Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGASGY7AYQYHP4A6BDP2BB

Run Details

Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.011552
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tear in the Veil snapped behind them with the crack of split bone. Aurora caught her footing on a shelf of obsidian glass, her boots skidding across slick, viridian dust. Heat slammed into her chest. Beneath the collar of her jacket, the Heartstone pendant flared through wool and cotton, scorching her skin like a fresh brand. She clamped a hand over the crimson stone, her thumb finding the familiar crescent-shaped ridge on her left wrist. "Keep moving off the threshold." Nyx surged past her, a towering silhouette of living pitch. Violet light flickered where their eyes should have been, casting long, razor-thin ribbons of darkness across the ground. "The seam knits quickly behind us. If it catches your heel, you leave it behind." Isolde drifted down beside them without a sound, the hem of her pale robes floating over jagged shards of black stone. The silver curtain of her hair stirred in an absent wind, though the air hung thick and dead, smelling of fermented pomegranates, dried blood, and ancient dust. Her bare feet skimmed the glass without leaving a single smear in the viridian powder. "Three crossed the gate, yet only two tread the marrow." Isolde turned her pale lavender eyes toward the cavernous expanse before them. "Look upon what was buried before the first mortal learned to hunger." Aurora pulled the Fae-forged blade from its sheath at her hip. The leaf-shaped moonsilver caught no reflection, radiating a bitter, dry cold that fought the sweltering heat radiating off the walls. She shook off the tremor in her fingers and looked up. Above them stretched an impossible vault, miles high, bathed in the stagnant twilight of a bruised amber sky. Colossal pillars of honeycombed alabaster rose from the floor like petrified arteries, supporting terraces choked with tangled, colorless brambles. Fat, heavy fruits hung from the calcified vines, translucent as blistered skin, glowing with faint, curdled luminescence. Farther down the sloping ridge, sprawling groves gave way to ruins of colossal proportions—arches carved from black stone and petrified wood, stacked tier upon tier into the amber haze. "This is not Earth," Aurora muttered, the dry air catching in her throat. "And this is not your grove, Isolde." "Earth remains a brittle shell above our heads," Nyx whispered. The sound rustled like dry leaves scraped across slate. Their shadowy form stretched thin, drifting ten feet ahead to inspect a massive archway draped in weeping lichen. "The old texts called this the Sunless Kitchen. The threshold to Dymas before the princes carved out their fiefdoms." "A pantry of gods," Isolde murmured. She reached toward a hanging gourd that pulsed with a slow, heavy rhythm. Her fingers stopped an inch from its skin. "Take nothing into your mouth. To taste here is to sign away the dawn." "I have no desire to eat anything that has a pulse." Aurora stepped carefully around a cluster of quartz spires that jutted from the glass floor like serrated teeth. Every step sent a deep, dull vibration through the soles of her boots. It was not an earthquake; it was a rhythmic, biological thrum. The floor beneath them felt less like rock and more like dense, petrified muscle. She crouched, resting the flat of her blade against the obsidian shelf. Moonsilver frost bloomed instantly across the glassy mineral, crackling as it spread, revealing spiraling script engraved deep inside the translucent stone. "Nyx. Look at this." The shade collapsed into a pool of pure ink, sliding across the frost before rising again into an angular humanoid shape beside her. Their violet gaze bored into the frost-rimed runes. "Pre-Severance dialect," Nyx said. "A warden's ledger. It lists vessels delivered, marrow extracted, fat skimmed for the royal cauldrons. Thousands of them. Centuries before London had a name." "Souls?" "Souls. Flesh. Dreams. In the court of the Prince, substance is merely raw dough." Nyx drifted upright, their edges fraying into wisps of violet smoke. "The stone remembers the butchery." Aurora stood, tightening her grip on the hilt of the moonsilver dagger. The Heartstone against her chest pulsed harder, synchronizing with the slow, subterranean heartbeat of the ruins below. Heat radiated outward along her ribs, prickling her skin. "Why bring us through here?" Aurora directed the question at the seer's back. "You told me the path led to the crossing. This is a graveyard." Isolde turned her head, her silver hair spilling over one shoulder like water over stone. "A path is only a line drawn by feet that survived it. The river of iron sleeps beneath this floor. You carry the spark of the furnace around your neck, mortal. Let it speak to the lock." "Stop talking in riddles and tell me what is down there." "Answers carved in grease and bone," Isolde said, her lavender eyes unblinking, bound by the ancient geas that barred her tongue from false speech. "And the gatekeeper who never left his post." A hollow, resonant chime echoed from the valley below, cutting off further argument. It was not the ring of metal, but the sound of bone striking crystal. Aurora stepped to the lip of the ridge. Down on the vast floor of the sunken temple, sprawling between rows of petrified orchards, stood an avenue of carved basalt basins. Each basin was the size of a longboat, filled with dark, sluggish fluid that reflected the amber firmament above. Figures moved among the basins—hunched, towering shapes draped in coarse rags, their limbs elongated, moving with the jerky, mechanical precision of clockwork dolls. "Carvers," Nyx rasped, sinking low against the obsidian ground until they were nothing more than a dark stain. "They tend the