| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1522 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.02% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1522 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "unraveling" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "crystalline" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "calculating" | | 10 | "navigated" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "traced" | | 16 | "navigating" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "chill" | | 19 | "scanned" | | 20 | "pulse" | | 21 | "perfect" | | 22 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 160 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1515 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "We walk while the path believes itself open, Isolde said finally, her pale lavender eyes fixed on some distant convergen…" | | 1 | "Charming welcome, Rory muttered, adjusting the strap of her messenger bag." | | 2 | "Look up, Nyx whispered." | | 3 | "Torn is such a violent word, Nyx said, their form flickering as they drifted closer to a pillar etched with spiraling si…" | | 4 | "Because the Solstice approaches, Nyx said quietly." | | 5 | "Nyx, Rory said, not taking her eyes off the tear." | | 6 | "I am the push, Nyx replied, already unraveling." | | 7 | "Fate opens doors only for those who stop knocking, Isolde said, stepping past the threshold." |
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| 93.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1503 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 17 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Nyx | 10 | | Shade | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Aldric | 1 | | Hell | 1 | | Solstice | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Crimson | 1 | | You | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Veil" | | 7 | "Aldric" | | 8 | "Solstice" | | 9 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Hell" |
| | globalScore | 0.934 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something between stone and cooled glass" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.66 | | wordCount | 1515 | | matches | | 0 | "not with a crack, but with the soft sigh of opening doors" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 56.11 | | std | 37.12 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 114 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 90 | | 5 | 124 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 112 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 117 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 84 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 99 | | 22 | 85 | | 23 | 71 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 299 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t visiting" | | 1 | "were standing" |
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| 17.86% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 160 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not merely cool or warm; it thickened, carrying the scent of crushed pepper and damp loam, heavy enough to coat the back of Rory’s throat." | | 1 | "Every instinct screamed to turn back, but the cool, calculating part of her—the part that still navigated Cardiff alleys after midnight deliveries and London backstreets—kicked in." | | 2 | "Through one, she saw movement—vast, rippling shapes drifting in a liquid sky." | | 3 | "Images surfaced—faces she didn’t know, places that bent reality, a city built inside a storm, then ash, then seed." | | 4 | "The visions faded, but the echo remained—a pressure behind her eyes, the taste of copper and smoke." | | 5 | "Something pressed against it from the other side—dark, multi-limbed, hungry." | | 6 | "Without thinking, she pressed it into the center indentation she’d only just noticed—a perfect hollow, shaped exactly like a thumbnail’s width." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 462 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.03463203463203463 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012987012987012988 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 160 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 160 | | mean | 9.47 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 67.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.45625 | | totalSentences | 160 | | uniqueOpeners | 73 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "Instinctively, she shifted her weight," | | 1 | "Then the tear shuddered, stitching" | | 2 | "Somewhere deep below, water dripped." | | 3 | "Somewhere else, a bell tolled" | | 4 | "Then they moved, a whisper" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not merely cool" | | 1 | "She stepped over the fractured" | | 2 | "Her breath hitched." | | 3 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 4 | "It watches you back." | | 5 | "She kept her boots flat" | | 6 | "She did not speak immediately." | | 7 | "She slipped it into her" | | 8 | "We walk while the path" | | 9 | "It feeds on hesitation." | | 10 | "She hadn’t asked how it" | | 11 | "They descended a spiral staircase" | | 12 | "They weren’t just in a" | | 13 | "They were standing on the" | | 14 | "It’s been torn." | | 15 | "She stepped forward, drawn by" | | 16 | "She reached out." | | 17 | "You shouldn’t touch that, they" | | 18 | "It remembers the hand that" | | 19 | "She traced the edge of" |
| | ratio | 0.285 | |
| 95.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 110 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "It did not merely cool" | | 2 | "She stepped over the fractured" | | 3 | "Her breath hitched." | | 4 | "The Heartstone at her collarbone" | | 5 | "The Shade hovered half a" | | 6 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 7 | "It watches you back." | | 8 | "Rory forced her gaze off" | | 9 | "She kept her boots flat" | | 10 | "Isolde moved ahead, her bare" | | 11 | "The Half-Fae seer’s silver hair" | | 12 | "She did not speak immediately." | | 13 | "Time seemed to stretch here," | | 14 | "An hour outside the Grove" | | 15 | "Rory checked her watch anyway," | | 16 | "She slipped it into her" | | 17 | "We walk while the path" | | 18 | "The gate remembers footsteps." | | 19 | "It feeds on hesitation." |
| | ratio | 0.728 | |
| 99.34% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in a tomb" | | 1 | "Because the Solstice approaches, Nyx" | | 2 | "If it breached, it wouldn’t" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 52.15% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone at her collarbone pulsed against her sternum, a slow, deliberate warmth that traveled up her neck and settled behind her ribs." | | 1 | "The Half-Fae seer’s silver hair spilled down her back like spun moonlight, catching the ambient glow that bled from fissures in the walls." | | 2 | "Isolde had simply placed it in her hands three nights ago, her fingers untouched by fever, her voice a quiet certainty that brooked no argument." | | 3 | "They descended a spiral staircase that refused to obey gravity’s logic." | | 4 | "The walls grew taller, ribbed like the interior of a colossal shell, streaked with veins of crystalline gold that throbbed in time with the Heartstone." | | 5 | "The ceiling arched high above, dissolving into a canopy of suspended roots that glowed faintly amber." | | 6 | "Figures in ash-stained robes moved through orchards that defied seasons, harvesting spices that hissed when touched." | | 7 | "Torn is such a violent word, Nyx said, their form flickering as they drifted closer to a pillar etched with spiraling sigils." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |