| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The Shade’s voice rustled like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 84.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "resonated" | | 6 | "crystalline" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "mechanical" | | 11 | "gleaming" | | 12 | "ceaseless" | | 13 | "wavering" | | 14 | "crystallized" | | 15 | "gloom" | | 16 | "maw" | | 17 | "chilled" | | 18 | "racing" | | 19 | "shattered" | | 20 | "flickered" | | 21 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1263 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.06% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1059 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Isolde | 6 | | Pale | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.981 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like glass grinding against slate" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.792 | | wordCount | 1263 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 30.8 | | std | 20.26 | | cv | 0.658 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 71 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 92 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 71 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 66 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 43 | | 40 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Figures sat crowded on benches—hundreds of souls, their features blurred by a haze of steam rising from the roasts." | | 1 | "\"A contract with the kitchens of Dymas is eternal. A century of brilliant flavors in life; an eternity as the tasting tongue in death.\"" | | 2 | "A sudden sound cut through the wet hum of the orchard behind them—the brittle snap of crystallized branch-wood." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1070 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.020560747663551402 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010280373831775701 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 14.52 | | std | 7.23 | | cv | 0.498 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 70.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.47126436781609193 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 45.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the wet, ceaseless sound" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair dragged behind" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes burned like" | | 2 | "She caught her breath, forcing" | | 3 | "They descended the ridge." | | 4 | "She flinched, stopping dead." | | 5 | "They fed without pause, mechanical," | | 6 | "It wasn't a beast of" | | 7 | "It tilted its floral snout" | | 8 | "Her lavender eyes widened, reflecting" | | 9 | "It crossed the distance in" | | 10 | "Her boots smoked where they" | | 11 | "She reached out one pale," |
| | ratio | 0.164 | |
| 42.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The tear in the Veil" | | 1 | "Heat rushed in to take" | | 2 | "Rory stumbled forward onto loam" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant pressed against" | | 4 | "An expanse of warm, unbroken" | | 5 | "Isolde moved past her, feet" | | 6 | "Her silver hair dragged behind" | | 7 | "Nyx poured across the ground" | | 8 | "Their violet eyes burned like" | | 9 | "The Shade’s voice rustled like" | | 10 | "Rory reached down, checking the" | | 11 | "Moonsilver met her fingers, bitingly" | | 12 | "She caught her breath, forcing" | | 13 | "Isolde tilted her chin toward" | | 14 | "They descended the ridge." | | 15 | "The path carved through a" | | 16 | "Bark like burnt sugar peeled" | | 17 | "A low, digestive thrum resonated" | | 18 | "Clusters of fruit hung from" | | 19 | "Some resembled pomegranates the size" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stumbled forward onto loam that yielded beneath her boots like leavened dough." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant pressed against her collarbone, scalding hot through the fabric of her cotton shirt, throbbing in double-time with her pulse." | | 2 | "Others were slender, crystalline gourds that chimed when the stagnant air stirred them." | | 3 | "The fabric sizzled, darkening around a sticky, golden residue that smelled sharply of wild ginger and burning sugar." | | 4 | "The blade immediately glowed with a pale, arctic luminescence that pushed back the amber gloom." | | 5 | "The beast let out a high, warbling screech that sounded like glass grinding against slate before shuddering violently and collapsing into a heap of frozen, brit…" | | 6 | "She reached out one pale, translucent hand toward the shattered brambles, plucking a single, unbroken seed pod that glowed with faint, golden warmth from the ce…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.083 | | leniency | 0.167 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |