Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGK2Y1M556QQV828JW0VQM

Run Details

Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.012306
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tear in the Veil snapped shut with the crack of splintering ice, severing the damp chill of London. Heat rushed in to take its place, thick and heavy with the scent of roasted spices, macerated plums, and old, sour yeast. Rory stumbled forward onto loam that yielded beneath her boots like leavened dough. The Heartstone pendant pressed against her collarbone, scalding hot through the fabric of her cotton shirt, throbbing in double-time with her pulse. Above them, no sun held court. An expanse of warm, unbroken amber stretched from horizon to horizon, casting a glaze of burnt honey over terraced slopes that tumbled down toward a sea of copper mist. "Step lightly, mortal daughter." Isolde moved past her, feet skimmed an inch above the iridescent ground without crushing a single sprout of the clover-like moss. Her silver hair dragged behind her, untroubled by any breeze. "To drink the air here is to fast on poison, yet to starve is to beg for teeth." Nyx poured across the ground beside them, a two-dimensional smudge that suddenly reared into a six-foot silhouette. Their violet eyes burned like smoldering sulfur in the hollow where a face ought to have rested. "The air crawls with appetites." The Shade’s voice rustled like autumn leaves dragged over gravel. "Prince Belphegor’s borders do not welcome wanderers who carry iron." Rory reached down, checking the sheath strapped to her thigh. Moonsilver met her fingers, bitingly cold. "It isn't iron." She caught her breath, forcing her chest to expand against the cloying, syrup-thick atmosphere. "It’s Fae-forged. Your gift, remember, Isolde?" "Names have little weight where the belly rules the head," Isolde tilted her chin toward the slope. Pale lavender eyes drank in the strange landscape without blinking. "Follow the spine of the orchard. Do not pluck what weeps, and do not answer what sings." They descended the ridge. The path carved through a forest of gargantuan, twisting boles. Bark like burnt sugar peeled away in curling sheets, revealing wet, translucent wood beneath that pulsed with sluggish, ruby veins. Overhead, the boughs knit together into a canopy so dense it muffled every step, yet the silence wasn't empty. It hummed. A low, digestive thrum resonated through the soles of Rory's boots, vibrating up through her shins. Clusters of fruit hung from the upper branches. Some resembled pomegranates the size of carriage wheels, split down their centers to reveal kernels that writhed like trapped beetles. Others were slender, crystalline gourds that chimed when the stagnant air stirred them. A droplet struck Rory’s sleeve. She flinched, stopping dead. The fabric sizzled, darkening around a sticky, golden residue that smelled sharply of wild ginger and burning sugar. "Keep walking, Rory Carter," Nyx hissed, shadow-hands elongating to flick the droplet from her jacket before it seeped through to skin. The liquid dissolved into wisps of grey vapor against their dark essence. "The canopy tests for ripeness. Linger too long, and you become the compost." Rory rubbed her thumb over the crescent scar on her left wrist, grounding herself in the familiar texture of her own flesh. "How far does this terrace run?" "To the feast tables," Isolde stepped over an exposed root that twitched at her passage. "To the vats where Earth's lost masters boil their memories into wine. Look down, girl of Cardiff. See what hunger buys." Between two towering boles, the path opened onto a stone balustrade. Rory leaned over the edge, her knuckles white against the carved granite. Below lay a sunken amphitheater cut from living marble, vast enough to swallow a cathedral. Long, serpentine tables wound through the basin like coiled serpents, groaning under copper platters piled high with glistening meats, towers of gilded pastry, and fountains spewing dark red vintage. Figures sat crowded on benches—hundreds of souls, their features blurred by a haze of steam rising from the roasts. They fed without pause, mechanical, silent, shoveling handfuls of glistening matter past cracked lips while masked figures in aprons carved from dried hides replenished the platters with gleaming cleavers. No laughter carried upward. No clinking glasses. Only the wet, ceaseless sound of jaws working. A cold bead of sweat tracked down Rory’s spine. "They don't stop." "They forgot how," Nyx drifted to her elbow, their shadowy outline wavering as the amber light caught their edges. "A contract with the kitchens of Dymas is eternal. A century of brilliant flavors in life; an eternity as the tasting tongue in death." A sudden sound cut through the wet hum of the orchard behind them—the brittle snap of crystallized branch-wood. Rory turned, the moonsilver dagger sliding free of its scabbard with a faint rasp. The blade immediately glowed with a pale, arctic luminescence that pushed back the amber gloom. Ten yards up the trail, the undergrowth parted. It wasn't a beast of blood and muscle. A creature woven from braided vine and crystalline sugar stood perched on four spindly legs, its joints dripping pale amber sap. Where its head should have been, a cluster of yellow orchids bloomed inward around a circular maw lined with thorn-like teeth. It tilted its floral snout toward the Fae blade, shuddering as the cold radiating from the metal chilled the sweltering air. "A forager," Isolde whispered, neither advancing nor retreating. Her lavender eyes widened, reflecting the blade's blue edge. "It smells the salt of your mortal blood. It wants the seasoning." The beast scraped a foreleg against a sugar-crusted boulder, shearing off sparks that smelled of caramel. Rory dropped her stance, lowering her center of gravity just as she had learned on the rain-slick cobblestones of the docks. "Tell me it has a blind spot." "Its eyes are in its roots," Isolde turned her head slightly, silver hair rippling. "Strike where the sweetness rots." The creature lunged. It crossed the distance in a blur of clattering cane and whistling thorns, jaws gaping wide to spray a jet of scalding, viscous nectar. Nyx surged forward first. The Shade exploded into a wall of pure black smoke, intercepting the spray. The nectar struck the shadow with a hiss like cold water on hot coals, dropping harmlessly to the moss. Disoriented by the darkness, the beast snapped wildly at the air, thorns clicking together like ivory shears. Rory vaulted off the balustrade, ducking low beneath the creature's flailing front limbs. The heat coming off its floral core stung her cheeks, but she thrust the dagger straight upward into the tangled junction where its woody chest met the flowering stalk. Moonsilver met petrified wood. The blade cut clean, slicing through the enchanted timber without resistance. Frost erupted from the wound, jagged crystals of white ice racing across the creature's amber flanks, freezing the flowing sap in its veins. The beast let out a high, warbling screech that sounded like glass grinding against slate before shuddering violently and collapsing into a heap of frozen, brittle brambles that shattered across the path. Rory stood panting, the cold hilt shivering in her grip. Her boots smoked where they touched the shattered fragments of the creature’s sap. "One less mouth to feed," Nyx reformed behind her, their form snapping back into a sharp silhouette, though their violet eyes flickered faintly. Isolde glided past the remains, her skirts untouched by the frost or the nectar. She reached out one pale, translucent hand toward the shattered brambles, plucking a single, unbroken seed pod that glowed with faint, golden warmth from the center of the frost. "A quick hand," the half-Fae rolled the seed between her fingertips. "Keep the steel drawn, Rory Carter. The orchard has heard the dish break."
