Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGR4SQHCW7FSNP73MYXBMM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.004202
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone heated against Aurora’s breastbone until the silver chain left a red line under her shirt. Its crimson glow came through the wool, small as a coal, small as a thumbnail. Ahead, between two black oaks, the air had come loose. A vertical seam shivered in the grey dusk. The edges curled like the skin of a peach pulled back from fruit. Beyond it, something amber breathed. Nyx did not cast a shadow in the ordinary sense. Dark had gathered around its violet eyes, pooled under its coat, and slipped beneath the seam. Step where I step. Isolde’s bare feet left no print on the moss. Her silver hair moved aside despite still air, and the ends brushed through the standing stones without disturbing leaves. I have no wish to taste it yet. Aurora drew the Fae blade. Moonsilver slid from its sheath and kept the chill of a winter door. The seam resisted her edge. A faint chord sounded when she cut through it, as if a bell had been pulled from the water. The ward gave way in strips. Rory pushed first. The smell came ahead of the view: bread baking in a room too warm, fruit split open, fat dripping over hot coals. Then the sky settled over them, deep amber and low, a lid of honey lit from below. The trees on either side of the path leaned inward, heavy with vines. The ground beneath their boots was soft, like pressed barley. Nyx solidified with a sound like a coat shaken out. No earth here. Isolde stepped over a pale root. There is appetite. They had crossed a gate with no name and walked into a long slope where vineyards filled both sides. The grape clusters were too large for the vines. Each berry held a red centre, pulsing once, twice, like the heart of a fruit made more serious. Leaves hung thick and waxy, and when the amber light moved across them, they showed the veins of hands. Aurora’s grip tightened on the blade. The pendant’s warmth spread into her ribs. Keep moving. Keep moving, Isolde repeated, amused. You sound like a child asking the tide. Rory did not rise to it. She watched the rows of vines and the small insects that came up from the leaves in spirals. They shone with the glaze of sugar. The path widened, and a garden opened before them. Trees stood in rings, each ring a different stage of growth. In one, blossoms fell upward toward the branches. In the next, fruit hung ripe and cracked. In the third, empty boughs smoked. Pears with skin like polished copper touched Rory’s shoulder as she passed. They gave off heat. An apple split beside a boot, and a small brown core turned toward her. Back, Nyx murmured. The fruit is listening. Rory stepped aside. The split apple shut with a soft click. The garden gave way to a terrace paved with dark stone and scattered with crushed petals. The stench of overripe plums and fresh mint rose together, sweet enough to make her teeth ache. A low hum carried from farther down the slope, the sound of many pans struck at once, a rhythm that had no song. They followed the sound. At the edge of the terrace, a broken stair dropped into a valley of greenhouses. Glass roofings curved like the shells of beetles, warm with condensation. Inside, shapes moved under the steam. The smell of rosemary drifted from a crack in one pane. Another pane had been replaced with stretched skin from which a yellow sauce dripped down its side. Nyx ran its fingers over the nearest window. Shadow slid from its knuckles into the glass, becoming a flat stain on the outside. The stain moved through the pane, vanished inside, and returned with its violet eyes brighter. Cooks. Too many hands on them. Isolde stopped halfway down a stair. Which hand feeds? None of them look full. Fullness is a door in Dymas. Rory went first. Her boots found the last step by weight and sound. The valley floor opened into a long stone kitchen built around the roots of an orchard. The walls were stained by smoke and old grease. A banquet had been laid down the centre, tables enough for two hundred, all set with plates white as bone. No chairs. Platters rose along the tables. Roasted birds lay with their skins lacquered to mirror black, and their heads rested on folded napkins. The meat steamed. Bread loaves had been cut to show hollow centres packed with berries. Bowls of cream held spoons standing upright, their handles bent like fingers. Rory walked down the side of the table and stopped before a plate of sliced figs. The figs were still bleeding sap. The cut faces turned toward the room. She leaned back. This place serves. A guest came once, Nyx said. Or many guests. Isolde touched the rim of a dish. The table keeps what it has tasted. From the kitchens beyond the orchard roots came a crash, then a bright flare of steam. Figures moved behind a screen of hanging herbs. The first chef stepped through, a man made more of soot than skin. His apron was stitched from thin leaves, and his hands moved with the patience of animals trained by hunger. He carried a pot without handles, its rim glowing red. He did not see them. Behind him came another, a woman with her sleeves rolled to the elbow and scars running around her wrists in parallel rings. She pulled a cart of cut vegetables: carrots split to reveal violet centres, onions shedding layers that whispered, cabbages dense and pale as fists. The woman stopped at the long table and set out bowls with a rhythm that looked like prayer. Aurora watched the pendant through the chain. Its light had steadied into a pulse, in step with the clang of the cart wheels. Which way? Nyx whispered. The heat comes from there. Isolde pointed past the kitchen to a gap in the orchard wall, where a black arch stood between two trees. The arch had been carved with plates and cups, and in its hollow centre, a second amber sky waited. A passage. Not an exit. Is there a difference here? Isolde smiled, but her pale lavender eyes stayed cold. Not for the hungry. The first chef turned toward them then, not with surprise, but with a slow adjustment, as if their presence had entered the room a moment before his mind caught up. His face had no clear mouth. The soot shifted where it should have been, and a small tongue of flame flickered between his teeth. He looked at the plate of figs. The figs turned toward him. Rory laid her hand on the blade. The moonsilver stayed cold. The chef raised the pot and poured its contents over an empty plate. The liquid spread without touching the plate, holding its shape in the air. It cooled to the texture of pastry, cracked, and showed a dark filling shaped like a mouthful of black seeds. Another cook came through the herb screen. That one lifted a pan with a bare hand. Flames climbed along the handle and into the palm. The