Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGKJX5QF5JPBK44AY87AJ1

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Duration:
3m 12s
Cost:
$0.006229
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Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked under my palm, and my door opened on Lucien Moreau’s blood. He filled the stairwell. Platinum hair stuck to his forehead, charcoal suit split at the shoulder, ivory-handled cane in his hand like a verdict. One eye black, one amber. Both caught me and did not let go. “You’ve got ten seconds to say something worth the trouble.” “Bonsoir, Rory.” “Don’t.” “You liked it.” “You used it.” He slipped past before I could answer. The door shut. His cane lifted, the ivory handle clicked, and a blade whispered out. He drove it through the deadbolt, pinned the chain, then set the latch with a flick of his wrist. “You should have installed three locks.” “Eva’s flat had three deadbolts. I installed two and called it a compromise.” “Your landlord would have had a stroke.” “Your landlord sells whisky to ghouls.” “Says the man standing in my kitchen.” He turned from the door. His gaze took the boxes by the sink, the delivery vest over the chair, the wok oil stain darkening the cuff. “Golden Empress again?” “Cheung pays cash and doesn’t read labels.” “You deserve better.” “You don’t get to say that.” “I paid for that line.” “You paid for a lot of things.” His expression went pale, then composed. He removed his gloves one finger at a time. The motion was slow, deliberate, still the old ritual from the night I learned his hands could undo a lock or a woman’s courage. “The woman with the glass eyes is on the stairs.” “Who?” “She collects debts. My debts.” “You have mine.” He flinched. Small, quick, the kind of crack I used to press a thumb to just to see him bleed. I kept him pinned with my bright blue gaze. “Don’t make this a rescue.” “A rescue implies distance. We’ve always had distance.” “At least that’s true.” He reached up and touched the cut inside his mouth. Black blood beaded there, not red, not quite. It smelled of iron and burnt sugar. “I need a cloth.” “Need?” “For now.” My first aid kit sat on the counter, white and cheerful, beside the dead fern Eva had sent from Brick Lane. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, had chewed the leaf, then slept on my chair, then judged me from the floor. The memory was enough. I grabbed antiseptic, plasters, clean cloth. He let me lead him to the chair by the sink. “Take your shirt off.” He looked up. “Now you’re talking like a nurse.” “I’m talking like a man who will bleed on my chair.” The shirt came off in a rustle. The wound sat across his ribs, clean and surgical, as though the blade had drawn a contract instead of cutting flesh. Beneath the skin, silver threads pulsed in the black blood. Avaros work. My throat tightened. “Don’t tell me to stay away.” “I wasn’t going to.” “You always were.” He looked at me, and the hurt in his face became the one thing I had left after Evan. Small, ugly, familiar. I poured antiseptic over the cloth. “Hold this.” He took it. His fingers closed over mine, and the heat from his skin stole the fight out of my wrists. I pressed the cloth to his side. He did not pull away. “You smell like curry and fear.” “You smell like bad news.” “That’s my specialty.” “You’re also my former best decision.” He laughed once, then winced. The chair creaked. “Evan was the decision you made with your feet. I was the one you made with your mouth.” “My mouth had nothing to do with it.” “Your mouth told me to leave.” “My mouth told you to get out because you were a coward.” His jaw flexed. The cloth between us took blood and silence. His thumb brushed the crescent scar on my wrist. The old mark, pale as a sliver of moon. He always hated it, because he asked how I got it, and I lied. “Evan’s knife?” “My bike chain.” “You still lie like a lawyer’s daughter.” “My father taught me.” “Your mother taught you to survive. You learned to punish.” I pulled my hand free. “Don’t analyse me while you steal my kitchen.” “Then tell me to lock the door properly.” “I did. You ignored it.” “You didn’t answer.” “You know I hate knocking.” “You don’t hate knocking. You hate surprise.” I stepped back. The antiseptic stung my nose. “I don’t hate being hunted for two years.” He went still. “You thought I sold your address.” “You know every secret in this city. You sell them in suits.” “I sold enough of them to keep you off a list.” “For free?” “For a favour.” “Which favour?” He did not answer. That was the favour. I laughed, but no sound came. “You left because the debt needed me to be invisible.” “Rory.” “Don’t.” “You wanted me to stay.” “I wanted you to be a man instead of a messenger.” His head dipped, the old charm gone. The platinum hair hung loose and ruined, and his eyes, black and amber, looked at the floor as if the floor owed him money. “I can’t be either.” “You never were.” “No. I was yours.” The words came out clean. They stayed in the flat like a stain. I turned to the sink, because I could not watch him see what that did to me. Water ran hot over my hands. He reached behind me, palm flat on my spine. His touch burned through wet cotton. “I came back because the seal started to sing.” I stiffened. “What seal?” He lifted my wrist. The crescent scar lit pale white, then faded. A pulse went up my arm, sweet and awful. My knees buckled, and he caught my waist. “What did you do?” “Bound your name