Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGH3NRBWMP5MWB5CWA9J6Y

Run Details

Duration:
2m 6s
Cost:
$0.006703
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clacked open before my brain caught the mistake. I had locked the first two, and the first two never let go on their own. The door swung inward with a complaint of swollen wood. Ptolemy shot between my ankles and hissed at the landing. Curry smoke from the restaurant below rolled through the frame. Then came a sharper smell. Gun oil. Cold metal. Him. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway. His charcoal suit clung to his shoulders, one sleeve dark and wet from the elbow to the cuff. Platinum hair slicked back in a way that had cost time he no longer had. The ivory handle of his cane rested on my floor. His black eye found me first. The amber one followed. "You still answer to Rory." He stepped inside. The door sighed shut behind him. "Only to people who have left." "My." He let the cane lean against the stack of books by the radiator. "A very small audience." I shut the gap he left in the door and threw the deadbolts again. Three turns of brass teeth. The sound gave my hands something useful to do. The flat smelled of old paper, cardamom and the curry house below. Every surface lay buried under Eva's latest obsession. Scrolls curled around the legs of the sofa. Notes pinned the wallpaper. I had meant to be at my own flat above Silas' bar. That place had one lock, a broken bell and no cat. Eva's place had three deadbolts and a tabby with opinions. Lucien did not sit. He stood in the middle of my borrowed living room and looked at the mess like it was a personal insult. His gaze landed on Ptolemy. The cat flattened his ears and returned the favour. "You came to Brick Lane." "I came to you." "Those words mean different things when you say them." "They always did." He moved his left arm a fraction. Dark liquid crept from his cuff and marked a line on his palm. "I needed the truth, Aurora. A courier at the Golden Empress accepted a parcel under another name. Your other name." The air thinned. I pressed my back against the door. "Who sent it?" "Eva?" "I opened it. It was a lock of hair tied with silver thread. A card. Two words. Malphora wakes." I closed my eyes. The name felt like a stone dropped into my stomach. "You shouldn't know that one." "Because you buried it before you buried me?" "You didn't bury me, Lucien. You left a note under a hotel door in Lyon and vanished for fourteen months." "A very necessary absence." "Very. It saved me so much bother." I walked past him, away from the warmth of his coat, and set a pot of water on Eva's stove. I needed a flame. I needed noise. I needed something that did not smell like the man I had spent three years pretending I did not want. "My name is on something dangerous." "Your name has been on many dangerous things. You have the gift for making them interesting." He followed me into the kitchen. Too close. The table was barely wider than a bookcase, yet he folded himself against the counter and looked down at me. Up close, his sleeve was torn. A shallow cut opened the skin above his wrist, blackened at the edges. Not frost. Something that burned cold. "You need stitching." "I need a warning." "You can have both." "I prefer the warning." "You still talk too well." "You still listen too little." I took the first aid tin from the drawer. My fingers shook once, then steadied. I could handle wounds. I could handle blood. I could handle him when he stood still. I grabbed a clean towel. "Shirt." "No." "Then take off the bloody jacket." "The shirt is silk." "It's ruined. You're bleeding on Eva's table." His mouth twitched. He shrugged off the charcoal jacket and laid it on the floor with care, as though the room were not already full of dust and dead ends. His white shirt clung to his ribs. Blood darkened the cuff and ran down his forearm. The blade waited inside the cane if I reached for it. I did not reach for it. I only cut the sleeve away from his wrist. He watched me. Not the wound. My hands. "You still cut with your left hand." "I'm right-handed." "Then you hold scissors like someone with a grudge." "You made me learn from Eva." "Eva." He tasted the name. "Your childhood guardian. Your landlord. Your keeper." "Careful." "I am always careful, Rory." I dabbed the blackened cut with cold water and a cloth. It stung him in a way I enjoyed. The cloth came away grey. The wound did not bleed red. It wept a thin, inky sheen, and around it his skin had gone pale and tight. Something under his flesh moved once, like a thread pulled through a hem. "What is this?" "From a parcel that had your name." "It should have my name on it?" "It carried the scent of Avaros." I set the cloth down. "You work in information. You don't bleed in doorways." "Some days." "This one." "This one." He flexed his fingers. The black thread under his skin moved again. A thin line climbed toward his elbow. I caught his wrist before I thought. His pulse beat hard beneath my palm. His skin was too cold, and the crescent scar on my own left wrist pulled tight. "Let go." "Your blood is moving wrong." "My blood does what it wants. I inherited the habit." "You left." The words came out before I could shape them into something useful. His two-coloured eyes stayed on me. No deflection. No polished lie. That hurt worse than usual. "Because someone put you on a registry. Not Carter. Not Aurora. Laila. The name you used when you worked the night courier route for Yu-Fei Cheung. The name your ex used when he sold the wrong man's address to the wrong people." I pulled my hand back and wiped it on the towel. "You were there that night." "I arrived after Evan had already run." "Good for you. You saved me the trouble of being afraid twice." "Rory." "Do not use that name like a key." "It fits. I had the key before I learned it opened a door." "You had a lot of things. You kept none." He leaned on the counter, his jaw working. A line of muscle ran tight under his ear. Ptolemy jumped onto the table with theatrical fury and knocked a stack of notes into my lap. I read the top page by accident. The ink looked fresh. Someone had written my name in Eva's cramped hand. Underneath it: Brick Lane. Above the door. She knew. "Why are you holding Eva's list?" "It is not Eva's." "You wrote it." "My hand. My rules." He caught the papers before they slid onto the floor. "Eva called me last week. She said you slept with the knife under your pillow and took your coat to bed in April. She said you still walked like you had somewhere to run." "I do have somewhere to run." "Not tonight." He reached into his inner pocket and took out a folded square of black card. My handwriting stared up at me. A note I had not written. The Golden Empress. Tomorrow at eleven. Come alone. Bring the child who carries the old name. "What does that mean?" "It means they know who you are." "It means someone is pretending to be me." "It means they are good at it." I looked at his hands. Long fingers. A white scar across one knuckle. A cuff of blood drying dark. The kind of man who would sell a secret for profit, then apologise with a smile. The kind who had stood behind me in a narrow stairwell in Cardiff and put a hand on the small of my back without asking. "Why did you come here?" "Because if I came anywhere else, they would find the place empty and you standing over the mess you leave behind." "I leave a mess?" "You leave a beautiful mess. I simply dislike cleaning up after anyone else." I laughed once. It came out rough and ugly. "You want me to trust you again." "No. I want you to survive tonight. Trust is a luxury we can discuss when you have more hair on your head." I looked at the door. Three locks. No key. "You have enemies." "You have a name they like." "So I come with you." "You come with me, you answer to people who do not ask questions." "I have asked questions my whole life." "Yes." He stepped closer. The cold scent of him washed over the curry smoke. "And I have answered them badly." He took a breath. His sleeve brushed my arm. The movement was small, controlled, a warning and a claim. I did not step back. "Lucien, tell me the truth." "I cannot say I left because I loved you. That would be a pretty story." "Try it on me." "I cannot say I left because I feared them. That would make me weak." "So why?" "Because the registry wanted proof that Laila could bleed. I gave them a sample, and they told me they would come for you when I was no longer useful." My wrist scar throbbed. I clenched my fist. "You let them hurt me by hurting you?" "No. I let them hurt me so they would believe the story." "And fourteen months of me thinking you were a coward?" "A useful story requires sacrifice." "You always choose your sacrifice." "I chose yours once. I have chosen differently since." The flat went quiet. Even the curry house below seemed to lose its clatter. Ptolemy hissed at the door. I wanted to hit him. I wanted to kiss the scar on his chin. I wanted him to kneel and beg in one of his languages. I wanted him to leave. "I have to pack." "You need to listen." "I need you to leave." "They know you are here." "Then why are you here?" "Because I cannot leave without you." "That's not a good reason." "It is the first honest one I have given you." I crossed to the hallway. My boots were by the door. My bag hung on the hook. Eva's books blocked the way. I kicked a tower aside and grabbed my jacket. As my fingers touched the bag strap, Ptolemy screamed. The sound was not a cat's cry. It was a