| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.208 | | leniency | 0.417 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.042 | |
| 88.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pristine" | | 1 | "navigated" | | 2 | "chaotic" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "facade" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1317 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 814 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Bengali | 1 | | Lucien | 11 | | Marseille | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Aramaic | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Aramaic" |
| | places | | 0 | "Bengali" | | 1 | "Marseille" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 0.824 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1317 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 21.95 | | std | 19.37 | | cv | 0.883 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 77 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 46 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 68 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber eye appraised her with glacial detachment; the other, solid pitch-black demon ink, drank the light and gave nothing back." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 822 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "other, solid pitch-black demon" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.021897810218978103 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00851581508515815 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 12.42 | | std | 7.79 | | cv | 0.627 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 57.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.37735849056603776 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, he set his cane" | | 1 | "Instead, his leather-clad fingers slid" | | 2 | "Then the window overlooking Brick" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 69.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped across the threshold" | | 1 | "He turned slowly, taking in" | | 2 | "His cane clicked once against" | | 3 | "he noted, glancing at a" | | 4 | "He unbuttoned his wool overcoat," | | 5 | "Her fingers dug into the" | | 6 | "His gloved hand clamped over" | | 7 | "He did not wrench the" | | 8 | "He merely held her hand" | | 9 | "His voice had dropped into" | | 10 | "Her bright blue eyes locked" | | 11 | "Her throat felt parched." | | 12 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 13 | "She could feel the hard" | | 14 | "His amber eye flared with" | | 15 | "His thumb shifted, brushing across" | | 16 | "His breath hitched, hot against" | | 17 | "He leaned down, his mouth" | | 18 | "He let go of the" | | 19 | "His touch was burning, possessive," |
| | ratio | 0.377 | |
| 9.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt gave way" | | 1 | "Rory yanked the door inward," | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 3 | "Rainwater beaded on his slicked-back" | | 4 | "He stepped across the threshold" | | 5 | "The ivory crook of his" | | 6 | "Ptolemy, curled upon a stack" | | 7 | "Rory shut the door, threw" | | 8 | "The spice of toasted cumin" | | 9 | "Lucien corrected, his smooth accent" | | 10 | "Rory kept her hand on" | | 11 | "He turned slowly, taking in" | | 12 | "Stacks of antique calfskin volumes" | | 13 | "His cane clicked once against" | | 14 | "he noted, glancing at a" | | 15 | "The silence between them stretched" | | 16 | "He unbuttoned his wool overcoat," | | 17 | "The tailored fabric of his" | | 18 | "Rory took a step toward" | | 19 | "Her fingers dug into the" |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice had dropped into the low, resonant register that vibrated straight through Rory's breastbone." | | 1 | "A monstrous iron harpoon slammed through the window frame, burying itself four inches deep into the plaster an inch above Rory's ear, trailing a thick steel cha…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien corrected, his smooth accent carrying the clipped cadence of Marseille" | | 1 | "Rory took, her cool facade cracking at the edges" | | 2 | "He let go, but his hand did not drop" |
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| 45.83% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "he noted (note)" | | 2 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "he growled (growl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.208 | |