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Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HCWDXGDZH5H5641H8PN8ZB
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.7 Flash (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
40.4s
Cost:
$0.000846
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
85.24%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
1.57%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
95.43%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
29.76%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
90.4002%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The deadbolt surrendered to a
precise twist.
I stood with a wooden
spoon hovering over a cast iron pan, the scent of cumin and charred onion thick in the narrow kitchenette. Footsteps crossed the threshold. Heavy leather soles on warped pine. I did not turn around. I recognised the cadence instantly. The air shifted first. Cold stone and bergamot cutting through the frying vapours. He stepped into my vision. Tailored charcoal suit impeccably pressed despite the relentless drizzle.
Platinum hair slicked back with
military precision.
That ivory cane rested against
his thigh like a natural extension of his arm.
His heterochromatic gaze pinned me
to the tiles. One amber iris. One pitch black pupil. You
secured that entrance
twice. I turned
slowly
. Dried my palms on a cotton tea towel. Tossed it onto the worktop. Three bolts sealed your escape route. You bypassed them regardless. Security requires funds.
I lacked the budget you
negotiated last quarter.
I left him standing near
the hallway console.
Paper towers leaned against every
wall.
Parchment scrolls spilled from fraying
cardboard boxes.
A chubby tabby perched on
a stack of legal textbooks, watching us with indifferent yellow eyes. I maintained distance. The gap between us contained
shattered
trust and unspent violence. You resemble yourself. Do not
use that name
. Not here. Not ever again. State your purpose, Lucien.
He rested the cane against
a bookshelf. The movement revealed the razor edge concealed within the polished ivory handle.
I memorised its balance years
ago. Understood how
quickly
it could sever tendon. My throat tightened. I regulated my breathing. My
sanctuary
compromised. I displaced. They tracked me here. Your
standard
hospitality routine. Magnificent. Did the documentation reach me. The documentation evaporated alongside the ledger. And the courier who absconded with it.
I switched off the gas
ring. The burner died with a quiet exhale. I gathered my leather satchel. Turned back. You introduced predators to my residence again. We operated alongside each other for fourteen months. Then
fractured
. Then dissolved. The boundary blurred somewhere between a binding contract in a Southampton warehouse and a
shattered
mirror in Shoreditch. I claimed independence. He claimed victory. We both slept terribly. The Frenchman advanced. His boots halted several inches from my slippers. Body heat radiated outward. Not hostility. Something denser. Unspoken. Unclaimed. Her designation was Marie. She possessed a tarnished copper locket stamped with a coiled viper. She understands Avarosian protocols. I recalled the subterranean tunnels beneath Cardiff. The demon territories bleeding into municipal drainage systems. The agreement we forged. The night his blood relatives cornered us inside a decommissioned textile factory. The manner in which Lucien shoved me through a rusted fire escape rather than surrender me to capture. I fell onto wet pavement. Shoulders bruised. Breath stolen. He melted into fog. Abandoned me to the fallout while he orchestrated boardroom manoeuvres elsewhere. That narrative requires editing. Summon your associates. Not mine. He chuckled. A dry, resonant sound that
vibrated
against my sternum. You underestimate my network. Operatives monitor Lyon, Madrid, Vienna. Linguists decipher Sumerian clay tablets. Few interpret reptilian sigils
etched
directly into dermis. I adjusted my posture. Allowed him to maintain momentum. Measured his microexpressions. Crowfeet deepened around his orbital sockets. Furrows mapped his temporal regions. Endurance suited him. Resentment prickled my spine. I suppressed it. What objective anchors this locket. Access to a maintenance chamber beneath King Cross Station. Contents document trafficking routes connecting seven criminal enterprises. Verification implicates my historical holdings. Historical. Rebuilding. Strategic terminology. Elegant phrasing. You invariably favour architectural metaphors over direct contrition. Contrition demands zero capital expenditure. Contrition accomplishes nothing. Affirmative. Transparency remains discretionary. Much like your current guest status. He reached overhead. Opened the upper cabinet. Extracted a dented aluminium tin. Chamomile leaves. Shared preference. Purchased exclusively because he dismissed weaker varieties as pedestrian. Our fingertips collided. Static discharged
sharply
. Nerve endings screamed. I withdrew my hand. Withdrew first. Ego sustained equilibrium. The faucet leaked. He ignored it. I silenced the drip. Stood motionless. Listened to precipitation batter the sole window pane. Traffic noise absorbed by brick and mortar. Upstairs, a resident cursed over dropped cutlery. The feline stretched, displayed curved claws, then investigated the abandoned tin. You consume floral infusions. Remarkably dull. Stimulates cognitive function. Differs considerably from certain individuals who ignore operational directives. He filled a ceramic jug with tap water. Steam spiralled around his forearms. Scars
traced
his radial bones. Recent abrasions. Improper clotting. Poor technique. Intentional oversight. Specify the urgency. Accurately.
