Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGHKFMHANGW29H56XGB20P

Run Details

Duration:
18.9s
Cost:
$0.013493
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt groaned as the tumbler gave way. Rory pulled the door back two inches, kitchen knife already braced behind the seam of her denim trousers. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow stairwell landing. Rainwater pooled in the tailored folds of his charcoal coat, dripping in clean, rhythmic tappings onto the worn carpet. Slicked-back platinum hair caught the jaundiced light of the bare landing bulb. His right gloved hand rested on the ivory head of his cane, bearing down just enough to show the corded strength beneath the wool sleeve. "You changed the locks." His voice held that low, gravel-edged French cadence that used to settle behind her collarbone like an ache. "Three times." Rory kept her shoulder wedged against the timber. "And yet the hinges still shudder when you climb the stairs. Go away, Lucien." "The deadbolts are brass. Cheap alloy. Two strikes with a chisel would shear the cylinders clean off." He tilted his head, his gaze sweeping from the messy bun pinned atop her head down to the knife hidden behind her leg. Amber on the left, an abyss of total black on the right. Both eyes took her apart in seconds. "You look tired, Aurora." "I was sleeping until the floorboards started groaning under twelve hundred quid worth of bespoke Italian tailoring." She moved to shut the door. The brass-capped tip of his cane shot forward, catching the door jamb with a dull, immovable thud. "Twenty minutes," he murmured, stepping toward the gap before she could throw her weight into the panel. "Then you can go back to waiting for ghosts." "I stopped waiting for ghosts four months ago." She backed up three paces because standing within reach of him made her skin prickle with heat. He slipped inside without waiting for permission, kicking the door shut with the heel of an Oxford shoe. The lock clicked home on its own, sliding into the brass recess with an oily click. The cramped hallway smelled instantly of him: cold rain, bitter bergamot, and the faint, coppery tang of Avaros sulfur that never entirely washed out of his clothes. Downstairs, the tandoor ovens of the curry house thrummed through the floorboards, heating the linoleum underfoot. A ginger blur streaked from the kitchen. Ptolemy threw himself against Lucien’s trousers, purring like a rusty engine. Lucien looked down at the tabby with an expression of sharp disdain, though his gloved fingers twitched. "The creature possesses no survival instinct whatsoever." "He likes snakes," Rory said, slipping the knife onto the edge of a stack of folklore anthologies piled high against the wall. "He thinks you're here to be uncoiled." "Vicious as ever." He unbuttoned his coat. The silk lining hissed against his vest as he peeled the wet wool from his shoulders and searched for an empty hook among Eva's cluttered raincoats. Finding none, he folded the heavy garment over the back of an armchair laden with unrolled parchment. "You didn't answer my dispatches." "I burned them. The seal smelled like burning hair." "A wax alloy from the lower districts. It preserves privacy." "It preserves your ego." Rory crossed her arms, her thumb pressing hard against the crescent-shaped pale mark on her left wrist. The gesture had become a reflex whenever she stood in the same room with him—a reminder of fragile skin, of stupid mistakes, of survival. "You don't cross the river to East London unless a courier ended up in a ditch or you need something stolen from someone who knows your face. Which is it?" Lucien leaned his weight onto his cane, the ivory sphere nestled against his palm. The amber eye watched her with unblinking scrutiny, while the black eye seemed to drink in the ambient shadow of the low-ceilinged room. "I came because I heard you were sleeping above an engine room and running dumplings across Borough Market for eight pounds an hour." "Nine-fifty. And tips." Rory’s jaw clenched. "It pays the rent. It doesn't require me to carry salt or look under floorboards before I sleep. It’s clean." "You were never made for clean things, Aurora." He moved. He never walked like a normal man; he drifted with a slow, predatory leisure, the limp barely visible except in the measured strike of his ferrules against the floorboards. He stopped two feet away. Too close. The damp chill coming off his skin mingled with the muggy warmth trapped in Eva's flat. "Get out," she whispered, though the words lacked their previous bite, scraping her throat instead. "Look at me." "I am looking at you. I'm waiting for the punchline." "You vanished into the East End without collecting the balance from the Mayfair contract." His voice dropped into that quiet, gravelly register that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up. "You left your books. You left the map of the Blackfriars tunnels. You left a coat in my carriage." "I left because you lied to me about what was inside the iron reliquary." She took a single step back, hitting the edge of Eva’s kitchen table. Her knuckles brushed against scattered carbon paper and ink pots. "You told me it was dead silver. It was a blood tether. You let me carry a leash meant for an Avaros prince in my messenger bag." "You were never in danger." "Don't do that." Her chin jerked up, eyes flashing wide, ice-blue against the dark rings of fatigue underneath. "Do not stand in my flat and pretend you were managing the risk. You used me as an untainted signature because mortal blood doesn't trip the wards at the docks. You used me, Lucien. And then you took me back to that town house on Curzon Street and had the audacity to—" She cut herself off, teeth sinking into her lower lip until the copper taste blossomed on her tongue. Silence descended between them, heavy and suffocating, punctuated only by Ptolemy scratching at the rug by the radiator. "To what?" Lucien pressed. He took the step she had ceded. The faint smell of burnt wood rose from the skin of his throat as his demon heritage stirred under the pressure of his composure. "Finish the sentence, Aurora." "You know what you did." "I took you to my bed because I was terrified you were going to bleed out on my carpet," he snapped, the French accent sharpening on the consonants, the mask of the immaculate Mayfair broker slipping just enough to show the cracked teeth beneath. "I sat on the floor beside you for six hours pressing cold linen to your side because you were too proud to let a healer touch you. And when you woke up, you kissed me like you were drowning, and I let