Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGFZ8CWQSGEZ13BYFJNRDP

Run Details

Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.018861
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped through forty feet of Camden clay, tapping a hollow rhythm against the rusted flange of an iron girder. Harlow Quinn ducked under the loose catenary cable, her boots sinking an inch into black soot and decomposed silt. The disused branch line had remained off the transit maps since the Blitz, bricked up behind a false bulkhead near the modern Northern Line tunnels. Down here, the draft moved backwards, pulling cold air toward the earth instead of pushing it out toward the street vents. "Mind the cross-ties." Detective Inspector Vance flicked his torch beam across the pit. The harsh glare washed over grease-caked sleepers and settled on the heap of dark wool crumpled over the track bed. "Transit cops called it in at zero-four-hundred," Vance hooked a thumb into his belt, lifting his chin toward the tunnel's mouth. "Squatter beef. Some runner cut through the service grate off Buck Street, met the wrong bloke, got stuck in the brisket, and tumbled off the lip. Open and shut. We bag the lad, run his prints against the petty theft registry, and we’re back at the station before the morning shift pours fresh tea." Harlow adjusted the worn leather strap of the watch on her left wrist. Five-fifteen. She stepped down from the maintenance ledge, her back straight, shoulders squared with drill-ground habit. The soles of her boots clicked against the dead rail. "Street thieves don't carry seven pounds of unworked sheep’s fleece," Harlow crouched by the body. The victim was male, twenties, slight of frame. He wore three layers of heavy, hand-loomed cloth without tags, zippers, or synthetic stitching. No denim. No nylon lining. "Stolen from a theatrical warehouse," Vance waved a hand, dismissing the fabric. "Or an eccentric down on his luck. Look at the neck. Classic puncture. Broken bottle or a rusty spike." Harlow pulled a wooden stylus from her coat pocket and nudged the collar back. Three triangular perforations pierced the hollow above the collarbone. The skin around the edges was white, drawn tight like cured parchment. "Look closer, Vance." "I’m looking. He bled out into the ballast." "Where is the puddle?" Vance swung his torch beam downward. The gravel was gray, crusted with limestone run-off from the tunnel vaulting. A dull, copper-colored grease ringed the sleepers, but no dark pool soaked the dirt beneath the torso. "Sank through," Vance muttered. "Porcelain earth down here. It drinks everything." "Three lacerations through the carotid and jugular," Harlow kept her voice low, flat. "A man his size holds five liters. At this pressure, arterial spray coats the wall four feet up. Show me the spray." The brickwork beside the corpse remained pale, frosted with saltpetre and cobwebs that had hung undisturbed for half a century. A shuffle of leather on gravel cut through the damp silence. Eva Kowalski picked her way along the ditch, a bulky canvas-wrapped light clutched to her chest. Her red curls caught the glare of the work lanterns, springing wildly from beneath a wool cap. With her free hand, she pushed her round glasses up her freckled nose, then tucked a stray strand of hair behind her left ear. A heavy leather satchel swung against her hip, thick with the outlines of octavo volumes and brass calipers. "The air pressure is inverted," Eva crouched four paces back, squinting at the archway where the track terminated into a solid brick wall. "It’s drawing toward the dead-end." "It's an abandoned tunnel, Kowalski," Vance sighed, blowing warm breath into his gloved hands. "Drafts swirl. Don't go looking for ghosts when bad plumbing explains it." "Bad plumbing doesn't freeze iron," Harlow pointed her stylus at the outer rail. Three feet from the victim's splayed boots, frost coated the steel. It formed a perfect crescent, sparkling under the work lights while the rest of the rail dripped with lukewarm condensation. Harlow moved along the curve of the frost, her eyes tracking the ballast. The boy's right arm was bent beneath his ribcage, fingers clenched into a fist so tight the knuckles showed bone-white through the skin. She slipped on a pair of latex gloves and gently worked the stiffened thumb loose. A small disc dropped into her palm with a dull clink. Vance leaned in, his beam pinning the object. "Pawn shop junk. Cheap stamped brass." "It isn't brass," Harlow turned it over. The metal was heavy, stained with a dark, crusting verdigris that clung to deeply etched lines around the rim. Interlocking sigils ran in a continuous ring around a central needle that lacked a magnetic counterweight. The needle did not float in liquid; it hung suspended in dry air between two plates of scratched mica, spinning slowly, without friction, until it settled toward the blank brick wall thirty feet down the line. "Compass," Vance snorted. "Boy scout kit from the twenties. Probably washed down the storm drain during the autumn rains." "Storm drains don't produce bone tokens, Vance," Harlow drew a second object from the dead man's pocket with her tweezers: a polished slip of ox rib, notched six times on the side and branded with an eye inside an unclosed circle. "And compasses don't ignore magnetic north." She took two steps to the left. The needle swung with her, maintaining its fixed bead on the dead-end masonry. Eva scrambled forward, her satchel clattering against the ballast. She dropped to her knees, heedless of the coal oil soaking through her trousers, and leaned within an inch of the compass in Harlow's hand. Her finger twitched as she tucked her hair behind her ear again. "The script on the bezel," Eva pointed with the tip of an unsharpened pencil. "That’s not early twentieth-century. Those are binding glyphs. Protective marks used by alchemical guilds to stabilize volatile compounds. Or thresholds." "We are sixty feet under Camden High Street," Vance rubbed his temples. "We are investigating an unlawful death, not cataloging the British Museum's basement surplus. The bloke fell off the bulkhead, broke his neck, and someone nicked his wallet. The lack of blood means he died elsewhere and got dumped." "Dumped from where?" Harlow stood, her full height dominating the narrow clearance between the rail and the tunnel arch. "Trace the dirt, Vance." She swept her torch along the ground between the body and the service grate ninety feet behind them. "The dust here is untouched," Harlow pointed out the unbroken, powdery mantle of pulverized coal and silica. "Our boots left four distinct tracks coming in. The transport lads left two. Between the body and the maintenance hatch, there isn't a single scuff. No drag marks. No heel slides. No disturbance to the lime deposits on the ties." Vance narrowed his eyes, tracking the beam back to the dead boy. "Then they carried him along the rail itself. Stepped on the steel." "The top of the rail is covered in grease and rust scale," Harlow placed her boot heel gently on the iron head. The dried crust cracked beneath her weight with a sound like eggshells. "Step on that, and you leave a fracture in the patina every eight inches. Show me one fracture between that wall and this corpse." Vance stepped up to the track, crouching to peer along the dull orange spine of the iron. His mouth opened, then set into a tight, thin crease. The orange scale was continuous, smooth, undisturbed. "He didn't walk in," Harlow said. "He wasn't carried in from the Camden shaft. And he didn't drop from the ceiling." She flashed the light upward. The barrel-vaulted brick overhead was unbroken, gray with mortar weep, without vents, chutes, or access pipes. Eva held up a pocket humidity meter. The digital screen flickered, the numbers tumbling in a frantic loop: eighty percent, ten percent, ninety-nine, zero. "The needle," Eva whispered, watching the verdigris compass in Harlow's palm. "Look at the rate of drift." The brass pointer had stopped dead. It pointed not at the floor, nor along the tracks, but directly at the center of the brick wall sealing the terminus. Harlow walked forward, her boots crunching evenly against the gravel until she stood eighteen inches from the brickwork. The masonry was Victorian, laid in English bond with black lime mortar, cold as river stone. Yet, four feet from the dirt floor, the air smelled of burnt hair, wet copper, and bitter almond. She held the compass closer. The verdigris on the casing seemed to darken, drinking the yellow glare of her flashlight. "He wasn't running away from the street," Harlow touched the dry, crystalline powder that had drifted from the mortar joints onto the rail bed beneath her feet. "He was running out."
created_at"2026-09-02T16:51:03.06Z" 9/2/2026, 4:51:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.463
leniency0.927
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"synthetic"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"pawn"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count2
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"crystalline"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"loomed"
2"synthetic"
3"porcelain"
4"silence"
5"perfect"
6"pawn"
7"etched"
8"magnetic"
9"weight"
10"flickered"
11"crystalline"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1438
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1007
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Quinn1
Blitz1
Northern1
Line1
Inspector1
Vance11
Harlow17
Kowalski1
Three2
Victorian1
English1
Eva6
persons
0"Camden"
1"Quinn"
2"Blitz"
3"Line"
4"Inspector"
5"Vance"
6"Harlow"
7"Kowalski"
8"Victorian"
9"Eva"
places
0"English"
globalScore0.656
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.695
wordCount1438
matches
0"not at the floor, nor along the tracks, but directly at the center of the brick wall sealing the terminu"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean30.6
std19.25
cv0.629
sampleLengths
020
165
23
330
475
539
615
727
831
935
103
118
124
1335
1411
1535
1620
1786
1828
1926
2013
2131
2251
2311
2414
257
2671
2719
2847
2920
3046
3134
3250
3323
3418
3557
3624
3758
3834
3921
4021
4124
4217
4328
4452
4520
4631
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences99
ratio0.01
matches
0"The needle did not float in liquid; it hung suspended in dry air between two plates of scratched mica, spinning slowly, without friction, until it settled toward the blank brick wall thirty feet down the line."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1018
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"over grease-caked sleepers"
1"heavy, hand-loomed cloth"
2"dull, copper-colored grease"
3"bulky canvas-wrapped light"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.0137524557956778
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0068762278978389
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean14.53
std8.91
cv0.614
sampleLengths
020
119
225
321
43
510
620
721
854
913
101
1115
1210
1315
148
1514
162
173
1812
1919
2014
219
2212
233
248
254
266
2712
2817
294
307
3113
3222
3320
3411
3516
3617
3724
3818
3923
405
4114
4212
4313
4411
4520
4613
4723
4815
4911
67.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences72
matches
0"She stepped down from the"
1"He wore three layers of"
2"Her red curls caught the"
3"It formed a perfect crescent,"
4"She slipped on a pair"
5"She took two steps to"
6"She dropped to her knees,"
7"Her finger twitched as she"
8"She swept her torch along"
9"His mouth opened, then set"
10"She flashed the light upward."
11"It pointed not at the"
12"She held the compass closer."
ratio0.181
8.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences72
matches
0"Water dripped through forty feet"
1"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
2"The disused branch line had"
3"Detective Inspector Vance flicked his"
4"The harsh glare washed over"
5"Vance hooked a thumb into"
6"Harlow adjusted the worn leather"
7"She stepped down from the"
8"The soles of her boots"
9"Harlow crouched by the body"
10"The victim was male, twenties,"
11"He wore three layers of"
12"Vance waved a hand, dismissing"
13"Harlow pulled a wooden stylus"
14"The skin around the edges"
15"Vance swung his torch beam"
16"The gravel was gray, crusted"
17"A dull, copper-colored grease ringed"
18"Harlow kept her voice low,"
19"The brickwork beside the corpse"
ratio0.903
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Yet, four feet from the"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The brickwork beside the corpse remained pale, frosted with saltpetre and cobwebs that had hung undisturbed for half a century."
1"Interlocking sigils ran in a continuous ring around a central needle that lacked a magnetic counterweight."
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow kept, flat"
76.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Vance muttered (mutter)"
1"Vance sighed (sigh)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.195
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.146
86.8843%