Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HCY3H35PBPWFVXAWA1XG15

Run Details

Duration:
34.1s
Cost:
$0.000538
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate groaned shut behind her. Rory stood still and watched the heavy bolts slide into place, though she hadn't touched them. Richmond Park vanished beyond the threshold. Only the grove remained. The air thickened instantly, carrying the weight of crushed violets and wet slate. Her boots sank into moss that yielded like packed snow. She kept her hands visible, fingers resting against the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone pressed warm against her collarbone. A slow, steady throb matched the rhythm of her pulse. She had followed a single white envelope to this coordinate. The paper held only a compass reading and a sketch of these very stones. Evan had vanished near the perimeter three months ago. He left his keys on the kitchen counter. His phone recorded nothing but static. She stepped forward. The oak standing stones rose around her, twisted trunks polished smooth by centuries of rain. Their bark peeled in long curls that caught the moonlight and held it, casting amber reflections on the forest floor. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals open and vivid in colors that did not belong to autumn. Crimson blossoms, pale yellow, deep indigo. They should have wilted. Instead, their centers breathed. Tiny filaments extended and retracted in unison. Rory counted her steps. Twelve paces. Twenty-four. Forty-eight. The distance felt wrong. Her watch ticked normally, but the space between ticks stretched thin. An hour could pass in the span of a heartbeat. Minutes could swallow entire days. Time frayed at the edges here. A crack echoed from her left. She turned. Branches shifted overhead, shedding needles that drifted downward in slow arcs. The canopy moved without wind. Leaves rearranged themselves against the sky. She kept walking. The pendant warmed again, sharper this time. A warning or a pull. She couldn't tell. Her scar throbbed beneath the fabric of her sleeve, a familiar ache that usually signaled stress. Tonight it burned. She flexed her left hand. The crescent mark stood out pale against skin dusted with dirt. Ten years old. A dropped pan. A hospital corridor. She pushed the memory aside and focused on the path ahead. Something scraped against stone behind her. Dry. Rhythmic. Like a fingernail dragging along rough wood. She stopped. Breath fogged in front of her face. The temperature hadn't dropped, yet the vapor formed anyway. She waited. Silence pooled around her boots. Then another scrape, closer this time. From the other side of the nearest standing stone. She drew the utility knife from her coat pocket. The blade slid free with a soft metallic sigh. She angled her body toward the cover of the trunk. Her dark hair stuck to her cheeks, plastered flat by the humid air. She blinked slowly. The space beside the stone held only shadow and fallen petals. Yet the air carried movement. A shape detached itself from the darkness. Not a person. A cluster of hanging vines, suspended mid-sway, then snapping back as if yanked inward. She exhaled. Kept the knife raised. Footsteps answered hers. Slow. Deliberate. Roots lifted from the soil ahead, peeling back like curled parchment. The ground sloped downward into a depression she hadn't noticed. The wildflowers grew denser here, stems twisting into patterns that resembled tangled script. She stepped onto the descending path. Her heel caught on a protruding root. She steadied herself, knuckles white on the knife handle. The pendant pulsed twice, hard enough to sting her skin. Heat radiated up her chest. A Hel portal sat deeper in the grove. She knew that now. The envelope hadn't lied. Evan hadn't wandered off. He had followed a trail similar to hers. He hadn't returned. A voice cut through the stillness. Not loud. Not human. It shaped consonants from the rustle of dry grass, molded vowels from dripping condensation. Words formed clearly enough to parse. You carry the shard backward. Rory tightened her grip. The blade trembled. She didn't lower her stance. Who's speaking. The trees leaned inward. Boughs crossed overhead, blocking the last slivers of moonlight. The temperature plummeted. Frost traced geometric lines across the undersides of the leaves. The voice responded without pausing. You bring it home. You drag it here. The words landed like stones in water. Each syllable rippled outward. She listened past the syntax. Listened to the cadence. It repeated phrases. Reversed them. Layered them over one another until the meaning fractured. She lowered the knife an inch. Let her shoulders drop. Panic would blind her. Observation would save her. Another set of sounds reached her. Wet footfalls. Heavy. Close. To her right. She pivoted. The darkness beyond the stone swallowed the space completely. Something stood there. Height obscured by shifting fog. Shoulders narrow. Arms too long. It didn't breathe. It didn't move. It simply existed, pressing against the boundary of her sightline. She took a step back. The ground gave way. Dirt poured over her boot edges. She planted her feet. The figure tilted its head. A joint cracked. Sharp. Final. The voice returned, closer now. You see us. You always see us. Rory forced her breathing even. Eyes scanning the perimeter. Left wrist scar prickled. Right ankle met uneven soil. The pendant burned hotter, chains tightening against her neck. She rubbed the crimson stone with her thumb. The surface felt oily. Alive. Beneath her palm, a vibration traveled up her arm. Low. Sustained. The heart of a machine or a creature. She couldn't distinguish which. Branches snapped overhead. Multiple fractures. Rapid succession. Shapes fell from the canopy, landing softly in the undergrowth. Four figures. Five. Seven. They didn't walk. They unfolded. Limbs extending from trunks, peeling from bark, stepping down from deadwood. Leaves adhered to their skins. Moss matted their hair. Faces remained smooth plates of wood and stone, featureless except for shallow depressions where eyes should rest. None advanced. None retreated. They arranged themselves in a loose semicircle around the slope. The circle closed inward. Tightening. Rory backed up. One step. Two. Her heel struck something solid. A