you." Her breath hitched in her chest. She remembered the firelight on his pale hair that night, the impossible heat of his hands, the terrifying gentleness with which he had peeled away her blood-soaked shirt. She had wanted him then with a ferocity that frightened her more than the demons hunting them through the tunnels. And when dawn broke, he had been at his desk, cool, immaculate, arranging his ledgers as though her bare skin hadn't been pressed to his ribs three hours prior. "You dismissed me," she said, her voice flat, stripped of rage down to the raw bone. "You gave me a leather pouch with two hundred sovereigns and told me the cab was waiting outside." Lucien didn't blink. But the ivory handle in his grip gave an almost imperceptible creak under the tightening of his leather-clad fingers. "If you stayed, the Court of Avaros would have known your name," he said, the words falling hard and slow between them. "They don't negotiate with mortal leverage. They skin it." "I can take care of myself. I spent three years doing it before I ever laid eyes on you." "Not against them." He reached out. His bare thumb—he had slipped the glove off without her noticing—grazed the corner of her jaw. His skin was too hot, the furnace of his paternal blood burning just under the surface, calloused and rough against her cheek. Rory flinched, but she didn't pull away. Her breath shuttered. "You think I wanted to put you in that cab?" His thumb moved, dragging along the line of her throat to the pulse hammering beneath her ear. "You think I enjoyed watching you walk out that door with your pride in your teeth and your blood on my floorboards?" "You didn't stop me." "I am half-beast and entirely damned, Aurora. Stopping you would have been an execution." His mismatched eyes drifted down to her mouth, dark with a hunger he spent every waking hour tailoring into submission. "I came tonight because the wards at the Blackfriars basin shattered an hour ago. The truce is finished." Her heart thudded against her ribs, hard and fast. "What does that mean?" "It means," Lucien murmured, his hand sliding down to wrap around the nape of her neck, fingers knotting in the loose strands of black hair, "that running dumplings on Brick Lane will no longer keep you alive. And I have spent four months rotting in an empty house, waiting for an excuse to drag you back."
created_at"2026-09-02T16:51:56.542Z" 9/2/2026, 4:51:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.42
leniency0.84
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1542
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1542
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"jaw clenched"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"weight"
2"silk"
3"reminder"
4"jaw clenched"
5"measured"
6"chill"
7"warmth"
8"silence"
9"pulse"
10"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1539
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount939
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French2
Rory6
Amber1
Oxford1
Avaros1
Lucien7
Eva3
Ptolemy2
Mayfair1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Amber"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1539
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean32.06
std22.7
cv0.708
sampleLengths
09
118
263
322
424
563
623
717
826
98
1051
1143
1218
1324
1429
1555
169
1710
1875
1937
2023
2126
228
2354
2415
253
2610
2753
2864
295
3070
3118
3218
3339
345
3587
3683
3734
3822
3931
4019
416
4248
4349
444
4552
4613
4756
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences93
ratio0.032
matches
0"The gesture had become a reflex whenever she stood in the same room with him—a reminder of fragile skin, of stupid mistakes, of survival."
1"He never walked like a normal man; he drifted with a slow, predatory leisure, the limp barely visible except in the measured strike of his ferrules against the floorboards."
2"His bare thumb—he had slipped the glove off without her noticing—grazed the corner of her jaw."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount950
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"low, gravel-edged French"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.028421052631578948
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00631578947368421
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean16.55
std10.96
cv0.662
sampleLengths
09
118
27
319
412
525
622
710
814
940
1012
117
124
1323
1417
1517
169
178
1817
1918
2016
2127
2216
237
2411
2517
267
2722
287
297
3026
3117
325
339
3410
3521
3624
3730
3814
3923
4023
416
4220
438
442
4529
465
472
4816
4915
52.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3978494623655914
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences61
matches
0"His right gloved hand rested"
1"His voice held that low,"
2"He tilted his head, his"
3"She moved to shut the"
4"he murmured, stepping toward the"
5"She backed up three paces"
6"He slipped inside without waiting"
7"He unbuttoned his coat"
8"He never walked like a"
9"He stopped two feet away."
10"she whispered, though the words"
11"His voice dropped into that"
12"She took a single step"
13"Her knuckles brushed against scattered"
14"Her chin jerked up, eyes"
15"She cut herself off, teeth"
16"He took the step she"
17"he snapped, the French accent"
18"Her breath hitched in her"
19"She remembered the firelight on"
ratio0.492
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences61
matches
0"The third deadbolt groaned as"
1"Rory pulled the door back"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
3"Rainwater pooled in the tailored"
4"His right gloved hand rested"
5"His voice held that low,"
6"Rory kept her shoulder wedged"
7"He tilted his head, his"
8"Amber on the left, an"
9"Both eyes took her apart"
10"She moved to shut the"
11"The brass-capped tip of his"
12"he murmured, stepping toward the"
13"She backed up three paces"
14"He slipped inside without waiting"
15"The lock clicked home on"
16"The cramped hallway smelled instantly"
17"Downstairs, the tandoor ovens of"
18"A ginger blur streaked from"
19"Ptolemy threw himself against Lucien’s"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"And when dawn broke, he had been at his desk, cool, immaculate, arranging his ledgers as though her bare skin hadn't been pressed to his ribs three hours prior."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she whispered, though the words lacked their previous bite, scraping her throat instead"
1"he said, the words falling hard and slow between them"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Lucien pressed (press)"
3"he snapped (snap)"
4"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.2
80.2850%