Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGCVZ0PM4AJ7VRBYCV36EV

Run Details

Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.014181
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Halogen floodlights hummed against the glazed Victorian tiles of the disused Camden spur. The tunnel air tasted of rusted iron, damp lime, and dead current. Harlow Quinn descended the spiral iron staircase with calculated footsteps, each boot strike ringing flat into the subterranean vault. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Three minutes past two in the morning. Below, red hazard tape flapped against an emergency stanchion, slicing the dark between two dormant tracks. Detective Constable Christopher Ward stood over the body, his hands buried deep in the pockets of his trench coat. His breath plumed in the stagnant cold. "Transit team found him at midnight during an electrical sweep." Ward nudged a rusted bolt on the platform with the toe of his oxford. "Looks like our Camden turf war spilled into the crawlspaces. Head trauma, empty pockets, classic street robbery. The vagrants fight over dry territory when the rain gets heavy up top." Quinn bypassed him without breaking stride. Her sharp jaw tightened as her boots met the grime-coated tiles of the platform. She snapped a pair of nitrile gloves over her fingers. "Street robbers rarely haul twenty stone of dead weight through an eight-foot ventilation shaft." "He walked down on his own legs, Harlow. He caught a pipe to the skull right where he dropped." Quinn crouched beside the corpse. The victim lay face-up, eyes fixed on the dripping arched ceiling. The impact to the left temple had crushed the zygomatic arch and splintered the frontal bone, yet the surrounding dust remained smooth as virgin flour. She shone her penlight across the floorboards. "Look at the grit." Ward leaned over, eyebrows furrowed. "It's railway dirt." "It's undisturbed silt." Her beam swept in a tight arc around the victim’s flanks. "A man beaten to death thrashes. His heels kick out. His fingers claw the stone. This floor has no scrape marks, no scuffs, no disruption within three feet of his hips. Someone placed him here after the heart quit." Ward pointed to the dark lake congealed beneath the man's neck. "The blood pool is right there. A pint of it, minimum." Quinn leaned closer, the beam tracing the edge of the puddle. "Blood from a living, beating heart sprays. It leaves cast-off droplets, satellite stains, velocity trails along the vertical tile. Look at that wall." The cream-colored ceramic behind the victim gleamed bare under the halogen glare, save for decades of soot. "The head injury occurred elsewhere. The blood gathered here because gravity did its work on dead vessels. Poured out, not pumped." Ward shifted his weight, jaw working against his collar. "Fine. A secondary dump site. Still doesn't make it anything exotic. Two dealers drag him down the service shaft, take his watch, leave him to rot." Quinn slid two fingers along the seam of the dead man’s heavy woolen coat, peeling back the lapel. She checked the inner breast pocket. "A dealer does not leave a gold signet ring on the pinky. Or three hundred pounds sterling in the ticket pouch." She withdrew a crisp stack of twenty-pound notes from the slit beneath the lining, fanning them with her gloved thumb before sliding them back into the fold. Ward went silent. He pinched the bridge of his nose, the loose skin of his brow bunching into deep troughs. "Then what is the angle? A hit?" "Look at the frost on the iron." Quinn pointed her flashlight downward, aiming the beam through the gap between the platform edge and the running rail. While the ambient air hung clammy and thick, a fine, glittering rind of hoarfrost coated the cold steel rail directly adjacent to the dead man's shoulders. Nowhere else. Just a three-foot span of ice, glittering like powdered sugar in the light. She touched the steel. The chill bit straight through the blue nitrile. "The current was shut off on this spur forty years ago, Chris." "Groundwater seepage. The tunnel breathes cold air from the canal basin." "The canal water doesn't drop to sub-zero while the rest of the tunnel sits at eight degrees." Her voice stayed flat, stripped of inflection. The knot in her stomach tightened, pulling tight against memory. Three years ago, DS Morris had smelled of this same sterile, metallic ozone moments before the case file went classified and his locker was emptied overnight. Quinn reached beneath the collar of the dead man's shirt. Her fingers brushed against something hard and curved, pinned inside the cotton collar by a sliver of twisted wire. She extracted it carefully. A three-inch sliver of polished rib bone, etched with minute notches along the bevel. Ward squinted at the white fragment. "Medical waste? A keepsake?" "A ticket." Quinn rose to her full height, her salt-and-pepper hair catching the harsh light of the halogen rig. She scanned the gloom beyond the perimeter lamps, toward the tunnel mouth that curved north under the market stalls of Camden. The tracks disappeared into absolute black. "Where is the girl?" Ward blinked. "What girl?" "The uniform at the top of the spiral stairs had an evidence bag containing wet sketchbooks. A civilian sat on the bench by the surface turnstiles under guard. You didn't mention her." Ward sighed, waving a dismissive hand toward the tunnel exit. "An eccentric student. Found her lingering around the maintenance hatch near the stables two hours ago. Harmless. Had her nose buried in an archive ledger. Claimed she was mapping subterranean Roman culverts." "Her name." "Eva Kowalski. She works over at the British Museum. Research clerk or something in the rare manuscripts