Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGTYCR4H76Q6XHV1T5TMGX

Run Details

Duration:
5m 9s
Cost:
$0.005691
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stopped where Richmond Park’s gravel path bled into old roots. She had come on the back of a Golden Empress delivery run, still wearing the insulated jacket, one glove damp from the scooter handle. Her shoulder-length black hair had gone flat on one side, and the November air should have hurt her face. It did not. Inside the ring of oaks, the temperature sat at a wet spring level, smelling of cut grass and crushed violets. The note in her pocket had no name on it. Bring the Heartstone to the Grove before the moon crosses the tallest stone. The pendant answered the words with heat. It hung on a silver chain, no larger than her thumbnail, deep crimson and dimly lit from within. The pulse against her collarbone matched her second heartbeat. Her phone showed 11:34. Her wristwatch showed 2:16. She stepped farther in. Wildflowers filled the circle, white and violet and a yellow that looked too much like old cream. They grew thick between roots, even though the oaks had lost every leaf. The trees had not lost branches. The branches moved when she looked away. Each time she raised her torch, another limb had shifted. She turned the torch off. Moonlight did the rest. The clearing gained a cold blue layer, enough to see the standing stones at the edge, their surfaces rough with age. One stone leaned inward, as if it had grown curious. The others seemed to be watching it. “Right. Whoever put that note under my door, you can come out now.” The Grove answered with her own voice. “You can come out now.” The reply came from the far side of the clearing, lower, rougher, scraped by wind. She looked toward the place the voice should have come from. Nothing stood there except the fold. The air between two oaks had creased. Not broken. Not shining. Folded. The crease ran from the ground upward and stopped where a human neck would, then continued without needing a body. Aurora’s eyes widened. She forced them steady. At twenty-five she had learned to make fear a tool, not a verdict. She looked at the Heartstone. Its inner glow had stretched into a red thread pointing at the fold. “Hel portal.” The word came from the note’s last line, from the night the pendant appeared, from Dymas’ voice in a memory she had not let herself visit. The fold heard it and grew by a hair’s width. The silver chain tightened. She pulled her phone from her jacket. No bars. She opened voice memos anyway. “Aurora Carter. Richmond Park. The Grove. The pendant is warm. Something has my voice.” The recording started. Her own voice returned a second later, clean and close, then a second voice under it, small and wet, made words. “Good girl.” She ended the file before her hands could stop her. The red thread of light moved across the grass. It slid around roots, through stems, and stopped at the foot of the fold. From inside the crease came a sound like breath being drawn into a room. The quiet was not silence. It had weight. The wildflowers turned. They did not sway. They rotated, one white face after another, until every bloom aimed at her. The movement was slow enough to watch and precise enough to miss. “Stop it.” The command did not echo. The fold took it. Then Eva’s voice came from the crease. “Rory.” Aurora stopped moving. Eva had sent the note, or Eva had not. The voice had the old Cardiff lift, the way Eva rolled names around when they frightened her. “Eva. Where are you?” “Don’t let it see your eyes.” “You sent the note?” “Don’t let it see your eyes.” Exact. Same breath. Same pause. The pendant burned warm against her sternum, then cooled. It did that three times before her body learned to flinch. She looked away from the fold and saw her footprints. They ran ahead of her. Fresh prints in the damp soil, deep at heel, light at toe, leading from the entrance to the center of the clearing. Her boots had not made them. Her weight was too light for the first set. At five foot six, she had spent years making small spaces feel larger by standing straighter. These prints stood for someone taller. Someone heavy. Someone walking with a purpose she could not see. Behind the prints, the gate had gone. In its place stood a solid wall of roots. Aurora turned back to the fold. The red glow inside had spilled over the edges. It pooled around the standing stones, and the pools did not reflect the moon. They reflected things that had not arrived yet. She took one step toward the crease, then stopped. Her hand found the crescent scar on her left wrist. The scar was small, a curve from a childhood fall onto a glass door in Cardiff. The pendant’s glow made the old mark look newer, redder, as if a child had just pressed it into living skin. “What do you want?” The fold opened enough for a mouth. No face formed around it. Only a wet, pale seam. It used a name that was not the one Eva had given the note. “Laila.” The name hit harder than the cold should have. Laila. The name Eva had used once, long ago, when Rory was too young to know it was borrowed. The name her mother had never liked. The name that made her throat close. She forced her chin up. “Aurora Carter.” The mouth smiled without lips. The sound that followed came from every direction. Leaves brushed together dryly. Stones shifted. The standing stone that leaned inward moved another inch toward the clearing. The red pools rose an inch and touched the heels of Aurora’s boots. Her socks were already wet, but the cold did not seep. It stayed at the surface, as if her skin had become a border it would not cross. The tall thing came through the fold sideways. It stood at the edge of the red light with too many knees. The shape was not animal and not man. Its limbs had the pale, stretched look of birch bark, but they moved through air as if they remembered hands. No face showed on the head. Two points of crimson gathered near the top, the same depth as the pendant. The thing opened the mouth from the fold onto itself. “Here.” A small child’s voice. Eva’s tone. Rory’s name. The pendant leaped in her chain. The silver cut her neck. She grabbed it. The crimson stone had grown hot enough to sting, but she held it and looked at the thing. “No.” The thing answered with her voice. “No.” At the edge of her vision, the children’s figures appeared. They stood between the oaks at the far side of the clearing, five, then ten, then too many for a single glance to hold. Each one wore white flowers like a collar. Each one looked at the ground. They were small enough to be children, too straight to be living. Aurora counted them until one lifted its head. She stopped. The one who looked at her had no eyes where eyes should have been, only two hollows filled with red light. It raised a hand and pointed at the fold. The fold was closing. The thing between the trees turned, too fast for its long limbs, and watched the crease shrink. For the first time, it made a sound that was not a voice. It clicked, low and dry, like teeth striking through cloth. Aurora’s watch jumped to 2:16. The moonlight vanished. She stumbled because the darkness was not empty. It pressed against her face and moved around her hands. The