Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGPZZPPQPFP5ABVXFMN9QD

Run Details

Duration:
2m 33s
Cost:
$0.006766
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came in grey slabs and laid the street to oil. Detective Harlow Quinn stood under the awning of a closed newsagent, watch face slick under her thumb, salt-and-pepper hair plastered to the short crop along her skull. Four blocks behind her, the Raven's Nest bled its green sign into the puddles. The old maps and black-and-white photographs inside would be dark by now, and the bookshelf in the back room had already closed. The man who had slipped through it was not dark. He was two streets away, and he was running. She saw the flash of his medallion under a streetlamp. Saint Christopher. A trinket for travellers. His curls clung to his forehead. His left sleeve rode high when he reached for a railing, and the pale line of the scar ran from wrist to elbow, old and straight, as if a blade had tried to measure him. Quinn dropped into the chase. "Herrera!" He broke left into an alley mouth. The sound of her boots became a wet slap against broken glass and pooled water. Trash bags burst against her shin. She sidestepped a bin and came up the other side into a wider lane strung with copper pipes and dripping fire escapes. He looked back once. Warm brown eyes, wide but steady, took her in with a medic's scan: distance, footing, threat. "I'm still the only friend you've got in this city." "Friends don't run from a warrant." He took a corner so hard his shoulder struck brick. He stayed up. The street beyond narrowed into a wet corridor of pubs and shuttered cafes. Steam vented from a drain and swallowed his legs to the knee. Quinn went into the steam blind. Her coat snagged on a metal lip. She tore free, saw a flash of olive skin, and followed. A taxi horn shrieked at a crossing. Herrera ducked under the bonnet of a parked car and came up in the middle of the road. The taxi's headlamps hit him square. He stumbled sideways, then vanished behind the bulk of a bus. "Tomás Herrera, police." No answer. Rain punched the tarmac. Quinn crossed the road and found the bus stop. Herrera had gone around the rear of the bus and was descending a set of stairs set into the pavement under a curved brick arch. A sign above the stairs was half blacked out: Camden Town, the old entrance, no longer serving. Someone had scratched another word under it in chalk. A full moon circled the first letter, and rain was already eating the letters: Veil. She hit the stairs three at a time. The smell changed below the street: wet dust, rust, burnt sugar, old breath. A tiled arch opened onto a concourse that should have been closed. Emergency bulbs glowed along the vault. A row of turnstiles stood where the old platform edge should have been. Behind them, a crowd moved under a low ceiling strung with black cloth and small lamps. The Veil Market. Herrera reached the turnstiles with a token between thumb and forefinger. It was bone-white, no bigger than a match head, carved with a line that looked too much like a vein. A man in a brass-buttoned coat stood beside the turnstile. His shaved head gleamed under the bulbs. "Token." Herrera held it out. The steward looked at the token, then down the stairs at Quinn. "Late night for badges." Quinn came within arm's reach. "That man's under arrest for obstruction, conspiracy, and whatever else he runs from tonight." The steward did not look away from her. "No paper down here." "Paper's where my authority lives." "Your authority stopped at the rain." Herrera touched the token to a slot in the turnstile. The metal made a click like a dry knuckle cracking. He went through. Quinn followed. The steward caught her wrist. The grip was firm, careful, a hand that had held people still before. She twisted, and her palm caught his collar. He stepped back a half pace, not enough to let her through, enough to put his hip between her and the turnstile. "Token." "Let him go." "Market rule." "Let. Him. Go." Herrera had already reached the stalls. He moved through the crowd with his hands raised, showing no weapon, only the medallion swinging with each step. People parted around him, some because he was running, some because they knew him. A woman selling black candles looked up with a face powdered silver. A man with a hawk on his wrist pulled a leather ledger from under a crate. Bottles on a table held liquids that glowed under the cloth, each one sealed with wax and a tiny folded page. Quinn saw a sign above the nearest stall: Information. Three words. No shop. Quinn faced the steward. "Where's your man?" The steward's eyes slid to the crowd. "Market keeps its own people." "Then you've got a witness in the wrong place." He tightened his grip. "You'll need the back stair for him." Her eyes flicked past him to a maintenance door at the end of the concourse. It stood open on blackness. A chain hung from the lintel with a padlock that had not been used in years. Beyond the door, a shaft of cold air touched her face and carried the smell of flooded earth. The steward turned. "Some doors don't open twice." Quinn broke her wrist free and shoved him into the turnstile. His shoulder hit the machine. She went for the door. Herrera glanced back from between two stalls. For a second, the chase stopped and something else took its place. He looked at her with the careful attention of a man weighing a pulse, then he reached into his jacket and dropped a small object on the tile floor. The bone token skittered across the wet stone and came to rest against Quinn's shoe. She kicked the door open and went down the maintenance stair. The stairwell swallowed the noise of the market and left her with her breathing and the slap of drops on iron. The light above thinned to a grey thread. Below, a landing opened onto another platform. The platform was crowded, but not with customers. People sat on benches under a banner made from a hospital sheet. Bloodstains browned the corner. A surgeon's tray of instruments lay on a bench, scissors and forceps beside gauze still damp. Herrera stood at the far end of the platform, crouching over a figure on the ground. The medallion disappeared under his hand as he pressed something to the person's throat. His fingers