Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGDKXWTEBR5E87EYYV376R

Run Details

Duration:
17.6s
Cost:
$0.012336
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rift closed behind them with the sharp crack of snapping bone. Aurora Carter hit the loam on one knee, fingers sinking into dirt that smelled of roasted chicory and burnt molasses. Heat slammed into her chest, dense and sweet, coating the back of her throat. She pushed upright, the silver chain around her neck scalding her skin as the thumbnail-sized Heartstone flared a deep, furious crimson against her collarbone. The sky burned the color of poured amber. There was no sun, only vast, rippling strata of gold and resinous orange that cast sharp, long-edged shadows across a terrace of tiered black basalt. "Keep your boots planted, Carter." Nyx’s voice drifted past her ear, dry as dry reed grass rubbing in the wind. The Shade rose beside her, six feet of curdled ink and smoke pulling itself into the jagged silhouette of a man. Nyx’s faint violet eyes flared against the amber glare. "The ground here breathes. Fall into a crevice and it will digest your marrow before your scream clears your teeth." Aurora wiped grit from her palm onto her jeans, touching the crescent scar on her left wrist out of sheer reflex. At her hip, the leaf-shaped moonsilver blade hummed with a biting chill that countered the swampy, caramel heat. "You brought us into Dymas," Rory unclipped the dagger’s sheath, letting the hilt rest against her fingers. "The fringe of it." Ahead of them, silver hair tumbled down to the small of a slender back, swaying with footsteps that failed to crush a single blade of scarlet moss. Isolde paused at the edge of the terrace. She tilted her chin toward the expanse below, where colossal groves of copper-trunked trees stretched into a basin carved from obsidian. Between the groves wound canals of thick, sluggish fluid the color of pressed grapes. "No living cartographer drew the lines beneath our feet." Isolde looked back, her pale lavender eyes catching the resinous light like cut glass. "The courts call this the First Orchard. Prince Belphegor’s ancestors planted bone here before mortal tongues learned the shape of hunger." "Splendid." Rory stepped to the terrace rim. "An ancient pantry." The terrace dropped sixty feet into a grove unlike anything on Earth. Enormous, ribbed trunks spiraled upward, their bark braided like cables of oxidized bronze. High above, immense fruit hung in clusters, swollen translucent globes that exposed webbed networks of dark veins beneath skin thin as parchment. Every few seconds, the fruit contracted, pulling liquid up from the black earth with a wet, rhythmic shudder that Rory felt through the soles of her boots. A breeze cut across the basin. It brought the musk of crushed star anise, overripe figs, and iron. "Not a pantry." Nyx’s shadowy arm dissolved into wisps of tendril, questing forward into the heavy air before snapping back to solid shape. "A nursery of appetite. Look at the flagstones beneath your heels." Rory knelt. Beneath the thick scarlet moss, the basalt was carved with deep, geometric channels. They were not ornamental. Grooves wound through the stone in interlocking spirals, converging toward a central basin three paces wide. Dried, dark crust flaked within the troughs. "A drainage system," Rory traced the rim of the trough with the tip of her moonsilver dagger. The metal hissed faintly where it touched the residue, frost blooming over the centuries-old crust. "Or an irrigation ditch. It feeds downward into the trees." "Offerings run south," Isolde glided toward the basin, her skirts rustling like dry parchment, her feet gliding over the moss without bending a fiber. "When the old lords walked these paths, the wine they poured had a pulse." "And the ones drinking it didn't use cups." Nyx drifted over the carved stone, their smoky outline rippling as they cast no shadow under the sky. "We should move. The rift we punched through the Veil made noise. Rifts in Dymas draw scavengers with too many teeth." Rory stood, the Heartstone pulsing a steady, hot rhythm against her breastbone. Every beat matched the distant thrum of the swollen fruit overhead. "Lead down, Isolde. Where is the gatehouse?" "Follow the nectar that burns," the Half-Fae replied, stepping off the ledge. Rory lunged forward, hand reaching, but Isolde did not fall. The seer descended through the empty air as though stepping down an invisible spiral staircase, her hem sweeping through the amber light. Rory blew out a breath, shook her head, and found a narrow cleft in the basalt cliff where rough footholds had been chiseled out of the stone. "Show-off," Rory muttered. "She has three centuries of vanity to feed," Nyx chuckled, the sound like gravel tumbling down a dry chute. The Shade simply collapsed into a ribbon of black vapor, slithering down the rock face ahead of her. Rory descended with deliberate care, boots finding the slick notches. The stone was warm, vibrating with that persistent sub-bass hum. Halfway down, a fissure spat a jet of fragrant steam across her knuckles; she snatched her hand back, teeth gritted, smelling scalded sugar and almond oil. She dropped the last six feet, landing in the spongy moss beside Isolde. Up close, the copper trees were monstrous. Their roots erupted from the earth like the ribs of beached whales, arching twenty feet into the air before plunging back into soil that squelched beneath Rory’s weight. Thick, pale vines hung from the branches, dripping viscous drops into stone fonts spaced evenly along a flagstone avenue. A drop struck the rim of a font with a chime like struck crystal. "Look inside," Isolde pointed a pale finger. Rory approached with the dagger raised. The font was filled with a clear, golden syrup. Drifting within it, preserved in flawless detail, was an intricate branch of white coral, its tips capped with small, glittering rubies that twitched like insect legs. "Natural?" Rory asked. "Manufactured," Isolde answered. "Artistry born from souls who spent lifetimes perfecting a single preserve. Belphegor collects them. He traps their hands in silver molds so they can only craft, never taste." "A Hell of perfectionists." Rory stepped past the font, her senses taut. "Sounds exhausting." "It is ravenous," Nyx coalesced out of the shadow cast by an arched root, their violet gaze fixed on the dense canopy ahead. "Listen." Rory froze. The chime of dripping nectar faded beneath a new sound. It was a rhythmic scraping, like hundreds of fingernails dragging over slate, accompanied by a low, wheezing breath that echoed down the avenue of copper trees. Ahead, the flagstones vanished beneath a curtain of weeping vines that pulsed with an internal, violet luminescence. Behind the curtain, a silhouette moved. It was wide, low to the ground, and moved with a halting, undulating gait that stirred the scarlet moss into violent flurries. Rory shifted her grip on the Fae-forged blade, the cold metal biting into her palm as the Heartstone flared hot enough to scorch through her shirt. "Company," Rory whispered, shifting her stance. "Not company," Isolde murmured, her eyes distant, reflecting the trembling violet vines. "A custodian."
