Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGASH0D2S7V66ETFF6FZ21

Run Details

Duration:
2m 55s
Cost:
$0.007216
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a click that sounded like a tooth breaking. Aurora kept the chain tight and pulled the door just enough for rain-lit Brick Lane to lean into the flat. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, platinum hair darkened at the temples, charcoal suit creased as if he’d slept upright in moving vehicles. His ivory-handled cane hooked over one forearm. Ptolemy threaded between his polished shoes, then bolted backward when he looked down. Lucien raised his free hand. “Rory.” Aurora didn’t answer. Her thumb worried the crescent scar at her left wrist. The small habit had survived two flats, one abusive ex, and three months of pretending London had no rooms large enough to hear his footsteps. “You’re in my doorway.” “Eva’s doorway.” “Eva’s out for the next hour. That makes mine.” Lucien smiled, and the left corner of his mouth moved slower than the right, the same crooked expression that had talked her into believing a fixer could choose kindness when convenience asked for cruelty. His mismatched eyes caught the light from the hall: one amber, one black. The black eye stayed unreadable. The amber one looked at the books, scrolls, and loose pages pinned to every wall behind her. “You’ve been researching something dangerous.” “I’ve been researching lunch.” “Then you’ll deliver my lunch.” “I don’t deliver to deadbolts.” He leaned into the flat. “You need help.” “I need you to leave.” Ptolemy hissed. Lucien set his cane inside his arm. The ivory handle caught the light, and a seam split near the ferrule, revealing a sliver of blade. “Let me in.” “Don’t tell me what to do.” “Then don’t stand there holding a door you’re too polite to slam.” She unlatched the chain. He came in fast enough to brush her shoulder. The contact sent heat down her arm. He closed the door, dropped the first deadbolt, then the second, then the third, and each click took a little oxygen from the room. “Who followed you?” “A photographer. He likes taking pictures of people who are supposed to be in Marseille.” “I wasn’t asking whether your face needed protection.” Lucien turned from the door and set his cane against Eva’s table, beneath a stack of water-damaged parish records. Ptolemy watched from the bookcase with his tail flicking. The flat smelled of turmeric, paper glue, and the sharp wool damp clinging to Lucien’s coat. “Two men from Silas’ bar came looking for you an hour after you started your Golden Empress route.” Aurora looked up. Her courier jacket hung on the back of the chair, still damp from rain. “You watched Silas’ bar.” “I passed.” “You don’t pass. You park.” He took off his coat and folded it with absurd care. The suit beneath it had a tear along the ribs, dark with blood or tea. Hard to tell on Brick Lane, where everything stained after one wrong turn. “I need information.” “About?” “About you.” Lucien sat on the only unclaimed surface, a narrow step between the radiator and the bed Eva refused to make. His knee pressed close to hers. “Ask.” “Why were you in Cardiff?” “Business.” “You disappeared on a Tuesday. By Thursday I was on a night bus with a tea bag, one pair of shoes, and no phone.” “You said you needed space.” “I said don’t answer.” “Then I didn’t.” “Exactly why you didn’t.” Her voice cracked only a hair, enough to make the books on the shelves seem louder. She moved to the table and picked up a marker, as if she could redraw the conversation in red ink. Lucien remained where he sat, hands open on his knees, cane blade gleaming at his elbow. “You’re bleeding.” “Is it a wound or a tea stain?” “Let me see.” “You’re still not answering my question.” Aurora crossed the room before she decided. She pressed two fingers to the tear in his shirt. The fabric was damp and warm. Blood. Not much, but enough to make his breath catch and pull one side of his mouth tight. “Where else?” “Shallow.” “Don’t lie to me, Lucien. I lived with your lies. They had better grammar.” He caught her wrist where it crossed his lap. His thumb settled over the crescent scar, and the scar throbbed, stupid muscle memory. “I went to Marseille.” “Why?” “To take a name off a ledger.