Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGGWDYVMCNWPX4JEDR5DN6

Run Details

Duration:
2m 19s
Cost:
$0.004885
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter crossed between the ancient oak standing stones just after midnight. The Fae Grove had the stillness of a room someone had just left. The air touched her face cool and damp, carrying grass, wet bark, and the cloying scent of lilies left too long in a vase. Richmond Park should have kept its usual shape beyond the stones, deer grazing under road light, the distant cough of traffic on the ring road. The clearing had none of those sounds. It kept only her breathing and the tiny creak of petals rubbing together. Wildflowers bloomed through November mud. White roses climbed the bases of the stones. Bluebells spread underfoot in patches the size of spilled coins. Poppies stood too tall, their red heads bent toward each other like people sharing a secret. Aurora stared at them and forced her shoulders down. Flowers meant bees, warmth, open windows. The grove had warmth without any sun. The pendant warmed in her pocket. She took out the silver chain and let the Heartstone rest in her palm. The gem was the size of a thumbnail, deep crimson, and its inner glow pulsed once, twice, in rhythm with something below her. Not her heart. She checked that twice. Near a Hel portal. "You love a sign," Aurora said. "You're going to lead me somewhere and then complain I didn't knock." No answer came. Her words dropped into the flowers and stayed there. She had come to the grove for Eva. The voicemail had made the invitation plain. Eva's number, Eva's voice, Eva's warning wrapped around a request. The pendant had grown warm at the exact moment the message began, and it had not cooled since. Aurora tapped the recording again. "Rory." The first syllable came clear, then Eva's breath entered the phone like water through a broken pipe. "Don't follow the warm stone. Don't come past the flowers. If you're already here, leave the pendant and run. Leave your name too." A sound followed. Not a scream. A scrape. Something moving through wet grass, patient as fingers counting stones. The recording ended. Aurora locked the screen and slid the pendant under her coat. The warmth pressed against her ribs. She had lived long enough not to trust warmth that moved on its own. The ground sloped inward. The standing stones marked the boundary, but they did not line up the way a boundary should. One stood behind her, one ahead, one to the left, and the space where the fourth should have held nothing but black grass. Aurora approached it. The air around the empty place felt thick, as if a curtain hung there and had forgotten to open. She stepped around it. Her boot made no sound on the grass. The silence changed. Behind her, one step. Then another. Soft, wet, delayed. She stopped. The second pair of footsteps stopped half a beat later. Aurora did not turn. Turning made her feel as though she had agreed to a bet she could not win. "Nice," she said to the flowers. "Very welcoming. I'm with the one who knocks." No voice answered. The poppies bent a little farther toward her. She walked again. The grove moved. Not trees, not stones, not light. Distance. The dark patch ahead stayed the same, yet the standing stones slipped away at her sides, as if she were moving through a corridor built from their backs. Her torch beam cut across white roses and found a face-shaped cluster of petals. She aimed at it. The petals shook once and went still. The pendant flared hot. Aurora stopped at the center. The black patch of soil held no flowers. It had a shape like a door pressed into the ground, and the shape did not cast a shadow. The silver chain grew warm enough to sting. Her thumb brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist, a habit from years before, when pain had been a thing she could hold up and explain. "This is how bad ideas begin," she said. A voice answered from the left. "Which one?" The voice wore a familiar cadence. Eva's vowels, but wrong, like a recording played from another room. Aurora spun. The standing stone there had no shadow beneath it. Behind the stone, a figure stood only in the spaces the stone should have blocked. The body was pale and tall, wrapped in something like fog, and its face sat too high. She saw no eyes. She saw a mouth, open and patient. It vanished between blinks. Aurora looked down at her phone. The screen read 03:41. She had entered the grove less than an hour ago. The battery bar was empty, yet the light still glowed. Time behaved badly in places with no clocks. The park outside Richmond should have been sleeping. Inside, something was waking. She called Eva's number. The phone in her hand rang once. Another phone answered somewhere to her right. A ringtone, thin and tinny, drifted from the tall grass. The sound moved. Aurora walked after it. The ringtone kept moving until she reached the flowers again. The grass was full of phones. Not many. Three. Four. Old models and new, screens cracked, battery icons dead. One displayed a missed call from Silas. One had