Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGMZB8PSCRRDJMS4DYSA5A

Run Details

Duration:
20.8s
Cost:
$0.015710
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The emerald neon sign over the front entrance threw a jade tint across the slick London asphalt, slicing through the Soho drizzle. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air held the scent of charred oak, pipe smoke, and damp wool. Yellowed Admiralty charts of the North Sea shared the dark wainscoting with monochrome silver-gelatin prints of Baltic ports. Aurora Carter perched on the low barstool near the brass draft towers, turning a heavy tumbler of stout between two fingers. Rain still dripped from the hem of her waxed jacket, and her delivery satchel from the Golden Empress rested against the foot of the brass rail, smelling of paper sacks and star anise. Straight black strands clung to her neck where the collar had failed against the October squall. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood ran a dry linen rag around the rim of a snifter. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked rhythmically against the glass. He pivoted, favoring his right side to spare the wrecked knee from the Prague years, his hazel eyes drifting toward the street door before settling on Rory. The brass latch dropped. Cold air surged across the timber floorboards, smelling of petrol and wet soot. A tall man in a tailored charcoal overcoat pushed inside, shaking a black umbrella against the runner. He smoothed back damp blonde hair, adjusted the leather strap of a calfskin briefcase, and took two steps before his gaze snagged on the stool. His stride broke. Aurora went motionless, the rim of the glass two inches from her lips. Her bright blue eyes caught the glare of the low-wattage amber sconces. "Rory?" The voice had shed its broad South Wales vowels, smoothed down by five years in Chancery Lane chambers, but the timbre belonged entirely to the Cardiff Law library basement. Thomas Callow stood beneath an aerial survey of Hamburg, gripping the wet ribs of his umbrella so hard his knuckles turned white. Aurora set the glass down. The crescent-shaped white scar on her left wrist flashed beneath her frayed cuff as she withdrew her hand. "Thomas." He stepped toward the counter, hesitating, as though expecting the floor to give way beneath his Oxford brogues. "I thought you were dead. Or in Melbourne. Your mother wouldn't say. She sat in the front room in Cathays and told me you took an administrative post abroad." "My mother tells people what preserves the wallpaper." Thomas pulled out the stool beside her, its iron swivel groaning. He placed the damp umbrella against the paneling and set his briefcase flat across his knees. The coat smelled of cedar and expensive dry cleaning. No tobacco, no damp wool from cheap charity-shop jumpers. He looked pressed, stamped, and filed away under clean glass. Silas drifted down the counter, his limp pronounced on the unyielding oak planks. He rested two broad hands flat on the zinc top, his auburn beard bristling under the amber glow. "Whisky," Thomas said without turning to look at him. "Single malt, whatever is peated." Silas didn't acknowledge the order with a nod. He fetched a heavy square glass, poured two fingers of amber spirit from a label-less green bottle, and slid it forward. The signet ring flashed once, a silver streak, before Silas retreated to the far end of the bar to polish the espresso machine. Thomas picked up the glass, turned it once, and set it down without drinking. "Five years, Rory. Not a postcard. No forward for the post. Your father nearly brought a writ against the South Wales Police to open a missing-person docket." "He wouldn't have risked the embarrassment. A barrister with a runaway daughter makes the magistrates snicker in the canteen." "He aged ten years in eighteen months." "He had help." Aurora reached for her stout. She swallowed a mouthful, cool and bitter, refusing to let her pulse dictate the pace of her breath. Thomas watched her throat move. His eyes drifted over the scuffed cuffs of her canvas coat, the takeout menu poking from the canvas bag, the blunt, unmanicured nails. "You were going to take silk," he said, the words low, scraping against the low hum of the bar's ventilation. "First-class honors on the mock briefs. You tore the Crown's arguments to ribbons in the moot court while the rest of us were still choking on contract law." "Paper arguments. Clean paper, clean rooms." "You deliver noodles." "Spring rolls, mostly. Some braised pork." Thomas flinched as though she had slapped the zinc counter between them. He picked up his glass and drank half of it in a long, desperate pull, his eyes watering slightly at the peat smoke. "Evan came by the chambers three years ago," he said, staring into the dark grain of the counter. "Looking for you. He had a black eye and two split knuckles, swearing he only wanted to talk, swearing you’d taken money." Aurora’s spine stiffened, the vertebrae clicking into an iron line. "He's good at swearing. Usually on whatever Bible is closest." "I lied to him. I told him you’d gone to Glasgow. I gave him an address for an abandoned warehouse down by the Clyde." Thomas looked up, his jaw set hard, the soft Cardiff boy she’d shared instant coffee with entirely submerged beneath the armor of a City junior partner. "I hated him. I hated him for what he did to your flat, and I hated him because you stopped coming to the seminar rooms the week after he bought you that ring." "Don't play the martyr, Thomas. You didn't like the noise he made." "I sat outside your terrace on Miskin Street until three in the morning the night you broke the bedroom sash. I heard him through the glass, Rory. And the next morning you walked into the department with your scarf pinned up to your ears and asked me for the notes on tort reform." The air between them grew thin, stripped of the rain's cool moisture. Down the bar, Silas paused with his rag, his hazel gaze cutting toward the corner, measuring the space between them with cold appraisal. Aurora didn't blink. "You should have gone home to your bed," she said. "I wanted to kick the front door off its hinges." "You wouldn't have survived the hallway. You knew it then. You know it now." Thomas ran his index finger around the rim of his glass, tracing the heavy crystal cut. "I bought a house in Clapham," he said, abandoning the thread with a sharp, ragged swerve. "Three bedrooms. Garden out back with an espaliered pear tree. I do corporate restructuring for shipping firms. Insolvency work." "Sounds safe." "It is safe. It's terribly safe." He let out a short, hollow bark of a laugh that died before it reached the ceiling rafters. "I sit in arbitrations and calculate the scrap value of iron freighters built in Gdansk. It pays four hundred pounds an hour, and nobody bleeds on the carpets." "Then you won." "Did I?" He leaned closer, the shadow of his tailored shoulder falling across her damp jacket. "I look at you and I don't recognize a single line of your face, except the eyes. You live like an alley cat. In Soho. Above a tavern with blacked-out skylights." Aurora met his gaze, her expression locked into the blank, cool appraisal she used on late-night delivery runs through dark alleyways off Wardour Street. "I sleep eight hours," she said. "I don't look at the locks on the door when I wake up. Nobody checks my phone records. When the sun goes down, I don't owe Brendan Carter an apology, and I don't owe Evan a pound of flesh." Thomas looked down at his own manicured fingers, spread flat against the edge of his briefcase. A gold signet ring, far thinner and more delicate than Silas's heavy silver band, rested on his pinky, bearing an engraved griffin—a university prize he’d bought for himself upon pupillage. "I still have your copy of *Treitel on the Law of Contract*," he said, his voice dropping into the wood grain. "You wrote in the margins. You used blue ink to dispute the doctrine of consideration. You called the Law Lords a syndicate of elderly cowards." "Throw it in the bin." "I had it rebound in leather." The stout tasted like ash on her tongue. She set the tumbler down, the base striking the zinc with a solid, definitive thud. "Don't come back in here, Thomas." He didn't move. He didn't blink against the low amber glare. "Is that a threat?" "It’s advice," she said, pulling her satchel strap over her shoulder, the canvas cutting hard against her collarbone. "You have a pear tree to look after." Silas stepped up, setting the green bottle down between them. The wood beneath it didn't creak. "Last orders are called at eleven, sir," the older man said, his voice level and gravel-dry, his eyes fixed on Thomas's collar. "The rain's clearing north toward the river. You’ll want to beat the traffic over the bridge." Thomas looked from Silas’s scarred face to Aurora’s impassive mask. He slowly gathered his briefcase, lifted the sodden umbrella, and stood. The polished leather of his shoes squeaked against the floorboards as he turned toward the door. "Your father’s hair is white now, Aurora," he said over his shoulder, his hand already on the brass latch. "Completely white." The green neon flared as the door swung wide, letting in the sharp hiss of a passing taxi's tires against the wet asphalt before the latch clicked shut.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:53:46.992Z" 9/2/2026, 4:53:46 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.277