basement. We ran her. Clean sheet. I was going to turn her loose once forensics cleared the stairs." Quinn unclipped the heavy Maglite from her utility belt, its black aluminum cold against her palm. "She was twenty yards from an undiscovered corpse in a sealed transit shaft at midnight with a bag of books." "The latch on the exterior grille has been broken for six months, Quinn. Half the art school kids in North London sneak down here to spray stencils." Quinn ignored him, stepping off the edge of the platform onto the ballast rock between the tracks. The crushed granite crunched under her soles. She walked toward the frost-slicked rail, sweeping the beam along the ties. Ten feet past the body, wedged firmly into the cross-timber of a rotting sleeper, something glinted green and gold. Quinn knelt. Her gloved fingers pried the object loose from the greasy wood. It was a small brass compass, its casing heavy and thick, coated in an ancient, velvet-thick skin of green verdigris. Sigils—sharp, geometric incisions cut deep into the brass—ringed the glass face. Beneath the scratched crystal, the iron needle spun erratically, refusing north, jerking in wild, frantic twitches toward the darkness deeper in the tunnel. Ward dropped down beside her, the stones rattling under his bulk. "An antique. He dropped his pocket trash." "The victim didn't drop this." Quinn held the brass casing toward the light, exposing the underside. The verdigris on the bottom had been wiped clean in two parallel streaks, left by fingers coated in dried red ink. "Someone dropped this while backing away toward the Camden line. In a hurry." Quinn closed her fist around the cold metal, feeling the needle vibrate against the housing like a trapped insect. "Bring Kowalski down here." Ward stiffened. "Harlow, protocol says we don't bring civilians onto active forensic ground." "Bring her down, Christopher. Now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"calculated"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"furrowed"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"firmly"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"calculated"
1"footsteps"
2"weight"
3"furrowed"
4"tracing"
5"chill"
6"stomach"
7"etched"
8"scanned"
9"gloom"
10"firmly"
11"velvet"
12"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount756
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Victorian1
Camden2
Quinn13
Constable1
Christopher1
Ward11
Morris1
Maglite1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Ward"
2"Morris"
places
0"Constable"
1"Christopher"
globalScore0.64
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1239
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean18.49
std14.06
cv0.76
sampleLengths
025
152
226
310
414
530
630
714
819
948
104
115
123
133
1411
1539
1611
1711
1811
1923
2017
2121
229
2326
2424
2521
2627
2720
287
297
3060
3112
3212
3311
3417
3543
3633
3714
386
394
402
4144
424
432
442
4532
4610
4732
482
4935
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"was emptied"
1"been wiped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences95
ratio0.011
matches
0"Sigils—sharp, geometric incisions cut deep into the brass—ringed the glass face."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount769
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"same sterile, metallic ozone"
1"ancient, velvet-thick skin"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.015604681404421327
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005201560468140442
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.04
std8.37
cv0.642
sampleLengths
013
112
219
310
47
516
619
77
810
914
1030
116
1214
1310
1414
1519
165
1711
1825
197
204
215
223
233
2411
2539
2611
2711
2811
2923
3017
3121
329
3326
3418
356
3621
3727
383
3917
407
417
4219
4326
442
4513
464
478
4812
4911
57.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3684210526315789
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners35
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Just a three-foot span of"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences57
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"His breath plumed in the"
2"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
3"She snapped a pair of"
4"She shone her penlight across"
5"Her beam swept in a"
6"She checked the inner breast"
7"She withdrew a crisp stack"
8"He pinched the bridge of"
9"She touched the steel."
10"Her voice stayed flat, stripped"
11"Her fingers brushed against something"
12"She extracted it carefully."
13"She scanned the gloom beyond"
14"She walked toward the frost-slicked"
15"Her gloved fingers pried the"
16"It was a small brass"
ratio0.298
21.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences57
matches
0"Halogen floodlights hummed against the"
1"The tunnel air tasted of"
2"Harlow Quinn descended the spiral"
3"She adjusted the worn leather"
4"Detective Constable Christopher Ward stood"
5"His breath plumed in the"
6"Ward nudged a rusted bolt"
7"Quinn bypassed him without breaking"
8"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
9"She snapped a pair of"
10"Quinn crouched beside the corpse."
11"The victim lay face-up, eyes"
12"The impact to the left"
13"She shone her penlight across"
14"Ward leaned over, eyebrows furrowed."
15"Her beam swept in a"
16"Ward pointed to the dark"
17"Quinn leaned closer, the beam"
18"The cream-colored ceramic behind the"
19"Ward shifted his weight, jaw"
ratio0.877
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"While the ambient air hung"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She scanned the gloom beyond the perimeter lamps, toward the tunnel mouth that curved north under the market stalls of Camden."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.3380%