pendant fell against her chest and pulsed once, bright enough to show the fold wide open again. Inside it, a stair went down. Each step looked smooth and red, like the inside of a closed mouth. The children were gone. The thing stood one pace from her. It had her face. The face appeared only for a second, then folded away into something else: Eva’s mouth, Dymas’ brow, the blank plane it had worn at first. The pendant pulsed faster against Aurora’s heart. “Take it.” She pulled the chain over her head. Her fingers slipped on the silver. The stone came free and hung in her palm, glowing like a coal under water. “You want the stone, take it.” The thing did not reach for it. The thing looked at her bare neck. Aurora threw the pendant into the fold. Her arm moved, but the stone did not. It stayed fixed to her palm, warm and steady. She pulled with her other hand. The chain bit into her fingers. The scar on her left wrist began to ache. The fold watched. The thing leaned close enough for her to smell it: river mud and the inside of a sealed jar. Her phone lit in her pocket. She ignored it. It lit again. The screen threw blue across the red pools. Eva: I never sent the note. Aurora stared at the text. The words stayed where they were. Outside, the clock on her phone changed to 11:35. Inside the Grove, nothing moved. The moon returned to the crack above her, showing the same flat blue light it had held for the first hour. The thing smiled with her own mouth. “Good girl.” At the far edge of the clearing, a gap opened between the oaks. A road lamp stood beyond it. A delivery bike leaned against a fence. The Golden Empress sign burned red through the trees, half a street away. It looked real because it looked ordinary. Aurora stepped toward it. The pendant pulsed toward the stair. The gap narrowed to a sliver. The red pools crept along the roots and stopped at her heels. The thing did not follow. It watched her leave, which made her look back. The children stood at the edge of the light, no longer faceless. They had her eyes. Bright blue. Twenty-five years old. All looking at her from small, blank faces. She did not run. Running had given too many things somewhere to go. Aurora walked backward. The fold had opened wide enough for the stair. The first step lifted. The second followed. They rose into the clearing like a tongue. The standing stones turned away from them. The wildflowers closed and opened again, one by one, in time with the pendant’s pulse. “Here.” Eva’s voice said it from below the steps. Aurora stopped. Her heel found the gap’s edge. Road oil. Gravel. The ordinary stink of wet London tar. She could leave with one more step. The pendant warmed against her palm, and this time it did not point away. She looked down at the first step. A crescent scar gleamed on the small wrist of Eva’s voice. The moon slipped out of its crack. In the dark, the gap behind her closed without a sound, and the stair kept rising.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:59:19.711Z" 9/2/2026, 4:59:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The face appeared only [only]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.095
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1848
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1848
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count3
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"echo"
4"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences204
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences204
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look"
2"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences225
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1848
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1747
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Golden2
Empress2
November1
Heartstone2
Grove3
Eva11
Cardiff2
Rory2
Aurora13
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences141
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1848
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences225
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs105
mean17.6
std18.39
cv1.045
sampleLengths
077
123
234
38
44
543
610
747
813
97
105
1115
1217
1332
1438
152
1636
174
1814
1914
2024
212
2210
2345
243
2529
262
279
287
291
3029
314
326
334
346
355
3620
3710
3875
397
409
4137
4256
434
447
4510
4614
471
4842
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences204
matches
0"being drawn"
1"was borrowed"
2"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs293
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences225
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount402
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.014925373134328358
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004975124378109453
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences225
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences225
mean8.21
std5.47
cv0.666
sampleLengths
011
124
219
33
420
510
613
77
818
99
104
114
124
1317
1413
156
167
1710
185
194
2021
2110
227
2313
247
255
2615
2711
286
297
302
312
321
3320
343
354
3613
375
3813
392
4026
4110
424
437
442
455
4614
473
4821
492
35.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.2311111111111111
totalSentences225
uniqueOpeners52
53.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences187
matches
0"Then Eva’s voice came from"
1"Only a wet, pale seam."
2"All looking at her from"
ratio0.016
91.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences187
matches
0"She had come on the"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair had"
2"It did not."
3"It hung on a silver"
4"Her phone showed 11:34."
5"Her wristwatch showed 2:16."
6"She stepped farther in."
7"They grew thick between roots,"
8"She turned the torch off."
9"She looked toward the place"
10"She forced them steady."
11"She looked at the Heartstone."
12"Its inner glow had stretched"
13"She pulled her phone from"
14"She opened voice memos anyway."
15"Her own voice returned a"
16"She ended the file before"
17"It slid around roots, through"
18"It had weight."
19"They did not sway."
ratio0.321
24.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount163
totalSentences187
matches
0"Aurora stopped where Richmond Park’s"
1"She had come on the"
2"Her shoulder-length black hair had"
3"It did not."
4"The note in her pocket"
5"The pendant answered the words"
6"It hung on a silver"
7"The pulse against her collarbone"
8"Her phone showed 11:34."
9"Her wristwatch showed 2:16."
10"She stepped farther in."
11"Wildflowers filled the circle, white"
12"They grew thick between roots,"
13"The trees had not lost"
14"The branches moved when she"
15"Each time she raised her"
16"She turned the torch off."
17"Moonlight did the rest."
18"The clearing gained a cold"
19"The others seemed to be"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Wildflowers filled the circle, white and violet and a yellow that looked too much like old cream."
1"The pendant’s glow made the old mark look newer, redder, as if a child had just pressed it into living skin."
2"Its limbs had the pale, stretched look of birch bark, but they moved through air as if they remembered hands."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.3577%