Yu-Fei's restaurant logo on its lock screen. The first two had no cases, no names, no owners. They lay among the poppies as if someone had emptied a delivery bag and buried it in leaves. The ringtone stopped. Aurora bent over the Silas phone. Its screen lit at her shadow. A message waited. Don't let the flowers learn your face. The words sat on the screen without sender, without time, without signal. The pendant pulsed again, hotter, and the heat moved down the chain and left a red line against her skin. She dropped the phone. It did not hit grass. It hit air and kept falling, as if the ground had turned into a stairwell. Aurora backed away. The poppies straightened behind her. Something brushed the back of her coat. Not a branch. A hand? She checked the place after it moved and found only a petal stuck to the fabric. The petal had no stem. It curled like a finger when she pulled it away. "You're not in the park anymore," she said. "You're not in the park anymore, and you know where the door was." The black patch behind her answered with a sound like a door releasing. Not opening. Closing. Aurora spun toward the missing fourth stone. The boundary had moved. The gap she had crossed was gone. In its place, a row of white roses had closed into a tight wall, their thorns hooked together. The park beyond looked distant, blurred, like a memory seen through a dirty window. She could see the edge of a road, a bench, a lamppost leaning at a tired angle, but none of it touched the grove. The Heartstone became too hot to hold. She wrapped her fingers around the pendant and pressed it against the roses. The thorns did not cut. The flowers turned toward the heat instead, pale faces lifting, petals opening wide. The crimson glow spread from the stone into the white edges, making the roses look lit from inside. Aurora pushed. The wall did not part. It breathed. The roses expanded against the pendant, then shrank. The whole clearing gave one low sound, grass and petals sliding over soil. She stepped back. The black patch in the center had grown larger. The door-shaped hollow in it had a lip of earth now, clean and dark, and the silver chain on her chest swung toward it as if the stone were a compass. Her phone rang. Not the dead phone in the flowers. The one in her pocket. The caller screen was blank. No name, no number, no time. Aurora answered it on speaker because she wanted the sound to fill the wrong spaces around her. "Hello?" The line carried grass, petals, her own voice a second later, delayed by half a breath. Aurora heard herself say, "Hello?" then the real phone cut that word off and another voice used it. "Rory." Eva, maybe. Eva's vowels, Eva's pause before consonants. "You brought it to the flowers." "I brought it to find you," Aurora said. The grove took those words and turned them into a breeze that smelled of rain. "Find what?" The pendant pulsed so hard Aurora felt the warmth in her teeth. Something moved behind the standing stones. Not one thing. Several. Shapes the color of wet bark, tall and wrong-jointed, stepping into the gaps between flowers without disturbing them. The poppies did not bend. The roses did not shake. The shapes moved as if they were the clearing's reflection, visible only when Aurora forced her eyes away from them. She looked toward the left and saw the dark space beside a stone. She looked toward the right and saw the same space, but closer. The air around it rippled. A face formed there in pale petals, too smooth, too symmetrical, mouth opening wide enough to show no teeth. The pendant showed it all. Aurora raised her hand and the crimson light swept the clearing. For a moment the grove became plain. No faces. No shapes. Only flowers and stones and the dark door-shaped hollow at the center. Then the light dipped, and the ordinary things rearranged themselves into company. The phone crackled. Aurora looked down. Eva's voice had gone flat and distant, a line running backward through rooms. "Leave it," Eva said. "Leave your name." "I'm working on it," Aurora said. Her breath fogged. The grove had kept the cold. Her eyes were bright blue and tired in the pendant's glow, and she could see the fog of her own fear curling from her mouth. She stopped looking at the shapes. Looking invited names. She walked away from the hollow. The flowers bent after her. Behind her, a footstep matched hers. Wet grass, delayed. The pendant warmed and cooled, warmed and cooled, and each pulse left a mark on the inside of her chest. She reached the wall of white roses and pushed again. The thorns bit without drawing blood, catching fabric, catching skin, letting go with a tiny sucking sound. The park beyond flickered. For a second, she heard a dog bark. For a second, she smelled frying oil and ginger from the kitchen at the Golden Empress. For a second, the city touched the grove and did not recognize it. The pendant pulsed in her hand like a living thing checking for a pulse of its own. Aurora looked back. The dark hollow in the center had closed. The standing stones leaned toward it in a circle. Between them, the flowers had gone still. The pale shapes from the edges of her sight stood where no shadows should have fallen. They faced her. They had no faces, no legs, no obvious ways to move, yet the grove shifted around them as if they had always been waiting for company. Her phone screen went dark. The pendant stopped glowing. That was the worst sound. The warmth left her chest and the grove exhaled, and in that quiet something took the space behind her and began to mimic the small click of the pendant chain against her coat. It clicked once. Then it used the shape of her name.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:51:32.936Z" 9/2/2026, 4:51:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1903