leniency0.553
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1590
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1590
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"calculate"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silk"
2"tracing"
3"crystal"
4"calculate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1589
ratio0.004
matches
0"Treitel on the Law of Contract"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1005
uniqueNames30
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Thomas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Thomas"
discoveredNames
London1
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Admiralty1
North1
Sea1
Baltic1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
October1
Silas8
Blackwood1
Prague1
Rory1
South1
Wales1
Chancery1
Lane1
Cardiff2
Law1
Callow1
Hamburg1
Oxford1
Thomas11
Aurora8
City1
Wardour1
Street1
persons
0"Sea"
1"Carter"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
6"Callow"
7"Thomas"
8"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Raven"
3"Golden"
4"Prague"
5"South"
6"Wales"
7"Chancery"
8"Lane"
9"Cardiff"
10"Law"
11"Hamburg"
12"Oxford"
13"Wardour"
14"Street"
globalScore0.953
windowScore0.833
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though expecting the floor to give way beneath his Oxford brogues"
1"tasted like ash on her tongue"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1589
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean25.63
std19.37
cv0.756
sampleLengths
057
170
256
317
445
525
61
751
823
91
1018
1129
128
1355
1431
1514
1652
1714
1827
1919
207
213
2223
2328
2448
256
263
276
2835
2940
3010
3110
3283
3312
3453
3535
363
3710
3810
3914
4016
4135
422
4352
443
4547
4624
4745
4846
4946
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences103
ratio0.01
matches
0"A gold signet ring, far thinner and more delicate than Silas's heavy silver band, rested on his pinky, bearing an engraved griffin—a university prize he’d bought for himself upon pupillage."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1012
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cutting hard against her"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.016798418972332016
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004940711462450593
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean15.43
std9.91
cv0.642
sampleLengths
022
117
218
321
433
516
616
713
827
94
1013
1117
1225
133
1413
1512
161
1729
1822
195
2018
211
2218
2329
248
2511
2616
279
289
2910
3013
3118
329
335
348
3521
3623
3714
3827
3919
407
413
425
4318
445
4523
4620
4728
486
493
59.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3883495145631068
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences67
matches
0"He pivoted, favoring his right"
1"He smoothed back damp blonde"
2"His stride broke."
3"Her bright blue eyes caught"
4"He stepped toward the counter,"
5"He placed the damp umbrella"
6"He looked pressed, stamped, and"
7"He rested two broad hands"
8"He fetched a heavy square"
9"She swallowed a mouthful, cool"
10"His eyes drifted over the"
11"he said, the words low,"
12"He picked up his glass"
13"he said, staring into the"
14"he said, abandoning the thread"
15"He let out a short,"
16"He leaned closer, the shadow"
17"he said, his voice dropping"
18"She set the tumbler down,"
19"He didn't move."
ratio0.358
19.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences67
matches
0"The emerald neon sign over"
1"Aurora Carter perched on the"
2"The silver signet ring on"
3"He pivoted, favoring his right"
4"The brass latch dropped."
5"A tall man in a"
6"He smoothed back damp blonde"
7"His stride broke."
8"Aurora went motionless, the rim"
9"Her bright blue eyes caught"
10"The voice had shed its"
11"Thomas Callow stood beneath an"
12"Aurora set the glass down."
13"The crescent-shaped white scar on"
14"He stepped toward the counter,"
15"Thomas pulled out the stool"
16"He placed the damp umbrella"
17"The coat smelled of cedar"
18"He looked pressed, stamped, and"
19"Silas drifted down the counter,"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He stepped toward the counter, hesitating, as though expecting the floor to give way beneath his Oxford brogues."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping into the wood grain"
1"he said, his hand already on the brass latch"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1069%