created_at"2026-09-02T16:52:45.131Z" 9/2/2026, 4:52:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The Shade’s voice rustled like [like]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.083
84.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"suddenly"
2"sharply"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"resonated"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"marble"
count1
9
word"glistening"
count2
10
word"mechanical"
count1
11
word"gleaming"
count1
12
word"ceaseless"
count1
13
word"wavering"
count1
14
word"crystallized"
count1
15
word"gloom"
count1
16
word"maw"
count1
17
word"chilled"
count1
18
word"racing"
count1
19
word"shattered"
count3
20
word"flickered"
count1
21
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"resonated"
6"crystalline"
7"familiar"
8"marble"
9"glistening"
10"mechanical"
11"gleaming"
12"ceaseless"
13"wavering"
14"crystallized"
15"gloom"
16"maw"
17"chilled"
18"racing"
19"shattered"
20"flickered"
21"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1263
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1059
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
London1
Heartstone1
Shade2
Rory11
Isolde6
Pale1
Fae2
Nyx5
persons
0"Shade"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.981
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like glass grinding against slate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.792
wordCount1263
matches
0"neither advancing nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"screech that sounded"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean30.8
std20.26
cv0.658
sampleLengths
019
157
235
353
434
525
616
723
844
971
1041
119
1218
1346
1422
156
1636
1723
1892
1915
209
213
2243
2318
2429
258
2671
2729
2816
2921
307
3119
3227
3353
3442
354
3666
3723
3823
3943
4024
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
44.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences87
ratio0.034
matches
0"Figures sat crowded on benches—hundreds of souls, their features blurred by a haze of steam rising from the roasts."
1"\"A contract with the kitchens of Dymas is eternal. A century of brilliant flavors in life; an eternity as the tasting tongue in death.\""
2"A sudden sound cut through the wet hum of the orchard behind them—the brittle snap of crystallized branch-wood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1070
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.020560747663551402
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010280373831775701
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean14.52
std7.23
cv0.498
sampleLengths
019
122
213
322
46
529
625
710
818
917
1017
1115
1210
1310
146
1517
166
1717
1810
1917
204
2110
2220
2319
242
2516
268
2720
2813
295
304
3118
3221
3312
3413
3522
366
3715
3821
3911
4012
4115
4229
4319
4429
454
463
478
489
493
70.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.47126436781609193
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners41
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Only the wet, ceaseless sound"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences73
matches
0"Her silver hair dragged behind"
1"Their violet eyes burned like"
2"She caught her breath, forcing"
3"They descended the ridge."
4"She flinched, stopping dead."
5"They fed without pause, mechanical,"
6"It wasn't a beast of"
7"It tilted its floral snout"
8"Her lavender eyes widened, reflecting"
9"It crossed the distance in"
10"Her boots smoked where they"
11"She reached out one pale,"
ratio0.164
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"The tear in the Veil"
1"Heat rushed in to take"
2"Rory stumbled forward onto loam"
3"The Heartstone pendant pressed against"
4"An expanse of warm, unbroken"
5"Isolde moved past her, feet"
6"Her silver hair dragged behind"
7"Nyx poured across the ground"
8"Their violet eyes burned like"
9"The Shade’s voice rustled like"
10"Rory reached down, checking the"
11"Moonsilver met her fingers, bitingly"
12"She caught her breath, forcing"
13"Isolde tilted her chin toward"
14"They descended the ridge."
15"The path carved through a"
16"Bark like burnt sugar peeled"
17"A low, digestive thrum resonated"
18"Clusters of fruit hung from"
19"Some resembled pomegranates the size"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rory stumbled forward onto loam that yielded beneath her boots like leavened dough."
1"The Heartstone pendant pressed against her collarbone, scalding hot through the fabric of her cotton shirt, throbbing in double-time with her pulse."
2"Others were slender, crystalline gourds that chimed when the stagnant air stirred them."
3"The fabric sizzled, darkening around a sticky, golden residue that smelled sharply of wild ginger and burning sugar."
4"The blade immediately glowed with a pale, arctic luminescence that pushed back the amber gloom."
5"The beast let out a high, warbling screech that sounded like glass grinding against slate before shuddering violently and collapsing into a heap of frozen, brit…"
6"She reached out one pale, translucent hand toward the shattered brambles, plucking a single, unbroken seed pod that glowed with faint, golden warmth from the ce…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
1"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.167
82.8590%