcove set into the tiled wall. His notebook hung open in one hand, and his pen tapped the page in short beats. Harlow crossed to him. The alcove smelled of wet stone, candle smoke, and copper. A man lay inside with his arms folded over a grey coat. His skin had the flat colour of old plaster. A bone token rested on his sternum, white against dark wool. Chalk lines ringed him, broken at the left shoulder. Black powder made a thin trail from the ring to a small brass compass lying near the rail edge. The compass casing wore a patina of verdigris. Sigils cut into its face caught the lamp light. Its needle swung, checked, and pointed at the wall behind the corpse. "Elias Croft." Baines angled the notebook toward her. "Market runner. Uniforms know him by sight. No ID, but the vendors named him." Harlow crouched at the edge of the chalk ring. "Cause?" Baines lifted one shoulder. "Overdose. Alchemical stuff. These market types swallow things no lab would bottle." Harlow studied the corpse. Croft’s coat buttons stood closed to the throat. His hands lay crossed without clench. His face held no twist, no pulled-back lips. A candle had burned near his hip, but the wax pool sat to one side, shaped by the slope of the floor, not by the fall of a body. "His mouth." Baines leaned closer. "What about it?" "No burns. No foam. If poison took him, he would have fought his own throat." "Some poisons freeze a man." "Then show me the frost." Baines closed the notebook a fraction. "You want a fight where there isn't one." Harlow put on gloves and lifted Croft’s right hand. The fingernails held clean skin. She checked the left. Same. She turned the wrist. No pulse marks, no needle pits, no bruising shaped like fingers. The bone token on his chest had no lint from the coat. It sat high and centered on the wool, as if someone set it after the coat settled. "This token." Baines sighed. "Entry coin. They all carry them." "The market takes tokens at the gate. There's a bowl by the stairs. I counted thirty." "So he kept one." "Dead men don't pocket their own entry and lie down to die in a circle drawn for them." Baines’ jaw tightened. "You see staging." "I see dust where a body dragged." She pointed to the black powder. It ran from the ring toward the rail, but the thickest smear started near the wall behind Croft’s head and swept outward in a curve. The alcove floor held dark soot. Croft’s boots carried pale dust, the fine chalky sort from the maintenance passage beyond the tracks. His heels had scraped the tile in one direction: away from the wall. Footsteps passed over broken glass. Eva Kowalski emerged from between two shuttered stalls. Her curly red hair had escaped its pins. Round glasses slipped down her freckled nose, and a worn leather satchel bulged against her hip with the shape of books. She tucked a strand behind her left ear and stopped at the tape. Harlow rose. "You were in the Market." Eva nodded. "I came for a ledger from the cartomancer's stall. The vendors fled before the police arrived." Baines turned to her. "Civilian scene. You should be upstairs." Eva looked at the chalk ring. "And leave a binding circle unexamined?" Harlow stepped aside. "Look." Eva knelt without touching the line. Her green eyes moved over the marks, to the token, to the compass by the rail. "That isn't chalk." Baines snorted. "It looks like chalk." "It's ground bone mixed with salt. People use it to seal a space against spirits, not to ease a drug trip." Harlow watched the wall behind the body. "The circle broke at the shoulder." Eva tilted her head. "Someone opened it from outside. The smears face outward. If Croft had drawn it and died inside, the break would have come from his body falling." Baines tapped his pen against his thigh. "Ritual panic. He drew the circle, took the poison, broke the line when the fit hit." Eva picked up a scrap of paper from the edge of the stall. It bore a stamp of a moon split by a key. "The Veil Market moves with the full moon. This one should have emptied four nights ago. These stalls are packed, but stock remains. Jars sealed. Coins in trays. They left the goods." Harlow turned that over. Market traders sold banned alchemical substances, enchanted tools, information that had teeth. They did not abandon stock unless something made profit irrelevant. She walked to the brass compass and crouched beside it. The sigils on its face had been cut by a hand that understood fine metalwork. The needle trembled and locked on the wall behind Croft. She lifted the compass. It was cold, but the brass warmed against her palm as if it recognized heat under the surface. Baines stepped forward. "Evidence. You need a tech." "The tech will bag it. I need to know what it wants." Eva moved beside her. "A Veil Compass. Shade artisan work. The needle finds the nearest supernatural rift or portal." Harlow looked from the needle to the corpse. "It isn't pointing at him." "No." Baines spread his hands. "A compass spins. The wall is stone. End of mystery." Harlow carried the compass toward the wall. The needle stayed fixed. She stopped within arm’s reach of the tiles. Up close, the glaze showed hairline cracks around four square sections. Mortar had scraped away in fresh pale scratches. A draught touched her knuckles, thin and cold, coming through a seam that should not have existed in a Victorian tunnel wall. She crouched and lifted the hem of Croft’s coat. The left side was damp. The puddle near the rail lay on his right. She checked his pockets. A stub of pencil sat in the left breast pocket. A ticket stub in the left trouser pocket. A left-handed man. Someone had strapped the watch to his right wrist, face inside. The watch strap holes were stretched for a smaller wrist. The watch did not belong to him. "His watch stopped at three forty-seven." Baines checked his