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1903
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count6
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"silence"
3"footsteps"
4"familiar"
5"pulse"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences209
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences209
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences218
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1903
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1801
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove1
Park1
November1
Heartstone2
Hel1
Eva12
Richmond2
Silas2
Yu-Fei1
Aurora24
Golden1
Empress1
One3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Aurora"
7"One"
places
0"Fae"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"Hel"
4"Richmond"
5"Golden"
globalScore0.834
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences123
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like fog, and its face sat too hig"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1903
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences218
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean22.93
std22.93
cv1
sampleLengths
012
182
261
36
444
54
618
712
843
95
1041
1118
123
1317
1414
1566
164
178
1824
1920
2014
2111
2266
234
2467
258
266
272
2817
2954
304
3150
324
3341
346
3557
363
3715
387
3932
4024
4151
4221
4313
443
4574
467
4749
482
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences209
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs291
matches
0"were moving"
1"was waking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences218
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1806
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.029900332225913623
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0033222591362126247
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences218
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences218
mean8.73
std6.41
cv0.734
sampleLengths
012
113
224
325
47
513
65
78
810
916
109
116
127
136
1414
1523
163
174
184
196
2012
213
229
238
247
2510
2618
275
2818
2923
303
313
322
3310
343
3511
366
3714
384
3917
4023
413
4219
434
448
453
464
472
483
492
37.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.23853211009174313
totalSentences218
uniqueOpeners52
71.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences186
matches
0"Soft, wet, delayed."
1"Only flowers and stones and"
2"Then the light dipped, and"
3"Then it used the shape"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences186
matches
0"It kept only her breathing"
1"She took out the silver"
2"She checked that twice."
3"Her words dropped into the"
4"She had come to the"
5"She had lived long enough"
6"She stepped around it."
7"Her boot made no sound"
8"she said to the flowers"
9"She walked again."
10"Her torch beam cut across"
11"She aimed at it."
12"It had a shape like"
13"Her thumb brushed the crescent"
14"She saw no eyes."
15"She saw a mouth, open"
16"It vanished between blinks."
17"She had entered the grove"
18"She called Eva's number."
19"They lay among the poppies"
ratio0.22
48.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount153
totalSentences186
matches
0"Aurora Carter crossed between the"
1"The Fae Grove had the"
2"The air touched her face"
3"Richmond Park should have kept"
4"The clearing had none of"
5"It kept only her breathing"
6"Wildflowers bloomed through November mud."
7"Bluebells spread underfoot in patches"
8"Poppies stood too tall, their"
9"Aurora stared at them and"
10"Flowers meant bees, warmth, open"
11"The grove had warmth without"
12"The pendant warmed in her"
13"She took out the silver"
14"The gem was the size"
15"She checked that twice."
16"Her words dropped into the"
17"She had come to the"
18"The voicemail had made the"
19"Eva's number, Eva's voice, Eva's"
ratio0.823
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences186
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The dark patch ahead stayed the same, yet the standing stones slipped away at her sides, as if she were moving through a corridor built from their backs."
1"The door-shaped hollow in it had a lip of earth now, clean and dark, and the silver chain on her chest swung toward it as if the stone were a compass."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora heard (hear)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.105
89.2459%