Because the tracker operating against
me occupies your vestibule. Fluid drained from the kettle spout. Pooled on linoleum. Evaporated instantly. Stillness compressed. Atmospheric pressure dropped. Heavy tread
echoed
on concrete landing. Metal struck timber. Deliberate percussion against external planking. Triple strike. Interval. Quadruple strike. Ptolemy vocalised. Leapt onto countertop. Tore
synthetic
fabric until threads detached. I seized the wooden utensil. Compressed grip until timber fibres penetrated palmar tissue. Discomfort anchored cognition. Focus intensified. Identify the intruder. Carrier of my formal citation. Accompanied by six enforcement personnel. Lucien relocated. Velocity exceeded human
parameters
. He forced position behind the central island. Extracted cane weapon. Razor gleamed under tungsten illumination. Palm contacted interior wall surface. Vocalisation escaped lips. Non anglophone syntax. Suppressed cadence. Archaic phonemes. Ambient energy fluctuated. Wallpaper peeled. Mortar fissured. Knocking mechanics altered. Blunt force replaced
rhythmic
tapping. Timber
fractured
. Metallic hardware deformed. Debris descended from ceiling joists. I clutched utensil until knuckles blanched. Monitored reflections on darkened glass. Amber irises ignited metallic gold. Black pupils consumed available photons. Bony protrusions ruptured cranial skin. Dermal texture calcified to volcanic glass along mandibular region. Lock mechanism failed. External barrier breached. Storm air invaded corridor. Silhouettes populated the aperture. Synthetic outerwear. Flashlight beams illuminating steel muzzle cylinders. Facial coverings eliminated identification. Operational pause absent. Lucien delivered a single verbal command. Remain. Position. Behind. My. Position. Obstruction abandoned. Relocation executed. Utensil elevated. Combat stance assumed. Flight
parameters
calculated
. Sacrifice thresholds evaluated. Designated operator elevated firearm. Trigger index finger flexed. Optic sight centred on thoracic region. Temporal perception dilated. Iron residue assaulted olfactory receptors. Synthetic fibre odour detected. Cortisol spikes registered. Barrel discharge occurred. Environmental collapse initiated.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
85.24%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1016
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"quickly"
2
"sharply"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
1.57%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1016
totalAiIsms
20
found
0
word
"footsteps"
count
1
1
word
"shattered"
count
2
2
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
3
word
"standard"
count
1
4
word
"fractured"
count
2
5
word
"unspoken"
count
1
6
word
"vibrated"
count
1
7
word
"etched"
count
1
8
word
"measured"
count
1
9
word
"traced"
count
1
10
word
"echoed"
count
1
11
word
"synthetic"
count
3
12
word
"parameters"
count
2
13
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
14
word
"calculated"
count
1
highlights
0
"footsteps"
1
"shattered"
2
"sanctuary"
3
"standard"
4
"fractured"
5
"unspoken"
6
"vibrated"
7
"etched"
8
"measured"
9
"traced"
10
"echoed"
11
"synthetic"
12
"parameters"
13
"rhythmic"
14
"calculated"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
219
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
219
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
219
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
24
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1016
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
0
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
24
wordCount
1016
uniqueNames
15
