| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora stepped carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 86.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1139 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1139 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "desire" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "mechanical" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "porcelain" | | 12 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1136 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 852 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Aurora | 11 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.854 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.88 | | wordCount | 1136 | | matches | | 0 | "not the ring of metal, but the sound of bone striking crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 33.41 | | std | 20.29 | | cv | 0.607 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 83 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 71 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 72 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "Farther down the sloping ridge, sprawling groves gave way to ruins of colossal proportions—arches carved from black stone and petrified wood, stacked tier upon tier into the amber haze." | | 1 | "It was not an earthquake; it was a rhythmic, biological thrum." | | 2 | "Figures moved among the basins—hunched, towering shapes draped in coarse rags, their limbs elongated, moving with the jerky, mechanical precision of clockwork dolls." | | 3 | "Beside her, the crimson Heartstone throbbed once, twice, three times—a fierce, urgent flare of light that illuminated the glass beneath their boots with blood-red brilliance." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 862 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "familiar crescent-shaped ridge" | | 1 | "long, razor-thin ribbons" |
| | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.01740139211136891 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004640371229698376 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 14.75 | | std | 6.97 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 86.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5324675324675324 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She clamped a hand over" | | 1 | "Her bare feet skimmed the" | | 2 | "She shook off the tremor" | | 3 | "Their shadowy form stretched thin," | | 4 | "She reached toward a hanging" | | 5 | "Her fingers stopped an inch" | | 6 | "It was not an earthquake;" | | 7 | "She crouched, resting the flat" | | 8 | "Their violet gaze bored into" | | 9 | "It was not the ring" | | 10 | "It straightened its spine, unfolding" | | 11 | "Its carved mouth snapped open" |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 40.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The tear in the Veil" | | 1 | "Aurora caught her footing on" | | 2 | "Heat slammed into her chest." | | 3 | "She clamped a hand over" | | 4 | "Nyx surged past her, a" | | 5 | "Violet light flickered where their" | | 6 | "Isolde drifted down beside them" | | 7 | "The silver curtain of her" | | 8 | "Her bare feet skimmed the" | | 9 | "Isolde turned her pale lavender" | | 10 | "Aurora pulled the Fae-forged blade" | | 11 | "The leaf-shaped moonsilver caught no" | | 12 | "She shook off the tremor" | | 13 | "Aurora muttered, the dry air" | | 14 | "The sound rustled like dry" | | 15 | "Their shadowy form stretched thin," | | 16 | "She reached toward a hanging" | | 17 | "Her fingers stopped an inch" | | 18 | "Aurora stepped carefully around a" | | 19 | "Every step sent a deep," |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Each basin was the size of a longboat, filled with dark, sluggish fluid that reflected the amber firmament above." | | 1 | "Beside her, the crimson Heartstone throbbed once, twice, three times—a fierce, urgent flare of light that illuminated the glass beneath their boots with blood-r…" |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora muttered, the dry air catching in her throat" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted, their edges fraying into wisps of violet smoke" | | 2 | "Nyx answered, their voice barely a puff of air against her cheek" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.276 | | leniency | 0.552 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.345 | |