Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGPVM7S6C749FGWWE0BDW6

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Duration:
17.9s
Cost:
$0.013995
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave way with a sharp metallic clatter. Rory yanked the door inward, a heavy brass candlestick clenched behind her right thigh. Lucien Moreau stood on the draughty landing, pristine in a bespoke charcoal three-piece suit. Rainwater beaded on his slicked-back platinum hair, catching the yellow glow of the stairwell bulb. One amber eye appraised her with glacial detachment; the other, solid pitch-black demon ink, drank the light and gave nothing back. "Put the candlestick down, Aurora. You will only dent the brass." "You have five seconds to step backward down the stairs, Luc." "Four more than I require to break the lock again." He stepped across the threshold without an invitation. The ivory crook of his walking cane tapped against the cracked linoleum, firm and deliberate. Ptolemy, curled upon a stack of arcane texts near the hall stand, hissed and vanished beneath an armchair. Rory shut the door, threw all three deadbolts, and turned to face him. The spice of toasted cumin and turmeric rose from the Bengali kitchen below, mixed now with his signature scent: bitter almond, cedar, and the sharp ozone of brimstone. "Eva is out until morning," she said. "Which means you broke into the street door, navigated her tripwires, and came to an address only three living people possess." "Two living people," Lucien corrected, his smooth accent carrying the clipped cadence of Marseille. "The clerk at the apothecary who sold her the rowan salt ceased breathing an hour ago." Rory kept her hand on the candlestick. "Because of you?" "Because of you, *chérie*." He turned slowly, taking in the chaotic flat. Yellowed parchment and handwritten transcripts littered the low coffee table. Stacks of antique calfskin volumes tilted in unsteady towers against the skirting boards. His cane clicked once against the bare pine. "Still hiding behind dead languages," he noted, glancing at a translated Aramaic tract on the sideboard. "Your father's wasted ambition clings to you like damp wool." "Leave my father out of this. You left Cardiff six months ago with half of my research and zero explanations." "I left Cardiff because your skin was still grey from demon blight, and my presence invited butcher knives to your breakfast table." "You left because you ran." Lucien stopped. The silence between them stretched taut, brittle as spun sugar. Slowly, he set his cane against the edge of the bookshelf. He unbuttoned his wool overcoat, slipped it from his broad shoulders, and tossed it onto the back of the sofa. The tailored fabric of his waistcoat hugged his chest, sharp and uncompromising. "I have never run from anything in my life, Aurora. Especially not a stubborn little Welsh law student who thinks a silver chain makes her immortal." "You vanished into thin air the night the Ward broke." "I was hunting the things that broke it." "You did not call." "I did not want you dead." "I spent three weeks pulling glass from my scalp alone in a cold flat!" Rory took a step toward him, her cool facade cracking at the edges. Her fingers dug into the cool brass of the candlestick. "Evan found me because the wards died with your departure. Do you have any idea what that was like? Wondering if every footstep on the floorboards belonged to the man who swore he would carve my name into the docks?" Lucien moved faster than human reflex allowed. A blink of movement, the rush of displaced air, and he stood directly in front of her. His gloved hand clamped over hers on the candlestick, fingers closing around her knuckles with crushing, precise pressure. He did not wrench the weapon away. He merely held her hand in place, trapping her against his chest. The heat off him was staggering, demonic and fierce beneath fine woven wool. "Do not speak that coward's name in front of me," Lucien murmured. His voice had dropped into the low, resonant register that vibrated straight through Rory's breastbone. "Evan lies at the bottom of the Bristol Channel with pig iron strapped to his ankles. He has been there since November." Rory froze. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his mismatched stare. Her throat felt parched. "You killed him?" "I executed him." "You had no right." "He put his hands on your throat, Rory. That forfeited his right to draw breath in this realm or the next." Her heart hammered against her ribs, quick and unsteady. She could feel the hard plane of his chest through his silk tie, could smell the cold rain evaporating off his skin. His amber eye flared with sudden, illicit gold. The black eye remained a bottomless void, reflecting her own pale face. "You should have told me," she whispered. "You would have forbidden it. Your absurd legal morality would have demanded a courtroom, evidence, due process. Monsters do not submit to human magistrate courts, Carter." "And what makes you different from him?" Lucien tilted his head. His thumb shifted, brushing across the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, skin rough against the leather of his glove. A jolt of electric heat raced up her forearm. "He hurt you because he feared your strength," Lucien said softly. "I terrify you because I know exactly what you are capable of becoming." "You don't terrify me." "Your pulse says otherwise against my thumb." "That isn't terror, Luc." The words hung between them, thick with an unspoken, reckless defiance. Lucien held her gaze, his expression tightening. For an agonizing second, the mask of the refined continental broker slipped, exposing the raw, predatory hunger of the half-breed beneath. His breath hitched, hot against her temple. He leaned down, his mouth barely a fraction of an inch from the sensitive curve of her jaw. "You should have stayed in Cardiff," he growled. "You shouldn't have tracked me here." "I had no choice." "There is always a choice with you. You take whatever contract pays the most coin, whatever ledger balances your debts to Avaros." "Not this time." He let go of the candlestick, but his hand did not drop. Instead, his leather-clad fingers slid up the column of her neck, cradling the angle of her jaw. His touch was burning, possessive, intoxicatingly deliberate. "The contract on your head was posted on the lower exchange three nights ago. Ten thousand sovereigns for the mortal girl who cracked the seals of the Seventh House." Rory swallowed hard, the warmth of his fingers burning through the chill that crept into her stomach. "Who took it?" "Everyone," Lucien said. "Every butcher from Soho to the Blackwall tunnel." "And you?" "I bought the exclusivity rights." A bitter laugh escaped her lips. "To protect me, or to claim the bounty?" Lucien gripped her jaw tighter, tilting her face up until her lips brushed against the hard line of his mouth. "If I wanted you dead, Aurora, we would not be having this conversation standing up." He leaned in, his lips grazing hers, demanding and hungry, an intoxicating collision of sharp demand and long-denied fury. Rory dropped the candlestick. The heavy brass hit the floorboards with a dull thud, rolling away into the shadow of the bookcase. Her hands rose, gripping the lapels of his charcoal waistcoat, pulling him down, meeting the bite of his mouth with all the accumulated rage and want she had choked down for six agonizing months. Lucien groaned, backing her into the wall. The rough plaster bit into her shoulder blades as his mouth consumed hers, bruising, desperate, stripping away the months of silence in a single reckless surge of heat. His cane clattered to the floor. Then the window overlooking Brick Lane exploded inward. Rays of blackened frost and jagged glass erupted into the room. A monstrous iron harpoon slammed through the window frame, burying itself four inches deep into the plaster an inch above Rory's ear, trailing a thick steel chain coated in sizzling, flesh-eating ichor.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.042
88.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1317
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1317
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"facade"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"navigated"
2"chaotic"
3"silence"
4"facade"
5"vibrated"
6"could feel"
7"silk"
8"electric"
9"raced"
10"pulse"
11"unspoken"
12"warmth"
13"chill"
14"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1317
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount814
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Bengali1
Lucien11
Marseille1
Rory9
Aramaic1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Aramaic"
places
0"Bengali"
1"Marseille"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.824
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1317
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean21.95
std19.37
cv0.883
sampleLengths
010
114
250
311
411
510
641
741
828
930
1010
114
1239
1326
1420
1522
165
1755
1826
1910
208
214
226
2377
247
2554
2613
2749
2815
293
303
314
3221
3351
347
3526
367
3734
3824
394
407
414
4246
4318
448
456
464
4722
4868
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was burning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences106
ratio0.009
matches
0"One amber eye appraised her with glacial detachment; the other, solid pitch-black demon ink, drank the light and gave nothing back."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount822
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"other, solid pitch-black demon"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.021897810218978103
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00851581508515815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean12.42
std7.79
cv0.627
sampleLengths
010
114
214
315
421
511
611
710
88
915
1018
1113
1228
137
1421
1514
1616
177
183
194
208
2110
2213
238
2416
2510
2620
2722
285
292
3010
3111
3220
3312
3426
3510
368
374
386
3927
4010
4140
427
4317
4418
457
4612
4713
4812
4915
57.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37735849056603776
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences61
matches
0"Slowly, he set his cane"
1"Instead, his leather-clad fingers slid"
2"Then the window overlooking Brick"
ratio0.049
69.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences61
matches
0"He stepped across the threshold"
1"He turned slowly, taking in"
2"His cane clicked once against"
3"he noted, glancing at a"
4"He unbuttoned his wool overcoat,"
5"Her fingers dug into the"
6"His gloved hand clamped over"
7"He did not wrench the"
8"He merely held her hand"
9"His voice had dropped into"
10"Her bright blue eyes locked"
11"Her throat felt parched."
12"Her heart hammered against her"
13"She could feel the hard"
14"His amber eye flared with"
15"His thumb shifted, brushing across"
16"His breath hitched, hot against"
17"He leaned down, his mouth"
18"He let go of the"
19"His touch was burning, possessive,"
ratio0.377
9.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences61
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave way"
1"Rory yanked the door inward,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"Rainwater beaded on his slicked-back"
4"He stepped across the threshold"
5"The ivory crook of his"
6"Ptolemy, curled upon a stack"
7"Rory shut the door, threw"
8"The spice of toasted cumin"
9"Lucien corrected, his smooth accent"
10"Rory kept her hand on"
11"He turned slowly, taking in"
12"Stacks of antique calfskin volumes"
13"His cane clicked once against"
14"he noted, glancing at a"
15"The silence between them stretched"
16"He unbuttoned his wool overcoat,"
17"The tailored fabric of his"
18"Rory took a step toward"
19"Her fingers dug into the"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His voice had dropped into the low, resonant register that vibrated straight through Rory's breastbone."
1"A monstrous iron harpoon slammed through the window frame, burying itself four inches deep into the plaster an inch above Rory's ear, trailing a thick steel cha…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Lucien corrected, his smooth accent carrying the clipped cadence of Marseille"
1"Rory took, her cool facade cracking at the edges"
2"He let go, but his hand did not drop"
45.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected (correct)"
1"he noted (note)"
2"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"he growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.208
82.6575%