Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGASH5RCSTW08KVW78VGYQ

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Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.012129
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain sheared across the tarmac of Camden High Street, turning the glow of passing headlights into greasy streaks of amber and red. Detective Harlow Quinn hit a slick patch of cobblestones outside the shuttered stables, her right boot skidding before the heavy tread caught purchase. Cold water soaked straight through the canvas of her trousers. She locked her balance, her sharp jaw jutting forward into the downpour, and pumped her arms to regain momentum. Thirty yards ahead, a dark hooded figure vaulted a row of council waste bins with fluid, practiced grace. "Herrera!" Quinn drove the shout from her diaphragm, cutting through the drumming storm. "Police! Stand down!" Tomás Herrera did not slow. The olive skin of his neck gleamed against the soaked collar of his jacket as he glanced over one shoulder. Rain caught in his short, curly brown hair, plastering it across his forehead. He gripped a heavy, waterproof satchel against his ribs, protecting the cargo with his left arm—an arm scored by a thick, pale scar that ran from wrist to elbow. The silver chain around his neck bounced, catching the sickly light of a streetlamp as the Saint Christopher medallion flashed against his soaked shirt. He darted left, sliding between two corrugated iron hoardings that sealed off a condemned railway arch. Quinn checked her stride, side-stepped a stalled delivery van, and plunged through the gap after him. Rusted sheet metal tore at the sleeve of her trench coat. The gap opened into an unlit access lane running parallel to the overground tracks. Overhead, a commuter train rattled along the viaduct, its diesel roar masking the slap of footfalls on waterlogged gravel. Quinn reached beneath her coat, thumbing the retention strap on her sidearm. Her left wrist twisted instinctively, catching a glimpse of the dial on her worn leather watch. Zero-two-fourteen. Backup was six minutes out if the dispatcher routed a vehicle from Kentish Town, longer if the weather jammed the junction at the bridge. Eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police taught her never to trust response times when the rain flooded the gutters. A metal fire escape clanged ahead. Tomás leaped from an iron landing, landed crouched in an open stairwell that led down into the earth, and vanished beneath street level. Quinn sprinted to the lip of the stairwell. The entrance was an obsolete maintenance shaft, abandoned decades ago by London Underground and marked only by a dented hazard sign strangled by wild brambles. A padlocked chain hung loose from the gate, freshly severed by bolt cutters. Beyond the gate, wet concrete steps plunged into pitch-black subterranean silence. She pulled her tactical flashlight from her belt, clicking the beam alive. The white circle of light cut through descending mist, picking up wet smears on the handrail and muddy boot prints that led straight down. Quinn took the stairs three at a time, keeping her back pressed to the curved brickwork of the shaft. The roar of the city above dwindled with every step, swallowed by the dense, subterranean chill of forgotten London. The damp smell of sulfur and wet chalk gave way to something richer, stranger: dried sage, molten copper, and animal fat scorched over open coals. At the base of the second flight, the concrete ended. The passage expanded into a vaulted Victorian conduit tiled in grimy white ceramic, the kind used for the Northern Line before the Blitz remapped the tunnels. Tomás stood fifty paces down the corridor, illuminated by the harsh flare of her torch. He had his palms up, breathing hard, chest heaving under his saturated cotton shirt. "Turn around, hands where I can see them," Quinn leveled her flashlight beam directly into his eyes, her service weapon clear of the holster and held low at the ready. "Drop the bag, Tomás. Now." Tomás squinted against the glare, bringing one hand up to shield his face, but he did not drop the satchel. "You don't want to follow me down here, Detective." His accent rolled thick and low, native Seville clipped by years on London ambulance shifts. "Turn back to the street. Write it up as a lost trace." "You skipped bail on three felony counts of unlicensed medical distribution," Quinn stepped forward, her combat boots making no sound on the slime-coated tiles. "You're treating patients off the books with unregistered chemical agents. Move toward the wall." "Those aren't chemicals." Tomás shook his head, retreating three paces without breaking eye contact. "And those people would have bled out on the carpet while your NHS triage determined their blood wasn't human enough to warrant a bed." Quinn's grip tightened on the grip of her pistol. "Don't lecture me on procedures. Hands on your head." "You think this is about stolen morphine?" Tomás touched the Saint Christopher medallion with his thumb, his fingers trembling with cold. "Look around you, Quinn. Listen." She held her position. In the silence beneath the city, the tunnel did not echo like a dead shaft. It hummed. A low, vibrational thrum ran through the soles of her boots, vibrating the fillings in her molars. From somewhere farther along the curved passage came the discordant murmur of a crowded concourse: muffled haggling in languages that sheared against the ear, the clinking of heavy glass, the dry rattle of beads or bones. "Dead-end branch of Camden station," Quinn stated, though the air felt heavy, pressing against her eardrums like altitude sickness. "Sealed off in nineteen-forty." "Only on your maps," Tomás backed another step toward an iron security hatch set into the brickwork at the far end of the tunnel. Beside the hatch stood two figures cloaked in coarse, oilcloth dusters. Neither looked human in the dim, filtering glow from beyond the door; their shoulders were too wide, their silhouettes thick and immobile as carved stone. One held an iron staff capped with a crude iron lantern that burned with a pale, cold green light. Quinn raised her weapon to center-mass. "Step away from the door, Tomás!" Tomás reached into his coat pocket. Quinn's trigger finger engaged the initial take-up slack on the Glock's blade. He did not produce a weapon. Between his fingers rested a small, polished disc—yellowed, carved from dense bone, etched with a spiraling labyrinth. He tossed it into the open palm of the nearest sentry. The iron lantern flared. The heavy iron door ground back on dry hinges, releasing a wave of heat that carried the stench of ozone, roasting cloves, and hot iron. Beyond lay an expansive, subterranean expanse: platforms crowded with stalls draped in dark silks, vendors hawking glass vials of glowing fluid, parchment stacked beneath hanging cages, and figures moving with fluid, impossible proportions beneath the flicker of tallow lamps. Tomás looked back at Quinn over his shoulder, his brown eyes wide with urgency. "Morris died because he didn't know when to turn around," Tomás shouted over the sudden roar of the market. "You want answers for him, you come through that gate. But the Met doesn't own the ground past this arch, Detective. Nobody does." He slipped through the hatch into the churning crowd. Quinn stopped five feet from the threshold. Her police radio sputtered on her shoulder strap, dissolving into an unbroken hiss of white noise. She reached for the handset, keyed the mic, and found only silence; the repeater tower three miles away on Hampstead Heath couldn't punch through whatever sat beneath this stone. The cloaked guard turned its hooded face toward her. Beneath the hem of the hood, teeth far too long and white caught the green lantern light. The creature held out a hand, palm up, fingers curled in a silent, mocking demand for currency. She glanced down at her watch. The second hand had stopped dead at the twenty-second mark. Three years she had hunted the shadow that tore Morris apart in a locked warehouse by the docks. The file had been stamped accidental death, closed by superiors who refused to reconcile the chemical analysis of the blood found on the floorboards. Morris had tracked an off-the-books clinic. Morris had carried a name written on a scrap of paper found in his pocket: *Herrera*. Quinn unclipped the dead radio and let it drop onto the wet ballast. She checked the magazine of her sidearm, slammed it back home with the heel of her hand, and stepped up to the threshold.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1394
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1394
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"determined"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"churning"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"chill"
2"determined"
3"echo"
4"etched"
5"flicker"
6"churning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences79
matches
0"e with urgency"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1392
ratio0.001
matches
0"Herrera"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1229
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Tomás10
Herrera2
Saint2
Christopher2
Kentish1
Town1
Metropolitan1
Police1
London3
Underground1
Victorian1
Northern1
Line1
Blitz1
Seville1
Glock1
Hampstead1
Heath1
Morris3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Police"
7"Blitz"
8"Glock"
9"Heath"
10"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Kentish"
4"Town"
5"Metropolitan"
6"London"
7"Seville"
8"Hampstead"
globalScore0.89
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1392
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean37.62
std19.83
cv0.527
sampleLengths
022
152
218
316
491
532
644
772
829
957
1036
1163
1236
1329
1435
1520
1636
1738
1838
1918
2026
2174
2223
2324
2455
2512
2641
2711
2868
2914
3042
319
3252
3343
3416
3564
3636
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"been stamped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs203
matches(empty)
14.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences89
ratio0.045
matches
0"He gripped a heavy, waterproof satchel against his ribs, protecting the cargo with his left arm—an arm scored by a thick, pale scar that ran from wrist to elbow."
1"Neither looked human in the dim, filtering glow from beyond the door; their shoulders were too wide, their silhouettes thick and immobile as carved stone."
2"Between his fingers rested a small, polished disc—yellowed, carved from dense bone, etched with a spiraling labyrinth."
3"She reached for the handset, keyed the mic, and found only silence; the repeater tower three miles away on Hampstead Heath couldn't punch through whatever sat beneath this stone."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1241
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"short, curly brown hair,"
1"heavy, pressing against her"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.012087026591458501
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0056406124093473006
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean15.64
std7.87
cv0.503
sampleLengths
022
123
210
319
418
513
63
75
820
913
1029
1124
1216
1316
1411
1514
1619
1712
1816
191
2024
2119
226
2323
248
2525
2613
2711
2812
2924
3019
3119
3225
3310
3426
3515
3614
3730
385
3920
4024
4112
4224
4314
4414
4524
469
479
4821
495
72.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4606741573033708
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences77
matches
0"She locked her balance, her"
1"He gripped a heavy, waterproof"
2"He darted left, sliding between"
3"Her left wrist twisted instinctively,"
4"She pulled her tactical flashlight"
5"He had his palms up,"
6"His accent rolled thick and"
7"She held her position."
8"He did not produce a"
9"He tossed it into the"
10"He slipped through the hatch"
11"Her police radio sputtered on"
12"She reached for the handset,"
13"She glanced down at her"
14"She checked the magazine of"
ratio0.195
57.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences77
matches
0"Rain sheared across the tarmac"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn hit a"
2"She locked her balance, her"
3"Quinn drove the shout from"
4"Tomás Herrera did not slow."
5"The olive skin of his"
6"Rain caught in his short,"
7"He gripped a heavy, waterproof"
8"The silver chain around his"
9"He darted left, sliding between"
10"Quinn checked her stride, side-stepped"
11"The gap opened into an"
12"Quinn reached beneath her coat,"
13"Her left wrist twisted instinctively,"
14"Backup was six minutes out"
15"A metal fire escape clanged"
16"Tomás leaped from an iron"
17"Quinn sprinted to the lip"
18"The entrance was an obsolete"
19"A padlocked chain hung loose"
ratio0.805
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He gripped a heavy, waterproof satchel against his ribs, protecting the cargo with his left arm—an arm scored by a thick, pale scar that ran from wrist to elbow…"
1"From somewhere farther along the curved passage came the discordant murmur of a crowded concourse: muffled haggling in languages that sheared against the ear, t…"
2"The heavy iron door ground back on dry hinges, releasing a wave of heat that carried the stench of ozone, roasting cloves, and hot iron."
3"The file had been stamped accidental death, closed by superiors who refused to reconcile the chemical analysis of the blood found on the floorboards."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Tomás touched, his fingers trembling with cold"
1"Quinn stated, though the air felt heavy, pressing against her eardrums like altitude sickness"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"Tomás shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.211
81.2467%