Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGN11QDF8VZC57M5BPKQXR

Run Details

Duration:
2m 52s
Cost:
$0.007953
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways off the rooftops and filled the gutter outside the Raven's Nest with a thin sheet of green light. The neon sign buzzed above the door, its glass letters shaped like a raven mid-scream. Old maps and black-and-white photographs covered the brick beside the entrance, curling where the rain got in. Harlow Quinn kept to the shadow, short salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her forehead, coat collar high, and watched the man in the black hood come out of the side alley. He was bleeding. She had seen him cut his forearm on a fire escape ladder in Frith Street, and the wound had not slowed him much. He took off at a run, boots hammering the wet pavement, and turned left toward the main road. Harlow went after him. Her shoes were wrong for this chase—leather-soled, polished, built for offices and interviews. The streets were built for old men and young thieves. The rain made every surface slick. A taxi horn split the air. Harlow slid on a patch of spilled oil, caught herself on a lamp post, and kept going. Her worn leather watch bit her wrist, the strap dark with age. The hooded man wove through a cluster of people leaving a cinema. Umbrellas knocked together. A child pointed as the man brushed past. His hood shifted enough for Harlow to see his jaw, thin and sharp, mouth open in a soundless panic. She caught him again at a crossing near a launderette. He threw something over his shoulder without looking. A small pale object skittered across the asphalt and stopped against her toe. She stepped over it and kept running. He disappeared down a stair between two shop fronts. The shops had been closed so long their windows had gone opaque with grime. Harlow reached the stairwell. The object had left a faint mark on the pavement. She bent, picked it up, and put it in her pocket without stopping. Bone. A token. Carved thin and yellowed in the centre, with a hole drilled through one end. The carving was crude, but the edge had been worn smooth by thumbs. The stair descended into a lower passage that smelled of dust and old electricity. She came down hard, one hand on the cold rail, and saw the man at the bottom. He had one hand on the platform wall, the other pressing his bleeding arm against his side. A closed Tube station waited beyond a rusted gate. Camden, but not the Camden of tourists and buskers. The platform tiles were black under years of soot. The tunnel mouths gaped wider than a platform should allow. Blue light leaked from the side of the lower wall, as if the earth had been drilled by something with too many arms. The man looked up when Harlow reached the bottom of the stairs. His face was young and grey. "You should have stayed upstairs." Harlow took her badge from her pocket and held it in her palm. "Metropolitan Police. Put your hands where I can see them." He turned toward the gate and pulled a rope that hung beside it. The bell above the gate rang once, dull and wet, as though it had learned fear. A figure emerged from the dark beneath the platform. They were small, wrapped in a coat sewn with coins. The coins did not shine. They looked like teeth. The figure stopped a metre short of the gate and watched Harlow without moving. "Police." Harlow held the badge higher. "I have a suspect in custody. Stand clear." The figure looked at the man, then at Harlow's empty hands. "You don't have custody of him if he came through bone." Harlow stepped forward. "This is a criminal investigation." The figure smiled. The mouth opened too far. "All of it is a criminal investigation." The man pressed his bleeding arm and swayed. His eyes found the blue light beyond the gate. His voice came as a hiss through his teeth. "Please." The figure did not answer. They reached for the man's collar and pulled out a bone token from beneath his shirt. The carvings on it moved under the light—thin lines forming faces, then doors, then no shape at all. Harlow's fingers found the token in her pocket. "He dropped it." The figure tilted their head. "Did he?" The bone in Harlow's palm was warm, warmer than her body should have allowed. It gave off a faint vibration, like a trapped insect against her skin. The gate swung open with a noise like a bone breaking. The man staggered through. Harlow moved after him, but the figure caught her sleeve with a hand that had too many joints. "The Market does not accept police." Harlow's jaw tightened. She looked past the gate into the blue-lit station and saw, beyond the first turn, a market. Stalls crowded the old subway tunnel, roofed with canvas and iron. Lanterns swung from the walls, green and white and a bruised purple that made the rain look black when it dripped from the ceiling. People moved between them, but their steps were wrong—too quick, too smooth, as if the floor had no friction. A woman with paper-white hair carried a cage of glass moths. A man sold small clay jars filled with smoke. Another had laid out knives on a table, each one different, each one too long. A board near the tunnel entrance hung with folded papers and names written in ink that shifted when the lanterns moved. The air smelled of wet wool, metal, and burnt sugar. The full moon stood in an open shaft overhead, a perfect white coin framed by iron. Harlow had not seen the moon since the chase began. Now it watched the station and everything in it. She remembered the brief: underground market, moved by moon, no police entry, no photographs that stayed true. A witness had named it the Veil Market. Harlow had written it in her notebook as superstition. She had crossed it out. She should not have crossed it out. She drew the thrown token from her pocket and pressed it against the iron bars. The gate hummed. The figure's hand dropped. The wounded man went toward a stall lit with red bulbs. The sign above it was hand-painted: HEALER'S DOOR. No medicine. No questions. The man behind the counter was young, dark curly hair, olive skin, sleeves rolled. A scar ran along his left forearm. A silver Saint Christopher medallion rested over his heart. He took the suspect's shoulders and eased him down onto a folding table. His hands went for the wound before he looked up and saw Harlow at the gate. "You can't bring him here." The suspect's eyes rolled back. Blood ran over the edge of the table and dripped onto old tiles. Harlow kept her badge raised. "Where here is this?" The man behind the counter pressed a pad against the suspect's arm and held it there until the pad darkened. "Where the hospital would charge you for lying." The market noise rose around them—haggling, laughter, the soft scrape of glass on iron. The gatekeeper's hand still rested on Harlow's sleeve. The figure's voice came low enough that only she could hear it. "The Market moves tonight. Full moon. By dawn, this station will be stone and rats. You cross that gate, you can't come back the same way." Harlow looked at the wounded suspect. The healer had opened a cooler and taken out a bag of blood. His medallion knocked against the table as he worked. The suspect's fingers curled against the healer's wrist and tightened. The healer looked up from the cut. "If you want him to live, you hold the arm. I need pressure." Harlow's fingers tightened on the bone token in her pocket. The healer's dark eyes met hers over the suspect's shaking body. "Or you can go up the stairs. That's your call." The suspect's head lolled against the table. "Please." The word came from too deep, too tired for a man who had run that far. Harlow looked at the gate, at the blue light beyond it, at the crowd that had no shadows on the tiles. The Raven's Nest sign above the street would be dark by now. Her watch had stopped at the top of the stairs. The second hand rested at six, unmoving. She looked at the healer. He had a pair of shears beside his hand, a bottle of something clear and oily, and the look of a man who had already buried enough patients to care about one more. Harlow pressed her badge back into her pocket. She did not take the token out, but she felt it there, a piece of bone against her hip, humming with the gate's open dark. The gatekeeper loosened her sleeve. Harlow stepped through the gate.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:53:48.737Z" 9/2/2026, 4:53:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1479
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1353
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Quinn1
Frith1
Street1
Harlow25
Tube1
Camden2
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Quinn"
2"Harlow"
3"Market"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
globalScore0.576
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1479
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean23.48
std22.04
cv0.939
sampleLengths
084
144
24
364
442
538
650
730
848
960
1018
115
1213
1310
1429
1542
1614
1711
1811
193
205
218
227
2326
241
2539
268
273
285
292
3027
3111
3222
336
3420
35110
3645
3746
3815
397
4053
4129
425
4318
445
454
4620
478
4834
4926
93.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences123
matches
0"were built"
1"been closed"
2"been worn"
3"been drilled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was bleeding"
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences140
ratio0.029
matches
0"Her shoes were wrong for this chase—leather-soled, polished, built for offices and interviews."
1"The carvings on it moved under the light—thin lines forming faces, then doors, then no shape at all."
2"People moved between them, but their steps were wrong—too quick, too smooth, as if the floor had no friction."
3"The market noise rose around them—haggling, laughter, the soft scrape of glass on iron."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1366
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.022693997071742314
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0021961932650073207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean10.56
std6.05
cv0.572
sampleLengths
022
115
217
330
43
523
618
74
813
910
106
116
1217
1312
1412
153
168
1719
1810
198
2013
217
229
2314
244
2510
2613
271
282
2914
3013
3114
3217
3317
349
359
369
3710
3823
3912
406
415
4213
4310
4413
4516
469
4710
485
494
35.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2357142857142857
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences119
matches
0"He was bleeding."
1"She had seen him cut"
2"He took off at a"
3"Her shoes were wrong for"
4"Her worn leather watch bit"
5"His hood shifted enough for"
6"She caught him again at"
7"He threw something over his"
8"She stepped over it and"
9"He disappeared down a stair"
10"She bent, picked it up,"
11"She came down hard, one"
12"He had one hand on"
13"His face was young and"
14"He turned toward the gate"
15"They were small, wrapped in"
16"They looked like teeth."
17"His eyes found the blue"
18"His voice came as a"
19"They reached for the man's"
ratio0.277
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences119
matches
0"The rain came sideways off"
1"The neon sign buzzed above"
2"Harlow Quinn kept to the"
3"He was bleeding."
4"She had seen him cut"
5"He took off at a"
6"Harlow went after him."
7"Her shoes were wrong for"
8"The streets were built for"
9"The rain made every surface"
10"A taxi horn split the"
11"Harlow slid on a patch"
12"Her worn leather watch bit"
13"The hooded man wove through"
14"Umbrellas knocked together."
15"A child pointed as the"
16"His hood shifted enough for"
17"She caught him again at"
18"He threw something over his"
19"A small pale object skittered"
ratio0.966
42.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Now it watched the station"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The stair descended into a lower passage that smelled of dust and old electricity."
1"Blue light leaked from the side of the lower wall, as if the earth had been drilled by something with too many arms."
2"She remembered the brief: underground market, moved by moon, no police entry, no photographs that stayed true."
3"He had a pair of shears beside his hand, a bottle of something clear and oily, and the look of a man who had already buried enough patients to care about one mo…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.4257%