| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 76.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1474 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "cautiously" | | 4 | "sharply" | | 5 | "softly" | | 6 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1474 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "echoes" | | 4 | "resonated" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "maw" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "variables" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "tension" | | 16 | "fractured" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "familiar" | | 19 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 188 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 188 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1474 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "It is beautiful, Isolde whispered." | | 1 | "Beautiful things usually have teeth, Nyx murmured." | | 2 | "We are being measured, Nyx said, drifting sideways along the wall." | | 3 | "I mean what the pendant seeks, Isolde replied." | | 4 | "Shut up, Nyx, Rory said, but there was no heat in it." | | 5 | "Offerings, Isolde breathed, stepping to the edge." | | 6 | "Do not touch it, Nyx warned, voice sharp now, all whisper gone." | | 7 | "It knows mine too, Nyx said softly." |
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| 88.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1474 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Isolde | 10 | | Rory | 18 | | Nyx | 8 | | Seer | 2 | | Little | 2 | | Carrier | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Earth | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Wardens | 1 | | English | 1 | | Welsh | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Carter" | | 6 | "Veil" | | 7 | "Wardens" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.889 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a dream spun from bad wine" | | 1 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she didn’t look directly at them" | | 2 | "looked like petrified roots" | | 3 | "as if reading braille written on nothing" |
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| 64.31% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.357 | | wordCount | 1474 | | matches | | 0 | "not of them, but of faces" | | 1 | "not for the pedestal, but for the nearest floating object, a tarnished locket, open, i" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 44.67 | | std | 29.54 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 116 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 120 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 112 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 65 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 44 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 188 | | matches | | 0 | "was used" | | 1 | "were calcified" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 289 | | matches | | 0 | "was reacting" | | 1 | "were beginning" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 188 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1485 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint, sickly yellow light." |
| | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.03838383838383838 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015488215488215488 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 188 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 188 | | mean | 7.84 | | std | 5.47 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 72.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.48404255319148937 | | totalSentences | 188 | | uniqueOpeners | 91 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere above, something dripped." | | 1 | "Then another sound joined it," | | 2 | "All arranged in concentric circles" | | 3 | "Then the black glass rippled." | | 4 | "Instead, she pressed her palm" | | 5 | "Somewhere deep below, a bell" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "She tugged the silver chain" | | 1 | "It is beautiful, Isolde whispered." | | 2 | "Her voice barely displaced the" | | 3 | "She simply stood there, pale" | | 4 | "Their voice slid from the" | | 5 | "She led the way down" | | 6 | "They were translucent, veined with" | | 7 | "You hear echoes because the" | | 8 | "She did not answer." | | 9 | "She was used to riddles," | | 10 | "They moved deeper." | | 11 | "We are being measured, Nyx" | | 12 | "Their form flickered, bleeding into" | | 13 | "She raised a slender hand," | | 14 | "You mean my pendant?" | | 15 | "I mean what the pendant" | | 16 | "It only shows the face" | | 17 | "She pointed to the wide" | | 18 | "I cannot tell the difference" | | 19 | "She pushed forward." |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 114 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of ozone" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boot" | | 2 | "She tugged the silver chain" | | 3 | "The deep crimson gem caught" | | 4 | "It is beautiful, Isolde whispered." | | 5 | "Her voice barely displaced the" | | 6 | "Isolde did not leave footprints" | | 7 | "She simply stood there, pale" | | 8 | "Their voice slid from the" | | 9 | "This place remembers blood." | | 10 | "Rory nodded, fingers brushing the" | | 11 | "The Fae-forged dagger was always" | | 12 | "She led the way down" | | 13 | "The corridor widened into a" | | 14 | "Stalactites hung like frozen chandeliers," | | 15 | "They were translucent, veined with" | | 16 | "The floor sloped gently downward," | | 17 | "Every step released a faint" | | 18 | "Rory asked, more to herself" | | 19 | "Isolde tilted her head." |
| | ratio | 0.713 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "If the Heartstone was reacting" | | 1 | "Even dead things had ghosts." | | 2 | "If it swallows, we will" | | 3 | "If the pendant belonged here," |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 56.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boot meeting stone that hummed beneath the sole." | | 1 | "Silver hair fell in an unbroken sheet down her back, untouched by the damp that clung to Rory’s rain-streaked jacket." | | 2 | "They were translucent, veined with slow-drifting amber fluid that caught the ambient glow and scattered it across the walls in liquid prisms." | | 3 | "The floor sloped gently downward, carpeted in something resembling velvet lichen that yielded underfoot without crumbling." | | 4 | "Strange shapes emerged from the periphery: spiraling pillars carved with interlocking symbols that seemed to shift when she didn’t look directly at them." | | 5 | "Pools of iridescent water reflected ceilings that defied architecture, showing constellations unknown to Earth astronomers." | | 6 | "The Heartstone flared, casting long crimson shadows that stretched toward the far arch." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |