Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGASH6ZDBBK1865SH6CB9B

Run Details

Duration:
3m 3s
Cost:
$0.006991
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon bled into the alley through the door glass. Aurora Carter stepped inside with two empty cardboard boxes strapped across her forearms. The Raven's Nest smelled of beer, lemon polish, and old paper. Maps lined the walls, their edges pinned with brass tacks. Black-and-white photographs of Soho faces stared from the dim corners. Behind the bar, a mirror reflected the candlelight in small gold coins. She set the boxes against the wall, then stopped. At the far end of the bar, a woman in a charcoal coat sat with her back to the room. The hair had changed, shorter now, pinned low at the nape. The hands stayed familiar: square palms, bitten nails, a silver band twisting under the wrist. Aurora's throat moved. The woman turned, sensing the shift in the room. Her eyes widened at the first glimpse. "You're not allowed to vanish." Her voice cracked. Aurora stayed by the boxes. "I'm not vanishing." Eva Hughes stood. Her chair scraped against the floor. A pint of bitter had not been touched, dark and still in the glass beside her. "You left Cardiff with one bag." "I had a bag." "Seven years." "Mostly seven." A woman from the kitchen doorway froze when she saw Eva's face. She carried a tray of glasses and turned away before either of them spoke. Eva's fingers curled into the bar edge. The wood had grown shiny under years of elbows. Aurora moved to the booth near the wall. She had learned not to sit where her back faced the door. The seat creaked as she lowered herself. The crescent scar on her left wrist showed beneath the cuff. Eva slid into the booth across from her. She smelled of rain and mint. "Where did you learn to do that?" "Do what?" "Look at the exits." "London." The word sat between them. Outside, traffic hissed. Through the glass, the neon flickered. Eva looked toward the front, then back at Aurora. Her mouth worked for a second before she forced it still. "You look thinner." "You look like a solicitor." Eva touched the ring at her throat—a small key on a thin chain. The old Eva wore a plastic pendant from a fairground horse and threatened to cut it off if anyone mocked her. "Senior associate." "I mean I sit in rooms." Aurora smiled once, then stopped. She studied Eva's coat. Good wool. Clean cuffs. Hair pinned with control. Seven years could sand a person into a different shape if enough people watched. "I thought the police left a message. You were fine." "No message. No trace." "I was at your flat. The landlady let me in. Your father had paid the rent." "He didn't pay anything." "He would have." Aurora's thumb pressed over the scar. The ridge was older than her memory. The shape of the crescent had become a coin she spent when the room grew loud. "Did you come back to Cardiff after?" "No." "My mother sent flowers. They were addressed to the wrong flat." "You don't have to make it worse." "I don't make it worse. I ask." The bar owner appeared between them, a half-full glass in one hand, a cloth over his arm. His auburn hair greyed at the temples. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light when he set the glass before Aurora. "You need water." "I need a clean shirt." "You look like you need both." His eyes moved to Eva. "Miss Carter's friend?" "Old friend." "Old enough to order food?" Aurora took the water. "We'll have chips." Eva looked surprised. "You hate shared chips." "I changed." The bar owner walked away with his left leg taking the weight a beat later than the right. Eva watched him limp. "Who is that?" "The landlord." "Landlord?" "My flat is above the kitchen." "You live above a bar." "Delivery driver, bartender, spare room." Eva's face tightened. She picked up the untouched pint and set it down without drinking. "You were going to do the bar exam." "I was going to do a lot of things." "My father thought you'd quit. He liked to call imagination a defect." "Your father thought you were spoiled. We disagreed for years." "Because you loved arguing." "I loved not losing." The sentence landed. Eva looked at the table. One of the map pins had fallen loose, leaving a brass point shining under the wood. She picked up the pin and set it straight with the tip of her finger. "You used to fight for everyone." "I did." "Everyone except you." Aurora drank water. The glass left a faint wet circle on the wood. She watched Eva's finger follow the edge of the circle. "What did he do?" "What." "Don't." "You knew." "I suspected." "You suspected." Eva's hand stilled. She pulled it back as if the table had grown hot. "When I told him you were going to London, he wanted discipline. I answered yes. It was easier. I wanted to stay at home and not hear the phone ring. I told myself you were dramatic." "Thank you." "You were not dramatic." "You didn't tell me that then." "I was twenty-two." "Twenty-two was the age we were going to fix the law." Aurora looked at the photographs on the wall. Faces from another city, older and younger at once. She had once believed the dead looked calm because they were wise. Now she thought they looked tired. "You came here alone." "I was never alone. Yu-Fei needed help with nights. Si let me sleep in the room behind the stairs." "You called him Si." "He's a pain." "And you do deliveries for a Chinese restaurant." "It's a golden empress, not a metaphor." Eva gave a short breath. Not laughter. The air that sometimes passed for it. "I have a house in Grangeton. A cat named Justice. A fiancé who brings me tea when I work late." Aurora looked up. "Eva." "No, you asked. I answer. Don't make it a question." "I didn't." "You're doing that face." "What face?" "The one you used when you were about to explain why people hurt you." The words landed. Aurora's fingers tightened around the glass. Water trembled at the rim but did not spill. "I'm sorry. That was cruel." "It was accurate." "It was too much." "I can handle too much. I used to handle it in a flat above a fishmonger." "You were angry at me." "I was angry at everyone. It's a terrible habit." "You have it still." "I have other habits." Eva's eyes moved down to Aurora's wrists. The delivery straps had left red marks there. She reached out, then pulled back before touching. The motion was small, but Aurora saw it. "Let me see." "Let me not." "Please." Aurora pushed the sleeve up. The marks made a rough rectangle on the skin. She turned her wrist, showing the scar first. "You used to wear gloves." "I did." "Because you were cold." "Because I didn't want to look." Eva's breath came shallow. She touched the back of Aurora's wrist and stopped short. The skin warmed where her finger rested. "You should have called." "I tried. Three times. You were busy." "Then I was busy." "You were always busy after he came to our house. You didn't understand why I made it bigger." Eva's hand dropped. She turned her face toward the bar, then away. Her jaw worked. "You made it smaller." Aurora let that sit. The bar owner returned with a basket. Chips sat in brown paper, salt shining under the candle. The smell was ordinary and impossible. They both looked at it. Eva picked a chip. Her fingers were steady. "You have a baby coming." Eva's hand stopped at the basket. "How?" "The coat. You wear it open because you can't bend in it." "I forgot you notice things." "I learned." "You shouldn't have had to." Aurora ate a chip. Salt burned a crack in the skin near her knuckle. She tasted nothing until after she swallowed. Eva picked up the untouched pint. She carried it to the sink behind the bar, poured it away, and came back. The smell of bitter rose around her like a warning. "Tell me you're safe." "That's not how safe works." "Tell me." "I have a door that locks from the inside. I have a phone I can answer. I have work that keeps me on the street. I have Si, who has never asked me for anything except rent." "And what do you have for yourself?" The question was too clean. Aurora looked at the map above Eva's head. The lines traced a city she had learned as a guest. Streets she could name from memory only because she had walked them in the dark. "I don't know yet." Eva nodded once. She picked up a chip and held it without eating. "I wanted to meet you because I was afraid." "Of what?" "That you wouldn't be angry. I would have preferred angry. I could have written that down and made sense of it." "You think I'm too gentle?" "I think you are too contained." Aurora set the basket between them. "I contained everything once. It burst. People got hurt. I don't trust what comes out next." "You don't know." "I know I left before I knew how to stay." Eva's face changed. Not grief exactly. Recognition, like a room found behind a familiar wall. "Stay." "I am." "Not here. I mean you. You." The word hung above the table. Outside, the green neon pulsed. In the mirror behind the bar, the empty boxes from the kitchen stood against the wall like small paper soldiers. Eva reached into her coat and took out a card. She set it on the table, face up. The hospital's logo sat neat in the corner. "I'm at St David's on Thursday. A scan. If you want." Aurora looked at the card. The paper was white and new. "You came here for a job." "I came for tea and ended up in this place because it's quiet." "Si's bar is never quiet." "It is when no one is drinking." Aurora did not take the card. Her fingers stayed near the salt shaker. She watched the candle flame lean under the draft from the door. "If I come, you have to promise not to fix me." Eva's eyes filled, but she did not look away. "I can't promise." Aurora pulled her sleeve down. "Good." Eva touched the card with one finger. "You are not the girl who left Cardiff." "No." "I don't know who you are now." "That's because you left me there." "I know." They sat under the wall of faces. The chips cooled. The candle guttered once, then steadied.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:48:31.862Z" 9/2/2026, 4:48:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1793
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1793
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flickered"
2"weight"
3"trembled"
4"traced"
5"sense of"
6"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences128
matches
0"looked surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences257
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1792
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
13.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1023
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.74
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Hughes1
Eva28
Aurora24
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Hughes"
4"Eva"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.131
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1792
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences257
matches
0"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs178
mean10.07
std11.1
cv1.102
sampleLengths
067
19
246
33
416
55
63
75
83
925
106
114
122
132
1442
1538
1614
177
182
194
201
2134
223
235
2434
252
266
2731
2810
294
3016
314
323
3329
347
351
3611
377
387
3942
403
415
426
435
443
452
465
474
483
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"been touched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences257
ratio0.004
matches
0"Eva touched the ring at her throat—a small key on a thin chain."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1027
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.021421616358325218
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019474196689386564
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences257
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences257
mean6.97
std5.1
cv0.732
sampleLengths
011
113
211
310
410
512
69
720
811
915
103
119
127
135
143
155
163
173
186
1916
206
214
222
232
2412
2514
267
279
288
2912
307
3111
328
336
347
352
364
371
385
393
406
419
4211
433
445
4513
4621
472
486
495
44.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.25680933852140075
totalSentences257
uniqueOpeners66
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences125
matches
0"She set the boxes against"
1"Her eyes widened at the"
2"Her voice cracked."
3"Her chair scraped against the"
4"She carried a tray of"
5"She had learned not to"
6"She smelled of rain and"
7"Her mouth worked for a"
8"She studied Eva's coat."
9"His auburn hair greyed at"
10"His eyes moved to Eva."
11"She picked up the untouched"
12"She picked up the pin"
13"She watched Eva's finger follow"
14"She pulled it back as"
15"She had once believed the"
16"She reached out, then pulled"
17"She turned her wrist, showing"
18"She touched the back of"
19"She turned her face toward"
ratio0.24
4.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences125
matches
0"The green neon bled into"
1"Aurora Carter stepped inside with"
2"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
3"Maps lined the walls, their"
4"She set the boxes against"
5"The hair had changed, shorter"
6"The hands stayed familiar: square"
7"Aurora's throat moved."
8"The woman turned, sensing the"
9"Her eyes widened at the"
10"Her voice cracked."
11"Aurora stayed by the boxes."
12"Eva Hughes stood."
13"Her chair scraped against the"
14"A pint of bitter had"
15"A woman from the kitchen"
16"She carried a tray of"
17"Eva's fingers curled into the"
18"The wood had grown shiny"
19"Aurora moved to the booth"
ratio0.912
40.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"Now she thought they looked"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9797%