created_at"2026-09-02T16:49:45.924Z" 9/2/2026, 4:49:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.581
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"flawless"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"footsteps"
2"rhythmic"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
6"crystal"
7"flawless"
8"intricate"
9"echoed"
10"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1169
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount960
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone3
Shade2
Ahead2
Rory17
Earth1
Nyx6
Half-Fae1
Isolde8
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Shade"
3"Rory"
4"Nyx"
5"Half-Fae"
6"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.615
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though stepping down an invisible spiral staircase, her hem sweeping through the amber light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1169
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean30.76
std19.68
cv0.64
sampleLengths
012
158
233
370
439
521
670
744
810
974
1018
1134
1242
1342
1438
1547
1623
177
1812
1932
2027
213
2237
2359
2454
2514
267
2741
283
2931
3014
3124
322
3336
3445
3526
366
3714
89.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"was carved"
1"been chiseled"
2"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences81
ratio0.012
matches
0"Halfway down, a fissure spat a jet of fragrant steam across her knuckles; she snatched her hand back, teeth gritted, smelling scalded sugar and almond oil."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount967
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"sharp, long-edged shadows"
1"High above, immense fruit"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.012409513960703205
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004136504653567736
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean14.43
std7.86
cv0.545
sampleLengths
012
120
214
324
48
525
620
721
89
920
1021
1118
1217
134
1427
158
1621
1714
1823
1921
207
213
2212
2313
2422
2527
266
2712
2823
2911
302
3113
324
3316
347
3517
3615
3710
3824
3914
4026
4121
4212
4311
447
4512
4610
4722
4827
493
96.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5802469135802469
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences63
matches
0"She pushed upright, the silver"
1"She tilted her chin toward"
2"It brought the musk of"
3"They were not ornamental."
4"She dropped the last six"
5"Their roots erupted from the"
6"It was a rhythmic scraping,"
7"It was wide, low to"
ratio0.127
63.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences63
matches
0"The rift closed behind them"
1"Aurora Carter hit the loam"
2"Heat slammed into her chest,"
3"She pushed upright, the silver"
4"The sky burned the color"
5"Nyx’s voice drifted past her"
6"The Shade rose beside her,"
7"Nyx’s faint violet eyes flared"
8"Aurora wiped grit from her"
9"Rory unclipped the dagger’s sheath,"
10"Isolde paused at the edge"
11"She tilted her chin toward"
12"Isolde looked back, her pale"
13"Rory stepped to the terrace"
14"The terrace dropped sixty feet"
15"Every few seconds, the fruit"
16"A breeze cut across the"
17"It brought the musk of"
18"Nyx’s shadowy arm dissolved into"
19"They were not ornamental."
ratio0.794
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Ahead of them, silver hair tumbled down to the small of a slender back, swaying with footsteps that failed to crush a single blade of scarlet moss."
1"The seer descended through the empty air as though stepping down an invisible spiral staircase, her hem sweeping through the amber light."
2"Their roots erupted from the earth like the ribs of beached whales, arching twenty feet into the air before plunging back into soil that squelched beneath Rory’…"
3"Drifting within it, preserved in flawless detail, was an intricate branch of white coral, its tips capped with small, glittering rubies that twitched like insec…"
4"It was a rhythmic scraping, like hundreds of fingernails dragging over slate, accompanied by a low, wheezing breath that echoed down the avenue of copper trees."
5"It was wide, low to the ground, and moved with a halting, undulating gait that stirred the scarlet moss into violent flurries."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her eyes distant, reflecting the trembling violet vines"
20.97% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx chuckled (chuckle)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
3"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.226
leniency0.452
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.258
83.2021%