Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HCXJ6KCEKT4T98KCVEKAE3

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Duration:
7m 12s
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$0.105858
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Alibaba

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on Lucien Moreau's ruin. His shoulder braced against Eva's doorframe. Blood darkened the breast pocket of his charcoal suit. The ivory handle of his cane caught the stairwell light, and his fingers whitened around it. Ptolemy yowled at my ankles. Lucien smiled. It lacked his usual arrogance. "Aurora." "No." I shoved the door closed. The edge struck his cane. The ivory head jammed between door and frame, and the blade concealed inside rattled with a soft lethal click. "Five minutes." French softened the consonants. "You get two words." "One. Aurora." "That makes two." His black eye stayed still. The amber one sharpened. "You always did count badly when you were angry." "I count perfectly. I dislike the number you bring." Bergamot, rain, and copper spilled into the hallway. Beneath the blood, sulphur clung to him. Avaros. The demon realm had marked him since birth, but tonight it smelled close. Fresh. My Golden Empress delivery jacket still smelled of ginger and petrol. I pulled it tighter. "The chain is still on," he said. "So is my patience." "May I come in?" "No." "Aurora." "Say it again and I slam your fingers." He looked down at the narrow gap. His lips thinned. "Evan found you." My thumb found the crescent scar on my left wrist. I forced it away. "Evan is in Cardiff." "Evan stayed in Cardiff. Now he stands three streets from this door, and he carries a name that does not belong to him." Ptolemy pushed past my leg and sniffed the blood on Lucien's sleeve. The tabby's fur rose. He did not run. "Whose name?" I asked. Lucien's gaze dropped to my mouth for half a second. Half a second told me everything. "Mine." I undid the chain. The door swung wide. "Inside. Do not touch the books." He crossed the threshold with the careful grace of a man hiding a limp. I shut the door and turned the three deadbolts. The sound felt small against the smell of blood. Eva's flat closed around him. Every surface sagged under her research. Scrolls, paperbacks, sticky notes, takeaway menus, cold cups of tea, and a broken stapler fought for space. Ptolemy leapt onto the kitchen counter and glared. Lucien surveyed the mess. "Where is Eva?" "Research trip. She left me the cat and the curry fumes." "Good." "No. Not good." "She is safer away. So are you, if we finish this." "She has a protection text." "She has a cat." "The text, Aurora. A vellum page. Eva copied it from a Bruges archive." "You know Eva?" "I know the people who kill for what she collects." He swayed. The cane stabbed down. The tip punctured a curry house flyer. I caught his elbow before thought could stop me. His suit felt damp. Warm. "Sit," I said. "I prefer standing." "You prefer bleeding on my friend's floor. Sit." He sat on the edge of the sofa. A tower of books leaned against his shoulder. He did not push it away. I fetched the first aid tin from beneath a pile of unopened bills. Whisky too. Eva kept a good bottle for bad magic. When I returned, Lucien had unbuttoned his jacket. The white shirt beneath had gone red. "Show me." His hands stayed still. "Aurora." "If you faint, I charge you for the carpet." "I never faint. I renegotiate consciousness." "That sounds like something a coward would invent." He gave a rough laugh and peeled the shirt open. Three parallel lines scored his ribs. Their edges ran black instead of red. The skin around them glistened with an oily heat. I poured whisky over the wound. The smell bit the air. Lucien inhaled through his teeth. "You could warn a man." "You could warn me before bleeding in a flat above a curry house." I dabbed the black edges. "This is not a blade." "It is a signature." "Whose?" "My father's." My hand paused. The cloth darkened beneath my fingers. "He found you," I said. "He found the person who stole his property." "You mean me." Lucien did not answer. His amber eye burned. The black one stayed empty. He wore the look of a man weighing truths and finding them too expensive to spend. "You left me at Paddington," I said. "I put you on a train." "I got off." "Yes. You always refused easy safety." "You decided I needed it." "I decided Evan would kill you if I stayed." "Evan never touched me again." "No. He did not." A muscle moved beneath his skin. "That was the point." I pressed the whisky-soaked cloth into the wound. He cursed in French. "You gave him my name." "I gave him Malphora. A story. A smoke screen. I never meant for him to find the flesh beneath it." "Names are flesh." "Yes." His voice dropped. "I learned that when you started answering to it." My hand hovered over the wound. His fingers closed around my wrist. Not hard. The heat of him shocked through my skin. His thumb settled over the crescent scar. "You still press it when you think," he said. "I stopped." "You stopped when anyone watched." I pulled free. The whisky bottle clinked against the tin. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "Evan has a page from Eva's research. He does not understand it, but he knows enough to open a door." "What door?" "The kind that answers when a jealous man knocks." Ptolemy hissed. The flat fell quiet. Even the traffic on Brick Lane stepped back. "Three streets," I said. "Less now." I stood. "The page. Where did he take it?" "He did not take it. Eva hid it here. Evan has a copy. A bad one. That is why he needs you." "He needs me dead." "He needs you named." Lucien rose. The tower of books slid. He caught it with his free hand. "The ritual requires a true name. Evan knows Aurora Carter. He does not know Malphora." The name hit colder than the draught from the floorboards. I had buried Malphora under delivery receipts and false invoices. A shadow name. A street name. A name for nights when a woman alone needed teeth. "Who told him?" "I did." "You traded me." "I traded a ghost. Evan made it flesh." "And you thought I would forgive the arithmetic." "I thought you would survive it." I picked up the whisky bottle. My hands stayed steady. I hated him for noticing. "Where would Eva hide a true-name page?" he asked. "With something alive." My gaze went to Ptolemy. The cat had moved to the bookshelf. He sat on a hollowed-out copy of London County Council drainage law. "There." Lucien blinked. "You are certain." "Ptolemy sits on Eva's secrets when she pays him in chicken." I lifted the cat. He complained in a low offended rumble. Beneath the book lay a folded square of vellum. The ink shimmered green and black. Lucien's breath changed. "That is it." I held it away. "You will tell me what it does before I hand it over." "It anchors a ward. Blood binds it." "Your blood." "Anyone's. Mine simply remembers Avaros." I looked at the wound, the black edges spreading. "You are not well enough for blood magic." "I am well enough." "You are standing through spite." "Spite has kept me alive for thirty-two years." "It has a poor record tonight." He stepped closer. The books crunched under his shoe. He did not look down. "Aurora. Give me the page." "No." His hand lifted. It hung between us. Then his fingers brushed a strand of black hair from my cheek. The touch was light. Dangerous. More dangerous than the blade in his cane. "Please," he said. The word scraped raw. I hated how my body answered. The flat narrowed around us, around the scent of whisky, blood, and bergamot. My pulse beat in the scar where his thumb had rested. I folded the vellum into a smaller square. "We do this my way." "Your way?" "No dramatic French. No bargains with your father. No leaving me on train platforms." His mouth twisted. "I can agree to two of those." "All three." "All three." He turned the cane. The ivory handle twisted, and a slim blade slid out with a whisper of steel. I did not step back. He cut his palm. The blood welled dark, too dark for a human wound. He pressed his hand to the vellum. The ink moved. Green became black. Black became gold. "The threshold," he said. He drew a sigil on the inside of the door. The wood hissed. Ptolemy leapt from the counter. The cat's eyes went wide and round. "It needs an anchor," Lucien said. "Use your own." "It is already bound to me. The ward needs the person it must protect." My wrist throbbed before he touched it. "No blood on Eva's rug." "I require only a line." The blade hovered. I nodded. He drew the tip across my skin. Not over the old crescent. Beside it. The sting bit small and precise. His blood touched mine, and the floor shifted under my feet. His free hand came up to steady me. His palm pressed the small of my back. The heat of him soaked through my shirt. "Breathe," he said. "I am breathing." "You are arguing. Breathing comes later." The sigil on the door glowed. The vellum in his hand caught the same light. Words surfaced beneath the ink. Names. Rory. Aurora. Carter. Malphora. Each one pulled tight like a wire. His face crowded mine. Too close. The amber eye glowed. The black one swallowed the lamplight. I felt the spell through his chest, through