blade dragged across stone. Then the first deadbolt turned by itself. Lucien moved with the cane in his hand before the lock had finished. The ivory handle flashed, and the thin blade slid from its hiding place with a whisper. The second deadbolt spun. The third followed. The door opened on its own, swinging wide until it struck the wall. The landing beyond was empty. No stairs. No brick. No hallway. Only black mist and the smell of old rain. A single footprint appeared in the dust on my threshold. Bare. Small. Perfect. A child's foot. Then a voice, soft as the inside of my skull, spoke through the mist. "Aurora Carter. Please open the door. It's me. I'm home." My voice. Lucien's hand closed around my wrist. The blade in his cane trembled. "That is your fault." He said it through a smile that held none. Before I could answer, the thing wearing my voice began to knock.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences104
tagDensity0.01
leniency0.019
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"warmth"
2"silk"
3"pulse"
4"throbbed"
5"whisper"
6"perfect"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched my fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences158
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences262
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1935
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"As my fingers touched the bag strap, Ptolemy screamed."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1177
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva5
Ptolemy5
Brick1
Lane1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Lucien4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a stone dropped into my stoma"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1935
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences262
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs148
mean13.07
std15.95
cv1.22
sampleLengths
047
120
258
35
49
56
61
713
84
993
1039
115
124
139
143
1520
1620
1710
183
191
2019
2114
225
238
2420
254
267
2747
286
2916
3053
313
324
334
344
355
365
3731
385
391
401
416
424
437
4472
458
467
472
489
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"was torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences262
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount766
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03524804177545692
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0026109660574412533
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences262
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences262
mean7.39
std5.65
cv0.764
sampleLengths
011
116
210
310
410
55
62
72
81
95
1018
1115
1210
136
144
155
163
176
186
191
2013
214
2214
235
249
2512
268
278
284
2912
3011
3110
324
3321
345
359
365
374
389
393
407
4113
4220
433
447
453
461
4719
484
4910
37.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.25190839694656486
totalSentences262
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences139
matches
0"Then came a sharper smell."
1"Even the curry house below"
2"Then the first deadbolt turned"
3"Only black mist and the"
4"Then a voice, soft as"
ratio0.036
32.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount65
totalSentences139
matches
0"I had locked the first"
1"His charcoal suit clung to"
2"His black eye found me"
3"He stepped inside."
4"He let the cane lean"
5"I shut the gap he"
6"I had meant to be"
7"He stood in the middle"
8"His gaze landed on Ptolemy."
9"He moved his left arm"
10"I pressed my back against"
11"I closed my eyes."
12"I walked past him, away"
13"I needed a flame."
14"I needed noise."
15"I needed something that did"
16"He followed me into the"
17"I took the first aid"
18"My fingers shook once, then"
19"I could handle wounds."
ratio0.468
17.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences139
matches
0"The third deadbolt clacked open"
1"I had locked the first"
2"The door swung inward with"
3"Ptolemy shot between my ankles"
4"Curry smoke from the restaurant"
5"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway."
6"His charcoal suit clung to"
7"Platinum hair slicked back in"
8"The ivory handle of his"
9"His black eye found me"
10"The amber one followed."
11"He stepped inside."
12"The door sighed shut behind"
13"He let the cane lean"
14"I shut the gap he"
15"The sound gave my hands"
16"The flat smelled of old"
17"Every surface lay buried under"
18"Scrolls curled around the legs"
19"Notes pinned the wallpaper."
ratio0.885
35.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"Before I could answer, the"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The kind who had stood behind me in a narrow stairwell in Cardiff and put a hand on the small of my back without asking."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.8612%