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. She yanked her hand back. “You couldn’t tell me.” “I could. I didn’t.” “Because if you tell me, I say no?” “Because if you say no, I listen.” The room narrowed. Ptolemy knocked a stack of index cards off the shelf, and both flinched. Lucien stood. He moved like a man with nowhere else to be and everywhere else needing him. “Which name?” “Yours.” She laughed, no warmth. “Aurora Carter’s name is in a ledger?” “Laila’s name was.” The old alias hit like a key in a lock she’d painted over. She looked away from his face and at the cane. He followed her eyes, then pulled it from the table and set it between them on the floor. The blade stayed hidden. A small surrender. “That was Evan’s circle?” “He paid for lists. Your old surname, your university records, the Cardiff bar file. I wanted them burned.” “You don’t burn. You trade.” “Yes.” “So you took something else to make it even.” “A contract.” “With whom?” “With someone who needed a witness erased.” Aurora’s hand drifted to the knife block on the counter, a nervous gesture rather than intent. “You erased a person for me?” “I erased an obligation.” “That’s not the same.” “It is when you’re me.” The photographer’s footsteps returned below, slow and deliberate. They climbed one stair, stopped, climbed one more. Aurora crossed to the door and put her ear to the wood. The deadbolts bit cold metal against her palm. Lucien stood too close behind her; she could smell his aftershave, vetiver and smoke, and the old argument in her chest lost its footing. “Move.” “Wait.” “Lucien.” “Wait.” A paper-thin shadow slid beneath the door, followed by a click as a camera lens touched the keyhole. Ptolemy leapt from the bookcase and struck the photographer’s hand through the gap. A muffled curse rolled down the landing. Lucien grabbed Aurora’s arm. She grabbed his. For a second neither let go. Then he pulled her behind the curtain rail where Eva’s laundry line hung between kitchen and bedroom. The space held one damp towel and two bodies. The curtain smelled of soap and curry dust. Through the fabric, the flat looked lit from inside, the table still showing their interrupted conversation like a crime scene with no victim. Someone scratched at the door. “Delivery.” Aurora pressed her forehead to Lucien’s shoulder. His heartbeat thudded steady under her skin, betraying his calm. She spoke through the curtain. “The wrong flat.” “Sign for a package?” “It isn’t my flat.” The voice breathed, then retreated. Boots descended. Ptolemy spat once at the door and sat on the index cards. Lucien didn’t move away. His hand rose to the back of her neck, fingers brushing hair that had escaped its braid. “You came to the one place I was hiding.” “I came to the place with three deadbolts and a cat that hates me.” “That’s Eva’s flat.” “Yes.” “Lucien, why are you here?” “Because you stopped answering.” “That’s not an answer.” “It’s the only one you’ll get tonight.” Aurora pulled the curtain aside. The flat was empty, safe, still cluttered. She walked to the counter, picked up a pen, and wrote a number on the back of a delivery slip. “Put that in your phone. If you leave again, send a text before you die. It would make me feel better knowing I’m not the only one with bad timing.” He looked at the slip. The paper shook in Aurora’s hand. “You don’t want me to die tonight.” “No. I want you to stop deciding what I want by hiding.” Lucien took the slip, then folded the note with the precision of a man wrapping a bomb. His thumb touched hers as their hands overlapped. Her scar pressed against his skin, and this time neither looked away. “I have more information.” “I have questions.” “Both can happen.” Aurora lifted her eyes to his, amber and black, rain-dark and careful. “Only if you sit there and stay.” He crossed to the narrow step and sat. The floorboards sighed. Ptolemy jumped into his lap, offended by no one, and settled against his thigh. Aurora pulled the chair from the table, spun it backward, and straddled it beside him, close enough for the hem of his trousers to touch the wet cuff of her jeans. “The ledger.” Lucien opened one hand on the cushion, palm up. A demand for patience, not obedience. “First answer me.” “No. You followed me into a room with three deadbolts and a camera in the keyhole. You can answer while I hold the pen.” He gave the smallest laugh, a sound that used to make her forget his worst habit: disappearing when the story stopped flattering him. “The ledger had your name and two others. I erased yours.” “What happened to the other two?” Aurora watched his face. His heterochromatic eyes didn’t flinch, but his jaw shifted as if tasting metal. “That’s why I came to Brick Lane. Not Marseille.” She pressed the pen against the paper. The nib sank through the delivery slip into the table. “You need me to choose again.” “Yes.” “The same way I chose to leave Cardiff.” “No.” “Then what way?” Lucien’s fingers closed around the cane between his feet, then released. His hand returned to his open palm. “The way where you don’t have to carry it alone.” The curry house vent shuddered downstairs, sending a pulse of heat between them. Aurora looked at the folded slip in his hand, at the blade inside his cane, at the cat in his lap, and felt the old hurt sharpen into attention. “Then tell me the other two names.” Lucien lifted the slip, then set it on the table between them instead of in his pocket. “Are you sure?” Aurora leaned forward until her shoulder touched his, close enough that his next words entered her chest before her brain could defend them. “I’m sure I hate being lied to.” His thumb traced the edge of her scar. “Good.” “Good?” “Then stay angry with me.” Aurora looked at the table, then at him. “I’m not leaving yet.” Lucien met her eyes, and for once he didn’t smile. He reached across the slip, his fingers brushing hers, and pulled the pen from her hand. Now she had to listen.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:48:13.491Z" 9/2/2026, 4:48:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1781