maxNameDensity
0.69
worstName
"You"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"You"
discoveredNames
Lucien
4
Southampton
1
Shoreditch
1
Frenchman
1
Marie
1
Avarosian
1
Cardiff
1
Lyon
1
Madrid
1
Vienna
1
Sumerian
1
King
1
Cross
1
Station
1
You
7
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Frenchman"
2
"Marie"
3
"Sumerian"
4
"King"
5
"Cross"
6
"You"
places
0
"Southampton"
1
"Shoreditch"
2
"Cardiff"
3
"Lyon"
4
"Madrid"
5
"Vienna"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
59
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1016
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
219
matches
0
"secured that entrance"
1
"use that name"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
43
mean
23.63
std
17.57
cv
0.744
sampleLengths
0
51
1
63
2
5
3
26
4
11
5
50
6
3
7
14
8
39
9
9
10
10
11
13
12
27
13
40
14
21
15
19
16
73
17
9
18
33
19
33
20
5
21
22
22
14
23
8
24
10
25
43
26
45
27
6
28
12
29
26
30
4
31
9
32
35
33
29
34
3
35
10
36
43
37
53
38
29
39
11
40
15
41
29
42
6
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
219
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
221
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
219
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1016
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.02952755905511811
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.012795275590551181
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
219
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
219
mean
4.64
std
3.16
cv
0.68
sampleLengths
0
7
1
24
2
4
3
6
4
5
5
5
6
4
7
9
8
5
9
9
10
7
11
14
12
8
13
3
14
4
15
5
16
3
17
8
18
5
19
6
20
4
21
3
22
8
23
8
24
6
25
7
26
16
27
3
28
10
29
3
30
5
31
2
32
3
33
4
34
7
35
12
36
6
37
7
38
3
39
4
40
3
41
2
42
4
43
4
44
1
45
5
46
6
47
7
48
6
49
7
95.43%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.7031963470319634
totalSentences
219
uniqueOpeners
154
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
168
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
47
totalSentences
168
matches
0
"I stood with a wooden"
1
"I did not turn around."
2
"I recognised the cadence instantly."
3
"He stepped into my vision."
4
"His heterochromatic gaze pinned me"
5
"You secured that entrance twice."
6
"I turned slowly."
7
"You bypassed them regardless."
8
"I lacked the budget you"
9
"I left him standing near"
10
"I maintained distance."
11
"You resemble yourself."
12
"He rested the cane against"
13
"I memorised its balance years"
14
"My throat tightened."
15
"I regulated my breathing."
16
"My sanctuary compromised."
17
"They tracked me here."
18
"Your standard hospitality routine."
19
"I switched off the gas"
ratio
0.28
100.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
111
totalSentences
168
matches
0
"The deadbolt surrendered to a"
1
"I stood with a wooden"
2
"Footsteps crossed the threshold."
3
"I did not turn around."
4
"I recognised the cadence instantly."
5
"The air shifted first."
6
"He stepped into my vision."
7
"Platinum hair slicked back with"
8
"That ivory cane rested against"
9
"His heterochromatic gaze pinned me"
10
"You secured that entrance twice."
11
"I turned slowly."
12
"You bypassed them regardless."
13
"Security requires funds."
14
"I lacked the budget you"
15
"I left him standing near"
16
"Paper towers leaned against every"
17
"Parchment scrolls spilled from fraying"
18
"A chubby tabby perched on"
19
"I maintained distance."
ratio
0.661
29.76%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
168
matches
0
"Because the tracker operating against"
ratio
0.006
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
11
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
90.4002%