Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HCX5KHM9AJ52H7QCFKKBYW

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Duration:
37.6s
Cost:
$0.000753
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air changed first. It did not merely cool or warm; it thickened, carrying the scent of crushed pepper and damp loam, heavy enough to coat the back of Rory’s throat. She stepped over the fractured basalt threshold, and the London rain vanished behind her like a shuttered door. Ahead, the corridor yawned into a vaulted passageway carved from something between stone and cooled glass. Her breath hitched. The Heartstone at her collarbone pulsed against her sternum, a slow, deliberate warmth that traveled up her neck and settled behind her ribs. Don’t stare too long, Nyx murmured, their voice sliding through the silence like wind through dry reeds. The Shade hovered half a pace behind her, already unraveling into wisps of ink before pulling themselves back into a rigid, six-foot-two silhouette. Their faintly glowing violet eyes tracked the ceiling where geometric shadows dripped downward without falling. It watches you back. Rory forced her gaze off the archway. Right. Noted. She kept her boots flat on the polished floor, feeling the subtle vibration humming through the stone. Isolde moved ahead, her bare feet pressing into the ancient surface without leaving a mark. The Half-Fae seer’s silver hair spilled down her back like spun moonlight, catching the ambient glow that bled from fissures in the walls. She did not speak immediately. Time seemed to stretch here, bending around them like heat haze. An hour outside the Grove could be a minute inside this place, or a week. Rory checked her watch anyway, though the hands moved backward in stuttering increments. She slipped it into her pocket. We walk while the path believes itself open, Isolde said finally, her pale lavender eyes fixed on some distant convergence of light and dust. The gate remembers footsteps. It feeds on hesitation. Charming welcome, Rory muttered, adjusting the strap of her messenger bag. The weight of the Fae-forged blade at her hip reminded her she wasn’t visiting a museum. The moonsilver dagger sat cold even through the fabric of her coat, its leaf-shaped hilt resting against her ribs. She hadn’t asked how it got there. Isolde had simply placed it in her hands three nights ago, her fingers untouched by fever, her voice a quiet certainty that brooked no argument. Now, standing in a tomb that breathed, Rory was glad for it. They descended a spiral staircase that refused to obey gravity’s logic. Steps appeared only when weighted, then faded behind them like retreating tide. The walls grew taller, ribbed like the interior of a colossal shell, streaked with veins of crystalline gold that throbbed in time with the Heartstone. Rory ran her thumb over the crescent scar on her left wrist, a grounding habit from childhood, from Evan, from the flat above Silas’ bar where takeout containers and pre-law textbooks competed for shelf space. Here, the past felt muffled, compressed. Every instinct screamed to turn back, but the cool, calculating part of her—the part that still navigated Cardiff alleys after midnight deliveries and London backstreets—kicked in. Map the room. Read the sightlines. Watch for exits. Look up, Nyx whispered. Rory tilted her head. The ceiling arched high above, dissolving into a canopy of suspended roots that glowed faintly amber. Between them, translucent membranes stretched like silk sails, catching nonexistent drafts. Through one, she saw movement—vast, rippling shapes drifting in a liquid sky. Vineyards clung to terraced hillsides far below, heavy with fruit that pulsed like slow heartbeats. Figures in ash-stained robes moved through orchards that defied seasons, harvesting spices that hissed when touched. The air grew warmer, thick with the perfume of roasting meat and fermented berries. Dymas. The realization clicked like a bolt sliding home. They weren’t just in a ruin. They were standing on the rim of a sin. Hel’s pantry, Isolde murmured. Or its mouth. Rory swallowed. So the Veil hasn’t just thinned. It’s been torn. Torn is such a violent word, Nyx said, their form flickering as they drifted closer to a pillar etched with spiraling sigils. This place chose to open. Or it was invited. She stepped forward, drawn by the hum growing louder. The staircase ended at a circular dais. At its center stood a monolith of polished hematite, veined with crimson that matched the Heartstone. The stone faced them, smooth as still water. As Rory approached, the surface rippled. Images surfaced—faces she didn’t know, places that bent reality, a city built inside a storm, then ash, then seed. She reached out. The moment her fingertips brushed the metal, heat shot up her arm. The Heartstone flared, bright enough to hurt, and the dais trembled. Sand scattered from the edges of the platform, revealing carvings beneath: warding circles, broken and overwritten by older marks. Symbols that looked suspiciously like Aldric’s handwriting. Nyx went rigid. The Shade’s shadow spilled wide across the floor, swallowing the step behind them. You shouldn’t touch that, they rasped, the wind-voice fracturing. That ink is bound in blood. It remembers the hand that spilled it. Rory pulled her hand back as if burned. The visions faded, but the echo remained—a pressure behind her eyes, the taste of copper and smoke. Someone tried to seal it. Failed. She traced the edge of the carving with her boot. Or they sealed it in the wrong direction. Isolde stepped onto the dais. Her bare toes parted the sand without disturbing the symbols beneath. The bridge does not sleep. It waits for the right hunger. She turned her lavender gaze to Rory. You carry two keys. One burns. One chills. Which will you turn? I don’t turn anything, Rory said flatly. I’m here to figure out why a half-mile of sidewalk suddenly decided to grow a staircase to Hell. Because the Solstice approaches, Nyx said quietly. The Veil weakens. What is closed will crack. What is cracked will bleed. You think you are navigating stone. You are walking through a wound. A low groan echoed through the chamber. The amber sky beyond the root-canopy darkened. The membranes along the walls shuddered, tearing slightly at the seams. Cold air rushed in from somewhere deep below, carrying the scent of frost and ozone. The temperature plummeted. Rory’s breath plumed in front of her. Instinctively, she shifted her weight, her right hand closing around the hilt of the Fae blade. The steel never warmed, but the grip fit her palm like it had been cast for her bones. Unease is the body’s grammar for truth, Isolde said, her voice unbothered by the chill. Do not argue with it. Listen to its syntax. Rory ignored the riddle. She scanned the ceiling, the walls, the floor. The tear in the membrane widened. Something pressed against it from the other side—dark, multi-limbed, hungry. Not quite physical. Not quite spirit. A fraying edge of the Veil, caught between realms, bleeding through. If it breached, it wouldn’t stay contained to this room. It would climb the stairs. It would follow their heat. Nyx, Rory said, not taking her eyes off the tear. Incorporeal. Can you push it back? I am the push, Nyx replied, already unraveling. Their shadow detached from the floor, flowing upward like spilled oil. Where they moved, the air warped, cold and thick. Nyx passed through the membrane as if it were smoke. For a heartbeat, nothing happened. Then the tear shuddered, stitching itself tighter as shades of living darkness wove through the rupture, sealing the gap from both sides. The amber light steadied. The groaning ceased. Nyx reformed on the dais, solid again, but paler. Their violet eyes dimmed. It knows we are here now. It will remember the shape of your pulse. Rory exhaled slowly. Good. Let it remember. Next time, we won’t give it a target. She turned back to the monolith. The Crimson vein had stabilized, but the pressure remained. This wasn’t a dead place. It was a lock. And locks don’t turn by accident. She pulled the Heartstone pendant free, letting it rest against her palm. It hummed, aligning with the carvings below. Without thinking, she pressed it into the center indentation she’d only just noticed—a perfect hollow, shaped exactly like a thumbnail’s width. The stone clicked into place. Warmth flooded outward, gentle and absolute. The hematite slab split down the middle, not with a crack, but with the soft sigh of opening doors. Beyond it lay a corridor sloping downward, lined with lanterns that ignited one by one as they walked. The air smelled of rain-washed stone and old parchment. Somewhere deep below, water dripped. Somewhere else, a bell tolled once, clear and final. Fate opens doors only for those who stop knocking, Isolde said, stepping past the threshold. Her silver hair caught the new light, scattering it into prisms across the floor. Rory slotted the Heartstone back against her chest, feeling it settle into rhythm with her own heartbeat. She adjusted her bag, tested the weight of the blade, and followed. Behind her, Nyx lingered a moment longer, watching the sealed membrane fade back into ordinary stone. Then they moved, a whisper trailing in their wake. They walked into the dark, together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unraveling"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"crystalline"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"navigated"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"traced"
count1
16
word"navigating"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"chill"
count1
19
word"scanned"
count1
20
word"pulse"
count1
21
word"perfect"
count1
22
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"unraveling"
5"footsteps"
6"weight"
7"crystalline"
8"throbbed"
9"calculating"
10"navigated"
11"silk"
12"etched"
13"trembled"
14"echo"
15"traced"
16"navigating"
17"echoed"
18"chill"
19"scanned"
20"pulse"
21"perfect"
22"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences160
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1515
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions8
matches
0"We walk while the path believes itself open, Isolde said finally, her pale lavender eyes fixed on some distant convergen…"
1"Charming welcome, Rory muttered, adjusting the strap of her messenger bag."
2"Look up, Nyx whispered."
3"Torn is such a violent word, Nyx said, their form flickering as they drifted closer to a pillar etched with spiraling si…"
4"Because the Solstice approaches, Nyx said quietly."
5"Nyx, Rory said, not taking her eyes off the tear."
6"I am the push, Nyx replied, already unraveling."
7"Fate opens doors only for those who stop knocking, Isolde said, stepping past the threshold."