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1781
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"unreadable"
2"gleaming"
3"throbbed"
4"warmth"
5"pulse"
6"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences212
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1781
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1217
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
London1
Eva3
Lucien18
Aurora17
Ptolemy7
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.76
windowScore0.833
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a tooth breaking"
1"as if tasting metal"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.561
wordCount1781
matches
0"Not much, but enough to make his breath catch"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences212
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs150
mean11.87
std14.32
cv1.206
sampleLengths
033
143
25
31
438
54
62
79
869
95
104
115
125
138
145
152
1625
173
186
1912
204
2140
223
2315
248
2544
2618
2717
284
292
305
3139
323
331
342
3526
361
375
381
3924
405
414
423
434
4452
452
468
473
486
4941
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs203
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences212
ratio0.005
matches
0"Lucien stood too close behind her; she could smell his aftershave, vetiver and smoke, and the old argument in her chest lost its footing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1222
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.030278232405891982
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016366612111292963
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences212
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences212
mean8.4
std6.7
cv0.798
sampleLengths
013
120
223
37
413
55
61
73
810
925
104
112
129
1334
1413
155
1617
175
184
195
205
215
223
235
242
257
2618
273
286
2912
304
319
327
3324
343
3515
368
3719
389
3916
4018
413
4214
434
442
455
4611
4715
4813
493
45.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2688679245283019
totalSentences212
uniqueOpeners57
31.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"Then he pulled her behind"
ratio0.01
82.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences105
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane hooked over"
1"Her thumb worried the crescent"
2"His mismatched eyes caught the"
3"He leaned into the flat."
4"She unlatched the chain."
5"He came in fast enough"
6"He closed the door, dropped"
7"Her courier jacket hung on"
8"He took off his coat"
9"His knee pressed close to"
10"Her voice cracked only a"
11"She moved to the table"
12"She pressed two fingers to"
13"He caught her wrist where"
14"His thumb settled over the"
15"She yanked her hand back."
16"He moved like a man"
17"She laughed, no warmth."
18"She looked away from his"
19"He followed her eyes, then"
ratio0.343
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences105
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"Aurora kept the chain tight"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"His ivory-handled cane hooked over"
4"Ptolemy threaded between his polished"
5"Lucien raised his free hand."
6"Aurora didn’t answer."
7"Her thumb worried the crescent"
8"The small habit had survived"
9"Lucien smiled, and the left"
10"His mismatched eyes caught the"
11"The black eye stayed unreadable."
12"The amber one looked at"
13"He leaned into the flat."
14"Lucien set his cane inside"
15"The ivory handle caught the"
16"She unlatched the chain."
17"He came in fast enough"
18"The contact sent heat down"
19"He closed the door, dropped"
ratio0.943
47.62% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"Now she had to listen."
ratio0.01
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, platinum hair darkened at the temples, charcoal suit creased as if he’d slept upright in moving vehicles."
1"Lucien smiled, and the left corner of his mouth moved slower than the right, the same crooked expression that had talked her into believing a fixer could choose…"
2"His hand rose to the back of her neck, fingers brushing hair that had escaped its braid."
3"He gave the smallest laugh, a sound that used to make her forget his worst habit: disappearing when the story stopped flattering him."
4"His heterochromatic eyes didn’t flinch, but his jaw shifted as if tasting metal."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.6013%