Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HGW5A9WQ390N7J590V3NWM

Run Details

Duration:
18.1s
Cost:
$0.013120
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron rungs of the maintenance shaft bit into the palms of Harlow Quinn's leather gloves. Forty feet below the Camden high street, the city muffled into a thick, subterranean thrum. Water wept down curved Victorian brickwork, slicking the lime mortar with black grease. Harlow dropped the final three feet onto the ballast. Her boots crunched into granite aggregate, the sound sharp against the dead air. She rolled her shoulders back, squaring her coat against the subterranean chill, and checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Three-fifteen in the morning. Two portable work lights sliced the gloom thirty yards down the abandoned platform, throwing harsh, chalky squares across the curved tunnel walls. A figure stepped out of the glare, high-visibility vest glowing lemon-yellow against the subterranean grime. Detective Constable Miller held a thermos cup in one hand and a clipboard wrapped in clear plastic in the other. He stepped across the rusted rail line, dodging a puddle of brackish seepage. "Took the south shaft, boss? CSIs refused to bring the heavy kits down that way. Had to haul the battery packs through the Northern line ventilation vent." "The south shaft bypasses the service junction." Harlow adjusted the collar of her wool coat, her brown eyes scanning the ceiling ribs. "Where is the platform supervisor?" "Sent him topside with the uniforms." Miller pointed a pen toward the far edge of the platform where the yellow police tape hung slack between two rusted cast-iron columns. "Man was hyperventilating. Kept babbling about track fires. You can smell it from here." The smell was wrong. Miller took it for burnt plastic and cheap accelerant, the foul signature of a squatter camp gone up in flames. Harlow drew the air through her teeth. Ozone. Sharp, electric, with an undercurrent of copper shavings and dry elderberry. It prickled the roof of her mouth like aluminum foil on a filling. She walked past the lights, her sharp jaw set against the cold. The platform belonged to an auxiliary branch closed during the Blitz and never reopened. Dust lay an inch deep over cracked white subway tiles, except where boots had trampled a path toward the tracks. The body lay faceup across the outer rail. He was male, late twenties, dressed in a tailored coat of heavy wool that looked three decades out of date. His limbs were splayed with geometric precision, arms angled forty-five degrees from his torso, legs parallel. His chest was caved inward, clothes intact, but the fabric over his sternum had bleached white, the dark weave leeched of all pigment in a circle the size of a saucer. Miller stopped two paces back, clicking his ballpoint pen. "ID came back provisional. Nathan Bell. Known to the burglary division out of Holborn. We found bolt cutters and an acetylene rig twenty yards down the siding. Looks like he tapped an active conduit trying to strip commercial copper from the cross-feed. Took ten thousand volts straight through the breastbone. Arc blast blew out his ribs, dropped him where he stood." Harlow crouched by the body. She did not reach out immediately. She traced the periphery of the scene with her eyes, noting the undisturbed dust six inches from Bell's left elbow. "You called the electricity board?" "Grid engineers are on standby at the substation. They checked the feeds. Said Camden power draws fluctuated between two and two-thirty." Miller tapped his clipboard, satisfaction rounding his voice. "Open and shut. Squatter or scrapper catches a high-voltage surge. Heat fried the chest cavity, stopped the heart before he touched the ground." "Look at the timber." Harlow pointed to the wooden sleeper beneath the victim’s shoulders. Miller leaned over, hands braced against his knees. "Scorched." "Look closer, Miller." The oak sleeper was blackened, carbonized to charcoal directly beneath Bell’s back. Yet the frost clinging to the steel rail beside it had not melted. Delicate, needle-thin ice crystals stood upright on the cold iron, three inches from wood that had burned hot enough to cinder. "Localized heat," Miller said, his forehead creasing. "Arc flash happens in a microsecond. The air superheats, then collapses before the iron absorbs the thermal load." "And the dust?" Harlow stood up, her 5'9" frame casting a long, angular shadow across the rail bed. "A ten-thousand-volt blast creates a shockwave. It displaces light particulates within an eight-foot radius. Show me the dispersion circle." Miller shifted his weight, scanning the floor. The thick gray layer of grime and brake dust remained smooth right up to the edges of the victim's clothes. No radial spray. No soot blown outward. "Maybe the current grounded through his spine," Miller muttered, his pen freezing mid-click. "Direct path to the iron." "His soles are intact." Harlow stepped over the rail, planting her boots on dry ties. She shone her pocket torch directly at the undersides of Bell’s leather brogues. "Rubber-soled dress shoes. Not a scorch mark. No entry wound on the feet, no exit wound on the skull." She knelt beside the bleached circle on Bell’s chest. The wool was brittle, but cold. When she hovered her gloved hand an inch above the ruined fabric, the air chilled her knuckles like the draft from an open freezer chest. She took a pair of steel forceps from her pocket kit and teased apart the stiff threads over his sternum. Beneath the fabric, Bell’s skin was not blistered. It was translucent, white as lard, with the dark indigo traceries of frozen veins frozen solid underneath. Inside the hollow of his collapsed chest, something small and hard caught the beam of the LED torch. Harlow worked the forceps into the breach, pinching the edge of the object. It came free without resistance. A fragment of polished bone, no larger than a domino. Three parallel lines were carved across its face, intersecting a central crescent. The edges were smoothed, worn down by fingers that had carried it in a pocket for months. Miller stared over her shoulder, his breath fogging in the bitter air. "A talisman? Gang marking?" "The Camden boys use spray paint and brass knuckles, Miller. They don't carve cow femur with iron styluses." "Could be an antique. He was a thief." "Look at the direction