Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGERX1JAXFM57JNQWTQAHA

Run Details

Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.011968
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The boundary parted like oil on wet silk. Heat hit Aurora first, dense and smelling of burnt honey, clove, and damp earth. Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone pendant scorched the hollow of her throat, thrumming like a trapped wasp against bone. She gripped the hilt of the moonsilver dagger, its bitter frost bleeding into her palms to balance the sting. Ahead, the sky vaulted into a dome of bruised, liquid amber. There were no clouds, only strata of ochre vapor drifting over an expanse of terraces that cascaded down the belly of a colossal crater. Enormous black burls, thick as bell towers, twisted out of the volcanic ash to hoist canopies of purple leaves broad enough to shelter a townhouse. "Keep your fingers off the bark." Nyx poured across the glassy flagstones, their form flattening into a two-dimensional ribbon before rising six feet of liquid silhouette. Two points of violet light flared in the hollow where their face belonged. "The sap takes flesh with it when it dries." Aurora stepped past the threshold. Her boot heels clicked on obsidian flagstones, jarring up her calves. Behind them, the shimmering distortion of the Veil had already swallowed the London damp, leaving only this suffocating warmth. She touched her left wrist, thumb running over the crescent-shaped scar while her eyes mapped the terrain. To the right, a canal cut through the terrace, carrying a dark, viscous fluid that churned with thick red bubbles. The steam off the current carried the sharp tang of elderberry and iron. "The air tastes like a butcher's cellar during harvest." Isolde drifted past, the hem of her linen mantle brushing the soil without disturbing a single grain of ash. Waist-length silver hair drifted over her shoulder, caught in a breeze that carried no cooling relief. "Sweetness always rots from the seed outward. A starving mouth drinks whatever spills." She did not look back. Where her bare feet touched the ground, not a blade of the dark grass bent. Aurora tracked the canal's curve toward a colonnade of petrified timber swallowed by crawling vines. Clusters of translucent, pomegranate-sized globes hung from the tendrils, their skins so thin she could see fibrous chambers pulsing inside, circulating a pale, luminescent brine. A low, continuous drone rose from the vegetation, vibrating through the soles of her boots. She paused, crouching beside the vine. The moonsilver blade gleamed cold in the orange glare. "Are they alive?" "Hungry." Nyx stretched an arm, the shadow thinning to a smoky thread that snaked toward one of the pendant globes. The moment the Shade’s silhouette brushed the husk, the vine snapped taut. Fine needles erupted from the stem, punching into empty air where Nyx had been an instant before. The globe contracted with a wet, squelching sound, spitting a jet of caustic vinegar onto the stone. The glass sizzled, spitting white foam. Nyx reassembled, their voice a draft squeezing under a door. "The second circle tolerates no gluttons other than itself. Even the foliage hoards its meat." "Good to know the garden bites." Aurora rose, stepping wide around the puddle of acid. Her gaze lifted to the skyline. Miles away, towering spires carved from pale limestone broke through the amber haze like the teeth of an overturned jaw. Vast aqueducts bridged the gaps between cliffs, bleeding rivers of deep purple into hanging orchards that dwarfed the city squares of Cardiff. It was magnificent and choked with excess, a landscape built purely to consume and be consumed. They descended a flight of broad steps carved directly into the black basalt ridge. The stone had been smoothed by countless bare feet, its center worn into shallow, greasy depressions. On either side, stone basins the size of threshing floors sat filled with heaps of grey, salt-crusted rind and animal ribs larger than oxen. Nothing moved among the bones, yet the marrow cavities were cleaned to a polished, white glare. "Look at the masonry." Aurora nudged a fragment of the balustrade with her toe. The black stone had not been chiseled; it had melted into place, frozen mid-boil, with delicate iron hooks driven into the joints to hold silver chains. The links dangled down the cliffside, swaying in rhythm with the subterranean thrum beneath them. "No mortar. Just heat." Isolde paused at the landing. Her pale lavender eyes fixed on the horizon, catching the glare of the bruised sky. "The forge was lit before the first hearth on Earth had a name to burn. Men call it Hel because they lack words for a banquet where they are the third course." "Was that in one of your visions?" "Visions are mirrors held to rain, Rory. You see only the storm that drowns you." Aurora pressed her lips together and adjusted the silver chain around her neck. The Heartstone was burning hotter now, matching the cadence of the droning vines below. They reached the floor of the second terrace. Here, the heat pooled into stagnant pockets that smelled of fermenting plums and woodsmoke. A courtyard opened before them, walled in by giant trellises of woven bone. In the center sat an overturned press, its iron screw snapped like a dry twig. Dark stains radiated from the basin, soaked so deep into the porous rock that the stone itself wept dark beads of grease. Nyx drifted along the perimeter, melding with the long shadows cast by the bone trellises. "Something