| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.581 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "flawless" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1169 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.46% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 960 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.77 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Shade | 2 | | Ahead | 2 | | Rory | 17 | | Earth | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Half-Fae" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.615 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though stepping down an invisible spiral staircase, her hem sweeping through the amber light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1169 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 30.76 | | std | 19.68 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 14 |
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| 89.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "was carved" | | 1 | "been chiseled" | | 2 | "was filled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Halfway down, a fissure spat a jet of fragrant steam across her knuckles; she snatched her hand back, teeth gritted, smelling scalded sugar and almond oil." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 967 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sharp, long-edged shadows" | | 1 | "High above, immense fruit" |
| | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.012409513960703205 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004136504653567736 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 14.43 | | std | 7.86 | | cv | 0.545 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 96.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5802469135802469 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed upright, the silver" | | 1 | "She tilted her chin toward" | | 2 | "It brought the musk of" | | 3 | "They were not ornamental." | | 4 | "She dropped the last six" | | 5 | "Their roots erupted from the" | | 6 | "It was a rhythmic scraping," | | 7 | "It was wide, low to" |
| | ratio | 0.127 | |
| 63.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The rift closed behind them" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter hit the loam" | | 2 | "Heat slammed into her chest," | | 3 | "She pushed upright, the silver" | | 4 | "The sky burned the color" | | 5 | "Nyx’s voice drifted past her" | | 6 | "The Shade rose beside her," | | 7 | "Nyx’s faint violet eyes flared" | | 8 | "Aurora wiped grit from her" | | 9 | "Rory unclipped the dagger’s sheath," | | 10 | "Isolde paused at the edge" | | 11 | "She tilted her chin toward" | | 12 | "Isolde looked back, her pale" | | 13 | "Rory stepped to the terrace" | | 14 | "The terrace dropped sixty feet" | | 15 | "Every few seconds, the fruit" | | 16 | "A breeze cut across the" | | 17 | "It brought the musk of" | | 18 | "Nyx’s shadowy arm dissolved into" | | 19 | "They were not ornamental." |
| | ratio | 0.794 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead of them, silver hair tumbled down to the small of a slender back, swaying with footsteps that failed to crush a single blade of scarlet moss." | | 1 | "The seer descended through the empty air as though stepping down an invisible spiral staircase, her hem sweeping through the amber light." | | 2 | "Their roots erupted from the earth like the ribs of beached whales, arching twenty feet into the air before plunging back into soil that squelched beneath Rory’…" | | 3 | "Drifting within it, preserved in flawless detail, was an intricate branch of white coral, its tips capped with small, glittering rubies that twitched like insec…" | | 4 | "It was a rhythmic scraping, like hundreds of fingernails dragging over slate, accompanied by a low, wheezing breath that echoed down the avenue of copper trees." | | 5 | "It was wide, low to the ground, and moved with a halting, undulating gait that stirred the scarlet moss into violent flurries." |
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| 97.22% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her eyes distant, reflecting the trembling violet vines" |
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| 20.97% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx chuckled (chuckle)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.226 | | leniency | 0.452 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.258 | |