Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HCNY9RNCNW0WVYV6RYZ7CZ

Run Details

Duration:
45.2s
Cost:
$0.000820
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed like a trapped insect above the Soho threshold. Rory pushed through the heavy oak door, rain dripping from her dark shoulders onto the scuffed floorboards. Her boots squeaked against the wet entryway mat. She shook her head, sending droplets flying from straight black hair plastered to her cheekbones. The air inside carried the familiar blend of polished mahogany, old paper, and faint tobacco residue that stubbornly refused to surrender despite decades of bans. Silas stood behind the curved counter, wiping a highball glass with a linen cloth. His hazel eyes flicked upward, tracking the damp outline of her silhouette. A slow nod acknowledged her presence. He set the glass down and reached beneath the counter. A fresh towel landed on the slate ledge beside him. His silver signet ring caught the amber glow as he gestured toward the corner table. “Water’s boiling,” he murmured, voice gravel wrapped in velvet. “Take ten.” Rory nodded, grateful for the reprieve. She moved past the pool tables and the worn leather booths, her fingers brushing the edge of a wall mapped with faded charts of Eastern Europe and Yugoslavia. She slid into a chair, crossed her legs, and peeled off her soaked gloves. The crescent scar on her left wrist gleamed pale against her skin. She waited for the kettle to whistle, listened to the low murmur of regulars, and watched ice melt in a tumbler. Footsteps echoed from the stairwell leading to the upper flats. Light, hurried, then hesitant. Rory froze. The cadence belonged to someone else. Someone she hadn’t heard from in seven years. She turned slowly. The man standing near the shadowed alcove wore a charcoal wool coat that looked too heavy for the season. His hair had thinned at the temples, dyed a shade too deliberate, and lines bracketed a mouth that used to smile easily. “Rory.” The name came out rougher than either expected. She kept her posture straight. “Cian.” He approached the table, hesitated, then pulled out the opposite chair. Leather groaned under his weight. He removed his hat, ran a hand through his hair, and set the hat on the seat beside him. “I didn’t know you were back in the city.” “Never really left.” She traced the rim of the glass Silas had placed in front of her. “Just moved around enough.” “Right.” His gaze swept over her face, cataloging changes she hadn’t noticed in herself. “London suits you. You look… sharper.” “Sharp cuts things sometimes.” She lifted her eyes. “You look tired.” He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Old bones complain louder now.” He leaned forward, elbows resting on the wooden surface. “I heard you ran away to the capital. Everyone assumed you’d burn bright and vanish.” “I deliver food for Yu-Fei Cheung now. Sometimes vanish.” Her tone stayed level, but her thumb found the scar on her wrist again. “Some fires don’t translate well.” Cian exhaled through his nose. A long pause settled between them, filled only by the clink of glassware and the distant thrum of traffic muffled by thick stone walls. “We should have talked,” he said finally. “After the exam. After you packed.” “There wasn’t much to say.” She watched condensation bead along the side of her glass. “You had your firm. Your practice. Your father’s expectations. I had a choice between staying in Cardiff and drowning in it.” “And I let you drown alone.” The words slipped out fast, then caught in his throat. He took a breath. “I meant to call. When you disappeared. Letters went unanswered. Numbers disconnected. I assumed you made your peace with silence.” “I didn’t make anything.” Her voice dropped half an octave. “I survived. There’s a difference.” He studied her face, searching for fractures beneath the composed exterior. “You always did run toward whatever scared you most.” “And you stayed rooted in whatever felt safe.” She tilted her head. “Safe is just a word people use when they’re afraid of moving.” The admission hung in the damp air. Cian’s jaw tightened. He reached into his pocket, pulled out a folded pack of matches, set them down, picked them up again. A nervous habit she remembered from finals week. “I got married,” he said quietly. “Three years ago. Elena. She’s an architect. Works on restoration projects.” “That tracks.” Rory kept her expression neutral. “You always liked fixing broken things.” “She likes building new ones.” He adjusted his cufflinks. Gold. Simple. Expensive. “We live in Richmond. Suburbia. Quiet streets. Predictable weekends.” “Predictable sounds restful.” “It is.” He paused. “Until it isn’t.” Another stretch of silence followed. Rory lifted her glass, drank, set it down. The water tasted cold and clean. Outside, a bus hissed to a stop somewhere down the narrow street. Rain tapped harder against the windowpane. “Do you ever think about the branch you didn’t take?” she asked. Cian’s fingers stilled against the matchbox. “Every day.” “Liar.” Her lips twitched. “You don’t have time for branches anymore. You have bills. You have routines. You have Elena.” “And you have delivery schedules and a flat above a spy’s bar and a reputation for disappearing acts.” He leaned back, chair legs scraping hardwood. “We traded versions of ourselves. Neither of us asked permission.” “Maybe we forgot how.” She uncrossed her legs, shifted forward. “Time doesn’t ask. It just takes.” He nodded slowly. “Takes what it wants.” Silas appeared at the edge of their perimeter, dropping a fresh pot of Earl Grey on the adjacent table. He didn’t interrupt. He simply refilled a regular’s whisky, nodded once in Cian’s direction, and retreated behind the bar. The gesture felt intentional. Acknowledgment without intrusion. “I used to write letters,” Cian said, voice barely above the bar’s ambient hum. “Long ones. Detailed ones. I’d draft them in my head during commutes. Then I’d tear them up because nothing felt adequate. Nothing captured what I wanted to say without sounding bitter or desperate. So I chose neutrality. Chose distance. Told myself it was cleaner.” “Clean cuts bleed quieter.” “True.” He looked down at his hands. Thick knuckles. Wedding band absent. Not divorced. Just separate beds. He didn’t elaborate. “Why come here tonight?” Rory asked. “Client dinner. Left early. Needed air. Heard the sign. Remembered the address.” He glanced toward the ceiling. “Funny how some places anchor you. Even when you swear you never want to return.” “So you anchored yourself on purpose.” “On accident. Mostly.” He rubbed his temple. “Seven years feels like yesterday and a lifetime simultaneously. Makes you question every pivot point. Every moment you could have spoken and didn’t.” “Regret is a compass that points backward.” “Then I’m hopelessly lost.” She laughed, a short, dry sound that startled even her. “You always were.” “Still am.” He met her eyes. “Different landscape though.” The fluorescent light above the jukebox flickered. Shadows shifted across the walls, pulling the old photographs slightly out of focus. Rory watched a grainy image of a dockworker from the fifties stare back at them. She thought about Evan. About Silas’ quiet warnings. About Yu-Fei’s insistence that punctuality built trust. About all the roads split at intersections she never bothered to mark. “Tell me about Elena,” she said. Cian blinked. Unexpected pivot. He considered it. “She laughs at terrible puns. Drinks tea instead of coffee. Keeps a succulent on every windowsill. Pretends she doesn’t notice when I check my watch.” “Sounds grounded.” “It is.” His voice softened. “Too grounded sometimes. Like walking on solid rock instead of shifting sand. Safe. But static.” “Static preserves.” “Preserves until decay sets in underneath.” She didn’t argue. Couldn’t. The truth lived in the space between syllables. “I wonder if we’d still know how to speak,” he murmured. “Or if we’d just rehearse the same old gaps.” “Words adjust when voices do.” “Do ours belong to the same dialect anymore?” “Depends on which version you want to hear.” He smiled again, slower this time. Less practiced. More genuine. “Show me the one you kept hidden.” The kettle whistled in the background kitchen. Steam curled beneath the vent. Rory reached for her towel, dabbed her sleeves, folded it precisely. Her movements were economical. Deliberate. The kind of habits forged in transit. Outside, the rain eased to a drizzle. Somewhere down the block, a street musician tuned a guitar. Strings rang out, tentative at first, then steady. Cian shifted his coat collar, leaned in closer. The wooden table creaked under the pressure of his forearms. “Start with Cardiff.” She opened her mouth. Closed it. Opened it again. The first word caught on something tight in her throat. She swallowed. Adjusted her posture. Lifted her gaze. “The harbour smelled like salt and diesel,” she began. “Winter nights stretched thin. We sat on the stone steps behind the arts centre, sharing a flask of weak tea. You complained about contract law. I complained about everything else. You promised to read Agatha Christie if I promised to stop highlighting every second page. We made those promises knowing we’d break them. That’s the thing about young people. They trade certainty for momentum.” He listened. Didn’t interrupt. Didn’t fill the silences. His eyes tracked the line of her jaw, the way her thumb rested lightly against the scar, the steady rhythm of her breathing. “Go on,” he said. She exhaled. The steam from the brewing pot rose between them like a translucent curtain. City lights bled through the rain-streaked glass. Silas counted receipts in the corner. The matchbox sat untouched. The street music swelled, then dissolved into the next chord. Rory kept talking. The words unfolded steadily, tracing the architecture of a shared past that hadn’t vanished so much as fractured. She didn’t offer absolution. Didn’t demand reconciliation. She simply laid the pieces on the table and let them settle. Cian absorbed the details, stored them, weighed them against the life he’d constructed. Neither of them reached for resolution. Some encounters exist only to acknowledge what time carved away. The rest stays unfinished by design.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:44:24.387Z" 9/2/2026, 3:44:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"He leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.408
leniency0.816
rawRatio0.097
effectiveRatio0.079
81.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1664
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"precisely"
4"lightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elena"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1664
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"predictable"
count2
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flicked"
2"velvet"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"weight"
6"traced"
7"silence"
8"predictable"
9"flickered"
10"tracing"
11"fractured"
12"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences142
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1664
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1062
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Rory9
Eastern1
Europe1
Yugoslavia1
Silas4
Cian8
Gold1
Earl1
Grey1
Thick1
Evan1
Yu-Fei1
Didn3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Cian"
3"Earl"
4"Grey"
5"Evan"
6"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Soho"
1"Eastern"
2"Europe"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1664
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean25.21
std21.15
cv0.839
sampleLengths
078
178
281
374
49
56
644
721
820
911
1037
1128
1229
1313
1436
1540
1615
1720
1824
1937
2017
2113
2221
233
247
2537
2612
278
2820
2935
3016
317
3245
3358
344
3520
366
3732
386
3930
407
414
4213
439
4462
456
4632
472
4820
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs209
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences187
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount894
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.039149888143176735
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011185682326621925
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean8.9
std7.62
cv0.857
sampleLengths
013
117
28
315
425
514
612
76
810
910
1015
119
122
136
1428
1514
1612
1721
1810
194
202
216
228
233
2419
2522
269
275
281
2911
305
3119
329
3317
344
3514
366
378
383
398
4014
4115
4223
435
445
4524
467
476
4815
4921
77.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4919786096256685
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners92
56.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"Just separate beds."
1"Somewhere down the block, a"
ratio0.017
45.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences117
matches
0"Her boots squeaked against the"
1"She shook her head, sending"
2"His hazel eyes flicked upward,"
3"He set the glass down"
4"His silver signet ring caught"
5"he murmured, voice gravel wrapped"
6"She moved past the pool"
7"She slid into a chair,"
8"She waited for the kettle"
9"She turned slowly."
10"His hair had thinned at"
11"She kept her posture straight."
12"He approached the table, hesitated,"
13"He removed his hat, ran"
14"She traced the rim of"
15"His gaze swept over her"
16"She lifted her eyes"
17"He smiled, but it didn’t"
18"He leaned forward, elbows resting"
19"Her tone stayed level, but"
ratio0.436
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences117
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"Her boots squeaked against the"
3"She shook her head, sending"
4"The air inside carried the"
5"Silas stood behind the curved"
6"His hazel eyes flicked upward,"
7"A slow nod acknowledged her"
8"He set the glass down"
9"A fresh towel landed on"
10"His silver signet ring caught"
11"he murmured, voice gravel wrapped"
12"Rory nodded, grateful for the"
13"She moved past the pool"
14"She slid into a chair,"
15"The crescent scar on her"
16"She waited for the kettle"
17"Footsteps echoed from the stairwell"
18"Light, hurried, then hesitant."
19"The cadence belonged to someone"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She shook her head, sending droplets flying from straight black hair plastered to her cheekbones."
1"The words unfolded steadily, tracing the architecture of a shared past that hadn’t vanished so much as fractured."
76.61% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He leaned, elbows resting on the wooden surface"
1"Her tone stayed, but her thumb found the scar on her wrist again"
2"Cian said, voice barely above the bar’s ambient hum"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.237
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.053
86.1533%