tore this engine down." Aurora approached the shattered wheel of the press. The metal was four inches thick, forged iron twisted like heated wax. A set of three distinct gouges grooved the metal—claw marks wide enough to span her ribcage. "Not something trying to get in. Something trying to stop the work." She drew the Fae blade across a clinging strand of dried pulp on the basin. The edge severed it without resistance, the cold moonsilver frosting the surrounding resin with white rime. The hum in the soil stuttered for a fraction of a second, an irritated twitch from the world around them. "The blade bites through their marrow." Isolde stepped into the center of the press, tilting her head back toward the amber vault above. "A thorn remains a thorn, even in the throat of an empire." The droning grew louder, swelling from a distant vibration into a rhythmic, grinding churn that shuddered through the soles of Aurora's boots. Far down the terraced valley, the purple canopies rippled against the heavy wind, shaking loose a shower of crimson chaff that drifted upward into the sky like sparks from an unseen furnace.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:50:23.785Z" 9/2/2026, 4:50:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"churned"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"churn"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"warmth"
2"churned"
3"shattered"
4"rhythmic"
5"churn"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1089
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount930
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora8
Heartstone2
Veil1
London1
Shade1
Nyx5
Cardiff1
Fae1
Isolde3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Veil"
2"Shade"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1089
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean27.23
std22.59
cv0.83
sampleLengths
08
152
260
36
433
59
652
733
89
935
1013
1120
1255
1315
143
151
1671
1710
1815
196
2073
2170
224
2351
244
2520
2632
277
2815
2927
3072
3115
325
3336
3412
3551
366
3717
3812
3954
88.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences61
matches
0"been smoothed"
1"were cleaned"
2"been chiseled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs142
matches
0"was burning"
69.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences78
ratio0.026
matches
0"The black stone had not been chiseled; it had melted into place, frozen mid-boil, with delicate iron hooks driven into the joints to hold silver chains."
1"A set of three distinct gouges grooved the metal—claw marks wide enough to span her ribcage."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount937
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"translucent, pomegranate-sized globes"
1"grey, salt-crusted rind"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.017075773745997867
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005336179295624333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean13.96
std6.5
cv0.465
sampleLengths
08
114
219
319
411
524
625
76
820
913
109
115
1211
1319
1417
1520
1613
179
1819
1916
2013
215
2215
2315
2425
2515
266
279
283
291
3019
3112
3217
3317
346
3510
3615
376
389
396
4020
4122
4216
4314
4416
4524
4616
474
4810
4926
79.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5128205128205128
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences61
matches
0"She gripped the hilt of"
1"Her boot heels clicked on"
2"She touched her left wrist,"
3"She did not look back."
4"She paused, crouching beside the"
5"Her gaze lifted to the"
6"It was magnificent and choked"
7"They descended a flight of"
8"Her pale lavender eyes fixed"
9"They reached the floor of"
10"She drew the Fae blade"
ratio0.18
74.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences61
matches
0"The boundary parted like oil"
1"Heat hit Aurora first, dense"
2"She gripped the hilt of"
3"Nyx poured across the glassy"
4"Aurora stepped past the threshold."
5"Her boot heels clicked on"
6"She touched her left wrist,"
7"The steam off the current"
8"Isolde drifted past, the hem"
9"Waist-length silver hair drifted over"
10"She did not look back."
11"Aurora tracked the canal's curve"
12"Clusters of translucent, pomegranate-sized globes"
13"A low, continuous drone rose"
14"She paused, crouching beside the"
15"The moonsilver blade gleamed cold"
16"Nyx stretched an arm, the"
17"The moment the Shade’s silhouette"
18"The globe contracted with a"
19"The glass sizzled, spitting white"
ratio0.77
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"To the right, a canal"
ratio0.016
42.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Nyx poured across the glassy flagstones, their form flattening into a two-dimensional ribbon before rising six feet of liquid silhouette."
1"To the right, a canal cut through the terrace, carrying a dark, viscous fluid that churned with thick red bubbles."
2"Waist-length silver hair drifted over her shoulder, caught in a breeze that carried no cooling relief."
3"Vast aqueducts bridged the gaps between cliffs, bleeding rivers of deep purple into hanging orchards that dwarfed the city squares of Cardiff."
4"Here, the heat pooled into stagnant pockets that smelled of fermenting plums and woodsmoke."
5"The droning grew louder, swelling from a distant vibration into a rhythmic, grinding churn that shuddered through the soles of Aurora's boots."
6"Far down the terraced valley, the purple canopies rippled against the heavy wind, shaking loose a shower of crimson chaff that drifted upward into the sky like …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.8906%