buried stone. Flat. Engraved. She crouched, brushing away damp soil. Symbols etched into the rock. Spiral marks intersecting with jagged lines. Old Welsh. Older than Cardiff. Older than Ireland. She traced the carving with a gloved finger. The grove hummed louder. The Hum grew. Flowers bent toward her. Stems bowing in perfect unison. The air tasted of copper and crushed petals. She stood. Knife horizontal. Thumb on the guard. The closest figure stepped forward. Root-like toes tore through the soil. Dirt flew. It halted three paces away. Extended an arm. Palm open. Fingers curved like grasping branches. The voice spoke once more. Clear. Direct. Unmistakable. Leave the stone. Step back. Choose your exit. She didn't answer. Her eyes tracked the gap between two standing figures. Six paces wide. Open space beyond. Clear. She weighed the angle. Calculated speed. Distance to cover. Heart rate steady. Adrenaline spiking but contained. She shifted her weight to her right leg. Left foot prepared to pivot. The figure in front of her lowered its palm further. The wooden skin split. A dark hollow opened inside. Viscous fluid coated the interior walls. Dripped slowly onto the moss. It stained green. It ate into the soil. The pendant flared bright crimson. Light spilled from the stone, casting sharp shadows across the clearing. Faces reflected in the glow. Dozens of them. Pressed against the backs of the figures. Silent. Waiting. Eyes wide. Pupils dilated. Evan's. Familiar jawline. Hollow cheeks. Staring directly at her. Mouth slightly open. No sound. No movement. Just presence. Trapped. Stretched. Folded into the grove's architecture. Rory stepped forward instead of back. Blade raised. Chain pulled taut. The clearing held its breath. Figures adjusted posture. Heads turned in unison. The voice returned, layered over itself, rising in pitch. You read the markers wrong. You invited the threshold. You brought him to the gate.
created_at"2026-09-02T15:48:51.885Z" 9/2/2026, 3:48:51 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
77.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"completely"
3"softly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"traced"
count2
12
word"fractured"
count1
13
word"scanning"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"perfect"
count1
16
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"throb"
2"pulse"
3"echoed"
4"throbbed"
5"familiar"
6"rhythmic"
7"silence"
8"footsteps"
9"pulsed"
10"trembled"
11"traced"
12"fractured"
13"scanning"
14"etched"
15"perfect"
16"calculated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences257
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences257
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences257
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1307
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1307
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Park1
Heartstone1
Hel1
Welsh1
Cardiff1
Ireland1
Hum1
Rory6
Evan3
You8
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Hum"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"You"
places
0"Park"
1"Cardiff"
2"Ireland"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1307
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences257
matches(empty)
24.40% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean145.22
std34.19
cv0.235
sampleLengths
0134
1119
2103
3145
4107
5140
6157
7207
8195
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences257
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs248
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences257
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1310
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03435114503816794
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.011450381679389313
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences257
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences257
mean5.09
std3.54
cv0.697
sampleLengths
07
116
26
34
413
510
614
77
810
910
1014
119
128
136
143
1515
1620
1716
186
194
204
217
224
232
241
251
264
2711
2810
295
306
316
322
3311
345
356
363
377
385
393
4016
413
425
4311
443
453
463
4711
486
491
79.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.5175097276264592
totalSentences257
uniqueOpeners133
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences195
matches
0"Only the grove remained."
1"Instead, their centers breathed."
2"Then another scrape, closer this"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences195
matches
0"Her boots sank into moss"
1"She kept her hands visible,"
2"She had followed a single"
3"He left his keys on"
4"His phone recorded nothing but"
5"She stepped forward."
6"Their bark peeled in long"
7"They should have wilted."
8"Her watch ticked normally, but"
9"She kept walking."
10"She couldn't tell."
11"Her scar throbbed beneath the"
12"She flexed her left hand."
13"She pushed the memory aside"
14"She drew the utility knife"
15"She angled her body toward"
16"Her dark hair stuck to"
17"She blinked slowly."
18"She stepped onto the descending"
19"Her heel caught on a"
ratio0.287
44.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount162
totalSentences195
matches
0"The iron gate groaned shut"
1"Rory stood still and watched"
2"Richmond Park vanished beyond the"
3"The air thickened instantly, carrying"
4"Her boots sank into moss"
5"She kept her hands visible,"
6"The Heartstone pressed warm against"
7"A slow, steady throb matched"
8"She had followed a single"
9"The paper held only a"
10"Evan had vanished near the"
11"He left his keys on"
12"His phone recorded nothing but"
13"She stepped forward."
14"The oak standing stones rose"
15"Their bark peeled in long"
16"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals"
17"Crimson blossoms, pale yellow, deep"
18"They should have wilted."
19"Rory counted her steps."
ratio0.831
25.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences195
matches
0"To her right."
ratio0.005
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Their bark peeled in long curls that caught the moonlight and held it, casting amber reflections on the forest floor."
1"A cluster of hanging vines, suspended mid-sway, then snapping back as if yanked inward."
2"The wildflowers grew denser here, stems twisting into patterns that resembled tangled script."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.8011%