to the debt.” “You used me.” “I saved you.” “You lied to me.” “Yes.” His honesty hurt more than the blood on my floor. I shoved him, hard. He sat with the motion, the chair groaning under him. My left wrist ached, a hot crescent under skin. “Untie it.” “If I untie it, she follows the thread to you.” “You don’t get to keep me as bait.” “I never kept you as anything.” “Then why are you here?” He stood, tall and ruined, and pressed his forehead to mine. His breath touched my mouth, warm and coppered. I closed my eyes because my body always remembered what my heart refused to trust. “Because when she comes for me, I won’t let her touch you.” “You left me at Waterloo with a burner phone.” “I left you with a chance.” “I lost you.” “I know.” The words hit too hard. He took my jaw and kissed me. Not soft. The old hunger, the dangerous kind that tastes like a door closing in another man’s face. I bit his lower lip and he groaned into my mouth, one hand at my scar, the other at the small of my back. He tasted like smoke and salt. I should have pushed him away. Instead I pressed closer. The door knocked once. We broke apart. Both turned. A woman’s voice came through the wood, sweet as a school bell. “Lucien, love. You’re in the wrong building.” I grabbed the knife from the counter. Lucien lifted his cane. The blade slid free, thin and pale. “Go out the window.” “Who are you?” “She will know by the smell of your fear.” “No.” The word came from my mouth before I could weigh it. I moved to the chain, but Lucien’s hand closed over mine. His skin was too hot. “Rory.” “Let me.” The deadbolt began to sweat. Silver ran down the wood and pooled on the step. The chain rattled in its groove. The glass in the door frosted, then cracked into a web of white veins. I stared at the mess. “That’s a patience no one should have.” “You have no idea.” Lucien stepped in front of me. His body blocked the door, the light, the room. He looked back once, and his mismatched eyes shone with something too raw to be a trick. “When it breaks, you run.” “I don’t run.” “You’ll run for me.” The wood gave a low groan. A glass eye rolled through the crack, blinking up at me, wet and blind. It spoke with a child’s mouth. “Carter girl. Your blood is on the door.” Lucien’s blade flashed. The eye burst into dust. The door bowed inward. “Rory.” I did not run. My left wrist burned, the crescent scar lighting white under skin. Lucien spun, grabbed the back of my vest, and pulled me against his chest. His heart hammered, slow and wrong, half human, half something hungrier. The door gave.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences99
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.04
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"charm"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1460
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount929
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien6
Moreau1
Eva1
Brick1
Lane1
Evan1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
77.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite"
1"tasted like smoke and salt"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1460
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs130
mean11.23
std12.77
cv1.137
sampleLengths
014
14
233
310
42
51
63
73
87
934
106
1113
127
136
147
1526
163
177
183
196
205
217
2239
2310
241
255
263
2720
2814
298
304
3125
324
331
342
3561
364
379
3811
3943
406
414
423
4328
442
4533
466
475
483
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02903225806451613
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001075268817204301
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean7.09
std4.87
cv0.688
sampleLengths
014
14
220
35
48
510
62
71
83
93
107
113
1212
1319
146
1513
167
176
187
195
2021
213
227
233
246
255
267
276
289
2924
3010
311
325
333
342
3518
369
375
388
394
4010
418
427
434
441
452
4621
4719
484
496
42.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2621359223300971
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners54
32.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Instead I pressed closer."
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences104
matches
0"He filled the stairwell."
1"He slipped past before I"
2"His cane lifted, the ivory"
3"He drove it through the"
4"He turned from the door."
5"His gaze took the boxes"
6"His expression went pale, then"
7"He removed his gloves one"
8"I kept him pinned with"
9"He reached up and touched"
10"It smelled of iron and"
11"My first aid kit sat"
12"I grabbed antiseptic, plasters, clean"
13"He let me lead him"
14"He looked up."
15"My throat tightened."
16"He looked at me, and"
17"I poured antiseptic over the"
18"He took it."
19"His fingers closed over mine,"
ratio0.577
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences104
matches
0"The lock clicked under my"
1"He filled the stairwell."
2"Platinum hair stuck to his"
3"Both caught me and did"
4"He slipped past before I"
5"The door shut."
6"His cane lifted, the ivory"
7"He drove it through the"
8"He turned from the door."
9"His gaze took the boxes"
10"His expression went pale, then"
11"He removed his gloves one"
12"The motion was slow, deliberate,"
13"I kept him pinned with"
14"He reached up and touched"
15"It smelled of iron and"
16"My first aid kit sat"
17"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, had"
18"The memory was enough."
19"I grabbed antiseptic, plasters, clean"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.9505%