moved fast, checking, pushing, deciding. Quinn drew her sidearm from its holster at the small of her back. The weight in her hand did not feel unfamiliar. The place did. "Herrera." His back stiffened. He did not turn. "You shouldn't have come alone." "You should have come with me." "He'll bleed out if I move him." "Then don't." She crossed the platform one step at a time, watching the stalls, the dark tunnel mouths, the shadows under the benches. The air thickened. A bottle of amber fluid rolled across the concrete. Someone coughed in the dark. A child's voice counted to three under its breath. Herrera lifted the figure's shirt. Ribs showed under skin that did not bruise the way skin should. A slit ran beneath the collarbone, neat as a pen mark. He pressed a folded cloth over it. Blood welled through the fabric and fell to the tiles in a slow, bright line. Quinn stopped five feet away. "Who is that?" "Nobody who can be arrested." "Wrong. I arrest people every day." "Here, you need permission." She looked at him. His eyes were wet, but the rain had been on him for ten minutes. The warm brown of them held a calm she did not trust. "You ran from a warrant." "I ran from your warrant. There's a difference." The figure on the ground made a sound like tearing paper. Herrera put a hand over the person's mouth, then moved it to the pulse at the jaw. Quinn watched his hands. "Get help." "There's no help here." "Then we do it." Herrera's hands shook once. He met her eyes. "If you take him to a station, he'll be dead before the paperwork is signed." "If you keep him here, he dies anyway." "Not if I use what's on the bench." Quinn looked down. A black bag sat under the bench, open enough to show glass vials and a row of thin needles. A folded card rested on top of the bag. The card bore no name, only a line of small bones arranged like a key. The market lights buzzed. From the stairwell, someone called a price in a language she did not know. Quinn's watch face fogged under the rain. She wiped it with her thumb. Three years had worn the glass into a web of hairline cracks, and the watch still told the same time as the world outside. She pressed it once. "Use the kit. I call it." "No." "I'll send a uniform to the street. We get him up, we treat him here, we take him to my office after. I'll sign the log." "Your office will ask questions." "My office asks questions." The injured person coughed. Herrera looked at the blood on the cloth, then at Quinn. His scar caught the light as he reached for the needles. "You came in." "Because you ran." She moved to the bench and opened her coat, putting herself between Herrera and the tunnel mouth. Her sidearm stayed in her hand. Her eyes swept the market, the stalls, the dark corners, the faces watching her from under black cloth. She waited for him to stop arguing and begin.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:54:58.482Z" 9/2/2026, 4:54:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences135
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1630
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1397
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn17
Raven1
Nest1
Christopher1
Camden1
Town1
Veil2
Market1
Information1
Herrera13
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Christopher"
5"Market"
6"Herrera"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
globalScore0.892
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1630
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean17.91
std21.34
cv1.191
sampleLengths
093
157
25
31
450
520
610
76
813
949
1042
113
126
1375
148
1560
163
1731
1817
191
2016
214
225
2314
248
254
265
276
2823
292
3048
311
323
332
343
3588
3613
374
383
397
405
419
424
437
4454
453
465
4721
4848
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences135
matches
0"been closed"
1"been used"
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was running"
1"was descending"
2"was already eating"
3"was running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences178
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1403
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.023521026372059873
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0014255167498218105
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean9.16
std6.25
cv0.683
sampleLengths
011
127
214
322
410
59
610
72
84
96
1035
115
121
137
1415
156
1622
174
1816
1910
206
2110
223
2313
2412
256
267
2711
287
2918
306
3111
323
332
344
359
3625
3717
389
3915
408
4113
4212
436
4413
4516
463
4711
4820
4910
44.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3089887640449438
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences130
matches
0"He was two streets away,"
1"She saw the flash of"
2"His curls clung to his"
3"His left sleeve rode high"
4"He broke left into an"
5"She sidestepped a bin and"
6"He looked back once."
7"He took a corner so"
8"He stayed up."
9"Her coat snagged on a"
10"She tore free, saw a"
11"He stumbled sideways, then vanished"
12"She hit the stairs three"
13"It was bone-white, no bigger"
14"His shaved head gleamed under"
15"He went through."
16"She twisted, and her palm"
17"He stepped back a half"
18"He moved through the crowd"
19"He tightened his grip."
ratio0.315
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences130
matches
0"Rain came in grey slabs"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood under"
2"The old maps and black-and-white"
3"The man who had slipped"
4"He was two streets away,"
5"She saw the flash of"
6"A trinket for travellers."
7"His curls clung to his"
8"His left sleeve rode high"
9"Quinn dropped into the chase."
10"He broke left into an"
11"The sound of her boots"
12"Trash bags burst against her"
13"She sidestepped a bin and"
14"He looked back once."
15"He took a corner so"
16"He stayed up."
17"The street beyond narrowed into"
18"Steam vented from a drain"
19"Quinn went into the steam"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His left sleeve rode high when he reached for a railing, and the pale line of the scar ran from wrist to elbow, old and straight, as if a blade had tried to mea…"
1"It was bone-white, no bigger than a match head, carved with a line that looked too much like a vein."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3539%