cook did not flinch. The flame curled into a small shape: a bird, a fish, a woman’s face, then vanished into the oil. Nyx sank toward the shadows under the table. For an instant its form left the solid air entirely. It became a line between the legs of the nearest cook. The shadow slid along the stone floor and rose beside Aurora. They know. Everything in this place knows when food is threatened, Isolde said. The scarred woman lifted a spoon and tasted the black filling. Her shoulders dropped with relief, then rose again with alarm. She put the spoon down and walked toward the arch. The cart squeaked as she passed. The soot chef followed. Then the cooks behind them began to move, a tide of aprons and blackened hands turning the tables into a route. Rory stepped away from the table. The pendant burned harder. Move. Isolde walked ahead, leaving no prints on the grease-stained floor. Nyx flowed along the wall, dark against the carved plates. Aurora kept between them and the arch, blade low. The gap under the black trees smelled of cinnamon and scorched bone. The amber light there was thick, moving as if it had been poured into the arch slowly and not yet allowed to settle. When she reached the threshold, the pendant pulsed once, then stilled against her skin. Beyond the arch lay a hall larger than the kitchen and orchard together. Its floor was polished obsidian, reflecting the warm sky from a high window that had no frame. Tables filled the space in long serpentine rows, stacked with fruit that had not grown on any plant she had seen: pomegranates split into perfect rooms, grapes strung on silver wire, loaves baked in the shape of hands holding spoons. At the far end, a dais rose in tiers, but no figure sat on it. The air above the dais shimmered, hungry and empty. The cooks entered behind them. The line split around the tables with practiced order, as if they had been expecting the hall to open at last. A bell rang once from somewhere unseen, and every plate turned toward the door. Isolde lifted her head and listened. The feast is not a feast. Nyx’s whisper brushed the hall’s silence. It is a court. Rory kept her eyes on the plates. The cut figs in her pocket had begun to warm.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:55:37.7Z" 9/2/2026, 4:55:37 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1612
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1612
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"flickered"
5"pulsed"
6"perfect"
7"shimmered"
8"whisper"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences159
matches
0"t with surprise"
1"d with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences159
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1612
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"Back, Nyx murmured."
1"A guest came once, Nyx said."
2"Everything in this place knows when food is threatened, Isolde said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1612
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Aurora6
Fae1
Isolde10
Rory9
Nyx9
Dymas1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Rory"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Dymas"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences117
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like prayer"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.62
wordCount1612
matches
0"not with surprise, but with a slow adjustment, as if their presence had entered the"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean24.06
std23.43
cv0.974
sampleLengths
042
126
226
34
428
58
648
73
862
910
103
116
123
1365
1413
152
1613
1731
1872
197
2011
2156
224
2360
2438
256
266
273
285
296
3060
3149
3229
333
343
359
367
377
3866
395
4064
4123
424
4349
445
459
464
4754
4812
4911
89.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences159
matches
0"been pulled"
1"been replaced"
2"were stained"
3"been laid"
4"was stitched"
5"been carved"
6"been poured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs253
matches
0"were still bleeding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences159
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1613
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.022938623682579044
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0012399256044637321
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean10.14
std6.36
cv0.627
sampleLengths
017
115
210
38
413
55
610
716
84
99
1019
118
125
1313
145
1519
166
173
1822
1917
2013
2110
2210
233
246
253
2619
279
2818
2919
306
317
322
335
348
356
3618
377
389
3911
408
418
426
4312
444
4514
463
474
483
498
51.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3710691823899371
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners59
66.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences151
matches
0"Then the sky settled over"
1"Too many hands on them."
2"Then the cooks behind them"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences151
matches
0"Its crimson glow came through"
1"Her silver hair moved aside"
2"I have no wish to"
3"They had crossed a gate"
4"You sound like a child"
5"She watched the rows of"
6"They shone with the glaze"
7"They gave off heat."
8"They followed the sound."
9"Her boots found the last"
10"She leaned back."
11"His apron was stitched from"
12"He carried a pot without"
13"He did not see them."
14"She pulled a cart of"
15"Its light had steadied into"
16"His face had no clear"
17"He looked at the plate"
18"It cooled to the texture"
19"It became a line between"
ratio0.159
46.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount125
totalSentences151
matches
0"The Heartstone heated against Aurora’s"
1"Its crimson glow came through"
2"A vertical seam shivered in"
3"The edges curled like the"
4"Nyx did not cast a"
5"Dark had gathered around its"
6"Step where I step."
7"Isolde’s bare feet left no"
8"Her silver hair moved aside"
9"I have no wish to"
10"Aurora drew the Fae blade."
11"Moonsilver slid from its sheath"
12"The seam resisted her edge."
13"A faint chord sounded when"
14"The ward gave way in"
15"Rory pushed first."
16"The smell came ahead of"
17"The trees on either side"
18"The ground beneath their boots"
19"Nyx solidified with a sound"
ratio0.828
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She pulled a cart of cut vegetables: carrots split to reveal violet centres, onions shedding layers that whispered, cabbages dense and pale as fists."
1"Its floor was polished obsidian, reflecting the warm sky from a high window that had no frame."
2"Tables filled the space in long serpentine rows, stacked with fruit that had not grown on any plant she had seen: pomegranates split into perfect rooms, grapes …"
3"The line split around the tables with practiced order, as if they had been expecting the hall to open at last."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.3265%