own. "Candle burned halfway. Fits." "The wax pooled under his elbow, not under his hand. Someone set the candle after the body went down. The flame melted one side and died when the draught shifted." Eva pointed to the black powder. "The salt line has bone dust in it. The powder by the wall is ash. Different material." Harlow followed the ash trail. It began at the seam in the wall and stopped where Croft’s boots ended. No return prints. If Croft had walked into the alcove, his steps should have crossed the ash twice. They had crossed a single time, heel marks deep, toe marks shallow. A drag. Baines lowered his pen. "Someone moved him after he died." Harlow set the compass on the floor. The needle swung and locked on the seam. She pressed her thumb to one of the cracked tiles. The tile shifted inward with the soft grind of stone against stone. Behind it, dark air moved, carrying the smell of ozone and old river water. Eva’s hand went to her satchel. "That isn't a maintenance door." Harlow drew her torch from her coat and shone it into the gap. The beam found no bricks, no pipes, no tunnel service route. It found a narrow opening lined with black glass, and on the glass, a handprint made in pale dust. The print had four long fingers and no thumb. Baines took one step back. "What market vendor has hands like that?" Harlow kept the torch steady. The Veil Compass ticked against the tile, its needle quivering toward the opening. Croft’s bone token, on his chest, gave off heat that fogged in the cold air. Eva reached for it and pulled her fingers back as the token split down the middle and fell apart on the dead man’s coat. The crack opened wider behind the wall. Not with a creak, but with the sound of a train passing in the tunnels below. Harlow placed her palm against the tile. It moved inward.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:43:11.793Z" 9/2/2026, 3:43:11 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1516
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1516
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"mosaic"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"mosaic"
1"familiar"
2"pulse"
3"footsteps"
4"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1516
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1123
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow17
Quinn1
Tube1
Camden1
Veil2
Market2
Sergeant1
Baines14
Croft9
Kowalski1
Victorian1
Compass1
Eva10
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Sergeant"
4"Baines"
5"Croft"
6"Kowalski"
7"Compass"
8"Eva"
places
0"Victorian"
globalScore0.743
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.66
wordCount1516
matches
0"Not with a creak, but with the sound of a train passing in the tunnels below"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean17.43
std21.92
cv1.258
sampleLengths
079
154
22
328
4103
52
66
714
89
91
104
1112
1255
132
143
153
1615
175
185
196
208
2163
222
232
246
2516
264
2718
283
293
307
3166
3255
332
345
352
3616
374
386
396
406
413
421
4322
443
452
464
4721
487
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"were stretched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences162
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount639
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white against dark wool."
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.006259780907668232
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean9.36
std6.46
cv0.69
sampleLengths
014
132
28
325
48
58
620
718
82
912
1016
114
1210
1312
149
1511
169
1719
188
199
2012
212
226
2314
249
251
264
2712
284
298
306
318
3229
332
343
353
3615
375
385
396
408
419
425
434
441
454
4611
4712
4817
492
47.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.30864197530864196
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences112
matches
0"Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught"
1"She pressed two fingers against"
2"His notebook hung open in"
3"His skin had the flat"
4"Its needle swung, checked, and"
5"His hands lay crossed without"
6"His face held no twist,"
7"She checked the left."
8"She turned the wrist."
9"It sat high and centered"
10"She pointed to the black"
11"It ran from the ring"
12"His heels had scraped the"
13"Her curly red hair had"
14"She tucked a strand behind"
15"Her green eyes moved over"
16"It bore a stamp of"
17"They did not abandon stock"
18"She walked to the brass"
19"She lifted the compass."
ratio0.259
0.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences112
matches
0"The old station swallowed the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn took the"
2"Police lamps carved white holes"
3"Harlow stopped at the edge"
4"Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught"
5"She pressed two fingers against"
6"Brown eyes moved from the"
7"Detective Sergeant Baines stood beside"
8"His notebook hung open in"
9"Harlow crossed to him."
10"The alcove smelled of wet"
11"A man lay inside with"
12"His skin had the flat"
13"A bone token rested on"
14"Chalk lines ringed him, broken"
15"The compass casing wore a"
16"Sigils cut into its face"
17"Its needle swung, checked, and"
18"Baines angled the notebook toward"
19"Harlow crouched at the edge"
ratio0.92
44.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"If Croft had walked into"
ratio0.009
84.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn took the last step down into the abandoned Tube tunnel beneath Camden and set her boot on mosaic tile worn smooth by feet that had no bus…"
1"Market traders sold banned alchemical substances, enchanted tools, information that had teeth."
2"It was cold, but the brass warmed against her palm as if it recognized heat under the surface."
3"Croft’s bone token, on his chest, gave off heat that fogged in the cold air."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.3555%