vats. Blind, deaf, but they taste the warmth of living blood in the air." "Can they pierce your wards?" Aurora whispered. "They do not rely on eyes, Carter," Nyx answered, their voice barely a puff of air against her cheek. "They smell the salt on your skin. They feel the furnace on your breast." The nearest creature paused. It straightened its spine, unfolding joint by joint until it loomed twelve feet into the amber haze. A porcelain mask, blank and unfeatured save for a wide, lipless mouth carved into a crescent grin, turned slowly in their direction. Aurora froze. The moonsilver blade burned ice-cold in her palm, frost creeping over her knuckles. Beside her, the crimson Heartstone throbbed once, twice, three times—a fierce, urgent flare of light that illuminated the glass beneath their boots with blood-red brilliance. Across the terrace, the creature's blank mask tilted. Its carved mouth snapped open with a wet, splintering tear. "Down," Nyx hissed, shadow tendrils wrapping tight around Aurora's forearms. A low, resonant baying tore from the creature's throat, vibrating through the stone until Aurora's teeth clicked together in her skull. Across the subterranean basin, a dozen more masks swung upward through the amber mist.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:48:13.489Z" 9/2/2026, 4:48:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora stepped carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.069
86.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1139
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"carefully"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1139
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"desire"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"mechanical"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"loomed"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flickered"
2"pulsed"
3"desire"
4"pulse"
5"rhythmic"
6"echoed"
7"crystal"
8"mechanical"
9"warmth"
10"loomed"
11"porcelain"
12"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1136
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount852
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Heartstone3
Aurora11
Fae-forged1
Nyx7
Isolde5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.854
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.88
wordCount1136
matches
0"not the ring of metal, but the sound of bone striking crystal"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean33.41
std20.29
cv0.607
sampleLengths
014
162
25
328
415
563
634
742
883
920
1056
1141
1229
1371
144
1531
1628
171
1830
1938
2026
2152
2211
2332
2427
2572
2635
277
2833
2943
3040
3118
3210
3335
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences77
ratio0.052
matches
0"Farther down the sloping ridge, sprawling groves gave way to ruins of colossal proportions—arches carved from black stone and petrified wood, stacked tier upon tier into the amber haze."
1"It was not an earthquake; it was a rhythmic, biological thrum."
2"Figures moved among the basins—hunched, towering shapes draped in coarse rags, their limbs elongated, moving with the jerky, mechanical precision of clockwork dolls."
3"Beside her, the crimson Heartstone throbbed once, twice, three times—a fierce, urgent flare of light that illuminated the glass beneath their boots with blood-red brilliance."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount862
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"familiar crescent-shaped ridge"
1"long, razor-thin ribbons"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01740139211136891
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004640371229698376
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean14.75
std6.97
cv0.472
sampleLengths
014
117
25
321
419
55
610
718
815
921
1027
1115
1222
1312
1411
1520
1611
1718
1819
1917
2029
2113
227
2310
249
2518
2619
276
2813
298
3014
3129
3213
3311
3414
3512
3621
374
3823
398
404
4124
421
4325
445
4512
4617
479
4813
4913
86.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5324675324675324
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences56
matches
0"She clamped a hand over"
1"Her bare feet skimmed the"
2"She shook off the tremor"
3"Their shadowy form stretched thin,"
4"She reached toward a hanging"
5"Her fingers stopped an inch"
6"It was not an earthquake;"
7"She crouched, resting the flat"
8"Their violet gaze bored into"
9"It was not the ring"
10"It straightened its spine, unfolding"
11"Its carved mouth snapped open"
ratio0.214
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"The tear in the Veil"
1"Aurora caught her footing on"
2"Heat slammed into her chest."
3"She clamped a hand over"
4"Nyx surged past her, a"
5"Violet light flickered where their"
6"Isolde drifted down beside them"
7"The silver curtain of her"
8"Her bare feet skimmed the"
9"Isolde turned her pale lavender"
10"Aurora pulled the Fae-forged blade"
11"The leaf-shaped moonsilver caught no"
12"She shook off the tremor"
13"Aurora muttered, the dry air"
14"The sound rustled like dry"
15"Their shadowy form stretched thin,"
16"She reached toward a hanging"
17"Her fingers stopped an inch"
18"Aurora stepped carefully around a"
19"Every step sent a deep,"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Each basin was the size of a longboat, filled with dark, sluggish fluid that reflected the amber firmament above."
1"Beside her, the crimson Heartstone throbbed once, twice, three times—a fierce, urgent flare of light that illuminated the glass beneath their boots with blood-r…"
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora muttered, the dry air catching in her throat"
1"Nyx drifted, their edges fraying into wisps of violet smoke"
2"Nyx answered, their voice barely a puff of air against her cheek"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
3"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.345
77.8313%