the blood drying on my wrist, through the place where his thumb traced my pulse. "Lucien." "I know." "Finish the ward." "I have." "Then move." "I cannot." His gaze dropped to my mouth. My body leaned before my pride could speak. His breath touched my lips. French slipped from him, soft as a cut. "Mon cœur." I grabbed the front of his ruined shirt. The ward screamed. Blue light snapped across the ceiling. Ptolemy shrieked. The books on the shelves fell in a sudden ragged wave. Someone knocked. Three slow knocks. From the front door. Lucien went still. His mouth left the space it had nearly claimed. "Rory." Evan's voice came through the wood. Gentle. Familiar. Wrong. "Open the door, love. I know you're in there." I stared at Lucien. "He cannot know I am here." "He does." The first deadbolt turned.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences125
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.256
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1754
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1754
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"pulse"
2"whisper"
3"throbbed"
4"traced"
5"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences190
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences190
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences298
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1754
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1095
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien14
Moreau1
Eva3
Golden1
Empress1
French3
Brick1
Lane1
Malphora2
Ptolemy7
London1
County1
Council1
Gentle1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"French"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"County"
4"Council"
globalScore0.861
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1754
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences298
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs187
mean9.38
std9.07
cv0.967
sampleLengths
07
131
25
37
41
51
629
76
84
92
103
119
129
139
1430
1515
167
174
184
191
201
218
2210
233
2414
254
2623
2720
284
2916
301
318
326
3332
3436
354
363
3711
381
393
4011
415
424
4313
443
4510
4613
4714
483
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences190
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences298
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1097
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.019143117593436645
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018231540565177757
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences298
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences298
mean5.89
std3.95
cv0.671
sampleLengths
07
16
29
316
45
52
65
71
81
95
105
1119
126
134
142
153
165
174
189
199
208
217
221
2313
241
2511
264
277
284
294
301
311
328
337
343
353
3610
374
384
3923
4012
414
424
434
4410
456
461
474
484
496
42.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.28523489932885904
totalSentences298
uniqueOpeners85
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences153
matches
0"Even the traffic on Brick"
1"Then his fingers brushed a"
2"More dangerous than the blade"
ratio0.02
34.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences153
matches
0"His shoulder braced against Eva's"
1"It lacked his usual arrogance."
2"I shoved the door closed."
3"His black eye stayed still."
4"My Golden Empress delivery jacket"
5"I pulled it tighter."
6"He looked down at the"
7"His lips thinned."
8"My thumb found the crescent"
9"I forced it away."
10"He did not run."
11"I undid the chain."
12"He crossed the threshold with"
13"I shut the door and"
14"I caught his elbow before"
15"His suit felt damp."
16"He sat on the edge"
17"He did not push it"
18"I fetched the first aid"
19"His hands stayed still."
ratio0.464
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount138
totalSentences153
matches
0"The door opened on Lucien"
1"His shoulder braced against Eva's"
2"Blood darkened the breast pocket"
3"The ivory handle of his"
4"Ptolemy yowled at my ankles."
5"It lacked his usual arrogance."
6"I shoved the door closed."
7"The edge struck his cane."
8"The ivory head jammed between"
9"French softened the consonants"
10"His black eye stayed still."
11"The amber one sharpened."
12"Bergamot, rain, and copper spilled"
13"The demon realm had marked"
14"My Golden Empress delivery jacket"
15"I pulled it tighter."
16"He looked down at the"
17"His lips thinned."
18"My thumb found the crescent"
19"I forced it away."
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences125
tagDensity0.096
leniency0.192
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.1660%