93.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1503
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
London2
Heartstone6
Nyx10
Shade2
Half-Fae1
Grove1
Isolde7
Fae-forged1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Veil3
Aldric1
Hell1
Solstice1
Fae3
Crimson1
You4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Nyx"
3"Shade"
4"Isolde"
5"Evan"
6"Veil"
7"Aldric"
8"Solstice"
9"You"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Hell"
globalScore0.934
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something between stone and cooled glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.66
wordCount1515
matches
0"not with a crack, but with the soft sigh of opening doors"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences160
matches
0"touch that, they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean56.11
std37.12
cv0.662
sampleLengths
091
159
2114
332
490
5124
64
7112
87
911
1031
11117
1238
1349
1446
1525
1632
1784
1824
1965
2016
2199
2285
2371
2429
2554
266
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences160
matches
0"been torn"
1"is bound"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs299
matches
0"wasn’t visiting"
1"were standing"
17.86% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences160
ratio0.044
matches
0"It did not merely cool or warm; it thickened, carrying the scent of crushed pepper and damp loam, heavy enough to coat the back of Rory’s throat."
1"Every instinct screamed to turn back, but the cool, calculating part of her—the part that still navigated Cardiff alleys after midnight deliveries and London backstreets—kicked in."
2"Through one, she saw movement—vast, rippling shapes drifting in a liquid sky."
3"Images surfaced—faces she didn’t know, places that bent reality, a city built inside a storm, then ash, then seed."
4"The visions faded, but the echo remained—a pressure behind her eyes, the taste of copper and smoke."
5"Something pressed against it from the other side—dark, multi-limbed, hungry."
6"Without thinking, she pressed it into the center indentation she’d only just noticed—a perfect hollow, shaped exactly like a thumbnail’s width."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount462
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03463203463203463
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.012987012987012988
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean9.47
std6.47
cv0.683
sampleLengths
04
127
218
316
43
523
617
723
815
94
107
111
121
1317
1415
1523
165
1711
1815
1913
206
2124
224
234
2411
2516
2619
277
2825
2912
3011
3112
3225
3335
346
3526
363
373
383
394
404
4116
4211
4312
4415
4516
4614
471
488
496
67.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.45625
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners73
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences151
matches
0"Instinctively, she shifted her weight,"
1"Then the tear shuddered, stitching"
2"Somewhere deep below, water dripped."
3"Somewhere else, a bell tolled"
4"Then they moved, a whisper"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences151
matches
0"It did not merely cool"
1"She stepped over the fractured"
2"Her breath hitched."
3"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
4"It watches you back."
5"She kept her boots flat"
6"She did not speak immediately."
7"She slipped it into her"
8"We walk while the path"
9"It feeds on hesitation."
10"She hadn’t asked how it"
11"They descended a spiral staircase"
12"They weren’t just in a"
13"They were standing on the"
14"It’s been torn."
15"She stepped forward, drawn by"
16"She reached out."
17"You shouldn’t touch that, they"
18"It remembers the hand that"
19"She traced the edge of"
ratio0.285
95.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences151
matches
0"The air changed first."
1"It did not merely cool"
2"She stepped over the fractured"
3"Her breath hitched."
4"The Heartstone at her collarbone"
5"The Shade hovered half a"
6"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
7"It watches you back."
8"Rory forced her gaze off"
9"She kept her boots flat"
10"Isolde moved ahead, her bare"
11"The Half-Fae seer’s silver hair"
12"She did not speak immediately."
13"Time seemed to stretch here,"
14"An hour outside the Grove"
15"Rory checked her watch anyway,"
16"She slipped it into her"
17"We walk while the path"
18"The gate remembers footsteps."
19"It feeds on hesitation."
ratio0.728
99.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences151
matches
0"Now, standing in a tomb"
1"Because the Solstice approaches, Nyx"
2"If it breached, it wouldn’t"
ratio0.02
52.15% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The Heartstone at her collarbone pulsed against her sternum, a slow, deliberate warmth that traveled up her neck and settled behind her ribs."
1"The Half-Fae seer’s silver hair spilled down her back like spun moonlight, catching the ambient glow that bled from fissures in the walls."
2"Isolde had simply placed it in her hands three nights ago, her fingers untouched by fever, her voice a quiet certainty that brooked no argument."
3"They descended a spiral staircase that refused to obey gravity’s logic."
4"The walls grew taller, ribbed like the interior of a colossal shell, streaked with veins of crystalline gold that throbbed in time with the Heartstone."
5"The ceiling arched high above, dissolving into a canopy of suspended roots that glowed faintly amber."
6"Figures in ash-stained robes moved through orchards that defied seasons, harvesting spices that hissed when touched."
7"Torn is such a violent word, Nyx said, their form flickering as they drifted closer to a pillar etched with spiraling sigils."
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