of the metal filings." Harlow turned her torch toward the platform edge. Along the vertical concrete riser of the platform, iron filings from decades of train brakes clung in intricate, arched patterns. They did not hang downward. Every speck of magnetic dust curved inward, pointing toward a single focal point three feet above the victim’s chest, like iron sand drawn toward an invisible pole. "Magnetic discharge from the third rail," Miller insisted, though his voice dropped an octave. "The substations run massive direct-current lines through here." "The third rail on this branch was decommissioned in nineteen-forty." Harlow rose, holding the bone fragment up to the stark glare of the halogen work lights. "There hasn't been a live cable on this track bed in eighty years." Three years ago, in a cellar beneath a dock warehouse in Wapping, DS Morris had been found with that same frost on his eyelids and that same smell of ozone clinging to his overcoat. The coroner had written down cardiac arrest. The superintendent had closed the ledger. Harlow turned her back to the tracks, fixing Miller with a flat, unyielding stare. "Measure the drag lines in the soot twenty yards down the tunnel. You won't find boot prints leaving this platform." Miller frowned, gripping his clipboard tighter. "He had to get down here somehow. The south shaft was locked from the outside." "He didn't walk down." Harlow pointed the torch beam straight up toward the vaulted brick ceiling. Directly above the corpse, thirty feet overhead, the heavy soot coating the old exhaust flue was clean. A circular gap, four feet wide, showed bare, gleaming brickwork where the grime had vanished without a scrape, severed by a clean, geometric line that matched the crescent carved into the bone.
created_at"2026-09-02T16:57:42.48Z" 9/2/2026, 4:57:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.485
leniency0.97
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1325
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1325
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count2
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"chilled"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count2
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"gloom"
2"scanning"
3"electric"
4"traced"
5"weight"
6"chilled"
7"intricate"
8"magnetic"
9"stark"
10"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1325
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1003
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Miller"
discoveredNames
Harlow13
Quinn1
Camden1
Victorian1
Constable1
Miller13
Blitz1
Bell5
Three3
Wapping1
Morris1
Directly1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Constable"
3"Miller"
4"Bell"
5"Morris"
places
0"Wapping"
globalScore0.852
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1325
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean31.55
std17.26
cv0.547
sampleLengths
044
148
237
333
427
527
643
756
846
98
1067
119
1261
1331
145
1552
1614
179
183
1946
2025
2137
2234
2318
2447
2540
2663
2718
2839
2916
3018
318
3216
3352
3422
3539
3647
3714
3820
3921
4016
4149
77.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences64
matches
0"were splayed"
1"was caved"
2"was blackened"
3"were carved"
4"were smoothed"
5"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences76
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount646
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"deep over cracked white subway"
1"Delicate, needle-thin ice"
2"massive direct-current lines"
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.006191950464396285
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0030959752321981426
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean17.43
std13.39
cv0.768
sampleLengths
016
115
213
39
413
522
64
722
815
920
1013
1127
1222
135
1429
1514
164
1720
187
191
2011
2113
2212
2314
2420
258
2620
2716
2831
299
3061
315
326
3320
345
3529
3623
3714
388
391
403
4112
4213
4321
447
4518
4624
478
485
4934
90.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5657894736842105
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners43
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Directly above the corpse, thirty"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her boots crunched into granite"
1"She rolled her shoulders back,"
2"He stepped across the rusted"
3"It prickled the roof of"
4"She walked past the lights,"
5"He was male, late twenties,"
6"His limbs were splayed with"
7"His chest was caved inward,"
8"She did not reach out"
9"She traced the periphery of"
10"It displaces light particulates within"
11"She knelt beside the bleached"
12"She took a pair of"
13"They don't carve cow femur"
14"He was a"
15"You won't find boot prints"
ratio0.258
56.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences62
matches
0"The iron rungs of the"
1"Water wept down curved Victorian"
2"Harlow dropped the final three"
3"Her boots crunched into granite"
4"She rolled her shoulders back,"
5"A figure stepped out of"
6"Detective Constable Miller held a"
7"He stepped across the rusted"
8"Harlow adjusted the collar of"
9"Miller pointed a pen toward"
10"The smell was wrong."
11"Miller took it for burnt"
12"Harlow drew the air through"
13"It prickled the roof of"
14"She walked past the lights,"
15"The platform belonged to an"
16"Dust lay an inch deep"
17"The body lay faceup across"
18"He was male, late twenties,"
19"His limbs were splayed with"
ratio0.806
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Delicate, needle-thin ice crystals stood upright on the cold iron, three inches from wood that had burned hot enough to cinder."
1"A fragment of polished bone, no larger than a domino. Three parallel lines were carved across its face, intersecting a central crescent. The edges were smoothed…"
2"Directly above the corpse, thirty feet overhead, the heavy soot coating the old exhaust flue was clean. A circular gap, four feet wide, showed bare, gleaming br…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Harlow adjusted, her brown eyes scanning the ceiling ribs"
1"Miller tapped, satisfaction rounding his voice"
2"Miller said, his forehead creasing"
3"Miller muttered, his pen freezing mid-click"
4"Miller insisted, though his voice dropped an octave"
89.39% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Miller muttered (mutter)"
1"Miller insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.121
84.7159%